【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
6 V( w9 e, A; y- vThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
* ?# m& C4 |6 b& YThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
% ~' n6 C$ U# K5 JI already loved you with all my heart
% P. d4 d( d8 f( D/ VWe meet and talk everyday,
% P5 ^3 V2 e* `/ S; }) p! _7 R( G  xBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
( c/ a9 k8 D0 R+ B0 FI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
5 m% m/ p/ O% w9 n4 R  o. SWhy is it so difficult to express?
+ d0 W2 b, k9 ]  p, FI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
; H) z6 d: e3 j$ m, A6 VOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
) P5 U$ H4 g9 r3 Q0 n+ x5 CIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
( [. P6 m7 s( k6 @) PI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
' V! |; L$ C  MEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
, W( q- }& Z8 l7 ?5 m6 cWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
7 }* v" W# a- j; cBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
! x8 B  |; r% _1 t! p4 pI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
* r2 |5 E8 W# U& k4 ~, E  CCan I entrust it to you?
# D+ P; Q/ H5 ?! \Entrust my love within your heart
: R- b4 i0 H& a% N, i' nCan I entrust it to you?
4 n& A; R* p8 M( w% oEntrust my love within your heart

$ d* M9 I( E3 V  {: z[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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' f( M( a/ d( `0 Y" }<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
: o0 F9 b: L. V0 W4 ]2 s<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
4 ~" k. F0 j1 W0 a; _7 L<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
8 C6 F! I4 U3 v9 r: q$ g3 x* S<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
3 g+ M5 O# ]5 t. K<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
" e3 P& h: D& n. F<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
! _! i/ y0 y# d" C! T4 M<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
) I* x3 W7 q: B5 T<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
( I  A# t. `! g<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
7 @! H' W! Q9 J1 {$ N. V<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
! ?, m- z7 q4 L<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
  q. ]$ j& q8 Z" Z- C: s/ a* p3 Z% M<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
5 E% W% w& E" A2 q/ I+ {" p<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
! J$ \1 n+ K$ D8 \* n  t$ G<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
! L' x8 b$ y1 `% v9 N  `0 p8 O1 i7 w<P>我想说我爱你</P>
  V" N& x) o4 L8 `" `+ A9 N2 }3 U<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
2 a$ D; M" h7 E6 S<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
! y; K2 M# z! H, Q$ Q<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
* P4 x9 u& `1 |$ U<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
% s$ o* J; L6 }6 X2 J<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
1 i; v5 m& w# k% m( P/ l<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
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<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
7 Y$ Z' ^" F* R% f% X<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
- N9 z: S# \) @2 t2 J<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
7 l; ^8 p3 X( C; \5 u<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
* F. }8 J. a9 `$ z; k* b<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
! L- X6 H4 R- `& v! r<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
8 a- f3 f! C' b<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& X  k8 B3 C9 K; N6 t<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
4 y/ Y7 h6 k5 k1 b<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
5 g7 r% U: n8 E" b- h% A# x<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
; {# V* p% A' V: Q3 `<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

9 t  N' L' X6 L3 N7 o8 L6 l这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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8 L8 E0 O- A' N3 ^( K7 i这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! e2 ]: S# ?# Z0 j- _<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>