【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
& g# ^7 J; `9 g2 P/ }The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
) t2 X' M  y' nI want to confess that I love you,
0 d# S# H" n' X0 IBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
  k# c4 |2 B1 ~4 pI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
- L6 x6 m: [+ @5 c! DI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
# q, P! e8 a. j$ M4 N6 \Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
( F7 q4 N; C: V; U& PWhy is it so difficult to express?
1 j' U0 o+ Y8 [1 D2 n3 MI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
) l1 ~/ `6 o4 _) {5 tOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
& y8 C: d5 G* @8 D" SCan I entrust it to you?
' [  i8 C2 Z, ]# V# Z, rEntrust my love within your heart
5 L- J' y8 h$ N! O" u( C: zCan I entrust it to you?
# ]4 W/ {( |$ d3 |) U) wEntrust my love within your heart

2 p2 o* F/ Z2 O- ~[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
1 p7 v. g' @8 M- G<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
3 s. @  ~3 c: V( A% I! A0 E  w<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
8 W% p. B* J( h8 h<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
, t! m! r+ i( R0 Q0 y<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
9 P# [; ~3 a2 b/ _- K  K<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
2 N! ]0 X) Z8 i6 g7 H, x<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
1 L" M2 C7 j( {<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
% \! l% j1 [9 x& e<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
6 j: @( T  y  D4 N<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
3 h" n% x5 W* a' T" }0 J6 q* G<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
: V: a: u3 f: _8 N2 c<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
) d6 I2 c, g3 j1 @8 O; k<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
+ s3 n7 L& M+ Q2 V/ \<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
! a' Z: p- p1 K" q$ H' T: L: I<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
' C: d+ ?' J9 m. e, p$ I<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
$ x9 y/ D4 m5 b<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
, [8 W, g7 x1 w4 a/ K: b& g. P<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
/ A9 W/ |0 B9 m/ Q4 n<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
! R! V- H/ G- [+ I, H; g<P>Love… just the word love </P>
" B9 P" S( s# r0 Q* a<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
7 [! r% R" T# j<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
2 l& @. f1 w8 V4 \1 l<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
, h7 Y  v% `: P8 _" R5 O<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
8 |" i* R4 [; [* k8 L9 U<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
. `) F8 d; I3 n# P2 b" B" Y<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
! X& V) w/ Z- C9 Y# ]$ Q- _* I2 q<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
' E& n& u# V5 ^0 k% U2 P$ s<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
. w- A% |) R4 q2 E+ P) C<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
( N1 m1 _8 O* |5 b+ g1 v<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 N, W  `* p# s$ r<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>