【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
9 ?* d/ Y% e. uThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
3 G- K! W' U: }) T8 KFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
( |% t  A4 b3 q) j% QWe meet and talk everyday,
2 p! h9 ?( l( V( cBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
- U9 v" H( R! P; d. Z% Q& m7 wIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
+ P" L6 S! L( ]/ H2 C. VWhy is it so difficult to express?
) A! s; @) `* }) T1 FI want to confess that I love you,
9 Q, H# f" n- _9 t+ [# \- ~  _. ABut I never did
, ?5 D2 |; X4 N! }0 Q, SOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
' E) V- q0 t* P$ ?If today isn’t too late,
% A/ j* W( K) MI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
! l+ w) w& N9 s  b  e5 n0 SI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
/ N6 F. x( F$ F# C2 F+ N5 p0 pCan I entrust it to you?
- c: b( a  V# Z) \0 x3 {$ qEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
  l4 {1 K, t7 S# W0 G* b; y2 J0 PWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
$ D# G* I' K$ S  @/ B' zOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
4 j% ?3 ~- k3 TI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
. C; D8 A7 P  m9 j) b: l7 n$ Z1 J- bEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
$ j5 J( c) f2 n) h8 S0 ?<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
; j) W: L9 `6 p$ G; p<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
7 F# \' Y' \+ R- [8 A<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
8 z! x7 c9 s' U* d9 y4 Z<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
/ B5 d" ^+ D; C8 O<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
6 @+ |6 e& [: }+ ]. l& P$ J5 M% q<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
2 E% k! D0 w3 W<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
9 f' g2 p; p9 Q<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
' P' X/ x" b9 Z0 _2 a- s& {  o<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
& {7 S* w; A+ H0 ^; v5 q; R<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
$ P# R6 w0 m! M5 R! {. U<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
1 J* E5 {' P5 X; G/ V/ D<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
( n9 O  w0 t, F# K" j+ I<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
0 U8 M% a9 n0 o1 g5 k! w& E<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
9 L; W0 }8 c: Q' k6 `" W' F( O( Z( W<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
+ p3 N$ I- X: `& E7 {6 }' B<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
2 O' h9 y- g0 t<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
+ t* d2 N9 b: P5 t) k- l<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
2 D- W' r% \( T5 ~" b<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
2 A9 L1 I5 L! _/ c<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
3 h& O9 k7 B" |! ~<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
: C* p% V! ]* G7 t+ G, i. e. A# V<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
* B) w; ]8 U- o! I. M0 `0 @<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
- ~: k. U. C5 B2 L3 U/ L5 O4 r! @2 j<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
1 V0 E$ L% Y, T4 A. e0 v* Q<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
5 i( B" r3 K; x( |4 \. u% ~0 B<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
( ~- |) f! n( C! U<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

* x3 [, a; m5 f; d  o 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

9 _& b$ n- k1 J7 i. A6 N这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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3 ]( |, U& @3 x; ^, _" Z  k<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>