【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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8 Q3 q& L( C# O- Y' i6 [- H$ d我另将歌词附在此。
$ x: q( q" M1 k9 wThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
' p' ~: @: ~. FWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
2 k9 v& Q) `) E1 I3 q( ?9 TIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
0 l1 y6 {: S5 p# iLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
- G0 b2 O: |0 WI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
! _0 Y+ Y9 n, y/ r6 F3 o7 x1 TIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
6 P5 b% z. y" M. n2 B5 [1 G) J9 tCan I entrust it to you?
3 x8 J3 R" T1 |  S4 }* t' xEntrust my love within your heart
! |. p' R* L6 S9 R  L. ~+ yLove… just the word love
7 X7 y; [' z3 EWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
7 d) O/ }' o6 u( H1 ~0 w% a8 z5 s0 DI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
/ ?) z1 m& a6 R( @" d8 {Can I entrust it to you?
! O1 b4 ]8 [7 D5 p' g! oEntrust my love within your heart
% }6 O# R% j0 o, f) |# l6 iCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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' G5 l. E1 I8 y2 e2 p( j: T/ @<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
$ I$ L: M2 [, W+ `5 x$ d6 X<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
9 d# B7 V% M5 z; _<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
8 a1 N9 Q' Q# L' Q) w" J4 R<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
" k5 a" @$ C2 V& R4 N9 r<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
$ j0 e7 d$ i0 q' \7 H. i' }<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
* y+ \9 L- ]4 M' k$ ?* m<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
  d# K# J+ O( ^  S: Y3 s6 q$ m<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
, F5 k7 f" t0 q' N* H$ j& f<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
2 t, M* U( B; A) g( Z<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
/ Q2 g; `. Q7 J<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
# j) x* [) l6 b. z/ P7 ~<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
7 u; D- o7 q( Q% h8 z<P>我想说我爱你</P>
' V# D# w6 G4 z<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
2 u( k3 j; p1 e! t  {+ R+ u<P>但我不会</P>
0 ^  ]8 M8 `, H. P. [" F& ~<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
2 j1 x" @$ t7 C! w# A1 f3 @2 z<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
0 U3 }( C/ o9 y; f4 b9 Z2 m<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
2 `7 m; F2 x( K2 |<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
* v& v8 z5 @9 j, F( H% R( z) l<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
, @  f, g8 p4 u5 h+ @, |- J<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
+ }2 e0 e/ v5 `$ P( o<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
; {! e; F+ H* j0 o7 m3 L% W<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
! i% o$ Z+ q; [' P<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
. E6 n8 `6 `0 h' X3 C2 B" m<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
" e2 k5 }4 X5 M) J<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
$ {& X8 ~9 m8 w" K9 ?<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
1 B) E+ j$ e5 q' x0 d! r<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
; o  ~+ n* A2 t( ?/ I; {$ r: U<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
( w  ~4 N1 _* J0 b# a9 m( t<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
( {9 R* v& b6 b6 e( P* z; l<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
9 k  P# T9 q$ e7 f<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
1 S! V9 I- D, n9 O<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
: W, F6 `/ q4 k9 }% H<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
. G3 S+ A5 E% @<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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/ A  F! J  D1 V, V 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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  p4 {2 L) a+ r& \; A. W) i# x这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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. _0 E3 x, a) ^* e( u0 t% x<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>