【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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. e, Z' u$ W2 M* W% |The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
* ~9 d1 Y# Q6 p4 S0 O! VFrom the first moment we met,
6 q) i0 T  v4 k( T  vI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
+ G6 l' K  ?# P- t6 A4 c, w# wI would probably know how you feel
0 ~8 r- u8 n! j0 E4 ^2 OLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
* z' y2 j5 X, y- ^8 RI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
0 ]7 Z7 O9 x) G! v, o9 KOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
2 {; }: o& y) h* @I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
. w3 f+ @! a3 ?" JLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
$ V9 Q  x! B% e. r: \" cI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
5 F3 P0 _6 K% P, _3 V8 \4 o( D5 NIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
1 o* I" I! ]) @, O3 _I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

" ~  Y0 q3 t4 F' J$ f) y<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
8 q# k0 C, P, Y9 ]<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
- y; y& k; G& A. T5 H0 K<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
- i! p6 u2 y) I9 Z1 ~5 h' W* N, H<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
5 v- a5 z1 [. I- G<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
- a) V  a1 H# D* V0 t$ v) A<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
( X0 E% K9 e0 K! N- e1 a# L8 H& g' V8 J<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
2 f  m! t3 ?8 ?7 q8 e# Y, S<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
9 B0 A" n1 H' c4 m4 |<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
* L" @" u4 e( ~1 Z2 `<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
! z: d5 b! {7 X4 y+ r, @# M<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
/ W% [0 G" ?- U0 j) ~3 v<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
4 b1 y& P( J: Q7 l$ K% N1 [4 K<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
) G  T# R- n; [, V3 b6 T<P>但我不会</P>
9 C$ L; x' Z  {. z5 Y9 a& ]<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
5 N$ Z, Y: E/ l<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
0 z4 v; m, J$ b' Q4 s; J<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
, i3 K; A) @8 O9 d. h<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
/ y* }* B1 ]5 I( v9 A& ^<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
5 W: a0 z+ l' w6 _  |. Q$ h  Q<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
8 E" N$ y9 J/ _<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
% c  q6 z' h2 H5 P<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
1 ^- y7 }, j- R- H# k/ `# W1 _) D<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
. @! [* O/ d2 Y) `<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
$ o" c* o: u5 Y<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
; v; d$ v$ e$ I7 X6 B5 O<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
8 L9 J( ]; C3 q. `3 i4 |<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; [! M+ o' x. N, W. y/ \<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 `  v7 {4 c7 s' t<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>