【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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9 j+ m+ x; M* b! L我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
$ J0 i% l) x" U" s4 M8 n1 jThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
3 C+ _5 _, D3 v4 y+ K' sFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
4 I& E7 z/ b" ]- T# |We meet and talk everyday,
+ I5 ~. |, }$ d8 RBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
. T- A  ~$ [1 ~4 K* F$ KIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
" H+ m7 R0 _3 t9 sI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
8 v0 T) n8 v- m/ V' EWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
; q8 C- [0 f. z/ I# b3 O6 VI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
. N0 a; a! _9 s$ o7 O, CLove… just the word love
  x/ X0 t: p7 z6 \% I; b; nWhy is it so difficult to express?
* h: |$ h2 z$ J* d& [# D8 B  E2 kI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
, S$ b# b8 u" }5 ]' zCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

6 h7 P% q* P. S6 ~# R$ v[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
) [% R( B) w: _3 _0 {<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
7 ~+ C/ p7 z2 q" }# ]' n5 Q<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
6 |/ P, u( H* ]- N( t9 J3 T2 J<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
; U& @" i' E3 G4 |6 {<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
, A& ]& z' S2 [% P7 t  j6 v" @! S<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
- {! c8 @( `0 d/ |. X3 M<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
+ b* Q4 y: p! F<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
  O- |0 K# R% H: ~6 G<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
4 a: ~: }0 v  k5 o) P) r<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
* h' ~9 e$ X7 u9 J5 c8 V' z' r7 x<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
1 G9 A+ ]/ w5 o' S) K<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
4 o. F3 M% a: t) ^. G<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
6 K* w+ Y% I( E  L. A<P>我想说我爱你</P>
; m6 d" V( W, m' T$ c' X5 u<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
; ]3 g1 t$ `5 w: T# {! k5 h5 F<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
, C$ [  Q# n& K: [0 e. p<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
! w* r* k" v; X) F& t" K<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
7 S; u3 B# t, m+ e<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
, ~( S5 R' z4 A) y<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
/ p" a5 d( v, f! X; I& l<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
' ~/ G5 l8 l) h% Z+ H$ V<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
' C+ f; f7 }/ Q4 `+ m. s<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
% E; ]& A. S; J* A. T<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
" w5 j% F" N- O0 b<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
) r3 ]5 J) H8 e2 Q) {8 s2 M1 @<P>But I never did </P>
) T# T: i2 }7 f4 U( k<P>但我不会 </P>
! ?2 X6 b7 e& K) d6 S<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
# p+ j* H* Y. Y" z! S<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
9 i" \' K. V/ B+ a8 W7 ?<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
) c  u- g- X( x8 f9 g3 N0 |<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
; y4 A. {- l. g% a9 k/ N# B<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
( ~( m( K5 h: q. t4 D  {- K9 K<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
& L4 A( o" H8 {0 `5 u: f<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
6 I; i: c6 U+ }/ H; k<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
) v  Q0 t1 \1 n6 z, q0 R1 o9 F<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
9 ?- c  l- z5 h" t8 S! ~# ~<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
7 V% O* }5 I9 }2 i, y* e5 n' t) I<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
& W  m4 {& L# g0 W# w& E<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

& Z* `& e! |- z: r, B4 T 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

9 e/ e1 H9 X  b这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% d1 H7 K% Y2 n. [<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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$ u! p' b* C: N. _; Y<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>