【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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, S0 D! C3 n9 K3 S我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
2 J! v+ K' {) G( ]+ hThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
4 `/ g" I' ?2 B# }, xFrom the first moment we met,
: p( e" v2 m% Q' \% N" Y! pI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
# C' ^; y0 }' |, f3 J6 i, ^If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
* x0 Y' `, o1 J( n/ O$ r" PLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
; @2 i. n3 B3 ^! t: ?( D0 KBut I never did
" j: q; S4 Y5 EOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
1 j1 |0 N2 a* z8 ^) w. M1 uIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
/ ?$ E1 _  Z* N, I$ [/ rCan I entrust it to you?
8 ^) Y' R# L( E# KEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
0 g" B% g* O. ~% v7 ?I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
7 l2 u+ d8 C4 d! i' d8 \One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
7 u+ B  y; B6 U/ PI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
! A) X. @" Q! ~" H8 ^0 m" HCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
- O. y% h8 w2 k  A2 [- N9 PEntrust my love within your heart
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7 p4 u8 `, K  S7 G5 B[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
0 L4 R& ]! J, Z; V' p+ Q% w<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
0 P7 g5 {) G3 H& W+ Q<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
: V- Q( Z, M* D( Q  {  g! ]<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
6 [+ a& q* Q7 _- a7 b1 X<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
) q  |; @0 S" c<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
/ O# L2 p1 ?2 [5 [% `2 k, T+ [% L2 M# e<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
$ E) p( O) l  r: n% G! i+ e" ?) _<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
% N0 T8 S$ p4 D* D$ ~<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
. F8 l& t: n! ^8 m<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
( A+ V4 o6 ^- o9 F. `, Q, g: I, h<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
% y; j/ b. _! W3 s  l<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
5 z: K3 t! l5 H# t<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
0 q4 k  E1 l  N5 d3 s1 ^$ E<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
5 g$ ?3 \% N: w* p7 T<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
' k6 W2 b0 n% c) C3 d) C<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
5 ?1 V( V" v& p; Y* z& v1 r<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
% q0 E1 I8 F' Q3 \<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
: y- e; O: F9 E5 y  v" y<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
6 h( `! ~$ Y# C<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
  L! j! I' N% V* {' m<P>但我不会 </P>
! w6 w2 E' h0 r0 q<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
/ [0 S0 G  N- A8 k3 j+ r+ ]  ^- P<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
' g- ?$ a1 r) Q8 z* i6 b<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
1 |4 W( \  m# I9 p<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
0 }$ r1 l' x. a7 a( S' `1 d: i; A' E<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
& H. H) s$ x7 y  ~, u+ {<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
. e& P8 D6 t) \$ C<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
( ~9 E! a; |* o; ~6 Q<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
1 t* n$ K/ C0 J1 i& H6 ]' O9 C<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
% b$ t, p% X1 @! O<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 i) U/ Z& `9 a* v( B<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# E8 B% U( e0 i7 m2 x) m<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>