【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
5 B+ Z2 q" M6 a0 d$ Z; u8 o8 KThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
* d1 n3 ?4 `8 e( A( o1 tThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
2 h; u( y* z* c8 |) b$ b. |I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
+ q' p* @- c- t8 iBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
) \9 c) a3 a. t# PIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
4 Z9 c) R6 q% P5 I7 j, ~' A2 PI would probably know how you feel
( E4 I5 q/ F$ o( _1 o: ~Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
8 V+ a6 Z- d7 X) c9 {8 PBut I never did
2 J0 Z& P! s# n3 q" l: hOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
" a( y# _8 H( ^2 S4 q1 MI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
% d% X( w$ G3 ^3 |( m  f4 PEntrust my love within your heart
* m" ]/ x$ j+ k  p2 I6 aLove… just the word love
3 e; g: l0 C; J- Y& g% n0 |Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
3 ~" I% }! ~/ {% Z6 f/ t6 [( MIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
9 a! T$ {8 F! h$ ]8 nCan I entrust it to you?
' {0 @1 C. ^/ r/ P( N& JEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
. c$ Z; t9 x) d# U! p6 i4 HEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
; c$ T, {3 Z$ a# f% U<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
8 Y: t- @9 a. f% D& e  Z7 [" n<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
0 I8 R7 o* n/ X. P: K7 `3 T: A<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
% p; b% A$ t0 I7 z8 |/ c6 E<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
* }1 R0 B$ a6 p1 }& `<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
( E! G: [' a0 H: B' ^<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
6 w: t6 F; @& D) E<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
( Z5 C3 w: J9 K) k) ~$ E& O1 q<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
# G# O4 Y. ]$ C& c2 S' {8 \<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
. i; b3 p* R& I! Y9 D& P. \7 n<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
7 l8 {2 i# J6 @- Y& r. D0 X$ e<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
3 q: _! z$ b* }1 o/ F  \<P>但我不会</P>
7 N& k) y) v! j/ q<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
8 H0 i2 h+ ~4 I& _<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
& b& j' N, W& }9 _+ t+ B3 q<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
8 C& i0 l8 w/ I. O/ W<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
5 N3 e0 J% w- ]& j9 p1 B9 \<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
7 c  t& ]" [& A<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
& b6 p; m/ Q" d3 H/ s! P<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
  W& G1 @3 O; G' h' K<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
$ M9 p) z) a; ~4 f<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
$ c4 @- d: L0 ^3 {<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
4 P* O0 f; S: s<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
, D7 Q  {: P5 S$ B<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
: o: z4 X9 m+ u6 _<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
/ M/ V8 G1 o9 K+ R# M( C8 j! T4 l<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
( z% T9 o# p. x; U/ F7 O6 K) ]<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
% O+ c2 z2 @) N' ?+ U4 ?4 k* K<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
, X/ Y& V  i% X<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
; K6 q0 ^9 A/ G7 j<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
7 \4 Y/ \- _& S) N. u<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
" s2 g5 z! ~7 P<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

) h" C5 t+ A  R( R! d* ] 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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" m6 L$ c& W, v9 D这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; ?! T+ i+ W' S; W: I2 [<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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/ C7 |* I3 ?( m2 a. F; S7 R6 q<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>