【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
4 F" x. e8 F9 C$ e% KWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
: J6 b1 z) w) AI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
- N3 D) W( e$ F2 G+ JWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
4 b0 S! c4 o# [6 DBut I never did
% f5 k% H2 l' M4 o1 ]: JOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
) G* E; Q* X/ {) S# EIf today isn’t too late,
% h: Q. d" ]) o4 MI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
3 z# L0 e, \2 B/ H. x0 hI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
" m/ R) L9 [" f; V  d$ L. WCan I entrust it to you?
* ?6 h# E. D3 i% lEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
6 [" D* e8 E9 p) xWhy is it so difficult to express?
% O3 J  [3 I) m9 n) l" D5 P8 [I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
+ i2 N) Q% ^, U+ J+ zOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
7 ]) K# \! a' l) WI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
) P  R; T* p0 E5 w- CI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
- z0 w. \6 A: {$ fCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

* |- z) c- O4 Z) z: D" M5 g8 q[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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! w0 `; v8 Q) O% u7 h5 Z: F<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
6 `, N; C3 a2 j0 F6 X6 c9 x6 _# D<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
  r7 x1 w8 W; q- F8 I<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
& |" L& j/ z  x+ w' G+ j<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
2 K5 j, ]* d% R( G! q% v<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
$ D/ D8 e" ]) @" Y$ d  C4 R<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
4 l  P, w0 N) R7 F<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
: U6 E; n% G: r& R4 b% {' x<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
1 I; [: w- K& e$ Q; J<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
. Y2 D. `8 m- A9 f7 K<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
* P0 p8 V% n' [6 X<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
! E# c7 w6 e" i<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
, V. K2 U/ ^0 P" B<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
, v/ R2 d$ \0 G3 w* V1 c9 b# d<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
9 p$ c! z/ T, {) ^& Y  }7 m<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
4 l) J; _2 {$ X; x- a8 R1 u% [0 f<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
" U$ D. a# b+ [8 ~% {. e9 R0 ~<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
3 n' q6 W; E) b2 d<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
/ }/ w. Z, N  ~1 H1 `3 Y7 h<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
3 V9 \. Y9 @1 a<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
, C- V' R4 W4 O( Y. `. [<P>But I never did </P>
( `, f3 A/ U$ M  M5 B( E! j<P>但我不会 </P>
& u4 N/ {$ B3 b* H5 L5 h( D<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
+ A6 H& N9 R# p' h) m4 [, N5 Y<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
2 d" A% Q* E. _$ P<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
2 D  ^+ J$ Y6 U& r+ [" O! X<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
0 x+ X8 q+ v+ N4 N* J) n<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
: w3 b9 \& H$ V$ _<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
! I" s+ C2 {4 R2 z2 l1 F3 X4 p+ v<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
! u3 c& ^) h7 c0 A( M( ~- G! F& c$ K<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
7 p! w, X; D# ?7 C, k+ Y/ w<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
# A3 n% j8 `$ d2 {9 L<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& c' v( b( J8 t/ h2 S<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>