【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
! e" G7 ]  o: g0 F" [2 N5 fThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
6 Q& i% h6 y, ^. O0 |$ oFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
- P/ W9 @/ w( [* ~6 M8 Q. PWe meet and talk everyday,
% K* W8 n9 ^+ @/ B& f/ [9 G4 wBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
7 a$ D- W# h2 I, L, v' G4 N- [Love… just the word love
  Q$ O9 D: R! U5 D+ a, ~( H0 MWhy is it so difficult to express?
; u5 e+ _; F& O. e6 oI want to confess that I love you,
8 X8 n" [4 I, o5 M* ^: SBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
% H& J  K" r# Y* wIf today isn’t too late,
  ]' _1 G9 z7 {) ?6 o9 z+ TI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
" c( N3 O! W. d! cI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
4 D' Q! v" M+ ?+ x$ sCan I entrust it to you?
4 c! H2 G/ R( Y9 x, T# q, B; ~* ~Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
' {1 R  m6 r& B7 n) |- r1 KWhy is it so difficult to express?
! C; U6 J5 Z$ T8 l6 @I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
" c: u" y& e& a* E) nOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
( e$ }. p: b) `3 |7 ~: a, j% K# u# UI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
- c+ e, v, V- {. _7 _7 v. z0 \# wEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

9 f" m, A+ l+ Z8 h  e+ a[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

' c4 l& J! a- h3 H) z- N4 Q<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
9 l7 l- V9 I/ w<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
* z9 `2 N2 `8 n% l5 W<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
& M& E! s0 t# q# S% I) X5 s<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
/ n& L& ~7 R4 }, I8 K<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
: W5 n4 N& [7 Q- i<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
+ J; H: [9 L- r) o# t<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
4 T5 V" }. `( W; V1 G<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
+ B; i" D. u4 t( F<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
( g# V% L& o5 V  H1 k8 [$ t4 R<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
. d, z4 [  U, S9 y" ^5 ^9 R* R<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
$ E# b: [" b) S' F<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
7 |0 I- i1 v6 B- H' K<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
: \4 ~: {. {6 D<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
+ Z3 v7 h; l( S<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
- k" g% u+ Q0 f1 v2 L<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
/ j- T1 i. \3 u6 E# f; v<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
; n, I% [& \1 v! s8 z% s<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
2 i8 E9 H; |7 ~' m9 G6 P<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
. E. J2 T( f/ R# b% n1 r+ P- u<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
6 @! }. N$ ^  D- i2 w. d<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
7 g7 m8 l' T; E+ b<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
0 {& w4 N1 D; p6 ^<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
! M- q7 W: T4 B/ ]" U0 [<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
3 S/ {, K6 y9 t* ~8 o# U<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
& n9 s) Y$ M% r: m, u, b1 z<P>But I never did </P>
9 M% k: W7 y$ K! p3 H: X<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
( y+ P0 C5 y/ }5 }. T: V9 ^<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
' N7 @# P& l( [  z# n<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
' o" \/ J  g! L5 F7 q: V<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
+ g: `  ^+ k4 x4 i) w8 m; k5 Q<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
% S  p0 h% D8 Y) R. g<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
9 u  G6 V( U4 K: d7 J& d( f<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
& d5 K/ B& }0 c' C; r, ?<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
/ a4 O  ~2 Q" u. Q* h3 B- ^<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
8 P: `' m( O+ q: c<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
% ^1 Y8 P2 \" J- A" ~" p<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>