【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
, P5 c0 g* j( r5 h1 Q) fThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
9 K8 e; @0 [) N/ o; n+ h7 |0 o& ~: [I would probably know how you feel
1 k9 O. r0 ^# F. E0 iLove… just the word love
! x( \" u6 {3 H$ M7 u+ OWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
7 n& E& ~; p8 Y1 S$ S" X7 EBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
+ k& [  b. d5 W( PIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
" c( F  T0 l0 g$ qI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
& H' E& h$ \! a! L6 zLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
0 D: E: k& |8 D8 a: N! C2 R: zBut I never did
' L  r/ _2 Y) eOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
: m; {6 W% w& H8 E' |- A6 }I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

1 D& }  m+ G. K[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
) Q: c) ~0 G1 X<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
6 D6 n  F" X7 |. r  k9 I<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
6 O2 R+ ^8 a$ S. A  V( t: I<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
$ T/ E& ^" u3 D<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
& {9 e5 }+ h# B. y<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
0 K0 C4 d4 f! V! A% S) z<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
6 n+ K; z" U! O3 U8 K5 {<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
) N7 C- e6 M- a5 D+ B$ {<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
, L" ?& p7 T4 F* s3 K) m' A<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
9 X$ ~4 _7 d! m& C: j<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
8 |5 @: ~2 K! F4 u<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
/ s: l( M7 @, O  P" s. z. P- f9 N<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
3 p2 G$ E1 k1 X/ ^" d) \, x( O<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
# v. ^/ S% m7 y. n. R<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
7 W. v! f; h0 P- A8 c<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
, [5 G; |' Y6 X" ?4 @& Q% y8 e<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
+ P9 ]1 z0 d9 `! x<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
# a- K' u$ ^2 V" o4 D- G' S<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
  m* R3 \3 J0 `) F! c<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
: G  X5 H& P8 e3 I- J  R% f<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
3 o* d! {& g4 c' Z, e<P>Love… just the word love </P>
" k1 Z7 r& u# z<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
& O; k% E) E7 z7 i) h, t<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
7 k/ y, s8 W# l3 R; ^8 g<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
8 O* p! E& J9 F5 z<P>But I never did </P>
# E/ O- U# ~' V6 u' ~<P>但我不会 </P>
; n( S: u! N" n) i<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
) z6 I5 n' f% K" I<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
9 @" n! U' V# f! E<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
0 j2 N1 @! |3 i# F$ J* f. G<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
$ k2 U1 N5 a1 p0 G3 k. l% ~<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
( a) F; T2 `+ x  f7 F6 \$ d% y2 }<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  }$ x. J5 a/ U- ?<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
1 g& ]! V1 I2 a9 k9 e% y<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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5 B$ T5 Y3 I" _ 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

( e5 N- i2 f3 M# T$ e这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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0 e" ]5 O1 t1 Z" D# O这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ }3 T+ p5 R7 U$ t<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>