【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
, {0 }5 Q% d6 r5 S" q1 e  qThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
, z6 `9 ?' O: ?That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
# j, Y6 y5 w5 H7 b/ h3 GI already loved you with all my heart
3 l- s3 x: V0 A2 S( VWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
- b* H+ C$ H4 cIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
: N9 u9 J, g1 ]1 j* K% R; ~I would probably know how you feel
* Z( G( ?9 b9 C: L! ]+ \! {( oLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
* K  V. E( z2 N/ D5 D  JI want to confess that I love you,
2 P' ~9 S5 N- B' p9 y  ZBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
; x& ~' \& E' b: V1 mI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
# q- ?9 M* u1 _) |+ S" O& K" ~5 LCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
, O/ U1 v1 y' T! P8 w% KLove… just the word love
5 n$ z( a* C* E2 p( n* ^8 wWhy is it so difficult to express?
7 G  h+ t( k) f8 F) R& i* f  vI want to confess that I love you,
0 l  w) q$ V0 h9 E, I% ^' ]But I never did
$ S$ _* @, a) SOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
. V# o5 w$ Z" }/ pI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
3 _) z( A0 a$ i4 T/ h0 s8 c) TI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
, F+ X0 W: H! o( jEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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+ b1 u8 ~+ Y1 R% B6 f[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
- L2 V1 j' d. R. f+ }! o<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
$ ?  [% M" t8 x4 M<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
( D0 e7 _, @3 I8 k& C4 P2 s2 d# A- ^<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
/ v4 a9 y7 S' \, M<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
# |2 Q  H0 {! U5 l9 L: A- F<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
: j4 }/ v% J; ~; q! t<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
# j7 w0 Y* o/ g. j5 q3 }8 Z% W6 k<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
/ A& G9 o/ e5 a) u<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
/ h5 p' M1 v, K, [) f, \; L, w<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
8 c2 U5 z! r& w: ?, O/ `0 J<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
, x! }! ~7 K& }<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
4 G, v( d( d! d. `$ T: M<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
  c3 {5 ?( U$ N- X<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
- X5 u) L2 b1 l" ?$ V9 l! K* i- p" A<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
4 U4 T0 Y0 q" u* I: W<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
. w& P9 R) r7 r- _$ }4 _<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
6 m6 Z% |; m7 N! n, G9 L<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
$ d) y6 I+ M: g) P3 E+ g9 t<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
# n" ~8 c! Z( ]: H* m* R<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
7 q* P; d% {/ o" c<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
/ D9 p0 c& A; r9 s+ N; u, g1 b* A. q<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
4 D" s& o; M) _  \<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
) _. i. K* r$ [5 Y  d$ c) ^+ ]0 D& v2 R<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
7 ^" b/ B9 j9 c% {& e( E; y# x<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
4 K- B' b2 r0 m<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
! V2 O* F/ X9 i( Q- I<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
9 O1 A8 V* t) H9 ]) q& _<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

+ w. ^, Z" ~: O这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 j6 H1 x5 O5 P8 a  |" R* B<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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& ], b4 b) W: F+ t  i# k<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>