【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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+ m6 N! \1 T; I3 g4 x: hThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
5 i* Y7 Y( C7 m. ?/ dWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
- T2 x- g+ _+ ]4 n, L1 `, m# LIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
# H+ @5 D* F2 p" N7 P: m$ tWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
) H1 d2 X9 k, v4 h) Q- K& ]If today isn’t too late,
% }. t) g' e% @# n9 ~8 QI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
2 [# R9 C3 T$ H" dEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
! J  L: M2 a8 b7 G) L% NWhy is it so difficult to express?
1 h2 @# W+ |8 wI want to confess that I love you,
2 R% |9 }: w' _7 N$ y. @$ a; r2 uBut I never did
0 Q  J* G+ w' h' Z/ m: \  h& pOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
% W/ i7 y. {$ Z2 v' `  mI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
. n, J4 T4 |/ iCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
0 K9 [, |: o: H3 r1 ?$ _/ |Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
! M. T( P  O7 O; }! M" F0 e9 T<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
# U# M) ?6 r& a! `( T0 E+ S4 `& g<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
7 l+ v, [) O0 _+ X: c+ _# `8 d<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
' ~  U1 p( ~9 P' Q<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
$ n1 H) Z2 ~+ h+ u<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
' U. G& X# e6 Z- A* u<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
0 {  p" J. |, d5 ~3 ~<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
5 f. M8 Y: l4 b2 G2 f$ v8 ?* E. i0 C<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
- J( q: b0 k7 u<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
. w  Q; g' `6 e+ l2 F4 t: `& J. U<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
% p" u( f: Y$ l1 Z9 f<P>但我不会</P>
$ q9 ]% H6 Q4 O* j<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
- ?+ A! r) T6 W! q! V<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
& M2 i0 a9 S) b) R- R2 B' ?: r<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
) S* \6 Y. L! F<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
5 l! ?& y3 O6 K" c6 v3 r<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
: S% e: X6 J- @+ T" X<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
9 Z' ?/ f  Q4 t, S3 u0 U<P>Love… just the word love </P>
5 g# ]* l' Z1 a<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
% L( A$ b+ {  @5 A" Y<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
4 T/ K, ?1 ?' M; j% W1 ]) I. S<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
8 a. Q/ t5 m$ `- z5 Q+ g# S<P>But I never did </P>
; w1 o: c' H+ \) w9 G7 i. d<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
- B$ ^! w3 A0 r2 @<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
) e1 |; s1 x# {% Y# x<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
7 x& E5 u7 w) c! ]: h4 e# O6 ~. W<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
' ~! H  q" b% k; w( y, C: }( Y  C<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
2 |$ U: p* ]0 H+ ]( t8 n<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
* t; H1 k: F: E* E" ^<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
; m2 R* W; o) Y/ |7 z! i! e<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
/ M$ T6 H& \, y( s) b- i" k<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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4 l4 L$ {& C4 e4 V; |0 u 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

1 i8 X% R% E1 \这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 D+ Y) y7 V  S% W( c<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: z0 W5 M; d: e% l<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>