【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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7 b1 U$ h( [5 ^( T" p, m" |
4 b* t. u/ F9 E我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
0 r: `+ k3 s+ a+ _That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
& R2 f; y, e3 }- J8 SWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
' ^/ L0 N; K8 V: ~8 XWhy is it so difficult to express?
# Y, @5 p. J) L) e$ Z: aI want to confess that I love you,
2 c3 A' j, e* G0 E7 x5 x8 f% IBut I never did
- N  m3 I; h% a8 qOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
4 D9 t- I8 H$ M% kIf today isn’t too late,
" ^& c3 r3 F0 P, T; g9 Z) p$ II want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
+ a- S0 Q5 _6 m0 \% QI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
" S3 W3 e. k. I0 J4 L" NWhy is it so difficult to express?
* P1 s- X1 T' D, I* J7 n/ nI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
9 p2 w8 p$ z% J' x5 j5 `+ ROne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
: [; N/ Z0 d" j* ^# h6 BIf today isn’t too late,
0 |2 t( P& w( U5 T% c6 TI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
7 e# x+ u9 }" p! g  x6 |' x7 C9 WEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
  O9 P6 v4 j* ^Entrust my love within your heart

" S! q7 n# d7 \" V: {" n" K[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
; K' ^: U3 m! V+ H: A<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
; W9 c4 ]$ R: h& k  r. V% k<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
: i  ?: ]9 @" ?2 S<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
$ H; A1 i! J& Y; R: i<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
. z, a  I  y& r3 ?5 k7 b! m! p7 X$ w<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
" h4 d; [0 s" |<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
' L$ `  r; G/ R<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
# {7 x9 h" e  G9 T<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
  S# T( X7 Y1 z. o) |# N  e- ?<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
- U* c# b/ h; Q+ ^5 P# j<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
$ K0 H- M1 S  f0 Q# ^) s<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
" Q3 ~4 U9 y$ ~2 r4 \# D$ g/ l<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
9 O7 B/ r! W& I' k1 @! z5 Q<P>但我不会</P>
0 N- y$ i2 e! ?% @0 U. `<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
8 ]4 L3 K9 ^, X7 F; x1 |<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
' \* v- @% C' A) L& V<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
7 g" I7 F! ?$ G* G" \<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
5 l! K' T* _2 a( L/ E7 F# e<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
3 j- L! h' o5 }9 i; U5 h<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
% Q# V0 i6 Z( G<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
3 b! A  V  J' L/ \& w<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
) C, Z; p3 B* E# u- _* H<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
+ O9 @& b; Q7 X$ G5 d3 K6 H0 p<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
: p4 N. `8 Q& L# n. D6 r5 z<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
' q+ H" D8 n4 Z3 `; ^9 Z8 K& [<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
7 }% F$ c8 J. |. s% E. v<P>But I never did </P>
* h5 m+ N7 \1 I9 V, w<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
0 _6 y8 o  O6 y0 H* C8 x<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
5 g4 ^5 N9 \/ T4 Y0 k( M<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
4 r4 ^  h. V) ?<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
3 I4 V& M: ^7 q% l' y<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

. K3 D+ \  X2 @: x8 ~: Q这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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. m3 x' A2 {  r( p5 D( i<P>

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 ^' d' K1 m, k0 w" F<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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- y! F9 `/ }) v0 I3 B, d# |8 e/ v<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>