【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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/ q6 ?& I7 F1 C我另将歌词附在此。
* i# j+ E: j: C. m' uThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
) u! V; V. B# P1 Y) v; nThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
  s1 ~" h7 p1 K, O% s3 pWe meet and talk everyday,
0 f0 X6 h+ b- QBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
! S( `- S2 t- p! l; m3 ^5 n8 ZIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
, C- w! i& m: M7 p! ~Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
2 `# ]! V% g5 w9 d; n9 RBut I never did
: h% p5 P- x0 f# SOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
: H* T" Z: f% OIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
6 Y4 Q0 f1 L$ }* KI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
6 l# R# D& B+ i4 U( }3 R  OLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
1 {% \) ?2 g" J/ b& ^But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
9 b9 h/ Y; Z2 |4 [8 o4 R( \/ ZI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
$ _, z3 |6 s- T3 G3 J1 J$ fCan I entrust it to you?
: Y- \* |5 z/ I5 ]' C* E8 [Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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3 ^: Q" y2 r. a* M) s5 x<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
& Q4 ]( H( y. w* t<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
6 d3 u9 P. C4 C& \. }$ l<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
& l0 ]- \; C1 L$ p4 h! ?: r<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
9 }1 H! k# y1 s0 Q: ^5 a<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
$ f7 ^/ t; y. G+ X: v; H6 F<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
5 I. [2 K8 Z$ `" l9 b<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
3 t' N  W3 K# z4 c<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
7 P! Y, i- j0 X0 k" e- n<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
, M! B1 p% \6 t  L/ C<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
0 m! ^! M  i. b5 S! ^* a6 r7 P3 L2 i<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
  H3 ^- E, v, B. P) ^<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
: H3 g' o! D% I<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
' w- K) L* p1 J2 E# g' L$ M<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
) [# x4 C9 Q1 \: P4 M! {* ?<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
$ T9 e: e: O3 r5 r$ N/ C<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
, x' k1 A0 {/ E- P! K1 I7 C/ V<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
0 V' H- S7 ^( i<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
' s# s$ v6 \; Q8 x' d" n& s! {<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
9 z* V$ Y( }/ @( [<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
+ b" ?; C7 \% r9 I<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
+ ~- M& |% U0 O4 r+ v<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
7 ]; x: \5 t+ X+ G4 b5 Y0 d, ]<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
% [/ C8 P/ i* F. b7 ^) U3 c' E<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
6 [# S2 D) F; ]) u+ {1 j<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
: h6 K  h6 R3 }1 a' [<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
& K% `; m4 I8 `1 e0 ^<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
& W  F( k1 `3 ]. L. h<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
$ G2 z; g: c% g5 e6 ?$ X1 ^9 M$ F<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
$ b! `  }( t. @8 \6 E7 h<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
; h5 Z% g& D& K1 _* C<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
" d& T. ^  B0 S9 J) \6 {<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
7 D' w3 U$ Z0 J' r- G, S6 C. L- z<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! t6 U4 i4 N! T2 Y0 l<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>