【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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2 a9 L% u; |+ A* z, H我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
$ R0 D; }  p% e' vBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
/ t- c' t8 C3 D# h  mIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
; B4 h$ [8 B. v0 S: ?Why is it so difficult to express?
8 \2 N6 M: E6 }$ w& C% ~I want to confess that I love you,
2 @  w9 ~. z" @5 w0 N8 \6 Y7 YBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
, R, V8 b- d) uIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
' Z6 t* e, u. P% Y. B9 [I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
' u4 [4 v* U$ FI want to confess that I love you,
  q- P8 S/ R5 J1 v1 a* `But I never did
  B/ W2 }) C1 i6 A2 H' s2 uOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
% f# _& B  l  s7 B- KIf today isn’t too late,
6 c3 A( }' B1 q7 e5 K: aI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
! \1 H9 V$ P; U' B% iI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
3 ^$ q3 ], m% ~9 @( ~. T/ PCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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- y2 v% F( g) l/ j3 X: d<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
( X* j# I; O2 S- R# x* ?<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
, A* l4 H, v6 b# F# y; ]% }& M$ ?<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
9 U$ H2 {2 r( W0 ~9 p( x<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
" ~  B/ p2 F1 j<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
- U8 J# y0 v1 G( O' Y$ G, s<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
- K3 F  i) F" \& r# @<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
: m' H; q  ^  @6 b7 T7 l<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
9 K+ [8 {" `+ @* A% ^' y; \( N0 R<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
: o! i/ W9 x( N2 h! P: T" ]: ^; Y<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
- A. I7 W" {  n: i1 s<P>我想说我爱你</P>
2 {7 _: k! b5 s<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
' [( e; B' C  {<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
/ B, l* T3 ]2 y1 e* w3 \0 @; U; e  z<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
! e: J# }3 y2 W* F9 u8 W  [* p<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
& A) V* B. r8 K9 w' M8 H, @( }0 H' s<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
; R7 S$ {( c" K6 P6 H$ w<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
) j4 @7 M8 e  `3 t' o3 W- q. q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
9 \0 Z( z! ~, S3 {' N' u<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
6 U. X9 o# F8 T* q9 K8 ~" C<P>Love… just the word love </P>
* k) y) d4 h" T# X1 e<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
% J! ~2 S8 y8 d2 [1 \- R<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
1 e: S' p; U& s8 R, b. Y' W<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
& V/ {/ s1 I. K<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
0 f( G% B0 j& D1 C, m4 @<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
& G% [8 ?/ m2 S4 _' }8 @<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
) f7 _2 k# N! X7 p) x<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
1 `) {9 M8 o1 P+ L! O<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
1 L, m" y4 x' ^0 g: W+ t<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
# L0 W' ]% e, ~* O6 o<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
5 Z* M7 S, V. O% @* D- [<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
2 J; e3 ?9 [5 p6 o9 n& G) a<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
6 j. Q9 S; }; u, X<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
& I7 j& B. o6 i8 T' Z; W<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

7 v0 J8 j& Z7 t 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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8 \" T% f( S1 M! i这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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$ e( W4 ~4 F8 @& i/ R& F$ f/ ?, D2 m<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>