【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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0 Q+ ^0 T4 u- a, s8 H, j$ J我另将歌词附在此。
' L; m. Q% t  VThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
1 X! z' U7 k& {From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
+ @9 M5 A" S% Z) h* X" yWe meet and talk everyday,
- w& o6 u! }5 N) M: F3 [" @  ]But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
% _  e- W1 U( P# T. K7 E1 D2 JWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
* L3 J, y* `' {: [8 IOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
% c3 k* E8 T5 p  l' [5 yIf today isn’t too late,
7 v! c7 j8 X4 v, U4 z# hI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
3 v8 s# c3 |/ q0 n6 vCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
, [# d9 e, \' |% U1 O: ?$ l2 ~+ R* g% ELove… just the word love
# j" y1 ~4 m8 T7 a3 `5 ?Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
9 Z6 l# K: u  t) s- J# h, XIf today isn’t too late,
& m4 j( Q, \- a6 V. p- S$ RI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
9 j0 m3 X; B0 c* |- b+ R  g) yCan I entrust it to you?
: K2 O" V7 m; I! S% M% N6 eEntrust my love within your heart
2 a+ V8 B# u, FCan I entrust it to you?
# E$ }4 B! z9 F, \4 yEntrust my love within your heart

! Q) P8 I* v1 T% B! ~3 K[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
& ^' k4 r% K7 ~1 u; Y+ Q: C<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
9 _4 Q! \' E, t- ^3 q: r<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
4 f, |: U% E8 V! S<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
, v0 p7 v$ S' P/ b8 d2 S' i<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
. ]) F$ @9 @: C. b<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
; B6 _' ?# O+ T+ R' }/ B. ]<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
9 z: }9 M0 P2 M<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
# g# P- o6 K5 Q8 d" z$ i<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
' ]) K* C( R, E4 [<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
% d/ s9 F1 t/ @. m" o2 n8 ]% k" D<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
! {; P0 o8 X% t3 t  ?<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
9 z6 z, L! k( ?, v<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
7 M2 `* Y  T) r& g7 o7 ~<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
  u; S+ X3 l: g) Y% q, `( |<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
2 W. B- K0 ?2 L, B9 W* I8 F5 ~% e+ k2 j<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
0 G5 h. h1 V7 }1 L1 E$ A& }& e<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
' w6 d  [" `: R+ f<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
3 y. ?+ b0 ~6 q<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
" B' A' ?9 e/ P* o, d; j<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
& ^4 y! e" t( Q" U5 I: ]6 y<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
0 B( j% O) @1 p1 _8 \4 J<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
# K( L# R8 e& W( K" H<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
' G% }! q: K5 A# g2 S1 ^  b<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
) G6 e8 |% p: n<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
6 l* }  d! ]$ J: |1 _1 N8 G<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
/ Y" z8 {, F/ w3 Q! B. a<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>