【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
* n( q5 K: H( u/ _# X2 ~That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
6 ~; X( D! V2 `) Y) t4 AFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
4 J1 u1 }1 O% C- C5 c) OIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
+ t' N. V# N7 Z3 h( G8 _% u, ZI would probably know how you feel
- M3 Y5 X# V. \" kLove… just the word love
% D+ x! i. N: z! Y5 C/ H/ x7 ^& CWhy is it so difficult to express?
  m. S0 M; w  g3 Z; YI want to confess that I love you,
" l! g7 @1 ?# Y8 {  X9 eBut I never did
* e" J- \% R# C; i2 @) B/ E, IOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
+ b4 O/ d8 T: K3 v8 J7 X) kIf today isn’t too late,
  T% [# C' u& Q1 O. R) j' [I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
+ Q8 R# u) L' k" D  e. CLove… just the word love
) _1 b  S' E; u, }% }; IWhy is it so difficult to express?
# l$ }. {$ C9 g0 g; J$ U. lI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
7 R8 g9 }8 `, d( oCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
' {" t3 {& h, V0 k# q' MEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

3 {+ ~% w& j5 b; l, i* g5 ]( k<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
* V8 {- g; }( ~9 K0 v3 x, [! U$ j<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
0 S1 z, w! R& G' |$ a<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
9 R' F# }) n" U/ O/ ?<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
2 M/ K; \5 b8 W5 I- P) C<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
' a* S4 ^9 p9 B. y- ]% n<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
0 o# q7 o+ V2 d; W2 D# g<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
9 }, b2 D8 U1 h3 [! f5 s/ f& Z<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
' @/ F) B5 B4 r6 Y+ v. ]0 J<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
8 |4 a$ Z4 |" K6 r<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
. R" H& ]$ Y9 n1 e<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
5 ?- N. q9 u1 O, e<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
6 W6 z! F! Z2 g* c) S<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
7 L! Z% [- L; H  S% F  M. o<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
7 Y/ k, k5 }5 G! y; i8 E<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
/ Z+ _" c5 Q3 m; \% q<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
7 Z( J/ \6 a" U7 Y- v<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
$ z3 z) y5 J' W: j2 X6 [9 r<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
8 s0 {. d6 t. l' P& e<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
3 v9 Q1 R+ Q4 N6 U7 j( I/ m<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
' W) J4 @7 _0 O" @, _% O<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
2 G# O4 Q7 a  h: E0 H1 }4 m<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
$ b; ]" ~# o- U( O$ r, z<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
/ a4 d" T5 H/ j' F6 u* J# I<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
* {: j5 @; o% Y7 `9 u<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
2 F) X% g: \, a) j/ o9 ^' f1 q<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
$ D2 E* i) f. X9 r<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
; {  y' l4 f, k- p2 X# d4 [<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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7 ]0 T) A( k. e( |4 ]这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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* l7 p$ R1 [$ |: \6 q5 h# Q<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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