【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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& s+ }! O( H  d2 {% m( O我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
. ^4 ^# B) E  X+ U5 G! mI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
& f( I5 Z* ?9 `Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
; W% z6 ]7 x( Z( s0 e1 s4 ZI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
6 j" r: \7 f$ TOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
. i8 h  v. |8 s" H7 d5 a4 Z4 _If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
* h7 B/ }& S9 c8 G6 w, UI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
- r; I, G4 w$ u' H1 SCan I entrust it to you?
% o8 ?" y$ s7 `- m* w) gEntrust my love within your heart
! o+ x; o; J4 sLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
- p- q/ G1 ?2 J! E* U' E3 EI want to confess that I love you,
: L; B7 b! v: ^) n. EBut I never did
6 u5 Z# B' q: I4 QOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
3 ?5 G; _. L& @8 b, \7 cI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
* ?8 ?0 U# ], NCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

9 T1 O7 y7 W# g# L, M' i<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
' A1 b' n8 o# y+ z3 p<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
* P! \2 Z1 _% n  E3 c; P& G<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
0 e. q7 s' f" _, Z  Y<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
1 [1 i' V  t+ s8 [<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
9 A2 ?; L9 T+ s/ ?  \2 b<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
& y+ M( {- V, t$ }& i9 T% `<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
# w- e" H4 c! v! u( t& N+ c<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
) d' v1 Z; A9 D6 I: U# I6 L( T( G<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
9 N1 p4 b% ]% o: i  u  v9 w<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
" g$ r6 l% W1 v3 t$ ~$ @<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
. L& m& f, t& E5 J8 H<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
( X# i7 W; l1 B$ B$ f9 `<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
% P4 [5 I" ]% e% l, w3 \3 H5 Z<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
& }; m/ V  y1 |2 `; o( A<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
- |3 Y# s* \* J- _<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
8 ]( ~5 v- Y, o# N<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
3 d/ A5 ^; _3 Q" ?<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
. L/ d2 o! t/ ?<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
, q0 [- H9 A6 R, P3 O; m# e<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
$ `& Q4 q, R! a) x<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
  H# I3 Q9 `" @6 b7 l+ f9 F; g<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
) W/ y- u! S% V( f3 H7 r; Z<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
1 X6 H5 X" a* F$ i% ?<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
0 ]# ~# ?  y" B' J- Y<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
5 T- Y3 E6 ~+ g4 G' f: @<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
1 X2 E7 w; k, B- T% K<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

) |9 `+ @& J" @% b 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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* {& `% h" X& [$ N% `这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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3 q  Q/ M& l/ |/ B( w<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>