【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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; R. `' e6 N& @5 ?2 [7 D我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
2 `; X: }! |% H% t+ aThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
# d6 Y1 v/ D  ~( XFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
( c# v% X8 `! c0 n8 a- G& PIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
" a) o: i7 w2 `4 {2 FI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
# I1 F3 `1 N% TWhy is it so difficult to express?
& z8 U4 V4 ^) ~" ~* s) K1 g  `I want to confess that I love you,
  X8 D* O2 s/ c0 [/ e1 z( nBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
2 ^& H# m3 J6 b  E3 \( ~If today isn’t too late,
, Q# m0 Q8 W- h% C- nI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
. _  D: i1 ]3 J$ `I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
+ j5 C/ z" ~0 q8 l) ?- j* C& }! Y! bCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
; k. |* Z: z  C1 ~2 a8 \5 F8 DWhy is it so difficult to express?
; y0 P6 J0 H# ZI want to confess that I love you,
% P9 z' C% l8 D, `/ \! r& jBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
$ A/ k0 P# b6 D: c% u! PI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
: l- S: |0 i9 [. Y8 yEntrust my love within your heart
9 F2 _3 G( a# zCan I entrust it to you?
6 P4 ?: _* C' f; r- fEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
- z$ j' i0 |' y" @: D<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
0 K# r$ O8 i7 \+ v<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
( N" V0 H. g+ |. g' g3 O2 b<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
" a( O" P$ y4 N- L3 y3 j<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
- Y8 x5 c+ W/ e4 o6 d- a: q<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
' {% U% R# w/ t, w<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
6 D7 }, a* N9 @3 a- C/ W2 n<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
: N5 h! x! Q3 ]- `$ e3 u<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
$ i, i6 ?( G: j- ~<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
7 A' v2 E- A9 h  P' h<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
7 Q* u' w; t0 j  K$ z" F<P>但我不会</P>
- l9 o; C4 h; M8 {) v<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
' Z/ @7 {7 h* Q& E& d8 L- u& Z<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
7 r$ j7 U0 b& |0 A7 ~( J<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
. g2 L; O. M1 G- G<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
) ^, f- m& x8 C<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! i& H. ?* }. w8 J" y<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
6 X' ]0 T& P& s4 X( V<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
! d. B  F! v5 a( w' |# d1 \2 m<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
6 G1 t- A2 t# a& F<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
1 ~$ T0 S  r$ r<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
; g% ~0 y4 ~" Q: [! L<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
$ v7 j5 R4 O8 `: L. l+ e9 M<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
2 x& [3 _& @, P5 ]<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
7 B$ W# b4 g5 t; @/ z<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
! e* z; b6 B: Z1 d& y& y<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ x8 a; f& O8 D<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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0 a- G" W3 ?- r% X/ \8 C" j<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>