【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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' t5 z* @3 H3 B1 c# j7 A& o我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
6 s2 q% p' g" N! W( `2 yFrom the first moment we met,
; ?: U; l- b7 lI already loved you with all my heart
3 ?7 I6 e. n( s/ KWe meet and talk everyday,
4 z* e1 l( T* iBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
4 ~6 j2 S  l5 ~" mI want to confess that I love you,
: T7 \. z. w3 v9 F* e) \9 XBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
: X# U. z* Y& r8 @) JIf today isn’t too late,
# [* C7 `2 ?' b( dI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
( L( v0 `" P$ D4 J- K7 k) |! xI want to confess that I love you,
: ]! v' g3 e0 mBut I never did
# i0 d# P) a9 F$ `: ~, kOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
4 J, K( T+ M& a: I! T0 W* ^If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
3 s3 d  o* N2 C# RI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
. o4 U1 [% I5 {7 F: _/ RCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
) g: k/ X! _/ k0 y5 X8 \( L- m& i$ e$ N) eCan I entrust it to you?
7 y. J- t+ @  G4 {- w( HEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

' [7 }: E3 n  x  V<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
2 o9 F% I- b! {; f0 i$ [+ ~<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
, r. f: z6 x( R+ @<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
; r8 l5 \( ]' K) Q0 o9 _- e<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
5 B+ ~. K0 @0 U. t2 {( R<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
( U1 w1 x! \! ]3 l, p& ~# J<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
9 T, r% P: h( s2 e: F<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
* C4 c4 B1 U$ ]1 K. |* u1 p<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
) g# }5 r( \5 ~' x  L9 F6 R! N& v<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
$ s3 j/ W3 v6 Z% W<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
% _  [# u1 c/ @<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
$ H1 u, Q) l, d/ l1 R5 X- R3 j<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
' a. o" _7 d+ y  l# ~9 o7 X# X<P>我想说我爱你</P>
( K: l3 a, o6 ~( @<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
& T( x- F2 [8 Y+ _<P>但我不会</P>
2 w% v+ j& g! k6 {( {6 V) R<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
3 R1 X7 @+ j" g' s, z7 f& B' v) s1 a<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
' K% c; @( ^% x. }  x# `* v<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
9 a/ z9 m2 Q  g" L; E) X2 d& |<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
5 q7 a( N; \' L( Y<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
; m0 f# O" t4 p) j, k5 C6 P<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
- q( N2 G4 A; j3 A<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
* A$ h$ T4 I. t$ `<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
* m6 R7 }% C/ r3 N! }<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
( S) E8 m7 }0 v6 o* w<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
+ y& X9 o$ ^8 |2 T& Z<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
# ]8 E# e5 s8 C<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
5 ~% ]3 ]' T- z, t/ u6 E3 M( F<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
* h. k. d6 I0 @<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

2 m2 y6 `* {" c' n, u+ o  ~这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 A; m' Z$ b1 e6 e2 s( g<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>