【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
2 l# d5 T) R& m9 ?2 U  G! r# h) a0 D' OFrom the first moment we met,
. s$ q7 B- E4 g9 _' q" ~2 lI already loved you with all my heart
1 l& `9 B9 `) u0 t7 F7 W7 oWe meet and talk everyday,
/ J' `+ m- s8 R4 kBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
6 H- P8 ~2 i( N, C, aIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
0 j8 s& p! P% t$ G, U7 yLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
0 A$ b9 f8 `+ ]/ ^3 @0 UI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
3 D" s; t1 d2 C6 ~' Q+ GOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
( J, J- S9 [  h) @' XIf today isn’t too late,
( g' \/ L' n* V( HI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
. z4 p  i% R4 K! C1 f* _I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
6 O7 y+ J  U+ o2 H  k9 CWhy is it so difficult to express?
  ?4 `, j; W1 P  PI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
1 t: x8 X, k3 S3 ECan I entrust it to you?
8 j% \3 |5 g7 H! I# v7 A* wEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
0 \5 {6 J3 O4 [/ M' H8 zEntrust my love within your heart
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+ Z" [5 e5 x! y+ I. q[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
! o& @3 A" ?! ^8 X$ q( J, _<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
$ `$ b3 t+ Z9 V! i. T- D. s8 M<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
, s* B% G: r; G% j# [$ I<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
1 N4 i& O% ]; }* k<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
, I( r5 J6 V6 {' r; E. Q% d<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
* w  @1 F0 O3 I# l. n) }. `<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
# H& F% d; F1 |( S7 C8 n& a; x<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
3 X0 |3 C& w; b) M( J4 }' y2 Q. H5 o<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
# G% D$ M5 U# q5 N+ G" {% }$ t<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
/ U, u& _5 \( V+ w9 z<P>但我不会</P>
# x( k8 A' I0 d<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
: i: S) v/ A8 K1 k$ S8 d<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
- Q6 b1 q/ H4 Y& Y% [  i/ r<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
1 i3 c+ N4 o) ^- C# u( c( m! {<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
( C# m- L+ r3 H; z<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
) l' `( s1 x" H+ V: o<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
2 m% C* n: x4 d<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
( p* q6 k1 q/ ~4 F<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
6 l9 e8 {, ]2 ^# L" i<P>But I never did </P>
4 X, ]4 s5 Y' O/ D<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
& R3 D. T4 ~- n' x: w, j7 b<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
' k! f4 x, ]( D2 e' ?<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
& o( f  }  H9 F" D) b<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
3 \5 }2 i. B4 k" C' n<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
' l, I) }, }# h6 C; ?! x<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
' i) m8 r, G+ F- n, g& V8 b  x<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
" k+ u$ @; ?& [! X<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
/ [4 N- f% @/ V& _) B3 r<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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6 |/ \% S5 S' [, |<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>