【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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' Y5 s1 M1 N8 i3 P- X# C+ m1 X我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
* q$ u6 Q9 A" o5 C. _' R( xFrom the first moment we met,
6 V- k7 }" K  ]4 b9 a5 w2 j0 ^I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
) z/ m5 `! }" P8 D! ]/ @But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
# x! H9 V1 A* N- qIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
( _! y" A7 w5 T* x; y0 m' ~( `1 rI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
; N' b; k2 v# U4 [! g+ W$ hI want to confess that I love you,
  g* }" H  B) X( t# C/ dBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
6 S2 O2 c1 y. {, I' K5 x3 @& \If today isn’t too late,
5 x  b# p# R5 ^I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
; B: C: G& `1 l9 D1 d1 F" j  H+ P- @I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
$ P# E5 M4 ~& sCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
) T0 O: T2 f( w3 ^" {" NLove… just the word love
& x4 J1 o  x. z8 `! x8 W  W. LWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
! X* f/ }5 |+ }$ N- J& l6 Z5 IBut I never did
$ y! @  f4 K* gOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
, w: A6 ?# F$ w  z) |) ]If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
. R  s1 d0 q# rI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
2 K4 a9 A. j# N  b  J0 Y7 t0 J- n0 eEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
  a" ?2 P* f: R1 UEntrust my love within your heart

8 x* Z: a& Z8 d* [  N; b[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
8 q* j! H2 c* y& x8 F<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
/ v" T' M  B& @<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
6 ]+ H) s, W: A/ k; [$ l<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
) b& D. r! }/ g4 Y, V" r; c7 T<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
! p: e  Q3 n9 i1 m9 b<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
( k7 G$ @( I5 t  I* H6 `<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
$ _: T% a" m, |# N% u# W2 K! e" c<P>我想说我爱你</P>
4 N7 E; n/ Q$ H2 e- C; r: F<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
* T* ?$ Y! M- s  d. N& K: q<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
5 q, D5 I1 n& h/ q$ \<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
3 C7 M$ G" N8 O( Q4 {<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
3 \6 z2 H5 |6 z<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
5 t+ o8 a5 J& q$ F<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
- I- Z$ v' ?# G  h+ v: X, s<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
' m9 T, w7 ~; E* g) v0 E<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
5 g" B& J4 N# {5 Z' s. O<P>Love… just the word love </P>
: @) m, D6 ^( e5 b0 x<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
! c  c$ n: V8 t<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
* j2 y9 u& o& Y0 B  B- d4 r; p<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
, A# [' Q, |" {' V( f<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
% ?( I2 e! q6 S0 e! ~$ T( e<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
9 E2 P/ u7 Z$ _- `6 G, u) ^' _5 t<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
, |% }4 H& y  H7 D- D<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
# s/ j) W3 l, q0 Y8 ^<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
9 T: H& z, C8 h8 B<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

1 @( O  ~- V( t; N! r# e5 @ 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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" Q0 T9 u" E: y0 b3 n6 G这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ e3 d1 G( t( |! j, N" h8 x& J: u<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 X* q: |2 R6 P2 a; U<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>