【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
8 i2 M( C$ t9 m  {That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
. q" b4 e+ p0 `6 R4 K+ f2 j; u6 DBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
, p5 S3 E( n% T+ G( f: vIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
) M2 Q' P5 y- u# S9 O9 G0 SI would probably know how you feel
+ L; [% M% ?  s; MLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
6 D2 N; D7 ~4 F* e# m, Z0 c' oI want to confess that I love you,
: X( e3 g5 T- X4 t0 f# L- U3 D/ rBut I never did
3 m5 _8 Q  A+ B$ `One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
: \, z* T1 n( vIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
+ |) g7 K2 l" ^0 aCan I entrust it to you?
0 ?! P, h! l! [$ e8 A( m+ QEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
$ S* f( t  P4 i+ vI want to confess that I love you,
% W2 f8 w- H  }; GBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
+ [1 ?8 z" e, A/ K2 O; H6 AI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
2 a& ^, J, l! a$ o6 p! E3 PEntrust my love within your heart
- L- k; d3 u" rCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

$ h3 f% Y8 ]7 ~<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
! m& C- z! Q! q  ~1 w# f* }<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
; V/ f9 `. L& V0 T; c1 m1 @<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
& @2 i/ l9 E+ m1 X<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
6 G4 R& Y# S' h) z' N/ w! v<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
4 G" a' ~6 u) R# m8 l* U# ~1 z<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
) C6 L6 x2 U; d<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
% x  l$ g) z3 b& B3 w$ b+ h+ D6 p<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
: u) l& n' h* m' J. A6 R<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
% q& _) W$ s3 n/ g4 p<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
% ]4 y; \, J. m' ^( J& `<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
2 b' u/ s2 y2 }5 p! p' n* \) s<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
3 ]6 Z- x9 l( U7 a& G<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
, C5 V) ^* J2 s4 c  [% z<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
9 e% B; u& q' W( j% T<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
5 {! j. Z+ c  t: K: S<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
/ P0 `" n' S; `: W<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
2 I, s: m3 {0 S: u<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
/ j0 E$ |9 m0 G$ r9 x  S0 O<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
& }, a8 D+ C4 F- q/ f<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
: v2 h! O, R- |% X<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
3 i& G4 W- F# z2 w8 g2 p<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
# M* `8 V6 d* L' Q7 c. E9 |<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
5 N! t" {: p) f) ^<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
6 ]$ v5 R6 `5 O<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
. @* C1 K, ?/ l<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
' D7 K3 B- P9 A( B' n<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
4 L* O) L  O3 N# h9 `# Y<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
% p# U5 Q, M. w9 c$ b<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
8 m' `9 a7 }0 K& D/ H" v- T( L<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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+ l& w1 x& O2 d% u这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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7 p" w* L! u+ A这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>