【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
% {  Z/ T( i" g! IThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
# t/ L, E+ X% x% P$ ]( DWe meet and talk everyday,
0 \# Y* T$ z8 fBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
; P- H7 e/ G" U) v0 [( c6 P) Z6 qIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
$ s+ r% y1 @9 J; JLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
. Z9 x/ ~: H8 F, T0 k0 s1 gI want to confess that I love you,
  k1 c; J  c; e) L/ IBut I never did
: E% ~: o' _7 u2 N7 J6 u; c/ iOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
4 G) \5 {+ x. M2 \7 b) A& R- I7 f  WIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
' V3 S, q+ P7 q5 j4 XCan I entrust it to you?
8 N+ L% |: k( c( N$ `. y8 u1 u7 s9 ~Entrust my love within your heart
  q$ w; q* ]7 _0 W  pLove… just the word love
1 r) r! A" V4 ?  _2 P. [Why is it so difficult to express?
6 |0 T) z* S) uI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
# E2 @3 ^$ j7 a. F% oCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
4 D; p; U2 P6 k* E6 ?( @<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
0 m) g7 ~8 \+ q0 F/ p# T<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
% H  p4 A( v, g+ d8 L, J<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
, T% G, V; O( u% m<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
& M1 d( b. b( k, w- q, k<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
1 o8 I7 L: ^6 L% s0 r+ L<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
6 C3 h$ }5 W/ h! E0 [<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
: O  M9 e4 X! o0 z; ]  }5 ?& x2 J<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
8 |6 f9 @* d, m4 @1 f<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
3 s; q& f' `+ ~8 d- B$ H- b0 z! i<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
+ V- A+ p& n" D7 e! Q+ t<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
* a$ \% k& C: o# u& _  e7 e<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
1 n$ L* A" a( w. o<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
3 m4 w+ N3 ]  k5 Y8 {<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
* y! I! H/ K! d( Q<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
. }+ j; E1 V3 Z2 g  |: @<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
6 U- r4 S; W) h! j9 T5 f+ o% ^<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
* K5 o7 L- n6 @" I- s; d; ]<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
6 G: X1 Q. ?2 _4 F) P( n<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
; {; `" B, O* t# j: U4 d3 f<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
5 }, U6 [6 \- n4 s9 L: s) f7 \<P>But I never did </P>
6 L7 X$ w  ^. H( b! X- c$ E8 u<P>但我不会 </P>
) r5 m. V# ]% ^% ~<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
4 M- o1 E  _6 k- D& R, \* J: L<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
6 `& N; z+ ]5 f% V! H. E, r: i. ?4 u<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
4 _6 d8 p6 |, O, }<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
: [" T0 s# S& P2 u" l8 u<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
* Q" p& u! c6 c<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
3 M4 w8 T1 ?$ r' C<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
- u. x, `) l! F$ h8 E<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
7 y8 Q' d+ p* L5 q# g<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
# m0 V  Y. P; [+ g3 }% J' U<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
, g) r. ]0 o- @( a% q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
; g# H/ |% w" {' R: d: e0 n9 ?" k  d3 O$ X<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
$ v# P3 B4 C5 h3 J$ K& t- F0 }<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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' G; b# V) f3 _6 {: U这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ A0 V$ @4 V, D# \0 }<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>