【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
: k* b3 B  b( V4 [But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
. n. S! v  H% ^* \! O: _If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
5 Y- s# I% H% U3 L& m) w; b% ]I would probably know how you feel
% n' y# x- ~0 Q" @! \Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
8 y( c# d' N, K, N* ^I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
6 s! q( F/ z2 p- M0 {1 Y/ qOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
9 ?7 U2 d. S2 n$ ~If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
7 Q, i2 w7 P3 R4 D- y2 kI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
8 `- ^& z/ i" x- jCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
. S2 H  c  c1 s( f1 z, ]. DWhy is it so difficult to express?
  B3 u0 g; r$ {- zI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
7 V, R' R" G4 i5 {/ w' K: {If today isn’t too late,
% _! M- h: ?2 b+ w2 c" O$ X( d" fI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
- M1 z! N3 D! F: ~7 E+ wEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

) `4 f4 W  k1 {) Q& Y/ `[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
7 T% ^# T1 b  G$ A+ d: ]: f<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
% L$ t3 W. k$ [- r5 \<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
7 X2 B5 e1 X8 [, k<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
8 d6 ~0 W2 H' I' g<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
5 ~* B: {4 V2 _/ f- g$ f6 q<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
6 J: y2 F/ ?; j3 F( E<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
% C' e4 T; N2 r/ i0 t* b5 E<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
2 g6 t6 c8 _% j  ^. |<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
8 i  m) R/ G& x% [<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
5 y+ R& W& ?' n! P<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
4 }: E. Y% s+ x<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
! c$ B) k- v. A: z( ?! [* }$ q0 X5 E7 r<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
4 V" t1 P/ U+ L( r+ z9 t<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
) p6 c1 D4 `6 g& v3 U  O" c<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
6 h& y" _( \8 x; i+ K<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
- {6 q* {; x' `9 V! [/ F<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
0 [5 u9 T8 H# q5 `% |<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
9 p; o0 ?8 }, M8 j  m<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
4 q0 _" W# S9 v6 \& Z<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
6 ]  F9 w2 r9 K% v, t2 M<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
0 V! L1 P8 a( t5 f! ]/ @: c<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
( V1 t& `& k% K  l# |<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
; r5 q; a! |. L0 Z<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
, M$ ?: ^  f6 f<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
( @9 K# q1 l8 w2 }; n0 j" Q8 o<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
& m4 i, S1 `7 z. S5 q<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
7 d- N& f: A! K/ l, ?% D<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
, W; _# I. S6 ~! M& |1 {<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
. {: e9 ]8 `5 D4 b* l- [<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
' ?5 R9 O' D. H: u+ x, G<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
4 [& m; ^- U. T/ l3 s: ?6 T; g<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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7 p- M# _1 [5 @  z- o+ o. H& f这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( O. S. c8 d* E<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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+ b; ~. i; e. O+ b3 {  w4 a5 n<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>