【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
9 V, k9 }) V3 J' J; p3 N1 pThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
# u( |8 j) V) L6 ^+ d: h' MThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
. w' ~  d, f0 I7 rI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
. c% L3 @) C) K# V# FBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
# A5 v. D; h* U0 L: h& X( @5 z- O8 jIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
5 z8 N7 W& o- r: h* ]- M* w1 zWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
9 `+ U; u3 e5 L2 y% w' I- \4 @If today isn’t too late,
; m6 B1 |4 k" J* W! A4 ?* {I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
6 e' w" @3 b# x3 B7 }I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
( X  [! s( h* w& w& w  o0 WOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
6 E0 A9 h1 S, P: |6 L; O: AI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
# i+ m. `5 t5 B  l7 W6 b3 {" oEntrust my love within your heart
& e' Y6 Q5 U; f$ w3 g% U6 s  t+ f- a( MCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
! h0 c6 K2 y7 ?6 j& d9 ?<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
' h) u( J! m4 q<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
1 g  |( X" ?+ @<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
- e+ K8 o/ m+ `8 {" \<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
9 s8 J- d1 }3 @& }- r<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
8 N# b" M" O4 |# x7 U<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
" I1 I- l7 T* q: B+ n<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
9 L- Z8 n2 ^3 S1 L3 V<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
' I6 h! g, I' s<P>我想说我爱你</P>
+ Y1 C+ f2 W  p' g<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
$ j7 a& V: f. ?9 v# {5 s<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
" \6 J: z, ~; k& y4 b7 h<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
* k# b+ }4 ]9 E! f/ s<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
$ E* \, V3 f' A0 S<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
( C/ d4 [" u1 |1 v<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
- ?/ c3 T! p( w<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
' M8 ]+ \6 D. f4 Q! I% e<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
" i6 T5 _5 ?/ M<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
3 P1 i5 X9 F( U' B. v0 u" d3 z<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
! W8 l6 s5 a1 `  F1 }  O<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
5 x( ?1 a1 O: t: G: o) c2 L/ }, k, R<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
4 ?2 r7 [+ `# X1 a8 J<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
1 H% Q6 X/ @& k( w<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
4 H7 C8 z, G- Y3 `8 C0 D+ U<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
* J# B( u, k1 T; D4 h( @  m<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

' l& f2 }( u0 L/ t4 ^& E 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

5 C7 V  c4 g* b4 q这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>