【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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% z% H2 o! `9 d2 t0 `4 p我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
% ~% w6 W  ~# SI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
1 J  o3 ]% j3 P2 d( `+ I4 V) vBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
+ A* v+ U' A& l: P1 \8 MIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
, Y" Z, E8 g! T/ k8 \Why is it so difficult to express?
  \- @/ A6 w# N# n, {: v: \# wI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
) v) S# c* h2 |  I2 K7 oOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
+ d& G* g! l7 z% V8 L8 X8 TIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
, h( H& M, t* C) v* x* rI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
5 D! q) m5 A2 @$ q" \Can I entrust it to you?
9 ^( T3 D; u; f, t' E1 Z+ q9 ?Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
/ S/ e8 d9 N5 E/ c2 AI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
2 ~: O, R8 J8 g$ H$ U  u  N7 JIf today isn’t too late,
! l' w5 d$ ^5 U$ F# aI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
2 R# E" \. U6 U( F) LI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

3 m7 L( ?8 N5 I  B- x6 A$ T" V
+ l8 W4 s  ~# l/ h& ~$ w<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
! H. Y  X" R$ \& E( L( g# H<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
; h9 }- d4 h6 S5 X0 O7 T0 i<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
( b8 B0 @( t) d! a9 w<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
3 Y$ ^' H- L9 Y- w4 J<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
7 r  ]7 n2 B" y! {<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
0 o2 F# E- g+ r<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
2 T) h, u0 C0 a: F0 }<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
; [1 q+ N8 Q7 B3 y  B$ L<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
) Y. I8 ?* }9 H) s<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
6 r0 @/ k6 s& L2 L: p; Q<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
+ A" a) @5 L' v( E<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
( \" ?2 J7 Q% p) g) U. R! m<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
( [# s- g. [4 n& P  A5 {<P>但我不会</P>
( |- r  c" J9 E# t: B<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
( ~, H4 o, L6 M. Y4 e<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
2 V% w  Z4 @) U<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
5 a6 v% I& f* `9 \- M<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
, L/ V1 C! `% Q. X, i8 T/ t0 ~1 ?<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
; U* |( W4 v! D( j: J, `: V* x) t<P>Love… just the word love </P>
  J& H* b' Y/ b8 N' j- w<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
  S3 U& @4 U8 Q$ q  V. V# V<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
; j  `4 U# N+ i/ T/ t/ k4 _<P>但我不会 </P>
7 O) U, Z. B" k# B* }* x6 D( k<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
# F4 x( {- e- C3 K' R<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
; I5 d* o% I, T<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
8 k5 g' e8 m' l0 s" a$ B<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
5 K! h' ^8 l0 V+ s- S5 g<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
6 P1 C0 o' t. M4 V4 t; h) G2 C2 g/ n<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
0 g0 o8 u# ^  ?0 Y" @) I<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
0 z$ r! ?/ I8 p- O<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

. G! e1 s8 r; K" I5 o<P>

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; X- ?1 V" ^  I* }+ [<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>