【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
. d2 h; [* M) v( j" b" ~The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
0 F  Z4 r- i  p+ j  P. j/ _! EI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
0 F7 H1 W. p5 O. N3 E! ?But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
' c" j/ b3 h' P2 jIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
7 d, d/ R* P  a" z: }I want to confess that I love you,
7 m( X$ ^$ \& ^2 u% z/ V0 kBut I never did
1 d# ~5 R8 J8 O3 o8 nOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
) Z: Q6 y( y" \Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
9 V% |9 U( x$ c+ |6 M) ELove… just the word love
9 ~+ {0 |# ?8 Y& c* Z+ uWhy is it so difficult to express?
0 x  u! _1 g) nI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
1 m/ j0 e  ]) h2 A& A6 XI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
1 U5 o3 K, R& u8 P7 {2 CEntrust my love within your heart
9 P+ H2 p$ B7 \" W' W2 K: i+ nCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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: F9 _  z" p# ]5 O2 N[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
, p2 j/ Y: V9 e<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
2 G& a0 P9 Z) M" `<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
7 |0 E  i7 N3 X8 H<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
# X- z; @2 {. R/ F5 N, \<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
1 I+ e! g! A5 A0 n5 F<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
) h7 u0 F9 C, u9 F1 R<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
3 n9 q$ M* M7 a6 |& E; a4 S<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
+ X4 H9 l! W. v1 e; ]* D+ N<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
3 _- m, T3 G) i7 G/ J2 M<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
6 j9 p, v  ]- s' R2 `' j( W<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
- |6 C- i. w/ B0 K2 k; ?5 ^# b<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
1 ~! I( [- ]  r* W* K<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
8 t  r9 k- _3 w4 A<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
& o6 }) K  A( U3 C/ ^<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
$ a1 v6 Y# ^6 ~  s& G6 t! K" X<P>我想说我爱你</P>
6 Y& v/ t& X( K- {$ {<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
# P0 p5 c9 }0 q( Q3 d# E( ]<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
+ r7 K8 }9 e) ~1 d2 U6 K<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
9 t/ N; h1 c4 `  c<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
9 U$ w" Z' Y& R' k  W$ \( f<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
7 G0 H- @. F" e1 ~<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
" j8 K; s, _9 B. V) C, w$ T7 X; X7 w<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
) O2 y/ j. _* z  c$ H<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
! Z. \  i8 g, }<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
. S1 D1 u4 \5 |% o<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
# ?* K: ?( T& `: j7 j+ Y9 e0 i<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
0 m3 P/ d+ {- p- T; `+ A" n<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
3 {' k4 N4 J' S% x0 r<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
. J8 R% O" @; q  i<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
2 ~1 h2 D1 A$ u4 }. g8 Z  g2 w<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
9 I& m+ J/ l* `; y/ p<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
# `; D3 Y$ e1 v0 A<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
, g: v8 z/ a: T, \" ]. o& `, d0 r7 Z<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
3 R( n$ s6 g( [% ?( D<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
- }- G7 |3 a$ Q& h; ^<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
( _9 A4 g- s# g, _<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
5 l4 I9 Q3 T3 K* B% K8 Q<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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! X/ a4 l7 x* |+ C这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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) `5 E2 p) v, y- m<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>