【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
/ Y/ w# w, Q/ z0 I* w' `4 z5 w: OThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
3 k7 y$ R* r, iIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
( @6 z" r. }5 w" H1 K# RI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
. h# }' U" V+ P, s* Q& D* ]Why is it so difficult to express?
$ e: _% |& p. n* DI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
1 {3 f' D6 _# m) Z3 G8 UOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
* d& h& ]# ~7 m+ V) H" H$ i& K7 m! sIf today isn’t too late,
" I& p0 h) T2 l, r8 _I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
/ T) j! X' |1 t: iI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
( T. V4 u' {8 L) j  _Can I entrust it to you?
3 O7 T0 R4 s' P0 j# f5 f- LEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
" @& c( J5 H7 CBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
3 l3 q6 G( ]: Q3 h2 G; [- TIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
) Y; M# n5 s+ z  hI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
$ w% E: F# k* l1 |Entrust my love within your heart
# g" F" e2 V2 d& A5 \Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

/ z' P, G3 j) K+ n: b$ J<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
* L: T# Y+ N! V9 U4 b# l. D<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
9 \- B- ]; E* B" V. k& ~<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
. [$ R0 E: K- q; ~6 K2 N<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
1 t. K4 R- `6 d! d1 q6 v, X<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
4 f- o2 |/ X: {# m<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
+ ~: v7 f0 q3 L: F7 ^% Z+ j* A! _<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
, u- ?7 q) B: r+ q; L<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
( Y$ I" j/ Q' d: Z<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
1 d# R# S2 ~. X) v; M8 w7 J<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
" w4 l; i& I4 l( |<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
' @+ e. @% Q: ?8 ^) D. q9 e<P>但我不会</P>
* n& x8 C% m2 E; y2 N+ _<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
/ n, ?$ E4 R6 o" [/ V+ \: J<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
; I! x& ~% N2 C7 f<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
3 p/ i% a, [( A/ z- ^<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
: R( ?! y1 E2 P9 m7 V<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
: i" K' I8 a' `<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
& o  q6 g" {! p% v3 O2 f<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
+ ~5 U! R$ g4 e- d7 E( [<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
( a7 T7 V7 ?- t1 C<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
3 S9 j9 D4 `! N6 F, i, C<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
, G* t% G( g0 B# u3 F. q2 ~<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
' _9 q2 j  N& q/ V; a3 j) g<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
! d) B+ k9 [5 A& e1 Z$ V: S<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
. [$ I( c; W8 x<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
, W$ ^% W7 K5 l3 d- z" ?<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
* [' `! C4 o( m<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

6 h0 D5 O) y1 s这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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' s+ y: Q/ {" t) {这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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0 a; W' G, d  @' ~# m<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>