【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
" s: \0 T( u6 n1 ^1 J; G. L, _The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
" ?7 C- x+ L$ U5 YThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
1 \. _2 Z3 J: B/ Q* xFrom the first moment we met,
) G7 z( K$ d5 u' @+ kI already loved you with all my heart
3 B) }7 [, d" ~7 T' w2 J# f. aWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
" S1 ]( x- S/ QI would probably know how you feel
# E$ F0 b. Z8 G) B- x' N2 XLove… just the word love
2 A8 U) i" H% j4 K( a5 EWhy is it so difficult to express?
, q1 J! P) l, a* i" y) D8 y4 ?I want to confess that I love you,
$ X2 s$ c! E9 X! ^) T$ G8 @9 qBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
; A& G7 ~- Q) A& [- `! }& tI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
. t9 m' a) T0 x4 r+ CCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
% s, j" ~- M3 _5 @: ]" |1 Z8 UI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
* B/ C7 Y8 P  }! X7 V0 u( n  {If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
( M3 k) |7 d, H. SI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
8 n! ]% j& b; j% OCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
* u; N! J% t; x9 ?* `. k2 fEntrust my love within your heart

, R0 ^" t) q# k" @7 t[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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7 Y! O" o# V' a, t  V* a<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
5 u5 v- X$ @! U- `<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
& P$ n9 d( D( A- c6 `<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
! T+ v3 K% R0 w5 x4 c6 N<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
+ P, t2 N9 u& a. [<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
8 u7 X0 \1 a3 P( q! ^) Z/ M3 F+ k7 e<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
  k( X- d5 m& H8 @<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
. o% t1 z( p) l& `. A5 t9 ^4 ^<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
8 e8 x0 O# D3 q0 o5 `/ i3 T5 r$ @<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
% P8 Q" g# p/ f% N) \<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
* Y* O9 [$ m, A" h4 X; h8 ^<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
- H: Y  f2 B- d& C2 a6 N) K<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
8 z) q! [, e7 q" q4 O<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
. R" U1 s3 n0 z3 }/ P7 \<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
" F! R. U" O* U<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
# X# Y( q9 z9 @# u; N; ^- [$ P; ^( m" M<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
0 t# H4 I( ~" V3 b<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
9 W$ j% \; p0 c5 S5 X, ?<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
# k$ J: @5 C" A, z+ o; H<P>Love… just the word love </P>
: V4 U# I8 N7 W( [0 C: I2 T<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
# {9 j% y. S" o- p# _% ~! h# \<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
. w" o) J9 v: Z( }<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
, m) t: \$ I2 I# p+ ^% L<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
0 Y. G( m/ W5 m: a6 J<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
/ j* k( q/ j5 X+ \9 i. v/ X) n( z<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
! Y3 J3 ~- l9 O7 w4 l* {4 t. g5 s<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
% _" t' j+ R& q% I$ i4 b* U<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
( o0 a  I# y2 E7 K9 u- M<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
% `; u4 y$ b. v6 j<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
* `0 |- U! S# Q2 u( C<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
5 V) |+ s2 ~# B' ~1 d+ Q/ o6 n<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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4 Y, ?* N9 e- @! M( d% ]<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>