【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
$ l+ ~' s, L) L0 TThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
) |6 V4 B8 X5 d& fFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
% y' {2 X5 A9 d# R7 X; H- lBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
4 \! _: o, X6 ~) F" PLove… just the word love
' I+ u2 r. ?% U) T2 NWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
5 ]" T& I1 `5 a4 c4 sI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
' E( W% |9 M8 }* ?% zI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
4 q0 m4 m1 s1 r  m, w2 @6 {* y) EEntrust my love within your heart
3 b2 U; {% S3 V) H1 J, Q, ]Love… just the word love
  e  F6 L1 A3 V+ F! c; _7 o9 Z) K# JWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
% ~1 k- M) e  }But I never did
9 f) `' f6 R9 d6 Z3 x* G6 F2 N7 BOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
1 V. o4 a6 r5 E( S, ~If today isn’t too late,
! O: S: L* [6 ^! s$ |: E( WI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
! g; c7 T3 G& N( T3 c0 OI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
: t1 h9 k" K% l* l/ m% mCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
: h! \0 f2 Q, f, KCan I entrust it to you?
5 F* M& l- O; q7 z$ {% nEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
  I: @) z, p" ^' U* \<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
3 a; s( w$ M1 ^% [<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
$ C3 ~3 n4 N, n  c( G<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
) |. ^& O# p# ?$ d# D( U<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
. P) Z1 p  N) U6 U, g% p7 D1 X<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
) e2 Q( t" y1 ^" {<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
. s, u* N. L' ]* _$ I5 }4 ^' p9 ^<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
1 @: f- c0 ~! j% H0 W9 n  W% l+ `<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
, c4 X* T4 l- u9 _<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
+ a/ o) q+ q9 f<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
* ^, Q3 n7 l# f" S# D. y<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
' _/ _/ k0 n) Y) Q0 l<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
) L$ I+ \8 p7 D9 p# [<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
: X4 r8 U! m$ m; L; @<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
6 y' Y1 O4 n* C, S<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
6 o3 p$ Q" |% f! B<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
/ ]$ P# V) e! E- P3 I<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
) B7 M6 \4 `9 w5 x<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
5 i- A0 m* e; o- s) H1 Q1 }<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
/ R$ `7 y4 b6 Z4 @+ P! d<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
. T" T' X9 I. r5 G2 @" |2 U<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
9 |8 \4 g2 S3 E8 t<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
  k$ Q0 `; g: B+ D5 X. J<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
9 i& n3 d6 M. E3 L- Y<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
3 ]  W; i$ i& ]<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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5 a/ J* O. W5 `% y: P5 V 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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- j, z# p- n: ^9 |" D# q这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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3 G3 Q% j" X; c" a7 d! b这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>