【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
! y% Q* `! f+ D% QThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
8 a% I, X/ Y4 L4 A) ]. y/ PThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
4 O# }+ @6 J0 G0 VFrom the first moment we met,
, P- G2 M2 @% O+ F$ YI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
) j) m  h+ J# e  H9 U* WIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
% b) X, p5 W7 K& eI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
* I8 C5 v$ f4 c2 [  }! [: ^Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
; ~! ]$ H: }# l2 FBut I never did
. o% g7 V& A1 V: ~# V" AOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
* G: w0 d. |5 V0 M5 C* ~- x. pIf today isn’t too late,
8 x2 K6 B* U% GI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
6 g* m1 M( @: Z9 N. R. b" y0 {Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
; o% _( `6 s& lWhy is it so difficult to express?
5 q' v" Y3 I( h* Z0 SI want to confess that I love you,
0 n5 d- C7 \7 rBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
# x. {. X+ w" e2 g6 S: j% iIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
$ L! \" i; X. k( m  ECan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
) O7 r0 z# p' A' `/ PCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

- s! c% }: N1 [- Y, D<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
. s- v5 j! P1 V6 E0 l/ S4 |<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
) {" B: M1 c! w2 z' Z7 K4 l1 W' E<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
9 ?. z% ~$ X* N6 u, e<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
( f* L$ \, Q; K, P<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
+ D, H/ I3 c' F4 P8 A9 g<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
6 K% z) ?+ n9 N6 E<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
1 E( ~9 G/ ?- V4 q<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
( h6 u( K2 h* ?<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
0 d% U! P# [7 a, C<P>我想说我爱你</P>
0 p& W- |; I0 d! V, A<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
4 N$ ^" L4 b$ M<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
' B1 j. R4 x1 \4 R<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
( a% V: z' [* o' Q" K& V" Q- M<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
9 S+ q7 u9 O  A+ V7 z<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
/ K9 R8 R, k7 O3 u; R9 a6 Q% Z<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
* T* @! V! `- C% ?<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
1 H; D# G7 h6 ^  t1 u0 U<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
) l* q4 i6 G/ d8 n<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
) y' E$ n( u6 \- s% B<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
2 ]2 `8 C0 U1 n' j<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
3 A* z2 n7 N! N<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
. g! |) z$ z# R<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
& {# a6 f* e7 ]  A3 W& V<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
! P6 {0 t$ b+ ]" l4 Z<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
1 }# U( h/ P+ e<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
. H; w+ O) _) v0 I<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
+ \' X: M( S0 V  s$ {/ p% Q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
6 g, @( S# P4 i7 q, C1 s<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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8 ^) Z) y1 T+ O8 G 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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) ~8 ^3 _. b# d/ T<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>