【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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3 F: G. X0 }4 Q# g7 n. Q% m3 O我另将歌词附在此。
. q$ e! g2 @. ^0 C0 iThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
* u; E1 c2 b5 C/ n( J+ @From the first moment we met,
4 b' B; g9 t3 p( n& }5 _1 jI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
* p' C/ r+ l8 |( v& T2 h; gBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
" A$ K6 G4 e# u/ i4 E8 Y( jIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
0 K1 I- \0 g6 XLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
% {1 ]. C- h7 C6 aI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
& _: Z# q7 D5 L! h0 x% @  j3 TOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
" f" ^" V! {% [0 R- i9 ~+ B6 SI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
& n* H, n9 W! G5 `( h- `; M  f" d/ LCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
4 t" F$ f! t8 B, ~1 FWhy is it so difficult to express?
6 N% V4 ^( L+ f6 M2 A. KI want to confess that I love you,
4 V  R) p9 b3 A$ b* p. kBut I never did
* U" _, e- o" ~0 P5 pOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
* y' d* \  ~0 I( k  v9 |6 d( oIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
0 M9 c, G$ f; I$ A9 Y* B' s, L* oI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
+ I' K" U: O7 T: [. z' M6 `  |; x, ^2 ^Can I entrust it to you?
" b) ^7 K) G/ x1 l  y! u9 {Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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0 D2 P. L) k3 V<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
4 k! E0 ~) ^  q<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
+ V- k2 A5 X; g  @& M6 t1 \" O<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
# `9 u9 W% e! s0 k: F& A* w<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
: J: r0 l$ V" _: s; X! G4 R<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
8 K6 Q) v) s- V! Q+ W. d8 H4 {<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
! U0 g) E7 e3 A! F<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
' W& w5 v) p0 M<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
: M8 S# K) h2 o# M% ^( G<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
5 r8 w. Z& e( ?- }# {0 q: ^<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
6 |7 Q# V" G3 Q- U/ K1 f<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
9 K; Y# @3 j: W3 h- q<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
2 C  W* m* {6 y' V4 H# M9 ]<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
( W  k7 f4 E& N, e7 n<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
. |  l0 u9 L" Y: H! m! |<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
, }( Z! }0 p3 b7 |) i& d<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
' o8 v5 \9 ?4 x8 B6 j<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
, M0 H3 j& u; _<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
$ \$ E( j& g# ]: I8 b<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
+ w$ z& \6 m: j0 M<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
* i/ N: \2 D# g6 t<P>But I never did </P>
  o. w/ N  c9 K, D<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
: v  J% y0 |# \: p1 |# B<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
4 U+ ]# l: Z% `  }6 V& j<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
5 q/ h" Q6 [3 J; [<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
. ^# N+ z  M# G1 Y<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
  `( y: z5 `9 O4 }" O: g<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
/ O1 g, p* I1 e( e* `' I<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
' j9 a/ g6 w3 w7 _1 E: `<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
3 e* Y" R! ~! t  L0 l8 G<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

4 b: a8 j+ a; O& z, J0 {这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>