【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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: u5 M1 }) i) m/ k: ~7 Z& a# Z我另将歌词附在此。
4 J% u8 [8 @1 vThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
5 {: J3 R! v" G& j7 _+ nFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
- w0 X! p# M# O  JBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
$ [& \9 ]9 `) J5 cI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
  P' X3 t* O1 P5 ~/ y6 H" cWhy is it so difficult to express?
; K4 m/ s3 P, s: iI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
& [8 n9 m" D% G2 cOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
) p! n5 [' {' n% d$ f$ S2 CIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
' S( j, K$ R8 `# l. B( b2 BI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
" e4 D  |7 q) k6 lCan I entrust it to you?
7 N/ G6 S: S+ Z/ ^# w; p# g- AEntrust my love within your heart
5 @0 @$ q! X. E+ @- kLove… just the word love
9 f: e! _  F- f2 TWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
6 w. g) {; K) n, t$ k1 b* [8 ABut I never did
3 l: t  e4 i: f3 A0 x* k8 nOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
$ L# P& d3 w- P, W% p4 RIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
4 Y+ f4 G- O6 d7 x) |1 ~I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
5 A$ k1 @- Q4 w+ c0 \8 m' V  xCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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4 w" ~* x" z) a[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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- M+ V  |/ C7 ]( y% H- y<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
0 m$ b- X0 u* }( T9 A0 i+ d. s/ L<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
. w( \2 R; j! ^: \8 f<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
0 H7 L6 F5 K) ^7 G4 A0 S<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
4 X. i. J: B5 Y<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
% z* c3 Q9 N( W+ R7 S2 h, L4 h8 }<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
" r( [) G. w/ B' N% _" W<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
2 [+ Y* M. `7 Z<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
' f8 v' _$ E- N* F<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
* Y$ N7 `8 }) i2 d  S, k<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
1 n& G8 A3 @' T1 s& u/ ^<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
$ ~- y4 u! }# v# Q<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
1 h1 ^/ @8 o; H, I: {<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
' H+ P, ]( K. ^0 s<P>但我不会</P>
+ q2 e5 y. w0 H<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
& K6 |7 o! q- E2 ?1 H<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
* s, w0 }# K- J+ L- X<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
4 |) h5 }6 G& s2 r2 d' ~+ x<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
/ o0 x2 z9 I- C# K, A# N3 M<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
# t' R; [9 ]: \  G<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
9 P1 n" B- l% `. f& ?( D<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
" g1 f3 R8 s8 j0 y" V9 L<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
2 `# G: @# o% O<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
- l. M5 A9 |6 E# Y<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
6 L; h% u% L/ u+ i% D" @) J<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
! J3 ^4 l# L) ~2 M! {<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
* _+ C, @+ S/ z. P<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
4 c5 }( b4 R% S( B" j0 v1 n<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
4 ?* R! C- ~/ J<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
9 P0 `# G4 `2 W0 ?) {+ m8 D<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
6 t( x& {/ g/ @  y3 [7 q+ x<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
  c8 w+ \9 e! [<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
. J+ L2 q; D2 B<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
7 v) _1 e! v) l# J+ r, s# e4 ]<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
! G0 f, |5 r% n$ C- H/ X<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
. M; C& A5 s( F! c6 `8 B. n<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
* G1 i/ s. t7 C4 l4 N& C( n<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
* ~+ c: O2 E0 a* X2 s9 r<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
3 T) l- y0 }2 `' f<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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7 g4 R" Z" S) g4 y/ N3 e<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>