【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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- y. H- u+ \8 y  H+ j我另将歌词附在此。
6 ]( `. i8 O$ k+ K, D! \0 vThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
9 J/ F" {5 F% nFrom the first moment we met,
7 p- T9 e8 ~9 Q+ M9 |0 uI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
/ M+ E5 S- W8 Q5 G& p# RLove… just the word love
8 H& }: L0 O8 o7 ~+ tWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
: U/ H8 h  i" {( U$ XOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
- l  [/ u* `% sIf today isn’t too late,
* N; |! x! h$ M* c7 WI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
- p* ~9 Y0 n8 ?/ zEntrust my love within your heart
0 m# ]2 `, N% n: x/ t8 `. SLove… just the word love
6 m9 [" n" N0 A2 yWhy is it so difficult to express?
" g# ]  Z* \/ ^* r- KI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
# Z) w9 U: }3 N) N1 DCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

8 Z0 V5 r% A" _- D9 E2 D, |" E- i) s6 t<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
5 f$ X, L; \. k7 f1 ]: y8 I" J<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
, Y2 ~( S" z; ^% m) N<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
9 Y( C2 T2 |1 R. N5 i3 ]4 [1 m, y3 R4 U<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
5 k' k6 H% O0 o* a<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
! u3 y( n' T4 S# B7 t/ P<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
% y6 @8 i$ _- Q<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
9 G* M, X$ G" G3 h<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
+ c8 M2 l/ a) E<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
% k* d1 P. I7 l% M3 b5 R<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
, a3 b/ Y, I, U, E) X<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
* p2 i9 u1 Q8 J: q& q, `8 `" o1 ?1 D<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
, I8 e. k& }5 c2 Z/ j<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
8 q- ]# r8 g7 u<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
! e4 W1 `) T3 M# {+ a0 y<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
' O, r: h& g9 K' D3 L<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
1 F5 x0 ?4 V- i0 }2 m0 l9 `<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
& C; S9 l/ x- A1 w% v<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
1 k. z3 P2 m: E$ o<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
, h5 p. j" Q1 }5 W: X/ A<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
4 d; Q: X; i$ x% m& r3 n<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
& i+ L; v2 ~: y( ?) G<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
" x1 N' Y. p8 B. W# M2 ?) a<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
# _8 x% F' h: x, v<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
5 d: R' J0 s! z& e4 t<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
* h, X  o' [( k- G& }. \  T9 |<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
0 g3 f( y# m4 o<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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) Y, s6 p, m& d3 p5 ~5 b8 G 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% ?! H1 b; j% ^/ g4 V& N% a<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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