【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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5 V$ L! `0 V1 b) p1 ~% ~/ C
+ n% G3 |" K5 v# t& y7 c/ J6 ?$ L我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
9 v% l, z, E8 Z. d; y- M8 j  h( IFrom the first moment we met,
+ H+ V) o3 \5 s* z, u# uI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
. c. F( w  D! b% k! EBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
) b% P8 F3 P; r# ^( JIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
7 B/ X: [  i1 I* FLove… just the word love
9 H/ z- e/ N: N# F, `/ q( AWhy is it so difficult to express?
! B0 D% b* p- M: II want to confess that I love you,
& s, G8 f* x0 UBut I never did
9 X  t% i& j# DOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
. l; s/ v$ p0 F" ], T+ gIf today isn’t too late,
' i6 }% V5 x4 }3 dI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
; m; W# }, v- u9 m. C0 {Entrust my love within your heart
% j% A. N) ~6 SLove… just the word love
% w5 a* Q/ Y' i7 P( O- hWhy is it so difficult to express?
, Y& W2 H7 x$ z2 s, x9 D( pI want to confess that I love you,
5 O# K, U6 _/ _But I never did
7 j( B5 n6 [8 j1 d3 a7 y5 pOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
1 L! m( r1 T# Z' u7 K4 U. {, z1 ?I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
$ a" |3 W3 [, ^0 d, ~9 [( ?4 FCan I entrust it to you?
: I8 m6 z8 S# `1 xEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
. j9 q+ m; N) F$ v: ?% b, q7 dEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
8 ^: `. w& w2 Q) Y& z<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
0 I" t$ X! b& C& D) x( F<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
' Y1 w  a' w8 ^<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
* M8 P; `# |; x: F<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
' H1 _' @/ B( c. l1 [5 |2 g<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
) h/ H/ p/ a1 T  B) A8 P6 g<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
8 ^1 b: p3 q2 m8 a7 c<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
3 d& q5 r0 E) X* u+ q<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
/ `$ H; }0 Y  U6 g) H<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
5 ~( @; i# e/ k) K& e<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
- w. M6 I( |4 u9 K& x# H<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
5 w7 ~4 v' U8 H/ Y8 l$ n. X<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
/ w8 ?' ]1 j! A2 C<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
( K3 \& L, x& G2 d: H6 j<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
  n9 h( ^! [8 g. M, P4 C<P>但我不会</P>
. H/ z8 B) [/ c( B<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
7 q- `2 ?: Y" C, R<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
0 w% v$ Y3 h- R$ Z  R<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
( l" Z% Y) Y) y# p. f<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
, v" e( ^0 x/ _  N" @( p8 U<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
2 ~; v4 b3 f- L1 |3 y<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
, Z& D/ p$ S. t* {4 D<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
% |" A: K# C8 l/ @. Y% S$ M  y<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
+ ^) ~2 {# m  `" h7 Q& y" T: b: G0 H<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
  |/ c5 W' r7 [<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
8 f4 |% O! {2 m! C<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
7 ^# r8 g! g- [9 S; S5 ?( v<P>But I never did </P>
9 ?: V9 H  X" H* w) R. W8 d7 E<P>但我不会 </P>
1 ~9 K" V: N+ W1 u& X8 w" F<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
7 G' i7 N- V, X6 G<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
6 F9 s1 v% C2 W6 K) F8 i6 r<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
- T3 P( W2 N% @<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
) W9 X$ ]. }6 n8 ?- A/ z: `<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
' s  h! F2 u' M- Q( Z% `<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
# {/ |1 i1 f# l<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
( q5 Y* `! t8 `<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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* t: A  v5 B6 A9 M* R. c这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

8 `8 U* T& t, o/ m# J- y这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>