【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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9 f+ g' e5 ]5 c3 F我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
' m4 H) r. P, ~! x+ V0 u5 {" |That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
! P; K# n1 H7 S. T' P) b5 DFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
7 \) n, ]* U5 ]; ]- v( oBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
8 H% Z/ d/ Y! i0 P1 ]9 NLove… just the word love
+ \# y9 _" c( r  a, A0 HWhy is it so difficult to express?
. t) A* D0 E: yI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
! @5 C% Z* H; O; @* {Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
6 v9 a2 \7 z5 r# z- Z6 Y2 ZLove… just the word love
2 A4 p! X0 U/ Y$ v: }Why is it so difficult to express?
  s" u% [4 i  k/ _I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
9 d: w* L/ w" t, j# ^$ jIf today isn’t too late,
! P+ P9 f2 c. _0 UI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
( n7 C$ D5 J( qCan I entrust it to you?
( C0 D3 Y! u9 p/ MEntrust my love within your heart
$ O* ~; s! J+ c  V/ C/ l" hCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
% ^( E. f1 r7 d& F' K' k& z<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
& x4 ^! m6 ^4 ~9 D# s4 p0 k0 l<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
5 y) ?* b8 U, G3 p" v<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
6 y' d" c  Z2 J# v3 ?% X% P<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
+ O0 A; }: R7 \, k8 W4 o<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
: T0 \6 X% U; _0 t1 e<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
: s9 @5 @$ }, k# B7 B<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
$ w  q; m1 R3 A  Y2 E<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
6 U1 I5 T7 w, ?# h- y<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
0 A  C. u- X, E' C1 Q& \3 Z  d<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
* Z+ k% o) Y2 R$ J- l% N" ^( c+ u<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
% o7 O! y2 Q2 i" r% g<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
1 b  Y+ X- f4 o. G. z<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
! C) w9 s5 e  k  Y) J0 B<P>我想说我爱你</P>
$ u8 W( v; w- \( k<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
, b, }. H6 U5 y<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
2 s; p$ l/ ^. t0 H+ t( f8 j% V<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
1 K( h) L( d# J1 k7 f<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
( ], B2 u) l! D) c0 x. N<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
- a  C4 K6 u  ~( {) a( V2 ?<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
/ q" f: V7 Z4 o, K. s- d7 D<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
1 Q- N2 v" A4 c. O: w: R% x<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
, f% v' K. b% w# {, _* l/ |<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
. q3 Q$ h' b# \1 _6 w( s<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
$ S8 ?0 K& C" ~2 x, f<P>Love… just the word love </P>
* [4 n7 S" I$ Z# {# X<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
  M5 A2 R* v7 O% O<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
# _* _7 O( j5 H  n! A<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
3 J4 N  ~6 n# p" h4 @/ l<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
: q3 n, n  k' Y2 Q0 z<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
8 ?7 P1 C0 S+ B<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
$ M, R2 i* r  J5 C2 X8 r<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
4 `3 J. F4 R" @; h( I0 Q<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
& r7 D. e3 e# o/ l* i<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
( h/ ]# _4 Q6 C% B0 l8 x<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
  Q) x+ M# J+ b<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

  C3 X. f( ]( E/ N% a 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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( d0 G9 z# u* K6 _这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>