【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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# i! l+ i* I- c' C1 q我另将歌词附在此。
0 I/ v$ Q3 d8 V5 n) \# e  ^( t& ]The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
% z" N/ k6 a/ PThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
7 A7 v+ e: M* d. k' VI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
8 m7 Z! f. D1 O- _6 mWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
: x* o( C# _: n6 p# P# ~But I never did
/ P1 d, X- w$ g9 @$ j2 aOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
5 N+ o$ K. O- [" j) hI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
1 E1 K6 \+ }  O+ F, mEntrust my love within your heart
: B' a6 a' s% V$ y) FLove… just the word love
7 n' Q. J: H+ j' |# n8 qWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
. U4 J; G" k3 dBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
0 L7 s: B! }/ jIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
- B; G( @+ K3 @0 }% ^  WI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
/ N! T; _( ?/ E# J( z4 tEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
- c6 ], ~. J6 j* x6 K& _2 j, wEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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* _! U  [" Y9 S2 \) e7 W  F<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
  c/ s  u. a& F1 J4 J- [+ A<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
0 N) \. ]9 _2 [; j( K6 R<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
5 q! _( S" `* k: G7 ~<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
' ~9 L9 Q: p+ P3 Y- C! H$ B<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
" V& B* O, h' z  x  f<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
+ y, s+ q/ Y# q1 |- d- ]3 x. k<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
7 Q1 G- C, w% n/ z- |! P, [<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
1 G8 g( S* Y/ \& `, w4 _9 @<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
, K+ G3 s& W& }. F8 }  D<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
/ h* V! P; [; I* q<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
0 u+ \. P$ a2 f* ^8 |( _  H<P>但我不会</P>
( L( X, D* h$ e  u. q( }- n3 n0 ^) R<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
- m% x. L' U% d2 r7 c& c<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
1 X" T# x8 Y) [4 z# T( N<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
& S+ Q, `4 d2 k6 D: Z<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
8 B- X' X7 I1 S- ?<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
8 K3 v/ L' j* R<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
7 \5 [4 ]3 h! Q) |' U8 c9 g  ?<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
+ u1 V' [" Y. _<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
: P7 a4 D0 u8 Z<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
) i6 \2 A* D' a: \" |$ N+ L5 y<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
. m) F3 h( c$ b3 {<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
" ]9 }4 i2 G/ t- P4 c1 E2 b<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
* G( |- o' z+ ~8 g% Y' G1 i! S<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
9 ^1 P# R/ H) C3 p7 }<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
) M$ j# L: v4 X6 G+ ~<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
  ^( I6 S% a7 x2 `! H2 C* F# Z<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
' O! [! v" e& {5 q# Y2 K<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

$ M) A8 N* H' x+ [+ o 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' ]* [8 W' f8 j; ~<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>