【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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1 {1 ^, k$ u( _: ^- _The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
7 l! o5 a, {* eWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
4 l* ~4 K2 J3 R2 \: c, }; ?1 WIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
  I1 q+ N5 [/ z- \3 |Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
8 U% t7 i; X* v2 T$ `4 cBut I never did
' q1 h8 Y4 t; F) C" J" w) Q/ ]& KOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
0 j6 _1 B' O5 P( c# ?Love… just the word love
- f! \1 B* V+ A/ B# X# e/ S  CWhy is it so difficult to express?
, u; P" M* j! S7 P; `, k3 P/ y- NI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
' e( Y5 }9 {+ B+ \& ^$ N5 ]  m$ ZOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
- {" b9 L) Q$ VIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
7 ]0 k) U- m5 O) s) W) b. Y# GI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
! D5 u8 I) a1 G. y, tEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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( q* X6 L* h1 o7 c<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
% M9 L9 q1 K+ g  V<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
* l8 _6 ~+ L$ G1 O) x<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
- ?& _8 B, j. F% _; N5 _2 B<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
  E( [0 E% X! L1 z* J<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
3 N" W  ^2 F* x* b  X3 U<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
3 j& b- k% f; S, Q( \- {<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
3 m& Z. v* c6 E+ Y: j* h4 R<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
# L3 c0 w( f4 T<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
, a( ~; E% T4 B! q<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
2 ^7 B, w( N, z  |$ q/ @  o; q0 ]<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
. K: Z3 I* Z  c$ ?" k, A  k<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
; Z& {/ D* k. y2 a/ m) D& X<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
* L! _- u, P0 @1 Z% w- g<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
. W4 e: k7 ~1 b) ]+ R6 I3 B<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
, F/ e, T/ t/ n<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
# R+ J( u+ t6 R. b<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
! [& e) G: ~% q' G<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
) B+ G$ }( m& x<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
) p1 l' s! w9 v; d9 T6 e6 Q<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
" j4 C; t4 V3 G. J9 ]8 M<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
- j- g8 Y2 c2 Y- q6 t7 g/ I<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
2 M1 [; X  {. n  w) y9 i<P>但我不会 </P>
2 n% a* p* N: S- }' F* @/ n<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
; \9 u1 D% ~  H& m- t& W" @/ W<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
" D, O4 a2 }6 \9 h" m  K# `) O' y<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
9 f& F9 H. Y$ o( T% L<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
; x' {  N. }( Q% N<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
: @& a. @; c6 h- o: R<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
- \+ i% ^5 \+ z0 c. T<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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) p5 }& N  ?( B8 u<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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* D" {) B! ?/ m! G8 L; u! D<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>