【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
4 p; C0 n7 z  U3 V# j/ ?That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
) U4 @5 a% Q' p3 A) m. K/ [: IFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
( K. G4 B6 w* ~7 H6 r7 C; NI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
4 G* C' E7 {" xOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
) T2 T- G1 F1 _' D5 O. Q7 BIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
6 o" E- A' q% T+ ?4 k' m# fCan I entrust it to you?
3 i! V$ O  Q; v2 j4 BEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
* O" g8 L0 L" N' t( P. v( M' W  DWhy is it so difficult to express?
  p) h5 M4 A9 g+ UI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
; H. C: j1 M: [3 Z4 kIf today isn’t too late,
7 _# ]. @1 |$ v' J8 d; y* X2 @I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
& [. M; ^! f4 |. XCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
" ^0 I9 W$ d: v5 z1 e1 |# [Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

+ l# x/ H& u- u/ S$ t0 I[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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. `0 j, i: d5 q2 A+ Y( K5 O<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
; a. B; s4 F5 q<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
+ i; j! I+ v$ n/ {8 M( T<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
7 L* p$ M2 H7 i$ K0 m5 |<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
; f: Z# m/ |2 M2 V- M: k1 r: @, ^<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
+ Z$ m. |( G0 v1 F$ f<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
1 G' ?; L# \3 I<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
3 a& q+ }& I- ]( q2 H: c<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
5 I. y0 C! a  O3 n( O. {<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
( v. d8 T6 ]' G" O" \, b<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
% K( D; P6 e0 e' k) o' p7 k4 M<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
# {. n7 A- }) s+ A, E! B* _<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
2 `* r, n+ g+ u* E$ v' [<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
* v) A1 s0 l, ]4 j7 p  I  W  y<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
% |, S* v% u4 e3 \<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
3 t: x6 {' v. N/ Y3 W<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& s2 p/ R$ ~! F1 u2 Q<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
4 C- _8 S4 u. _& B2 p2 M<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
6 u0 I4 W( o( G1 n$ ]. T<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
2 c6 e1 X6 f2 R  y<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
/ N" |( O5 G' Y# S8 E<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
5 q7 _, M) G$ f0 [3 V<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
( u1 O9 q0 }; _8 r4 n- i- x<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
3 |. ]0 }& x  ]$ n) N2 ^% k( n<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
. k* I' B- S  \/ C% I/ M- q/ n<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
% K% ^5 S$ i4 E5 r) U<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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) K8 U. N& k/ x9 C5 v3 c8 n这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>