【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
! H, }  u7 w2 G- L9 q* A% y: u9 vThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
1 \# _3 S1 k8 j2 ~* _- e6 @9 QFrom the first moment we met,
7 H' B8 h) D9 f+ m) R& JI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
  A- P- N7 J4 k5 kIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
5 }  v' C7 B* }/ RBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
6 u" e, \0 J# |3 vIf today isn’t too late,
1 j8 i6 I  c; p5 h" w" z! K; d: mI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
) I7 M- J. G+ f# d' }* {9 g1 GI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
: \' z: ~3 m. I' k+ vCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
3 e) C, e9 s3 y0 eLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
% A& m" q( i3 M. oBut I never did
' s! Z" z9 ]- q( mOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
7 j1 S. U8 p  V# \4 x( p( v- V0 \I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
6 K; D9 i4 k! H& F3 u$ |5 v" b. PEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
' o- l( p% z# Z0 M9 p<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
, P8 u% z& _( S4 ]<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
5 |- {! S, E" Y& F# m2 c" }<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
5 z6 }7 Y. j/ Y1 H7 q* I. `<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
* @( G3 n$ @9 v/ n5 s1 |8 W& a<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
% G- P& v" k# m2 k: ^/ I1 [<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
, V" |* X0 _. w<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
( L; \0 O" o5 ]! i<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
3 p6 |' M! q* E<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
4 c( d, Y7 y9 E; O6 }  _6 X<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
0 d* @; |7 h8 e/ n0 K- W<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
5 \0 j" x; }4 T# z1 n, Y<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
) z9 R/ V1 ~1 X6 X" K) T6 p<P>我想说我爱你</P>
; g$ J3 W  k8 X/ C& _+ {<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
5 d% _& [2 j( `" c2 W  \; x8 ]9 I  ^' ~5 @<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
. N  |+ e7 f% Z# ]! K6 {6 H<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
, A$ d; \6 Z3 R- v7 {0 x<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
) _- h* t9 J3 h. R<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
5 P# K# s! n0 g( C3 P: Q<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
  p& {* N, k6 {" `0 O<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
" m. T! p5 x/ Q' @2 h<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
" y) v1 s/ T  {! O' C; l<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
2 t' U1 Y  L* v0 B/ G1 P<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
5 f# W7 r: \1 _% t( y<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
! I- T+ K5 j4 S+ C4 p* `<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
( W) A) `: Z2 B' }: |- \: `3 j& ]<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
& B& M9 s  E2 Y7 U<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
) T# ~. ~6 B: f) C& m<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
' P) i# l1 u; q$ o; `, t- \, N: C<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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1 V, J' L; M& \' [( R( y3 { 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

% X# ~7 A. b7 g/ J7 Y5 M; J这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# V9 {7 P9 W0 b, }8 w<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>