【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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, _4 w4 ^+ n% I我另将歌词附在此。
4 v: E# a" Q4 t) Y, H$ PThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
7 p: Y2 W6 m" d4 R# L+ MI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
% @+ e; H3 X& N3 w# eIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
, z% m/ D) X% v" w& v: I. m' bI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
, H) G3 R# X& g, G' yWhy is it so difficult to express?
# c) f1 A( @% yI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
( P- e0 W7 ]" \2 B9 b' E3 ]/ _; ALove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
2 H; ~2 K% z! R, u& C) y. ?9 HIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
/ J$ o8 c  O2 L# C: {' a$ mI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
' C' c/ y  p, a5 Z2 F: wEntrust my love within your heart

: [, h) R4 G  M8 f1 v# {[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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: e# ^* z& M/ w: N<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
  F! a" j" d9 E, t. r<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
$ Z$ [9 o# h: S2 H& _# ]* z<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
, x. e5 h4 F  B2 F. d1 F<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
, ~% D6 v" r8 B1 {/ }0 \  a+ Z<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
9 g2 u% u0 ~- @<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
% ~/ _2 f1 N4 A6 T: v<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
" c7 v8 \9 D; k<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
+ q. p, L7 r% g6 c: I* l/ h<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
/ P% o& ^! m$ ?& r1 K4 m+ s% ?<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
& u2 i" [/ X% `% z<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
- f1 n( O+ \  g$ M% b$ k<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
  o- A4 H9 y+ l" O<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
+ e0 K( e3 m8 {' f0 x0 H+ c<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
/ e/ x- \* ?6 A" o5 }" s' Q/ F+ A6 Q<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
' Q4 u0 x" }1 w& M+ ~<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
& ]3 v, n; G  p+ F<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
+ Z/ o# l" x$ L" |/ F) f<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
. q/ T8 b0 _6 S  }* L8 e4 C, t<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
9 A: g: O6 @" D: a( K9 P<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
, {1 {* K0 T3 l<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
4 Y0 s6 M  Y* U% o6 A& w<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
7 Z0 V" R9 W* j  E& \8 m* c<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
( z; q# U7 ^2 G% [<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
  M, ?% [' X& z1 C4 Q5 T<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
( N( Q/ [' ~# U3 ^<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
% S+ ^/ x" ~5 g. @" W<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
' k3 P6 b% Z, F<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
' a6 d9 _1 @0 o7 K6 s<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
: g: S3 `4 g: ~: k: Y. e3 R: R1 t5 H( ~<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
" G5 m5 {: g4 Q, u) a<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
4 S# ~( X+ |6 V% T, X' ?<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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2 Y% l% o: M4 t2 s  e这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

! p# h/ z  \, a1 k+ c) g& f这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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3 Z$ h/ b1 R3 {$ y0 e1 R; r<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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* l) _/ c! E2 Y) m3 O% F<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>