【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
3 b/ G( n+ u9 W9 t4 }- y( Y; {From the first moment we met,
" \. G% O9 ?- g6 {5 D6 Q" a# II already loved you with all my heart
) i, n1 f) K: I6 D: XWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
) H2 E* _5 @3 U6 j! F* CIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
6 w1 s* @0 `: J7 j) r2 L+ |I would probably know how you feel
( ^: `' G9 t" w) |' v: A. a8 t7 dLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
2 H. v; N, p8 w- ^2 X! {But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
3 d" m/ L: ]) wIf today isn’t too late,
9 d6 l) r4 Z6 C: O% v( }$ E* uI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
1 @4 F, _4 t1 x& k4 `I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
. R. J2 q* {; X; S2 pLove… just the word love
2 @' X( k. G0 a4 }2 [! kWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
# L7 r- T  O# E6 S1 ?  T$ V+ sBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
& Z0 T1 E  U6 _  ZIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
' {7 f! u; ~  R8 N' eCan I entrust it to you?
9 B1 Q6 Z# l3 F7 |- y# c- z& g( _Entrust my love within your heart
1 y- e' H# ~6 ]) _& B. c$ `Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

, l1 K' g8 u+ m% t( n<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
- Y# Z2 \0 z9 K# c7 I  O<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
+ G& d8 z# f8 W  W7 n2 L<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
$ D* y3 V/ R+ l<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
" e) H$ d5 B+ q( j5 I<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
1 X$ P% H" F2 g8 M1 ~: m<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
& H* E- r; M# h% x& j; c! ~1 E<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
0 o" P+ s" e% G- ^7 E% ^" z1 l' W<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
' X, }# t$ m$ I( a5 A<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
% f" Z# |) s5 b1 C; j. k. Y& h<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
+ @5 b- Z" @! h% f3 k1 H" }" l<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
3 ^0 l. v; G% y; `<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
4 g# ]$ l- L9 {- O2 e/ {<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
* G6 \. S- B  n& o& H, c<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
( v) b$ i& \  T# o; m( P<P>我想说我爱你</P>
. V7 s1 P8 l3 `* `4 X<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
( {5 @) W$ X. t$ _: e* v. K<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
" K1 [8 t9 i0 h8 F8 e! S$ u' j: |<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
7 U: k5 \7 `* h) g# {8 G" S9 _! g+ G<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
$ r/ c  c% S' h: w" |' u1 w<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
( |- F+ }0 {5 l  q) |! T<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
- Z7 ]2 y! S1 f<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
# _$ K: M& G! I, K/ m; c<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
. A. N* b& O+ u3 P" B# J4 k<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
$ a/ R! S) C  W6 r. F& ]<P>But I never did </P>
. T8 s+ e* f4 S4 s8 b& G! _. y/ d# P' |. b<P>但我不会 </P>
, C. E, }" w' J6 J+ O<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
  }" b( Q2 s8 I/ _" \7 D<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
& L: L# G- n6 c8 `<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
" T! Z$ T3 L$ m+ W2 @  }, Q2 u<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
/ G3 z! |1 r7 S7 E<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
8 p' R; d$ i' Q0 O<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
; x( f$ l& }  `6 u7 r<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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0 I* D. M& N) j/ v3 ~7 S& }0 l; p 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

9 [$ T# b+ d6 J  v' i这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' R! q( a" P0 m2 `$ L3 [$ W<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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' F( H/ A& h; G$ d8 G<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>