【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
; R. ~! R$ N2 u$ sThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
5 v9 Q* W% N- E) X& DFrom the first moment we met,
, [2 P0 ?2 Y2 `8 g  Z  \- l5 S/ U% h1 lI already loved you with all my heart
9 w1 V, z6 V4 U6 |* ]0 T9 ^We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
6 P7 Q7 W% z! Q. {' W! V1 l4 kI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
# n& b/ l% q* U% a; O1 s% k: jWhy is it so difficult to express?
  U  N9 N% d4 ?$ l+ q: dI want to confess that I love you,
# x/ @$ C6 |6 v$ YBut I never did
0 G* ?, I; w+ Z- u1 zOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
+ p; v  k' e, y1 A/ M/ T7 q# M* \I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
. N/ C, I; |! E" d! M& B3 JEntrust my love within your heart
0 \  G  d/ x# |0 X' S5 wLove… just the word love
) k  O6 o: Q# V$ b7 T4 `4 ZWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
! S! I! o" }; ^7 _. D1 m8 iBut I never did
& k9 a; b$ w! u5 m$ M0 xOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
  _! G9 g1 p/ j, o. Q! @% [If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
- V# Z2 q- ~: i$ H. `Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
$ K( c3 J! `, i/ `6 j% r( j/ KCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
8 G, v1 {( _7 W<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
9 U, T4 T. w/ W3 E<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
6 [2 `" T* n/ B4 g% W. e: W* \* N<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
2 R" J8 C) X* M8 H! e2 Y) p) H& g<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
9 R" I, w- u2 S; H/ A# H) ?! d<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
6 X7 S1 q8 W# Z3 f1 W- j: `<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
3 f% j- m$ Q7 o( P) Y- o<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
% K5 C0 U, s4 w; o! n<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
: |' N. |1 x8 @3 \! I3 Y<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
, P( o: B! R  j. Z( u2 m& F<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
- O/ Z* @. n9 Q4 w, V4 }<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
$ T: E, L  C" M9 x& ~  F$ u<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
4 L) P( D% ]# W5 S2 z" n, ~* x2 Q<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
& J9 }6 a7 K4 _  R& T1 J<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
6 j% ~2 e. I: z& ^( P<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
9 b: Y- H6 g8 p" q* r' p<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
1 f1 s) y7 S8 g' d( [- `<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
9 e5 B8 t6 k: @* t<P>我想说我爱你</P>
0 m$ j7 I$ A4 ], A  b$ g9 P<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
$ N. Q  V" I+ T( }<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
% D4 V* S2 u; p+ b. Y. ~9 P<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
9 O' i! J- ]1 J0 k<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
. b& L6 h6 h8 ?# C  }" l<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
4 X4 ?  ^9 n( f- |. W0 s4 G# M<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
# P2 S8 |9 S7 _9 p<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
( b- b: `) q" r" P# c<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
, q3 E  ]' ?- M' ~, j7 U' ~<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
, ]8 g4 |3 E3 ?* L* }<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
/ J- y. \  l7 y/ S! L, m, k; [<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
2 }" P# p! O5 b, z" v$ a<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
: E: d" z5 y1 u& X# \3 y7 N0 a<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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+ E+ B3 c4 H. U- m% a$ ?这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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3 S; ^+ r/ K) r/ \' L* K- ~<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>