【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
( U' r  Z2 }) t5 cThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
( e; z* n+ k- _( [1 {0 t; GI already loved you with all my heart
5 d/ n! \* j- R4 V& e# `& h5 JWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
/ ?. N/ t# ^4 N* a  ^4 f' a3 E" _# jI would probably know how you feel
" U) \$ I8 F1 }$ a+ ]6 q# U- bLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
9 I+ o) g* Z7 K' [* R7 NI want to confess that I love you,
! Z6 z, v* j% o: g6 ^6 Q) IBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
' U* u; t2 N. A0 [0 r1 Q: FIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
7 C  s5 A9 N; `9 lI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
7 D9 ]) \( M) w1 T1 ?( i' P7 EI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
9 c* F: F! T; H" g: h+ \$ f; LI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
2 f2 F# D' \: F9 ]& dCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

0 o1 Y8 q3 T4 r5 C1 s8 b. C[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
2 A9 G- W7 f+ Z" j7 a2 S6 @<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
/ ^" K' |: d% D6 g" K<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
% m4 P/ ~) K/ |% T8 c<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
1 \1 U3 t, c( N7 i0 Y. j  I<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
* s' a& |( ^  p( I3 G1 o7 x<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
7 g. Q9 W  j/ B& x<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
* z+ ]; t' z" M* w  \" Q<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
  l; j2 E% I$ B7 ^<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
& e' Q* T: C. ?6 g8 r<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
! T+ i+ u! a9 h; ^& ^<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
- i1 W, Z% R3 T# Y3 w8 V; a/ X<P>我想说我爱你</P>
- S2 ?' X6 ?, Z) G5 _: P7 I<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
5 D) `$ n8 M6 c' b1 Y2 G0 S<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
9 R& s# n8 `* y! @" b1 W0 F<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
& E+ N& S1 }/ ]9 @: Y<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
8 C" f  L) g+ g) k  i<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
+ j# D; V) q! T# Q5 q' R<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
6 X0 b* ~7 l4 c' v. m<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
; i8 l0 G3 i& h<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
  S9 E' o( u: d0 `<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
. y7 n% Q1 l; X2 K/ L; G. z<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
8 C) @2 j/ V# F4 N) f& j<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
" O; P) s, ^/ ^9 u0 T0 ^<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
4 J! O# P1 p8 I! V+ _<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
) ?7 A+ W1 @! w; b0 z+ J+ I<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
' T$ a( g+ H& ^! O8 e<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
0 b% j  A) f# `- p& r<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
3 r) y* ^( ~3 |4 m$ n, `% _! g<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
% U+ Y% ]1 ], P  E7 J% `. j$ Z0 ]<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

' a6 [: b4 \% C/ ? 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

% p6 {& Z% {% k( o5 e+ d+ m这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

9 p+ J- W6 C" }# Q5 d: C+ j- [3 x( y这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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1 M/ N- K% M1 o' q( s3 b. D% F2 \<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>