【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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. N$ x# H  ?7 X0 v我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
; z: h) C6 b- E; G; w8 B5 JThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
7 ]4 ?9 M9 ^) HFrom the first moment we met,
8 U) C' E2 Z- t' VI already loved you with all my heart
: a7 m$ K, z$ P- XWe meet and talk everyday,
  W) Q" ~! h3 S: l' h( ?% X9 X2 }But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
; N1 P, I, Y3 n$ t' p9 \) E0 e! `8 ^I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
' |3 ~1 ^4 h$ S6 PWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
2 y0 Q; H! }" m3 c) E9 {But I never did
1 X" O6 s$ @. }7 DOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
% p: L" Z9 I6 E7 @5 L# h# v# wIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
, G+ _& C/ n! \1 ~! i4 e% UCan I entrust it to you?
8 B( ?3 \) E9 `) OEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
; `4 p# s! Y  c% ?3 b& \- N$ tI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
7 K( t& |2 \) @; R' _I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
; D9 v  L; k$ u( O- P/ Q. T& k( UEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
( P- ~: B* A. ~, _8 q5 P. \Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
9 w% Y3 C2 w: X. ^' l* }<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
; o# r/ e8 N3 u+ ]: p3 g# c<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
8 S% L+ g$ z( q0 P! P  n! A" r4 b<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
+ d+ g! I% X; l% o+ ?, s, {" a<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
$ B, d0 N( X- z/ [<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
5 s& N- z/ k  k- w<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
: q4 R% }/ [! c1 I<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
/ m  ^1 V6 t7 j. U# _. ]<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
! F7 Q! d0 \6 g( _<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
4 p  `0 z; I# W* U6 _/ |& \, c; w<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
" n( R; ]# f+ t" K* p<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
% G" ^0 }# o  C2 M9 A0 }( f/ r3 G<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
4 g$ p& G4 L$ d; ~8 U) S' [<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
, Z( ^$ _5 o9 a, G3 Q* v# S' q<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
  a7 U; H! d( r<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
* o! q, l1 v0 w% z4 f. ]) n<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
% C  D: h( A/ w: Y1 s' [, C<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
1 L! E6 U8 c1 t. o6 H& W0 e<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
6 u! U# l' h9 ?5 @/ m3 X2 Q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
: V$ r5 J2 ^) \( }! `) P2 L6 j<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
/ j3 q2 e- _2 y<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
/ w! X( S/ B4 x. Q8 c<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
  a" {7 Y8 \, [7 A* v2 C<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
# D6 ~# l* r: T  R<P>But I never did </P>
/ R, l  y# _) K3 X# I$ s' ^<P>但我不会 </P>
1 y- y3 V- p9 W) m- o! M<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
) S1 j6 p- r! k3 n- }( c<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
, l2 y' T, ~' z" A& m- \0 u<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
, S/ c0 s1 z& p( P<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
# a: E8 c4 ~$ J, _1 K<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
/ g1 ?- R  h  Y: x3 n4 {<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
4 W' @  l3 C$ C7 E$ \3 d<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
1 }  k( r. [7 ]1 g9 Q, T5 l<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
: c; s* L  |1 z4 M7 v<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

$ m# F/ i% n4 r5 b这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>