【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
6 ]. X# c3 [7 J2 j" d3 gThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
$ W# F% g* J6 h& ^0 jThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
4 o8 q5 ~* q9 n1 iI would probably know how you feel
/ `# T- ?& l3 F7 y, o( e6 kLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
/ ?3 N  n! \0 [  }$ E( {I want to confess that I love you,
; g% h& k' u0 _4 n/ ?! ?# {7 zBut I never did
& a8 y3 q0 n/ k# jOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
1 }4 `2 z6 ?3 |' Q" mIf today isn’t too late,
( }4 }2 P1 B( T2 U3 DI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
' r. H$ P3 u- ^( m; F7 A3 v. {6 [I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
* z. L. f0 b  `) U4 w, R' wWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
$ m; K' D" s! ?) M  X6 o' x; {But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
9 S3 \/ ]- `8 g1 X3 r! ?/ gI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
0 ^9 B9 q) p7 T  j# M1 D: hCan I entrust it to you?
" @4 d* y% ]5 W& w" LEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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3 M6 `1 ?" h# {* `1 Y" V[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
1 b' K( V8 t( Q( l& w) Y( \<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
  B5 g# h8 r7 a2 y9 J  a, [* l& o<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
  {" Y! R3 E+ F1 R8 q<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
7 r/ f; f7 B" d0 V8 V( l( d<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
  [8 m" u, G) S3 |" o& H: y<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
' {1 [; m  K  o9 F% B<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
9 y) ^0 U! s: ~5 @7 u& g  h<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
5 P/ u# y. `+ A. U: g3 z<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
2 J: e* q2 x2 e! \2 T, v: l<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
! r+ a% S' C  |* Z<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
& X- m1 c& I3 \5 c<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
& G6 N( A: T# h; b+ u) i) ]& P8 Z<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
+ v) ^$ N3 A* f% `0 t8 V<P>我想说我爱你</P>
2 E) |  ^. j$ x( a; {/ f/ P7 c<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
  L7 l0 B- I4 a<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
, }) p  s) {" X: T<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
3 g/ N8 L8 h: E  C! n<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
$ F/ ^$ V' }1 l$ B<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
, c3 l% x) G* q# e& i. H7 f<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
+ `+ f9 p2 P3 f4 n<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
8 @) {1 E) Q; U( ]$ K" e  o<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
, d3 M6 v% U$ L( d4 p2 n8 _% Z) J* q<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
. i6 |+ s9 T1 K, ]$ P<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
. k4 v; M$ t! f8 G+ ?2 A& N3 t<P>But I never did </P>
* d! Z1 ^2 s! s8 s4 M<P>但我不会 </P>
+ Q! n- h! ^; E. z  t<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
& j$ f9 C% E) x4 b<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
8 ^  H# C1 `& Q7 E, L2 z' b<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
" j3 {4 n8 \8 j% Z' Z<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
) u( N. c; k1 w6 g# j<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
- i  P& j' f( q# o( p* n<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
, |$ n' g1 U  {3 f1 i<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
. U0 z" z; _1 F3 ]/ l& G" W, g<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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6 r+ K# C% }5 g# {, |% K  a 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>