【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
' q4 A' |& U& _* Q$ FThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
: h1 P, ~( `( \+ W( S& H3 h$ |: {' SFrom the first moment we met,
0 I* f- t1 M5 T, ]( aI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
- |: D7 ?* \  N  |* @5 ?But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
& S+ S1 e3 g. l6 j$ O. dIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
: t3 K& _$ A6 c- A. Y4 L/ DLove… just the word love
0 N5 ~+ Z/ X- v- j& x/ kWhy is it so difficult to express?
& L/ w+ p! V8 [0 ^5 EI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
( B5 u8 v& W& \/ U# i" N; gI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
( L7 K  ~4 d% I5 N8 r8 N7 \Can I entrust it to you?
* a. S; W$ L# bEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
' D/ l0 I+ K5 _6 NWhy is it so difficult to express?
2 d8 G* h. ~0 S% E  Z$ S4 BI want to confess that I love you,
: \; a4 Z  X$ v. I9 a1 n" aBut I never did
7 b4 o- M& m: w" |. lOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
9 S! X: r2 J6 X" D3 G3 ^+ {& B6 }If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

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oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

7 N% d2 v0 X. P3 p* N% h, R<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
9 I: U4 `9 |! V+ D1 M/ K! }<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
. j2 O0 p' T3 ]9 M( ~3 |! T. N) U6 z<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
  p0 c! E9 l8 V4 d$ Y) W<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
( k. h" O8 t5 W$ @<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
( I) t. a. v4 s9 Y: K  I$ N<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
- w- V7 U9 h# r$ U* t5 n3 C7 ~<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
# d' D" O( \0 o" F) Z9 I* g<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
, ^% d" g8 z: p( a<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
% C4 B4 ?0 @% t<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
# p- O' d5 y5 C+ O* L- Y8 ?7 S6 A: F3 U<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
5 W! }2 `4 k, z; w<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
7 E* l9 o7 T8 q& @8 T- t<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
# w* b7 ]7 E$ a- @6 ^9 N: N& {<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
% k0 k4 g1 {4 b6 m  g( a  T<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
* Z  k+ z& l1 H) t! O+ T& T7 L) ?# f<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
6 v5 |1 s' J7 x' i: O+ Z<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
/ r; C% ?$ e1 B- i<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
5 V- e, G2 A$ K( Y+ n2 g<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
& q8 S/ @  {' F0 H: t" W2 W<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
  Z4 q! o# E, ]+ w% Y2 }1 e: |<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
5 B7 W5 ~$ `+ R" ]) n9 \# B<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
5 A2 U+ `- x) m3 E& ]* d<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
9 J/ H- @8 S" n<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
3 s% [3 _8 c% y$ p: F. x<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
/ m# |. o4 h& u<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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, `. j4 F. [0 ~0 u6 [ 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

* d; `: R1 P  _" N( H这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 w2 m) z( u' r9 y) P$ ~$ V<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>