【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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. g+ C6 V6 d: s( d8 [我另将歌词附在此。
4 }4 n% d6 @0 K. a1 bThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
2 Q7 e- L# K  Z6 \% G! U4 ?From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
* v& l, m1 N5 Z- pIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
+ V8 |) x: ^. c# IWhy is it so difficult to express?
5 M' R& n: Z. T: h  H3 bI want to confess that I love you,
4 h8 q: t* ]7 iBut I never did
. ?3 u7 g2 s' \4 |) AOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
+ F* R5 g& i' ]# wIf today isn’t too late,
( S! u* J3 i1 t& ]9 _. F) c: U9 oI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
, F" z/ ?4 E. R4 i" HCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
4 L7 I8 p: M/ K$ z& {' eLove… just the word love
& C$ b5 X1 N- X- BWhy is it so difficult to express?
* S& l2 L& Y' u6 V7 T6 gI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
) Z8 f" \: s, E4 W: eOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
8 v# Y% x. Z3 ]) h3 V7 B( x, jI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
5 i2 i$ V: S+ }" y, h) E! k( ZI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
# B$ F! Z/ l$ b; {Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
- S6 T! s+ x0 N. ?: kEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
% _. v+ ?) S# F  a$ r<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
; @& M" S# }1 c( ?, ~<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
0 P3 f/ N" ~! g& {  c4 G<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
7 T# e. ?% [6 f; w6 d6 @<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
/ Q8 ^- b3 _8 m  }<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
+ e! ?  r7 l9 L% x<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
0 }( o8 Z* o6 ?- z, \<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
2 H# p3 E3 A  ?: c/ L<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
, D0 F2 O& D: Y' N0 E3 ~; M<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
% k6 P6 t9 W8 _' p6 S! P) \<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
1 Q, R6 q, S1 S! F' q' m! [1 T- j' W<P>但我不会</P>
& g2 b) b- ]- t2 S0 R<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
4 I( L7 A  [9 {; l) X4 w<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
6 b  R! M/ l* w/ ?1 @5 L<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  S" n: y3 k1 a* B8 G3 q<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
# H5 N/ p/ N4 s<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
. N+ O0 S4 \+ l) g3 f8 {<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
2 b3 x; F3 [/ w# H<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
) }* |& Y: |, o<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
* Z0 w  i2 N) E& N<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
; o7 a: p* M% m7 U<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
/ n/ g7 Z/ Q2 t$ k) g, ]<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
5 r/ S9 b. C8 {& W7 V0 B' ?  L$ C0 _% `<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
8 p6 U8 c7 V) d3 |  J/ r<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
& G- b2 n; m) Z0 O/ l2 r  X<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
2 |' {  z0 n& a9 m2 O<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
  _+ j% F* k  ^0 \! G% x<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
, N% `1 R. q+ e. d5 J<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
7 I* D- Y! j* J% b/ z( y- T/ ~<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

% o  g9 K* ^, ~. n  b6 H这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ E6 t/ M7 {8 o  P<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>