【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
: p* R* k; I4 L3 hI already loved you with all my heart
! P# }6 n" Y5 i" W7 ^We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
* K" z  P8 F! jLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
) {: _! H! ?- y9 H( kI want to confess that I love you,
- e) t- a( ?2 i4 ~; wBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
; f2 H" @3 M) O# A5 l! v- DIf today isn’t too late,
# m% }2 `) C% n8 b& `2 G. SI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
2 d" o: ?- H% s# fCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
8 A! Q6 x* a* bWhy is it so difficult to express?
/ Z& ?; v2 o$ k& Q; N! I% SI want to confess that I love you,
6 N0 W% E5 m0 I) ?; ^  x9 e& _But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
, s  u6 I$ H- ^I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
5 Q, O" a) y) X2 W! @I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
0 E% l: J. ]& i7 kEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
# @- D, }; o% n. x7 e* h0 X. i5 m) {5 @<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
& T' |- H0 u: _6 t# i<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
  m$ _* e9 B3 M* d$ E( \# w<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
  ~6 C( L' T* b3 F  Y2 o: k<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
; Q! a4 h6 o, q<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
9 q- Y9 U* }$ _8 U<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
/ e$ M7 E# ~8 k5 w% ?5 \  W* N0 W$ i<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
' a$ v, w' _0 V3 M4 |. \<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
. s0 R* N3 e$ i4 M. ?<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
- I2 U8 @( I& e' D( a$ I3 ~<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
" P1 F3 ^/ F/ X# c' t<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
. s6 [6 y, d" V" r4 W3 M2 c<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
. N2 b, w& G, M0 l<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
% R, U% W9 [& W6 H, U3 `<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
4 f5 C- Q5 a6 ]) c' i7 s, T<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
) [1 J/ H/ g% a<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
) N" o" j$ _$ N<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
. R: J" K/ ?5 Z- t* U: I$ p9 a<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
! w# W& w1 j% _4 W5 M<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
+ R% e$ }3 m3 s& ^- z<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
$ g- j" ?0 l) r9 C  t<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
" a8 e+ X3 q& \. u% T<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
3 v1 t8 }  i3 D1 {+ t: z3 U<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
- i* ]5 G( M# P3 c+ h7 G9 X0 b<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
5 Y" X/ ]# ^7 y<P>But I never did </P>
+ r5 k: H4 d$ _# x; k8 _# M% F<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
1 @( M* f& \# |" O9 T9 k<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
) V; [% \" m5 g; p+ d9 N6 \0 L<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
% x) n  C8 e6 e1 W# X8 I<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
) C6 ~3 w* M( m. s4 w<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
* z) M6 c6 i$ N9 }<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
9 |+ Y$ T2 F4 R9 P$ w2 u<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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9 t' W, F! W2 u& P4 A- r4 Z# Y- X 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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2 k0 f$ C3 @1 |* b( ]这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 y7 \8 @3 m& ?+ [0 D% L<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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6 L" N- r8 a, z- U<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>