【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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, C! A7 u0 c6 g我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
$ `( Q$ ?6 {2 u  ~$ {; V4 V4 W/ mThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
0 x# {6 d& _0 V2 j# b. c0 tFrom the first moment we met,
) W' @8 k! N( o7 ^I already loved you with all my heart
- S$ B3 m% @: s7 y0 ZWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
$ p: u# p( P4 r, V* uI would probably know how you feel
9 X/ N- D9 ]5 p7 l2 C4 U# }Love… just the word love
% H  j' X6 O& d) J3 mWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
* B4 F, y& v) Z; P* _5 ]One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
3 w6 i( V) A* S: XI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
4 @0 X0 y1 E4 _6 X0 W1 n# ^I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
$ |  `/ _+ d5 \, M2 Z7 M' \; o7 {I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
3 E+ B2 j. D- o5 A% ?I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
& ?4 k) h. }) c2 x: }4 O' KCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
3 g; Y( E( k, Z; ^  aEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
7 v/ s% I# @3 j% E5 T4 k! k* U<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
1 Q$ A% a' Q; N3 r6 {<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
" y4 }2 C8 S6 \4 H. F8 j  ]<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
2 N3 T6 v1 ~7 f$ H: Z6 R: U2 ]<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
+ X5 R' R4 D3 o. d4 }' E7 L<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
3 t; ], {" J! k( e$ J<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
5 y2 k, V- Y" Q0 H<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
! E9 Q$ \' T( O4 k<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
8 ^4 E1 n% g6 q2 O4 j, e: c, J3 I8 N<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
/ y, q) d# i9 C; h( B% d<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
0 C* s5 g( q+ ~. ~: Q<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
9 T/ ~% K6 [1 Y9 \8 f<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
' x3 a- v9 B9 u<P>我想说我爱你</P>
  I' F2 _4 Z9 I) q/ a2 X<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
2 W: x; u$ Q9 x$ V% @<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
3 p+ {/ h( V* y# g9 ]<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
3 o6 l+ q5 C/ e2 {<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
& L9 R% y& z) Y* T. O; Y) }0 V<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
% o1 [+ K+ E( m9 J4 Q7 o7 W' D* f- D<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
; m* k- R1 @, w) v2 A<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
0 }! h9 w" Q0 F* F<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
2 G# f/ P2 t, \$ g. b<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
* [) X# h! Y4 j  {6 r: X; u<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
- m8 P+ {* A1 l2 J) I<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
1 b5 L; Q$ c+ I<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
' i6 @$ W1 X/ c" V, C% b<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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/ F9 S* G6 a2 {$ u这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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, U% Y2 y- ]7 P+ x* o# d6 I! |) Z这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" D! Y/ {$ y: P" e<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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. v2 i$ P7 m& ]3 h5 j& F7 W<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>