【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
9 n4 m( g) ~* y. L1 tI already loved you with all my heart
0 A' E. R3 ~6 u3 W) v/ t/ ^We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
3 ?1 r2 r3 q+ u/ G& E1 Y  kIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
$ a; k$ Z: A# z' t; M# d  r" bI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
( M) j1 k( r" S2 PBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
; }2 j5 t7 _2 O' v" T& b7 II don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
4 e  p. }- `1 F( oCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
* u- [( T9 v$ l0 i+ t3 e" I9 LLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
# }# a  N- g% V6 m* B8 }If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
' f) r1 Y0 ^  S- H+ \+ X3 d2 d* HEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
7 T* ~1 @8 L3 N6 C* SEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
: ?' {' L3 W' s) U9 W4 q$ {<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
. h# K* o$ k& v+ u; T<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
7 q+ c6 v5 C7 B4 V<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
, O" j& e6 d: E7 R<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
8 Q2 K8 W7 w) @& [<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
7 l+ ^. {( H3 W$ Y: F' U<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
) I* _& K' `* t<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
5 W2 d3 N1 J+ v. p# [3 N<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
( ]" S; g: y7 v% }4 p6 i! n8 n<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
0 o! Q, `7 S" k' _: p<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
% I8 l4 ^/ K8 C5 u4 C+ @8 f# o<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
9 Y5 U4 u  k+ P. _8 P" C/ ^<P>我想说我爱你</P>
* q7 x. s  s. n3 |, i5 J! |<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
. }! }! Y4 t" O& ~5 T  j/ g<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
1 z; N+ C' j+ r<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
/ {. X( J! N/ L% F<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
' @2 O# L  A5 B! L, {" l. t: r<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
- }' r) @* U/ u# y2 E! ~5 t<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
* t  c+ B  p' I6 {% U! J% h/ B<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
4 R6 q& r( Z8 q* A( M, }9 a* e8 t<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
; a# M2 R! I( \6 {" o5 C<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
  X( }$ g- }$ Y2 v<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
0 u( M0 X1 r. u+ y& o8 R<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
, \) _7 v8 y, t0 w<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
( F6 h, ]" O4 a+ g- o+ o& w<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
( x$ e) J! M, J5 F$ D8 D<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
# }5 J1 X# b6 x  d8 |6 u<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
  V; r) F( z  [+ a# Z5 V<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
0 [3 B+ b" B: b<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
. n5 I8 u* ?; |' \' h<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
5 ~5 [) N* }& S3 l  g6 S# [<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
1 q1 D1 j' L* o9 E; q9 z, N5 K. `) z<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

' N! m8 X2 S$ A" S6 c这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# q9 ^: r1 R2 w! O/ H4 j<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( y  Z6 S; x) T4 I$ v6 X) ^<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>