【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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: `5 H2 Y* u! v9 s' m我另将歌词附在此。
& ^; T/ O0 Y2 U' O6 }( CThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
9 }# B8 a3 ]2 c- w9 Q; gThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
6 G; {( m2 ?+ D7 EI already loved you with all my heart
% u/ r4 n$ [1 R8 ]' uWe meet and talk everyday,
5 n8 C" [0 ?6 `7 l$ ]9 p. f4 J7 PBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
1 f5 l1 d  w6 J0 i! j7 _. P, y, F% f* A* @If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
! \0 r+ U- S4 k3 nI would probably know how you feel
, K) _5 J3 \  X( T$ ], eLove… just the word love
& g$ w5 `: k  }! Y2 Y. o' c; }4 fWhy is it so difficult to express?
) o+ C- P- a0 Y7 K+ T' _# nI want to confess that I love you,
7 I8 }1 N, U5 ^' @4 T( q: `/ iBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
8 K, D7 B# p5 i4 DI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
9 }' z' {. C2 G+ U7 ?Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
+ t5 B& J3 h/ e* _& g/ L( C  `Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
( C% \2 W/ _3 e1 v* K7 a3 I2 hCan I entrust it to you?
' e: J$ Z+ s1 q4 L7 r# wEntrust my love within your heart
# o" }: }: z0 u; lCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
9 L% q$ T, @. S0 M( b3 V<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
0 B' h/ f5 C9 c6 g* U& V: v<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
9 |6 `, Y! [; q& H8 N9 y<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
: q! N& c+ r1 Q( S<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
6 [8 J5 X7 p! F  r7 {6 j" J8 B<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
: T3 X& a" ^5 N<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
4 t% L. a/ G8 c<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
$ f) U, K. w0 T+ @& z3 j+ q<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
) N; Z- J* t. \$ Y<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
5 {1 _5 a+ z7 b) `0 z% c! S<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
7 K' k4 B. P1 U6 V) [. t1 a. k<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
. i% z# M. {- w9 ~; i" V<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
% P( y1 ^# {# H) `4 W<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
, W$ `- u: i' b! Z% J) m* _<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
  c( X0 O8 i9 G" X$ }- c" v<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
( D% I% R1 Q  i9 g; F<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
# \/ l5 d6 F$ f# T, i: E+ d5 Z<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
+ E9 c6 i) J9 |<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
5 }$ ^$ |0 t9 \- S% x+ K<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
% ^" Z# o$ d+ i( d0 k<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
- X  D5 |2 K& f( v4 V<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
2 l. r8 k! L  k$ f% T* V, v<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
! d: e) F( r! U- g: D/ M; ^' N<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
+ I" d; I; S4 g) T! K1 F<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
4 N! W5 ^& n3 U* C  V. }5 F<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
) C) h; a. w" F<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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, k& ?2 w8 G# f0 P<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>