【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
2 [, k8 |* f/ G! {& Z0 oThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
  w- B3 p1 J5 _From the first moment we met,
, J) H; W- z: P% y; o' {: EI already loved you with all my heart
+ N+ l; {0 A- J9 P5 J2 ?% S" LWe meet and talk everyday,
; C4 G" j8 ?/ @# D3 U* vBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
' J" z- K. q  A4 `; P: nIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
8 U" l' M% G8 N# PI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
6 n  W' K) [* L+ z; yWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
* z9 n) o+ {+ nBut I never did
* x' ?% B1 O, t! ZOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
3 B8 n& T$ S' S/ UEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
  L0 h: o; o4 L& k  X3 g' EWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
( I7 O, F, I  i, N1 e$ M. UIf today isn’t too late,
% N- F1 J( ^- @6 D" }I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
5 L& Y  Y6 g0 {" g) xI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
7 S+ q+ ?/ K2 M0 BCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
3 V3 n7 d0 V2 W- t% z% @: JCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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! U5 Y# Z# A0 k- X[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
8 R3 T- U1 w4 x  n4 G( K<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
5 {) r/ A; z, u" h* ]! H2 N<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
$ o6 `0 M6 L& T6 ~. @<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
1 S: v9 V* o# W& [5 x( J. i9 O<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
( w. U! j/ W: Z2 i+ E6 C2 a. D<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
* {% x6 O1 P& t* D<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
" X$ ~# v( F9 y" V; K4 {; V<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
- J+ [/ t3 X) N" x<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
; S0 C, E8 ]+ p) B% F<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
: l1 d+ f9 p' t0 a<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
9 V$ M" T4 g: u' O8 J! {+ L0 S& b5 K$ _<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
* {8 N4 \, g8 F1 k6 S9 r<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
2 t5 u  L  b0 p<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
. H) ^  o, Y0 ?4 ?* Z% u  V& u% d5 z<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
- {& @0 g' p7 Y9 G7 ^$ A<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
3 A. Q/ g$ }% ~1 T<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
: w1 Y/ ]8 |6 M6 b$ b5 n<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
' J6 h1 g/ ?1 M- a<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
7 M; a4 @# Y+ K3 S: }: l2 }<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
1 R, n' S& d" o0 }<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
) u+ u  _# X1 B/ u8 B2 W7 M2 c<P>But I never did </P>
+ g5 \: }1 H. E3 i7 h<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
* N- \0 E$ `5 q<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
% {1 _! s$ K3 i<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
7 N1 b% Y5 h6 E$ u* ]+ g0 k<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
+ \  l9 {& t& }5 ]% ]<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
4 T7 A% ]  F8 P5 u<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
5 e; H, Y- ~; d7 [4 c+ X<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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) a& g7 f1 m- D6 E7 `! \1 T<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>