【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
9 x8 A7 i# I$ `: @I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
* v$ n8 q+ I$ E  Q$ e. eIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
$ `. q9 L  [7 o% [# XLove… just the word love
& [; ~+ D. E* H  y* T6 K1 y. O% f" QWhy is it so difficult to express?
. W/ t& D3 z8 b8 ]8 J. h1 u% H- |I want to confess that I love you,
7 c! `& N( y( h$ [3 kBut I never did
0 G  R& L  r$ c; i8 a" {" G4 P5 nOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
$ B( d7 q$ D( O- V, ~' BI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
) L6 k) c! X9 |" p. eI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
1 x5 X  o9 W) K3 g, ULove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
) M. v2 J' a2 C1 I+ eI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
) Z2 }% G& U1 d; k  zOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
5 g4 \& R  V* Y: v, L6 G5 p- t* RI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
: x9 r* a  \, ~4 g% J! hCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
; ^; k  u' k1 f+ ^Can I entrust it to you?
2 m* S. R! j2 Y4 t4 i: |Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
4 m6 H6 q8 E- f' m3 N7 p<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
- d2 L% U: p/ m8 N<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
4 }. {5 t/ O2 i& U2 f<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
* n: l4 O9 i, [+ j+ Z<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
: i- f3 l! Z( G3 b<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
. S/ ^8 O8 Q+ O# h0 m; z<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
$ O: r$ N0 Q5 w7 v<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
) D3 S) x9 v5 j5 Z/ m1 \<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
' c. W/ \/ g& r9 \. d<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
) s$ H* U  X; H0 K<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
% r' Q; p4 @3 [1 _. c% W$ d<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
$ N* U1 N4 F* f  n& L7 J/ }<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
( T! |8 K( M  @, j<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
, i  L9 M; s  Z7 Z* c! A8 K<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
2 A" X8 a! i  A4 r% O# p4 x<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
. D  P4 m; m& n7 g2 a# f<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
2 Q* K( h# m, h6 d7 ^) K<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
  Y) l. G5 {6 w: G; L- O<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
. c# J! `4 j5 |* w$ Z% f- i  m<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
4 z9 }3 I3 O1 D+ f# K<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
+ t# R+ p6 ^' a. k, F" q<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& F5 j- y0 T. w: W* O- B4 Z<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
8 b% e. Z5 Y$ I9 Z% n( Q  L7 @3 G& P$ y<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
* a9 `2 k5 B9 R. ?( }6 A8 T: H<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
) D/ G$ W  d! E6 S$ n<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

$ ?/ E  J' s4 v+ y% ~9 ^这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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" X, v# z3 h) j' L/ M# [; c! Z* P4 d<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>