【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
) A( d& t2 w0 n6 N, p" b8 h4 AFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
2 A8 [  \# `& GBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
' I$ t" [1 j- a7 k( s% \/ @& `If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
3 r7 a9 y' f2 b- y) t$ hI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
3 \, s+ c6 [! A* hBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
- M0 X( r& o2 Y& e( o! yI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
- P4 @5 ?& {9 ], JEntrust my love within your heart
: m, u" o, R1 G* _) LLove… just the word love
9 J( b- {+ E# W! lWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
. q: m: V! \; N( I! aBut I never did
0 v! P! a+ s7 \One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
& K9 U9 G) b/ N7 eI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
& L. m$ r7 n8 j0 ]. [# x) h% g8 ZCan I entrust it to you?
! y" e4 u/ p# J' ~4 q% CEntrust my love within your heart
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' n* V6 ?4 Q' b8 z6 D[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
* U- s. a: w* H. I3 [1 [4 n<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
: c. G( E. J/ V; I<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
8 D  M! y& I- Y8 I" T# U+ y% A5 ~<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
! e+ h- D" g8 d/ z" R! O<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
2 |9 ^( l2 J0 ?- ^" A. J<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
0 e) G, m) z3 U& m+ f8 c& z' E<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
! W  T1 W0 t  L" _8 M! {( ~% Y<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
; [% m& f, K+ [- a<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
5 _. B' \' m; e6 n4 s<P>我想说我爱你</P>
. g7 y5 Q9 [' i7 M0 B<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
* f( z6 J4 i% k5 h9 N+ e/ R<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
$ w4 \. S- b! N6 C, ~" l' O<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
% G+ ?3 A" y5 O! ~/ B, a, |) T# t<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
8 R  F. ?; P. S1 B7 C. I<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
* d0 p. q* Z7 t2 E$ L5 C<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
3 C1 y' r0 u& `: y$ d<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
+ k7 }- a7 g+ Y' A  s<P>Love… just the word love </P>
' G. y+ J, x/ e<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
2 @4 N1 J' J9 V7 n$ H<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
' d8 f8 Q. w. m2 n$ s9 U3 z$ |<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
1 P* V! ~  ~  W2 x<P>但我不会 </P>
5 i# R: w$ Q; Q2 i; O7 D* k- A<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
- K4 I( v/ x1 K$ b. ?0 K! o<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
: B, O2 i) [: A6 k<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
% J* `2 {( j5 `$ e# Y# |$ I1 _<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
) x, d; ]$ M' {2 `( F<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
) j! ]  g+ `' }% T<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
7 w' S1 P. V# @1 e; ^<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
0 J+ e+ k" b9 D: F* p% t' U/ k<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
6 u$ z: `6 `/ k: w; L% N& @+ E<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
$ M6 v0 r' E5 f3 ?" A6 Y6 G<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
' K- d7 R4 K/ x# I# X3 H! y<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

& {; _" E, o1 ^0 \7 D  F8 ^- t* p这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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+ d# o; M. }3 J1 L. k+ H$ ~. \3 a<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>