【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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5 k  D+ _0 ^( ~& b6 B6 b& `我另将歌词附在此。
/ o6 q( V$ ^: ]- Y; C( vThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
- m+ T& G7 }7 M0 [  `. ?# X1 U9 DThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
' d2 t0 k0 E" x* {/ `- ?" I+ ^% mFrom the first moment we met,
' N/ a: B6 N7 r; }' g. LI already loved you with all my heart
+ ~. A5 M) A0 B8 {' N* l8 \We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
7 d9 f8 R* |& Y8 rLove… just the word love
3 |1 y3 F$ V& _! m8 X* K5 Q/ M) iWhy is it so difficult to express?
. y8 y, B: V) R8 wI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
- X! q) B3 q1 }' hOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
" a' G5 s7 N/ @# ]8 WIf today isn’t too late,
/ x. e0 o+ [& _, X( YI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
% P) F2 Q- i/ P  j% QCan I entrust it to you?
( A$ w; `; H; O3 P; }! CEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
( J! L7 C) K/ oWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
2 s, S. V& |! e- y4 }6 lBut I never did
5 _5 g3 C! e3 t4 y2 nOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
: |3 U8 R# Y: o1 {: |" W0 LIf today isn’t too late,
. I8 n( J2 A6 H% II want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
0 @! ?4 l8 d% }( A4 i6 [3 pEntrust my love within your heart
- P" i- S  w8 N: ZCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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, \5 c) b; r, H( u8 q7 |<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
. i3 ?" b; u6 u) H% |<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
2 A* i3 y" H3 U/ Y<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
  Z0 ?2 n- \; K4 L7 R; u<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
6 b# U$ V$ p' r+ D5 i" t3 x<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
; G+ p! f9 h, A2 b% E3 I<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
; V1 h8 z& I  [2 r<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
7 R5 }/ U0 n/ S( }4 ^/ t) h<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
: @- _! T$ v! w3 }+ \; ]3 z$ p<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
$ c% M* h$ _% u9 f- t<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
4 s8 E/ _5 |% e$ b<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
0 U" p. [) [5 C( ?* @# h<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
) o8 w7 z9 g7 \1 b+ }/ S* D# S<P>我想说我爱你</P>
+ J% s7 }# H( i! w1 M& c<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
- h; j, Z& F6 l, y( m: |3 D( d<P>但我不会</P>
  O4 f, O: }3 j" [$ _( Y+ V<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
) \2 [# D1 F7 g8 k1 F<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
) S* m) o1 q3 _/ i7 `% u<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
# l" o; u( V) z+ f+ _<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
9 l, X$ C3 T6 T$ G/ X7 o9 n9 |8 [; c<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
! W& t& B/ [4 T<P>Love… just the word love </P>
$ z& ]4 M# B. i" a% Y. A/ k$ b<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
; E8 @$ N4 C5 R. l" W/ S: B* u<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
% @2 e- m3 k0 ^$ e- y0 y<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
9 Z/ g) H* P8 I2 P( l<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
8 x" c. C. N) }  J2 N5 j<P>But I never did </P>
( g( y7 A( l0 T: l3 ~<P>但我不会 </P>
# O7 |$ h& n0 `; l) w. U<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
- t3 R  L' D( Z6 d<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
: p, L3 B- S- X- M5 r" h1 @<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

) c( y# v. s* B2 H% ?: I这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>