【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
& Q9 k" J& v% i* ?That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
  t0 S! g) J" G' I$ U) k8 Q1 r- k' cI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
" j; V, f/ Q6 H( k9 Q  W& {! |0 oBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
) k6 k, Y5 H/ E5 ]9 @: \If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
1 X: b/ i  n7 SI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
, E6 L1 u9 c: B0 Z6 }, |  NI want to confess that I love you,
9 ?, b7 y: J6 ~  S  Z5 y9 _But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
+ X* Q( {  p5 ~I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
( U" _% N0 X) ?3 FOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
& Y. ]- t# ]9 J3 Y: @, uIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
) W4 Z4 d4 P# D( |1 }Can I entrust it to you?
$ C) c& z# L  X9 W1 Z1 wEntrust my love within your heart
0 T+ X0 x' C7 yCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
2 J6 Q2 _1 I1 \7 y<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
6 |! X& ^6 W. U% w  J3 d4 y<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
5 n/ W+ H9 x0 x* M1 i9 [; s! v<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
+ T+ ~( U$ q7 o  Q; d<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
! d1 C1 G7 k$ s  r8 z- `! v<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
( f8 Q- j7 _0 m; Y8 b% |3 Y9 }<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
' V& y! d! |$ |) O) Q<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
. A: }* E9 q4 K" ~. r2 {<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
  |2 Z7 E$ ^, V5 Q7 G<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
" p5 N! I! j3 Z, T: }& Y<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
4 W  R( W% n: Q8 {) x$ J<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
! h! X) D) D% u<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
1 k- I5 [( W( R. {0 }<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
, d8 t. J. X& G7 F* N<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
) f0 I7 q. d) c( o5 ^: R- {<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
5 ^% A0 h' j& J3 R; x+ x<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
0 D1 w: F$ M2 C, U2 k! R( S<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
" J) z( V/ s9 \2 a+ {( d6 \: r<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
! ]# Q1 Z& [7 [! A6 ?' {+ G% G<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
8 y2 F9 C' j2 w  }( v<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
  C4 f5 a' A! T6 k9 b" _<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
( \! e7 E8 g* O5 f4 h1 n<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
6 r$ L& q6 ^+ d  S& Q7 @4 w& m<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
2 m* V- s: q# v5 J/ |" [% y4 l<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
7 q8 I+ t: l; p7 N* s6 x<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
) i8 ]  a* z" _$ |# u; Q# `<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
- p( T. v+ l% m- M+ K<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
) p2 d- Z" X: s! {( G+ w4 i- {<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
' V$ H* I( [- P; T<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
* T% u- ^& U2 j/ Z0 B& E<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
; r* o2 P2 \# g' V9 o& q<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
5 h' r" C! i( Y" L: D, \3 V$ R<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

# x* ~2 r& b$ o) w 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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# W, [* _# v6 R0 Y2 @9 m1 r6 u这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 A  O( H8 g! |3 q0 X<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>