【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
6 w% n  `' a9 M. L) XThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
8 t3 j5 y3 B' e+ R# v  W  UFrom the first moment we met,
) a) j) X* y1 SI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
" G  g& z, t; \. RBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
5 P. q* Q2 I( j8 B. L0 n3 qIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
4 J6 L) [. a6 _: `* m# \$ H  }# e6 qI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
4 ~  \, V: ~1 q* C- FI want to confess that I love you,
+ o- _: w) h! j+ a8 s& I% r3 [But I never did
. ~- x- d1 |  ^/ o" W- uOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
5 x3 ^6 |4 Y3 }- @# FIf today isn’t too late,
1 w* S2 c# [9 A5 [* PI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
1 }2 e! t, z# b! X. x/ TI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
4 M/ o9 F; R% D8 J! }2 B* F# ACan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
0 s) U1 a( m: Z# e$ K$ o( YI want to confess that I love you,
2 h4 Q. p$ G( y, U. z1 oBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
8 s# G8 H) q. PI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
; }7 O) L$ x% ^, N9 q( FEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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% _3 _' R, w9 u2 B# n. v<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
. R3 K. `: e$ U6 R6 V<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
: k* A3 T! D1 X8 N4 p  S, F. w6 l<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
8 t' @# F0 m7 ]! r% f, u<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
% S- N6 a' I) D& A+ x: U<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
  j: r4 J, O7 I& V$ D- }  ~<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
* z8 T; _0 P0 v  a7 H0 T. U7 @<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
5 a3 e% u6 `% V/ K' d! H; Y8 a<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
8 y/ E/ |. |& C# F! B% `0 t# V# \<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
- Z; z& s) z6 y3 Y, j<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
  `; P6 t. w& a2 R# K2 m9 L4 q# Y' ~( E<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
( U$ j7 a- M; K<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
4 ]6 ~# V4 c6 i% E<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
& S2 A% _# {, A<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
5 E" I: B) f- m' f+ m) L<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
8 y3 R3 L/ [- g  B) F* N8 j<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
2 n1 j! \1 Q7 Z- C8 r<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
3 N' m  R+ k6 f9 Y% @5 f' C<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
0 j3 z7 [! {1 u  O8 S- Z<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
( R# r1 Y8 E( r8 s, O) ?<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
, ~) F1 m& K1 L) k- T<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
. x/ v' K2 X( |<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
* o* T( k' d( I7 X<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
  Q1 w: b) `( U  J; s% i<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
2 f- k% c3 O4 r0 [0 O. F* a; s<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
! A! k# |( l; ]+ f* K<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
" f# D! A' w  v7 P<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
: h6 ?* I! B* [1 Q<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
; m; [( |8 j" ~( N<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
" h7 l# s7 D8 Q) g, @' e; l' j' _9 K<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

5 v/ e7 m6 E$ F: Y' G! o 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, C& x( u/ f+ Q% c6 q. C6 R% y<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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# l6 Z$ H7 Z8 x4 r6 ~<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>