【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
8 t: H2 W, Q4 W7 B2 f- [4 `That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
5 I  y7 U/ @' B+ e4 vI would probably know how you feel
; {" q7 M+ k) _Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
% |5 C+ ]1 Y- X: D+ ]' EBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
0 V6 M) c) M6 X" h0 h; oIf today isn’t too late,
. u. C2 ?3 N4 WI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
$ Q+ K2 `, Y& X" ?5 \I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
  p) e( m8 u# A0 z* L+ J, \Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
3 j% X4 w, W7 T: \# ^Love… just the word love
7 V& @7 x( t( b3 \$ I+ }Why is it so difficult to express?
, U/ f9 ~" P7 S  rI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
2 E7 V0 e  K/ Q0 u. fIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
  q9 m* H# W; }+ D* I5 @I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
% B/ U. F1 W' |! E6 `Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

! h3 T! d9 K9 p2 x, i" v<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
9 b# @" ~& A" |4 e4 y7 m<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
( F( I( J/ G3 a$ [5 w# U<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
2 D' v" @- Y2 o, g% Q' a9 |<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
7 B$ [/ H& g; V# J/ c0 e<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
- J; N3 x- v( p$ I<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
' y" W6 p) R% Q( v6 K; W& K<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
7 G/ `9 E% r" N) f! M<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
. f- N6 w1 Y& `+ c' ~# j7 O<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
4 Y: j! z  R- z$ l6 k4 d$ y  X/ _<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
; d! b. b4 |+ M3 u<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
! g4 N+ c- M# f3 N- H' b* j<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
3 Y1 f" o, ^3 o1 E' W* U: K<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
0 h4 y: q5 W5 M8 T7 b8 F0 K- {( d<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
1 B/ v' Q* _1 C4 }: F<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
) Z# g1 q  Z$ b* n2 t2 }9 D. D<P>但我不会</P>
" m0 s9 o0 I6 w/ Q+ f9 j) Q<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
  @& x. ?- [* L3 O8 s- D' O<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
. i# ?2 {" I& G% g% P* `4 F8 O<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
* W; H9 U: o# N% C$ t" V<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
% S) W: G1 r) d9 G$ U<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
9 d  p" G* s! X! M5 z<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
( y& X0 C- R) }5 S% |' t/ _, d<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
3 p8 v* p& k% P<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
" b! \" g* ^) L4 a% X; x<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
8 J* e( a- b/ X5 }, G+ e" a<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
9 ?! A1 A6 L- I9 b$ R& c9 O1 q<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
0 @( z" O: Q9 N0 P/ ?0 E<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
# m# J* i# v8 }1 @2 }0 {<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
; x: d1 ^0 E6 R3 C# u; E$ g<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
  Q$ n5 g) i. t# ?<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
; u6 u; e5 n" T7 z/ m  q<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
. X+ Y, O7 u8 G! k* G<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
, e1 K2 Z3 j: J2 V<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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5 u! D! }6 F  ?: p; @( z- f( Y这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>