【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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6 _) V+ ~# `5 c; x+ Y我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
/ L, F5 Z$ H* y% QThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
* Z* N0 [6 L0 z5 w# V$ {I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
/ l# r0 z5 q, ]( ~But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
. o& Z4 V& c  E9 b: R" ^& @: H4 wI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
; j# u1 D' ^3 y+ [5 a( p, ^Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
3 M. f* [% t' K" n( C& Z* H( mBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
" P0 [& t( V, b( }5 @0 eIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
% h! j2 p# W* R. JI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
: q2 i3 n8 z1 s; k; z* fLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
; K) W' i# v3 U$ g  ]4 mI want to confess that I love you,
" v  @5 Q) i' h( z7 U% y& bBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
2 @, T2 M+ h  GI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
$ Q& }' d' F' C: |! N8 h; x" R<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
/ M  W2 l1 H7 ~+ L, i7 m<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
8 x" ]9 U* p* e3 x  M' q<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
0 J# m; G4 Q: u& A3 [<P>我想说我爱你</P>
0 a7 U& K- q0 x2 }<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
- \* J% H0 b1 O, R4 M$ `' p<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
3 O+ L$ p- A, D2 ~! B+ z! V<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
8 C7 R5 _9 f8 C- P( k2 R<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
0 O, d( r1 [( N- m$ v& G3 l0 g<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
7 e7 t3 d4 w# ]3 d( G2 Q. k: E<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
# a0 a, _* k% N0 e<P>Love… just the word love </P>
9 \0 S2 N) w" V! K" U; A/ J<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
# a; e( K  g2 g' e<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
$ o, I3 e( H. @( N<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
9 U% ?( P- `5 V/ d  t<P>但我不会 </P>
/ p) V! B. \# W. G6 d3 j<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
5 _* h3 |4 B1 p0 j4 k0 X( i<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
3 N- F" B8 Z& U: g' Z( j<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
; v# G: K; |: A7 Y/ l% t' V3 e" A<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
0 Q6 K# ?$ v1 i* G<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
. f, c% x' B, N8 h<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
% e7 W! Y% Z, {# b* o7 X* W6 B" o<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
" a# x4 n  _7 D5 i$ a+ {0 s<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
. _6 d  D( w5 [( `, q4 F$ a0 D<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
' P+ m4 W1 E3 ^<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

9 |; l# y) a% k+ w& f  U 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

: v: y0 X& ]; i0 d; v" e这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, C+ N+ C* s8 f6 O# P5 N7 m! L- F<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>