【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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3 t, }/ d! y4 F4 P2 T我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
' o! ~8 s- ?: k( g+ C; [6 X1 R5 U! G' s% TBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
# [+ O9 p# o7 n2 s* N, o& S% ]If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
( V" k/ ~( ]; h: Q' E8 kLove… just the word love
* p3 M: G, |" WWhy is it so difficult to express?
$ }4 R2 [+ j1 `/ I$ \. f0 `  A8 H/ HI want to confess that I love you,
, H, W" b) K) U: ?But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
* L+ A* J; O' M) L% {I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
8 i: G5 D6 Q% C1 c8 D' WI want to confess that I love you,
, N1 ^1 [* H0 \; o. @+ o( UBut I never did
, y4 b- t8 j; T- @* v1 E" Z; fOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
2 x# W' D9 S8 Q8 o% zI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
8 x2 U5 ~5 A: }Can I entrust it to you?
5 A$ i7 Z1 }7 X% h, LEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
" W; A3 V3 g$ KEntrust my love within your heart

. M3 t0 z$ [5 @: [* j4 \) B[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
9 }4 u. A/ @# g! B<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
3 C9 d+ U! @5 u3 ?- b# ^<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
: U8 L  u" E/ g9 [  m, X) R9 o+ W# S$ Z<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
9 B: B! Y! ~' s2 G" E* q5 R<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
- n' y$ E$ S+ g% Q% j( u& b2 d<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
* ~" P  x6 V3 A6 ~2 M  _6 g<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
# G% g7 A+ _- I4 D  G* ]<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
4 d& ^$ ~( U" {; Q$ Q$ m) t<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
/ p' c* j5 v: h. s0 G  K<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
6 n  M5 q/ G$ ^- q1 y<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
5 U% T; L, B1 f  X! m; b' B% o<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
" A7 b. f' y2 L" c4 m<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
5 y$ }* e/ O: z0 D6 A* W. H<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
% w) S0 L- J; K* H# m1 h<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
7 F# C2 [# [& [1 Y<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
& z* F! ]& W; R5 E2 b4 z$ d# I<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
3 b& C. r5 n- b1 e) ]. X& n<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
, S7 K$ ?" c$ e4 R<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
4 ?% ~2 V8 [7 d4 t<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
0 C  t, L$ g/ n% v$ g. b6 O<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
! b2 }' T" S: c/ z( }* g<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
6 @3 ^5 ]7 H, P  G<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
, _. S' \+ s/ H. X* l<P>But I never did </P>
5 D/ f1 {2 X% U. t<P>但我不会 </P>
" A3 d5 z0 y$ P# G# w  {<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
: T8 ?. C: R4 N3 w0 F<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
& e$ l% D% K  N<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
0 I( I) z$ q' e) g) x' E/ V<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
& i4 K/ `) n/ ^! y$ A: M6 W( O<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
1 D/ h" n' Y" F  @' F<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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# s, `  s+ o) X<P>

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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( W4 \- N3 E$ u3 J2 y8 W' [<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>