【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
" G& _: p& i+ J$ QThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
( O8 m9 v& M% h8 uFrom the first moment we met,
( Q" c1 L* I6 m; xI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
5 N; x. L2 A2 K  e$ UBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
+ [/ C  U- ?! I2 FLove… just the word love
5 ~8 d2 j7 x6 I1 oWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
1 Q, y& _5 f4 e5 s0 J! W& W2 N* lI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
4 ?$ m- \& r7 z' ^! P3 \$ GLove… just the word love
7 w, G' v$ g& `Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
2 y* C9 ^5 `) y: \" xBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
" A5 M1 ]% o% SI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
0 ~3 C% e2 f. A7 D! _. REntrust my love within your heart
# V# g$ t! x6 v2 Z- Q/ K# w) |Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

3 z, @+ Z# ?* I  X[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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5 Q2 j! J+ a7 h8 L+ U+ D0 h, A<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
. Q( X/ z% ^2 e<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
$ F6 s# P# e( D) n- c! H<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
1 h, t2 z, y( N<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
3 G# Y" i4 V  [; c0 n! h5 Y<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
2 s6 z1 `" h0 Y. }! e5 n! W<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
3 t  H; b+ V: K1 l: c2 ^! P5 s<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
) R5 \$ E& s' E$ x<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
3 L; t7 n$ G, G6 d9 k6 q<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
' F) h2 h) D) ]" w6 ?6 W% v/ E& F<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
+ e) a2 k& Z& M8 G( K$ q4 p<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
) ^, @4 J0 t! Y3 u7 O, v; ~. ]/ c<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
5 k" e0 e' e2 n9 y! ~<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
: X# U3 ]- X# B) l" D<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
1 B0 j" z. Q" W4 v& t<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
+ y, ^/ i! [2 `6 y9 o, P<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
" K% R/ K) i# A# e9 Y) _6 ^<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
! F6 x$ R0 d& D. E9 d7 ^<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
% \/ Z6 m5 t9 b; J" F( s" L<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
; I% e* m) D# v3 t5 A% E<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
% _' F) }( X" P! e9 a$ f<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
+ `2 z! |: T# |* J( o' g, N) A<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
6 B/ {7 L: L- V7 j/ {8 O% t<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
! X, p7 X5 `$ O! y/ l& `# O6 C<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
+ W/ h$ o; S, C" a& x<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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9 h+ c7 r( O; M- @& K% E+ L这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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* W1 d' d' {! j8 d% |& C<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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$ x1 o+ V0 B  f/ r<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>