【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
! v0 `1 w0 w5 A2 Y+ T# hThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
6 h# D( J' I6 ~" c( gFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
: b. u6 A# y; J- L7 o( B+ mWe meet and talk everyday,
# V6 O4 s! x; Z- T) [But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
4 z8 L: \' f5 r( J# c0 R' A5 H6 \I would probably know how you feel
& {4 Y  L0 I4 O( T: K9 ~. I; l# Z7 ZLove… just the word love
1 h, @* i) X+ {/ b3 wWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
' ~; Y1 W/ _1 O; N! GIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
& x+ f' G7 z) Z% ~- y6 j( tEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
: F' l1 j$ s8 G+ cWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
5 R( K- }0 c) Z+ F) H2 cI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
7 p- F+ c1 D5 o+ r0 ~Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
- o" B- j0 ]( [' |Entrust my love within your heart

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oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
' c" x$ U* Q# C! r% M4 e! q. H. d<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
' f% M$ D1 T2 h<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
& H; e# f- A' |$ A  Z* V<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
& k* z8 Z5 D) r  O<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
( N2 b1 ?. A6 [5 `9 l/ P<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
& [' R! S. A5 g, h) p<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
$ F. J9 Z& M: I* s: v1 c<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
) R5 ~6 T9 n1 l- P* x! ^" b<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
( h; _7 b7 Z! V4 U<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
% |1 h! m: s4 C# t8 I<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
2 R- j4 x# Z1 @. A/ _( L3 t<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
3 r* v' ~5 o; o8 i, s  j<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
# C) K3 y1 Q8 O4 r<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
1 E; P2 Y, K1 q4 S" E0 ]& B8 {<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
% U8 ]) i% _7 b+ @# i% r7 ]1 O<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
% @9 M) `# z* W7 D9 P<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
$ y8 Q0 V$ v& G# G<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
* q3 @% P, q) e/ f6 T, c7 g4 ?<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
0 g' ~7 i4 `8 A# w% U! }2 L2 b; k<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
$ @- H2 W! Z) O5 |9 ]2 K1 J<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
# m1 O5 |1 b' v" k<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
" E; x. o1 V2 m5 u1 i4 O3 p) i<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
7 E/ ^3 B1 N+ N. K+ K& T" u<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
6 X  M; z! A' L3 v; Q7 w<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>