【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
- X! I5 z5 l1 ~; H3 ?4 OThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
; M. p' f8 k2 @From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
; A/ Z& g5 L- q0 x9 a( hWe meet and talk everyday,
: }$ I% `! @4 KBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
, B7 M  [3 l7 r8 y* S4 qI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
4 d* p. x; c- vWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
) S/ Z5 J8 ~+ TBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
# `4 \1 P. p. [' K$ \: FIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
6 u4 a3 @) k3 `0 b/ Q  }& d; H( Q( o; a3 GI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
8 F0 ]% t8 `) @" V$ gLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
4 E5 ^" V8 `: Z; nIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
$ m! T9 A& E7 bI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
: T9 C8 e5 z8 K4 W4 i7 W) LCan I entrust it to you?
( Z" ^. R8 d- EEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
2 X6 S9 K6 ]' l: D- t) vEntrust my love within your heart
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- \9 y. R, n4 G3 U[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
( o1 @$ a8 Q: k! s) J3 U; u' Y: Q<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
9 _) r0 X) q5 F# _! L# v6 Y' X<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
$ O% c8 _8 L- _" r<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
6 R$ N2 Z# j# o& P6 R" Z<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
! M1 Y5 `' H, n# D3 K  K<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
7 W0 E! K# `* H( }: |" `1 ^: D, G2 j<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
& R0 N! l8 _7 ]0 o; P<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
1 G$ {9 u  c# o5 j& z! g% ~# [<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
" a  o" r9 H9 ]3 f3 p<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
/ j  N+ [8 m9 G. s5 t1 ]<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
+ _* y. Y) H, N% Q' }<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
, U- R7 Y2 i, n<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
/ r2 o6 `* C! B* g6 L, Y<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
8 ^0 C/ y5 U) t# A<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
# }9 t2 E3 N1 F- s6 {  d<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
2 H1 N; O, x. u! x7 S/ W1 `<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
9 }" c: p( a+ |. y9 k; R<P>但我不会</P>
- @' j( z- U8 m; z  h<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
/ C5 A8 D, p% _1 {* I1 q<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
9 ~; g( p, m0 D1 M  m" p<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
6 l- S' b/ I7 H, Y/ }7 R3 A<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
+ s' I$ j% w9 l$ I' I<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
; Q1 K# T$ I* L- T. L, R<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
: n" d9 }" t: V  U& i: t<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
$ F& C6 P0 Z6 ]* N5 `<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
' y4 u  l3 v: C* W, o8 R, P<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
1 c& A8 r0 `$ k) e# O9 z+ C<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
: o% s, @9 C+ h- o3 ^<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
8 _- x# i) o" T, e<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
' n' k% ~7 k% `  N# H<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
; W0 }1 M$ L+ B9 C' V, ^<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
8 k& r0 I, r; X3 ~1 V<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
, J6 f& y; z7 \<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
) a" g  W5 h2 j% F<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  y8 _5 d6 m! S8 b6 L) `" E+ C<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
* l" g3 q; [' ~% {( G: x<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
! F8 |9 H$ \% U<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
% L( f: L( \9 L: K. t- q# F<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  n( B8 V8 U+ p<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
* j5 l) U, l/ |; h. o8 v<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
8 O# D# }7 D. d( K<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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! R& }' M, G0 ~; M7 R这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: c3 m; ~9 y! s! u<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>