【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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- m, h  i3 Q/ k' ^+ p我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
9 M+ f! L. }7 f' V7 Z( Z5 lFrom the first moment we met,
; d9 v/ o9 P5 _I already loved you with all my heart
( F7 l8 e# ^' k: \5 {2 [We meet and talk everyday,
" E, H' ^) E5 w4 M- TBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
( v# g0 S( ]) q) G6 b+ q, t+ oIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
1 T2 Q1 X8 P! t: ]One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
+ r$ n5 M$ L* C8 Q6 Q+ C! bIf today isn’t too late,
9 x$ W3 o" P+ ?" K8 I/ _I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
' B6 v- {" c8 H3 uI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
! t2 k8 o7 H0 Q+ @Can I entrust it to you?
% ]' A8 ~* y+ m) q, ]! tEntrust my love within your heart
# Z( }3 `: |" X9 i" rLove… just the word love
. L" P: O6 t+ P( _8 j4 x) F$ xWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
4 g2 C/ U" F) o* bBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
0 ]' o4 F" P) K- ?9 |* a! aIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
7 T5 W) d$ D7 fCan I entrust it to you?
: g# S: y& M) I1 d0 K6 s/ M1 IEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
- i# ?4 O: P2 C( V1 iEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

2 Y( G: T4 _, L$ w( ~& ~<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
. v6 {; u! M4 A, r<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
8 Q- z, N  L: K5 x<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
7 i0 j( O( u% H! U6 ]% [9 h<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
0 L% S* {4 m. {1 L. n2 \<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
* p2 h& j. l" o4 M" ?7 c$ x5 k<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
) [' w; s, x1 f% {- |' V2 S" s0 K<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
1 ^% e" d* v  _& w" Z* ]<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
' k  \+ T, q: P: l<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
; c, N6 x* ~4 B& m; |* U<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
, ]7 L' `% p) T& Z<P>我想说我爱你</P>
! U9 ?% v. G" u: l. j3 s<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
4 l+ t; t- U7 L: Z* b! q3 ~. u<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
7 X! t1 F( ^' d* ]: C# X<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
) L* b- l$ X6 N' o% a$ d<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
) r) s0 t6 m; r, {<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
5 A* O' z, `$ _  l8 ^- l% G<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
2 C# g6 I& U* _; k<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
9 Q0 l, {7 t& S8 M6 o" ~<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
$ P; l. Q$ K7 |<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
( ?! J  m* I, |<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
6 t1 s0 l/ ?# R+ A/ S<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
' u/ g9 z/ m  S1 \9 z<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
0 Z$ P9 D# Q" C<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
- U8 q3 C1 z' P# e, N7 n3 O, E<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
% S& u8 b# H# w! {3 e4 q<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
  Y' ]. E0 E2 B3 X4 t# ~0 G0 z<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
3 V' }* G& ]8 N! E3 f) Y7 a9 m! T# r0 c<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
; Y0 a6 o9 h% j: N<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

& D( e" V; o6 I7 V这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

' D0 {$ R' v7 m/ {这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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1 N* ^! d4 _9 i; d( Q<P>

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>