【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
6 N* x. A( M5 t4 aIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
+ L7 v' L# w. _# U, I+ _$ T- B! ^+ QWhy is it so difficult to express?
8 x. [" u5 k& l1 y4 |I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
, H5 i- r* A% KIf today isn’t too late,
9 m% t* s* i. q6 ~/ uI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
8 V2 M. i7 M+ _5 `- W0 Z) zLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
* _6 c* r& \, LOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
9 ^6 O* R6 j+ J& u4 X* JI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
# p0 T+ Q# _* t2 Q0 [Entrust my love within your heart
, _4 l3 S8 [( C  p2 j. e( ~Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

( k0 ]; A4 H+ Q( E[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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' H, t3 v5 Q+ |1 A<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
: a2 F( U9 Q4 c/ I0 A<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
6 h  D. J4 I  b$ z% u8 R<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
- n5 i. ^2 F7 c5 C4 o<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
7 y5 l2 j# d' |, Z9 I) A; D<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
# D+ W2 Y: y, O' ^7 C1 B<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
4 b+ w+ z6 {2 j5 x2 G<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
' \' F( [4 ~" ^' h<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
- m/ k* ?# m) A2 M% |<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
. {9 }5 o8 K/ J! ^! W9 T; Y<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
! R8 W+ s& l. L5 m2 F& Q# i- ?) i<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
) ]0 s& y3 T" |# }<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
$ K1 \: f& Q* f  K% a, y6 l1 P<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
6 C- }; A: }7 [$ C/ M& Z3 h<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
6 c* H% t# V5 w9 J3 Z' y<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
1 ?& }! j2 K' K& k: j4 Y0 V<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
! f6 c; f- F1 i' f1 U; J& H9 o3 R<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
% R8 E) C# k, v<P>Love… just the word love </P>
% i* x: G9 f4 i9 F5 M& C  b<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
" F2 ~$ y6 s/ [% f( o; }<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
) @6 V% R" j. t7 e) ~<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
* d# K" \) o& e; l0 I) @& D<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
, ~& V; o, _1 `1 g5 O<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
+ w  N- y+ C  {% Y7 u<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
+ q9 O, E: `% i1 h$ m4 M5 J<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
! o' e% w6 \* h: f6 ?: R<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
; G+ ~0 c6 w. U5 e. Y0 ?" t3 S9 I<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
3 N+ A2 x& `  }* t3 E8 j3 D0 c, ~<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
. @- `3 M9 B( Z. p<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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% H2 u& K" h7 C$ E这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 u) v7 c4 c( I5 E<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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5 t7 L8 S, S8 j, p" L<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>