【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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- J5 P. w: B- y3 q5 ]& w我另将歌词附在此。
. j" s5 @3 _+ H3 ]0 UThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
, k0 y" L/ D& K: ~& c# ]That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
3 ~; ^+ h& F, |* c" v) {# {I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
, x! M2 T0 b( A/ q6 VLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
6 B1 M! ~' t0 W3 X% K; cI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
+ w3 @/ c2 Q. f6 AIf today isn’t too late,
* k8 _: p+ L1 m- H' H) QI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
* C# V* p: q% }) d" XWhy is it so difficult to express?
; O2 G8 O2 ]4 q! }" A. C3 N7 TI want to confess that I love you,
1 r+ i; A3 u1 ^& C7 kBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
2 i* M( c* V$ F3 M1 S2 n4 uI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
) f3 d, `& x+ d' f* t# H7 G, ZI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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  j3 x- L; D5 I[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

; ~6 _0 A8 p9 m4 b<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
8 G, ^: z3 \# G8 N+ v- x- n<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
3 {4 ?" d! Q- R& p<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
; S/ E1 C: a6 {9 P& I- k! q<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
8 _' S4 v1 I+ i<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
7 X7 a2 c9 o" K<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
6 F& c% c/ T* S3 z+ X" l<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
2 \& a. V. V) ]<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
( c, r6 Y5 x: P/ n. V0 N, i- U9 A1 l<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
/ H1 O5 ~6 _' p- Z<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
+ x, P- z+ x$ {4 U" G2 r4 ^<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
$ r9 Z! Q8 \5 k3 K/ a<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
1 Y' R1 E8 [% O5 A7 O! b4 w/ W<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
4 @0 M  v5 ^' \5 n! Z<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
! W% s8 X2 q& z/ p) K& @0 n4 b<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
3 |8 a# v+ e7 B5 C' C<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
9 d3 z* M- l" x5 _2 @- C<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
5 N4 x( O+ ?3 b- g' I1 t<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
% L0 u& h! L9 f; L! A<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
: T/ {7 I0 V, Z# r0 f<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
- X9 s' E& z& ]& i( w: y<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
: \, Q% F: L, T- w' H7 e<P>But I never did </P>
6 ~" m& l* Z4 E0 n( q- K<P>但我不会 </P>
2 W/ {6 R/ n6 F4 M$ T8 R  R& I<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
2 h3 @4 _; E1 b  ~0 k<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
+ Q; G4 x; x+ Y) K: k<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
: ]+ ~5 |# j& L5 J) y% j<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
" M& h$ H! C  q8 `2 J  n9 `<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
% R7 `, W! R/ p<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
/ m" k6 W& I" J, }, O<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
' o( c6 F' ~/ ~5 u5 J. {& z<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
$ M3 m3 W7 L! _<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. q+ U9 Z/ i: g8 y6 T<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>