【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
' D$ v* K$ e, O; r9 e) Z3 FThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
! l7 T6 C' T. d- ~1 a, w' gThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
5 H+ e, g! e* f; X7 W& zFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
# P- ~7 I6 Y& e, o" t5 ]We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
8 d  f/ `6 ?, _# d2 L' WI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
) U2 h: T5 U. D6 {: e+ W+ ]One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
! p/ v' a. M1 v2 K! {7 ^7 GWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
6 j* [" M( O" [  V( ^I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
1 X  N; z0 E# K( F7 P' GCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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# X2 o& X8 W' b: |' p' \5 \8 E<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
) ~1 O, p- r6 i# ?2 y' N# @# N+ c<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
" Y( d; E& V/ U: T4 y- A/ x<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
# n1 }1 E% @* A7 ]1 S( a<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
7 c. k! z* q2 T: V<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
2 q9 F, x0 g2 J$ \! Y, k<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
5 f& X5 I, v& ?3 J! V, T& N) ^3 a<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
" A- x9 C) g& i, w; h! \+ m& }<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
3 U- p' {6 B" ~1 h; f2 N<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
1 Y8 U  H" `7 l<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
2 b% a1 \' U" m* n<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
) G, ~9 B6 z0 O3 G, U) _9 m) ^: z<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
8 R4 b4 b) u  L3 u5 n, ~<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
3 c( R* w' d/ c; c<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
5 s3 I3 a$ m' A, j$ ^( N<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
2 w, x7 I3 u8 o% s: [( d5 _<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
) k3 y8 E9 X8 o6 `  \<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
7 K# k. N1 X3 s8 o: ]4 {3 w: u<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
- j1 b( F1 H: I  c# m<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
" ?6 y2 b. b- ~" f  U- g0 s: X: l<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
% U; S& A1 M/ @, h0 O  y+ w<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
7 g- W5 @1 F8 o8 M! g% a; }& H+ ?# \<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
( X4 b* Y3 d- ^5 a* Q5 s: N  l3 Y<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
: ]! ?6 f# q: X5 }<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
4 g+ b  G+ R9 a) \* Y# t<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
! d! c; j& M7 |5 ^<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
" {- K, o" S# k4 r<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
( u  A7 B0 J  O' G2 \<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
* v% g8 h. T" _" \% n1 k<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
1 R8 P2 n# V( J8 `& d: K<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
9 ?4 M) q- s7 y<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
0 L# p6 n1 |8 n0 Z, s$ K<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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; s8 X% K4 C1 o" D" f1 ]) F& Y, F 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

+ J* n; X6 Z1 E' O/ }) ?" ~这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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; X  b- B$ G  @* S# y7 b! a- k<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>