【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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" F- n' Z/ h6 Q- {我另将歌词附在此。
# {& [# P$ X+ {& E( ]) e$ p( CThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
2 z" D; _$ J9 tI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
" V) O2 d; s" b3 @8 [I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
9 k& i- s. U( \/ ?- B- x& \5 CBut I never did
( a" S; L+ C4 R: U; C( mOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
( ]4 c$ p" U, qI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
; K9 T8 }- l* s2 L6 YI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
6 v+ v: R2 @, O( Y9 @Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
$ ]3 P. C% E/ ~& P  i% {Love… just the word love
/ x* _6 w" A% v" `+ x# Q5 W: o6 W- v: nWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
/ w: L7 c% T) H. TOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
' }: r' ]0 P2 x- @' W/ nI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
# ^' j; z- b1 q  N4 C1 SCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
2 ]6 x! m: i7 D3 _' [Can I entrust it to you?
* z5 c5 p- j9 b! ~; M; R! o0 c1 i3 `% `Entrust my love within your heart

5 P( `$ ]1 t' T8 g[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
6 o. b0 X( y1 \) p$ O+ l. u<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
4 j* Z8 C) z8 }2 x1 f' c  G<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
; @3 f# _. @( }, }. O<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
5 D4 C7 A! X7 H' H4 Q<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
/ w+ p, Z' S  x+ y8 O<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
, B( B& g# x, o# G) u4 C# v3 H7 \<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
& `- i  o$ w* s5 Q; i6 b& L<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
/ b: |( E- o6 u  A& ^5 r" t<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
% x$ J8 q1 M+ v2 \" }* t6 ?<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
6 K3 T, E+ f& R<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
& y# l: J- W9 I' j2 Y& E, q<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
/ n& q  }! u- m1 [<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
7 e+ Y$ F) m+ _4 N9 [<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
- g1 I( M8 ]- ^3 l3 S' K% ~+ }<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
2 [2 Q! [' A; P+ g) h6 x<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
+ s) W3 a# a$ d1 |1 i  D1 k" R) Z<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
( S# i& [! [- X* Z<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
! S2 _- c1 Q, [/ b5 l$ W<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
8 _3 i: |2 Q1 y0 ~<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
5 g) ?7 Z4 W: {) R7 l/ k<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
% P! s$ w3 R/ o  Z* d# g* ?<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
3 p; }: [) x3 a: n, T! C' v<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
* C% v7 E4 ~8 ^( C) p<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
( v- b4 s( X/ H4 F% e2 v0 i2 e<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
& S5 Y7 s5 D4 D$ h3 q, z<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
, _  K+ x' p6 c) Q4 C# v- e. C<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
" }4 G$ L$ J: W<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
" m9 B' Z' @+ _  \/ \<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

' V" O& q. h4 l 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

3 l9 t; w3 c/ z7 x- }7 B这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

) u! b5 @9 ?2 V( I2 k这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>