【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
, }0 v$ x0 `3 F( `$ E/ q% n  ^The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
* o% e. u6 E6 c# hThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
- Z0 A2 T" L9 B, ]9 n& y' NI already loved you with all my heart
& Z" n: c! @; U( }We meet and talk everyday,
& {" n" j/ c( B% jBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
  v* ]1 _- B, G5 lIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
9 M! X5 p. H, O( {$ pLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
. y. y2 ~( P! M3 v6 K: i) t! KOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
# X1 C: `# d4 J, w7 K- p; MIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
% k& O% F( n7 M+ }I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
, l4 X, g5 k1 O2 l: yCan I entrust it to you?
, o" B8 U. b! LEntrust my love within your heart
( m! f. N3 J/ l  P0 G3 P4 u( b1 j- E9 qLove… just the word love
+ g  ~/ ~" F4 Z8 }& {3 m* g/ b1 H: rWhy is it so difficult to express?
, c- I5 i. I; WI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
' M& O3 p  w6 U) `, a' oOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
) k1 E9 r1 B& ~I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
5 E4 u- @4 N* p" {$ P4 w1 sI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
  q* V3 P# A! E: K) q) k4 ZEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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6 R" ~% P4 q  a9 }8 o, |8 w<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
0 [6 \7 d& o4 Z2 e; G8 C7 A<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
/ V! g3 C' T& d$ z<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
4 ~. J/ G# y2 i/ v<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
9 z7 r" q9 x% ~; f  u' {! N<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
$ r: M2 J- y5 \' z<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
, i2 d- x2 d( j7 G2 _2 _# c<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
& Y/ s/ p7 _/ ?9 ^3 R7 a! Z- O<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
: w8 t2 D& t& x. H  x( q<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
' v; D. v; J! i; N<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
' i, p& a$ F9 _: p1 D4 o: ]% w<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
) B9 k) |7 R0 K. ]: n<P>我想说我爱你</P>
2 }* h* d% m2 a4 \<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
- W3 z. y/ |0 u# W  ^& i<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
5 I0 h  m% A/ z6 A1 n<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
7 M3 [4 E; c3 |% l<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
+ A& q9 A4 x9 p1 m<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
9 q4 c: q3 i* m5 a1 h<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
% T" M5 d% k6 t* x* r<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
: Z. E  a. g  J2 |7 [0 B<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
8 v, M  X# @' H; U. b& M<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
- k2 V9 O9 z, O4 w<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
% Z1 F" Q/ A5 R- w& h: e7 S9 C- m<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
( F& M! `: w6 E' w) U  N8 W<P>但我不会 </P>
, i( O, A. N; A6 y8 Y6 R$ Q4 M<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
) H+ L  ?3 I) m1 ~<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
8 x9 T6 B( }) d<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
# ?2 u/ O1 J, I' o% f6 ?  R<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
- k3 x; E$ k* e5 p+ P: r<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
. h4 Z8 e0 i% p+ n+ b, z<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
% m* f2 j5 m, e; G<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
8 [; ~% w: m! \: k; E3 c/ M( {/ e<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
/ x! x6 A; E8 l. G: d. Z* j5 X<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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+ k, S! s) H& l% d/ `. O 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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* k9 v) z; A5 ~<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>