【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
5 q' o! V$ _3 u+ i4 PThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
0 h/ Q& Y$ T& m" n& e$ X9 G& `) DIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
% p9 S0 e6 X2 B: OI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
; D; \" z, [( ~& T" D1 S) a& Y5 X& iWhy is it so difficult to express?
  M  J3 v% Z+ E8 I6 V  kI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
. o4 `7 Q3 e0 U* N8 q2 c8 J& kIf today isn’t too late,
& V( o" X- [$ T; C/ VI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
1 g4 }! D5 v1 i1 b; Q$ EI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
. B6 O) l* i" H1 P' F2 ~0 RCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
- L3 r# m! ?- [5 u1 KI want to confess that I love you,
: N6 N6 _# P6 Z2 ~6 ^7 A& kBut I never did
: @' s4 P3 [9 ~3 y4 a% A# m0 a5 Z7 aOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
& X/ ^) @8 j! C2 k6 T; cIf today isn’t too late,
+ B0 Q9 ^9 l9 V8 B, WI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
# @2 p* t" c8 G8 O" n8 J! _I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
& F/ n2 \  Q! Z' NEntrust my love within your heart
( W3 I5 l% H0 g. [Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

& j: b  G4 T4 S0 ]& i<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
3 L' I. ^4 \) @" U3 d<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
. o- e6 H" |) b7 Z+ N! y<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
( x* }+ A9 z: K<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
6 j2 ?5 i* ?! |  A<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
& I5 }/ p" _# r) H$ k/ Q0 s1 n2 q<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
" {+ d3 b! @  ^& o  R8 t8 b<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
, `2 R( D. r' B/ l9 P# e$ Z: _<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
6 T# s- g4 f5 A# l) I" i8 Z<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
& u' c  P. W5 n& L# w<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
& D9 g) t: L/ x9 V$ S<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
! L- t1 A# r/ ]. Z( n8 f% F/ s<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
! d2 B* C: |( G; s<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
! n) Y) F8 I# W/ }: z/ c$ G+ B<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
2 ?; F8 G' {: Q& A/ s0 v<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
9 \5 |9 b8 Q7 j0 D+ z% c+ I# D% E<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
2 ]- L  y; B/ S3 U$ [3 {7 S<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
, o- |1 O; ^' k% Q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
& j  Q) x+ |$ v( f5 z<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
- I! {& S; K/ K, N<P>Love… just the word love </P>
; L7 b9 J2 S# q' x, c# w<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
/ u# k- ~; U7 m6 H  Y, Q<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
7 r; L& [! [. C2 B( w! w<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
& q" `8 g" v" ]. o<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
- d5 a) Q9 l+ |$ q<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
% G# L0 M6 q' s7 w: }2 Y* n0 l<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
% D/ }% U' H: f  N3 b  g! y, p<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
9 t) `# C9 h: E5 L# R<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
7 ^6 g5 S- R; m6 ^; L5 d<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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! h5 r3 e! L5 @ 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

) e: Y. Z* I7 g- z5 H0 H这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>