【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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, |" D( e' f7 S- ^# j6 MThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
( V1 f1 G) g" QFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
0 h; ?/ L9 [4 c' q% r3 w1 ~/ pWe meet and talk everyday,
3 [) c, C; I4 i5 W, G! A; aBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
0 |$ k" W7 b. y: B' xIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
4 v; G" C9 t+ [7 x, r& R9 kI would probably know how you feel
# `& t: i* \) Q, YLove… just the word love
# c! C3 K# n# l1 \( ~: b& cWhy is it so difficult to express?
8 g  ~# h/ R% i8 VI want to confess that I love you,
# j3 |4 |; s6 ~But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
9 W. a+ Y  \" c9 a2 kIf today isn’t too late,
& q$ \$ }. w# s1 s& g: lI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
2 o/ ?- \% |: @9 R2 t' w8 Q/ aI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
7 n9 P8 B" ]/ W: y" GCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
4 ^+ M" T1 j* g+ e6 z( @8 SLove… just the word love
  e8 J1 w5 j$ [% l: pWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
6 u. g5 e. ?$ G7 k' W' j( ]. d0 L; \& VCan I entrust it to you?
7 l/ h" Y6 {7 l" B6 YEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
- D6 q( G, y5 d2 C7 q0 yEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

. k8 E7 e  ~4 P- O<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
8 o- c: B: n) R<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
+ R6 I9 L+ V. z) H<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
/ T, V* s& ]4 D0 a4 h<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
# F2 O( ~( \, \+ Y4 j# ?. x<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
, X! x8 V  x2 D% X* O+ w<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
' I& f! a5 e( [" g/ o<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
$ d+ v& E4 ?, N<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
8 K! ?( R, _8 ]7 E# e! g; `<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
5 [$ u% J4 a# k$ l8 M% Y<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
- H( y1 n! R4 [! [<P>我想说我爱你</P>
6 X6 ]9 z' s: }" n6 H: z% h/ \- \<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
, W, J+ D8 M+ H% a4 T+ U8 {8 J<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
& X- V) H, C1 D# q/ S9 R4 Y<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
: B. O: `+ W( o<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
+ s- m  ~- g/ x7 ?2 k# L, v. U7 R  g  |<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
1 y1 e4 p1 b- q8 g( ]+ t<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
1 ?4 V# R( a4 E2 N" Q; c<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
: e. s2 d2 Z- [  N<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
# H- D+ |! V0 m, q) b, G<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
) {) t8 O* t, ?9 L<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
: J. `, [6 f: V+ q<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
; Q8 W9 h. F6 ^( ?<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>