【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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, l0 I8 z9 _% G" O6 M' ], @" A0 _我另将歌词附在此。
9 I1 t! D2 v% qThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
5 {: \* O  v$ }1 j2 ALove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
" k) V5 P$ h& [5 v/ QIf today isn’t too late,
3 n' C% \# m+ l& oI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
0 y, ]$ k- g; m# W: t, v4 X7 PEntrust my love within your heart
1 E  S0 g6 Y( H' tLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
6 M, {6 I$ E  J8 u' a* `3 W, ?" XBut I never did
/ J: \$ T: _* o( T  k. k6 ]+ i& VOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
4 i2 v5 u  W) U9 @, G3 Q8 }I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
! ?) Y  T9 j0 ^! B  T2 bI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
: g& N' p# J9 E. k) ]Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
) b$ D  X3 W7 z% D* _3 iEntrust my love within your heart
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/ _4 A' ^9 d/ r[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
' F6 [; d3 P  a4 a! X<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
8 F# A/ F; H1 M0 k- k2 n<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
* m3 {7 ]0 e/ j6 v<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
: ]4 c0 W! E6 C<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
1 {) ^; i3 X& T$ T: G6 E<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
  \/ U$ W3 K5 [. k2 f" t- i<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
' _- h. X  I: h) l<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
5 u9 z% M3 a0 p8 l: t2 t<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
# }; [) v8 m" l2 T<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
2 T/ S' G: J0 A; _<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
( z6 I1 O- @  q" n2 @2 y<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
% t( B4 M  H  {9 b<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
0 E- L$ k6 ^% X! y3 P2 G/ W8 i# \<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
6 X4 v) c6 `4 [0 E( ~) u# U<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
& c6 r# p: M7 C3 }. {<P>但我不会</P>
' W6 Q6 d5 Z; l$ d/ n! K" ]<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
/ I  G" |( u* I: O/ y, j+ i3 x, s<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
, \5 x3 a/ V! E4 W<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
3 k' h4 Y4 _2 s$ j<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
( v9 G: ?% m- R$ N# b<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
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<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
4 J# U. y. {& Z3 M! L: l<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
- K! m0 O1 Q( G6 S% j# u<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
- m( z3 {( y/ E' Z+ f) T, q<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
+ D3 a$ @  D/ F/ V- \, D<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
; Y( Y  S/ [/ O3 A! Z: O<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
% G; g3 Z8 }% ?& Q<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
! y4 q4 i% k/ W<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
- {; B% _: M) R2 l<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
- {' {& n* a! Y- I/ e' n: ?' a0 D* @<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>