【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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3 A; C# M. ~/ n! r& N7 p我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
4 d$ E- G7 W) `- d; x% _That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
8 Z2 X1 w) u! G1 _1 F! g* ZWe meet and talk everyday,
/ i2 N! q) j/ c* x; N( q9 _But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
* V5 b  I9 C3 F# q3 iWhy is it so difficult to express?
8 j  T% W% k! ?8 L* k8 VI want to confess that I love you,
; r) k2 k- Y) k0 wBut I never did
+ A& g. l* K& w& L/ s4 _" ?$ [One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
6 _" h! t, s  C2 B/ F+ S( j! }If today isn’t too late,
; W7 L" W; f9 y7 t6 nI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
! m9 D6 h3 f& yCan I entrust it to you?
) W( @5 g$ I8 i, l! \! G1 L/ [Entrust my love within your heart
4 M7 J+ C8 ^: ^1 U, M- O: k+ \Love… just the word love
* ~5 _- k. a! ]- W* k' PWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
, V6 X+ q: i6 |) qBut I never did
2 ]2 ]4 V5 m9 r; y# aOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
% ?5 f: E; @+ \; ~If today isn’t too late,
: N* v1 C' |4 [8 @, H' O9 w2 NI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
* m* \' C7 D2 t3 D2 }, E& l: @5 Z: ?Can I entrust it to you?
9 n' `& s) Y( A: F1 X! r* ^Entrust my love within your heart
) t% f3 c5 D6 G3 A/ G, eCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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! x; a/ U" _* a[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
3 h( M% I; T( @3 n6 f<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
& ^( d) }! A$ E$ l9 j<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
. A! x0 f' B1 W<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
  P% ?4 I* ]& S. P# I& i0 u<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
& \; }% ]7 e% s" \1 j' s<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
: ]+ v8 n5 L% A4 z! |# K<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
& e" @% Y6 r& H! k8 z% G<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
7 o$ g- J% l& E! O* G9 s. `9 |<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
- v2 [# n+ V' c1 O2 }<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
7 O- x( b, z& {& i" Y. B0 A9 y<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
: e7 K# [& \. U7 G/ }7 L  [<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
: t3 |8 g, L0 `$ C<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
, S' a$ ~+ f& e' S/ }<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
: W$ [; q5 \- n6 ~/ f<P>我想说我爱你</P>
) a% V3 C3 Q# B4 z( M# \<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
! x- F& ~8 T3 A5 ]$ v<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
5 f) ^# Y; g9 p<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
  j9 z- g, j# y" B<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
. B; ~2 \! B& u  d' e9 m* ]5 r<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! n( o. Z- H2 @; W/ U% @+ r<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
# N5 W' F5 d* Y( A& ~<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
  f4 x! }- n, Y& F% |- k0 a4 V9 S<P>Love… just the word love </P>
# }" _+ L. L, S) `. h# u<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
; w% A3 _- C' D: P& o<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
7 {* q, r* ]$ b: u<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
/ _9 t  ]' C/ c$ U<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
; S; i& k6 n( G6 E: G) M<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
$ e" I' A0 f5 [$ Y$ E<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
% u, @: p5 R% o( f. S$ n<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
* j+ F9 C3 k* w/ w, ^<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
: J" [- v. [! u+ O<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
6 R( ~' C- ^& @( R. P<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
9 V9 Y5 Y4 L& J. O<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
8 Y' r1 ?- F5 G8 P0 G3 {& Q7 f<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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5 R; E4 j2 F6 W 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

, |5 w5 a# n& @, s3 v% I这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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) m+ r% G/ m; N# ^6 b0 G: O<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>