【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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9 s9 L) \( L! i2 Q6 P0 M! C- p我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
6 x0 ^1 d8 q+ \% I( g, h7 gFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
8 I5 c  L+ f, W2 [" Y2 ^& oWe meet and talk everyday,
8 f/ u" `, V+ s) xBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
7 s: J/ T  D! P$ o" o$ u) gIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
7 o1 I2 i! _* [1 g3 _; Y9 z1 ?/ ^  pI would probably know how you feel
; \0 w4 K4 {( C9 ?; m' rLove… just the word love
" Q! t4 ]3 I( B/ y2 W8 P7 y& U9 IWhy is it so difficult to express?
! n) P9 h! ~9 H7 \; rI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
1 J# s/ t) v8 {8 V2 ~One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
6 x3 d& q/ o" G7 I3 [$ wI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
  w! Z7 x+ n% y) _I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
5 y& {/ O# |7 E1 `  J: |* j4 V* _Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
# F/ s- L+ \4 [( P3 ELove… just the word love
5 {$ c* M5 |, i5 AWhy is it so difficult to express?
9 Y, i  u+ n5 MI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
7 |" z7 E6 A* I, k) N2 K  x1 ROne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
% d4 `4 a% o' k1 m9 |+ zI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
6 Z0 S) T5 J. e6 UEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

- @+ K5 V/ Q  ?7 I<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
6 Y5 `  r1 G) t: _; D9 s<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
; A/ Z( Y7 Z8 ~: v6 l& i<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
* @) ]0 A: S- g5 T+ C: v5 V, N( M3 U. w<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
7 u! n4 V$ m9 ?0 t) R6 c- _2 J; Z3 [<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
' P8 m% H- W7 Q) t<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
' l/ d0 W$ x2 q$ P) y6 F) a<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
; `1 r! P0 M$ v2 ~<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
2 M/ x  R9 n$ H6 N3 i<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
# |7 E3 m& ?9 D8 B" Z8 A<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
- W7 b7 [9 V. {' z<P>我想说我爱你</P>
9 z2 h+ h8 b7 u% g& r% k<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
/ y- [2 w% u4 |. C( Y+ h<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
6 P/ B0 V) _  n<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
/ p8 m2 J! x- u' E; E9 T<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
. ~4 h$ y+ j2 m<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
7 M3 ^& N- s) {; G3 W8 M4 ^<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
; m; \3 c* a: G  n<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
; ~* y; ^5 U8 D3 X3 `* A/ A5 x7 L<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
" l# P& R3 `; N9 l/ p( W2 I<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
& U4 {, s2 A$ S' e8 P/ h4 d<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
( @" j' e# G" X3 l0 ^# }) K<P>But I never did </P>
% Z) U* M# r, z( s/ i<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
. c) ]) |  t+ v/ d: K+ A4 I<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
! p. N& y! A: p+ |+ e- _<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
6 N# w6 F0 Z0 d" F<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
2 Z$ E( c1 z0 \<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
+ B: v  T8 W# U2 ^6 l<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
7 L. c7 O! r& V7 [4 s# o<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
5 L4 A( |* Z8 P" h- Q1 F% _<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

) t; l7 [& k, g这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

3 b) V' i. N, \这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>