【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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& U1 Y3 ^4 e" N! ^) z4 X我另将歌词附在此。
1 o' _: C8 e0 T/ o( X: c$ K1 I8 AThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
. ]3 b4 R' x/ s2 |" Q+ M4 QThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
# q( B3 |7 z- }- \7 ?. |( t; |* R* e5 LWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
3 E3 t! }7 }( i2 E# _I would probably know how you feel
5 Y" R# V$ g, u# s* f  \4 C4 Y* @Love… just the word love
1 X, v$ T7 }3 Y0 H1 W  r2 R, ?Why is it so difficult to express?
9 R/ @( R0 u# gI want to confess that I love you,
1 B: z3 e- X; @5 |- NBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
: L  s) a$ ^2 t# F- z9 Y' iIf today isn’t too late,
! g# I, I: t4 f6 Y0 P1 V% OI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
$ j1 V2 R8 [2 a- aEntrust my love within your heart
8 h) ?0 ?& `% d/ j" N: R% jLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
- U8 ^3 O6 b/ D& pBut I never did
! x2 ], h9 X% c, B4 t" ?# p4 m. oOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
6 x5 s/ Q4 q* q0 rIf today isn’t too late,
2 n* j5 x$ A2 p  l* ^I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
& Q8 \- g) e: L+ ~' ?<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
6 C/ Z$ `/ n% G7 m<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
5 C: T  T$ o2 a4 E<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
8 T+ P% R* S  @<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
1 x1 x# H* V6 Y9 u& }" T<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
: G& S* {& t8 }<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
9 @* K3 N' @' T7 O/ B# P<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
4 \- D" C2 g# C- x6 L2 _<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
. d% d8 v: Z" [3 k, Y8 Q9 E<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
' i0 ]7 p- f& ?  \. l<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
& w' H4 D; L- I<P>但我不会</P>
4 ?! e- \+ w/ t7 v4 |4 R<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
. n4 V/ J1 P- l: d8 B<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
- L# o( i$ ^+ r& M<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
3 R5 o5 A. R- f# o1 S" w: [; A2 Z<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
5 D, O0 h  l% N+ g' m% j4 a9 R1 P! b<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
# |1 V! F2 p" I& n3 y<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
1 S' J' @0 k1 f<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
3 G# X8 C. x6 J4 [, S<P>But I never did </P>
* p0 W  I" c+ [$ M) k+ v<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
# r! ~. E- M' G3 z8 p<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
# E) r& w2 N6 Q- z. f: r" }<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
# t6 Z& v) b1 N$ @7 r! @, ]; ~<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
* ]0 `. P+ _+ v( Y& |- h, i2 Z2 J<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
$ q5 _- |2 w: f7 B, z+ O1 f9 I2 D<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
2 A  O6 W/ k% X: m& V: ~" o<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
6 j5 [2 ^/ ^4 Y. f  g3 Y+ ^<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
1 m9 x6 j7 ~; w& r! o% j% ]<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
1 X; [- q& j$ x/ C* ~! C( u<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
- p+ v  {$ [/ @% W. b<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
3 ?' n1 f* e2 Y/ l# z' N9 R<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

2 [* [8 y! L3 W# V! j; O 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& e" Z. g, H: a* `4 `  D  C/ V<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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3 M+ w1 b% F3 {' b2 }<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>