【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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* H6 \4 n5 d1 X% ]& l我另将歌词附在此。
" O$ b8 F  U/ Z# h) O  JThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
* r$ @$ L( g+ C2 }/ o0 [That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
( d8 i1 r# w3 a' N# k. |# V' A4 m5 kI already loved you with all my heart
2 o" Y5 h+ G. g$ DWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
" J0 E7 X- n. \) w' LIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
1 d5 F9 F' Y, g3 t0 lI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
$ R9 i8 K: @4 K6 XCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
# J, z% m( R' t; s5 m# uLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
- o& P$ |- b% E1 M0 A) D! D1 wI want to confess that I love you,
8 B' x' m  b9 P6 S, @But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
4 X' m$ A; |# [" U. X6 z, bCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
: @* V. f* {" G7 u% q5 g4 jCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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% I2 N+ h3 x& G! ^8 ~, [<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
9 i: N+ E! t: @. Q$ u+ J; m<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
% S( x3 u% z5 R. ]<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
& E4 i' _5 c8 V! {1 o5 Y3 s4 a6 P<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
* ]+ i1 {! p1 f' s0 e) i$ b<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
8 W2 u# n7 S" E/ T" y0 d<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
0 ?# C! ]  d, d+ n3 h5 v; h<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
6 E) |3 @- `4 J5 C" X. ~<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
; R6 K) ]* S) i/ G7 T4 Z<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
2 k8 Z) Z) ^2 b( U+ y2 d<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
! [( Z; g. e# E8 F+ t0 x<P>我想说我爱你</P>
" E3 n% n& Q8 i; O6 c<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
& S* v% S8 B$ r6 L4 Z! u% B<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
( ^! e4 l1 n: Y, C, V3 U<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
3 {0 p9 k6 B0 p6 k, f<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
$ W( S* X; W8 O" w. I( S<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
6 o& O* o- ^* O  f: x, s# N<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
; B) |# ^7 b7 L8 @9 T<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
! {4 Q$ q  b- S+ t4 B8 Y<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
; f# X6 o! [7 @<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
) n! }0 b) A8 b# n- C) n  i6 t<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
% [6 I, D, ?+ k0 T<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
) f% @+ a( ]& ^<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
* J: W( i0 P( \( H<P>但我不会 </P>
# l: q5 G  ^3 O' C2 c3 X" P<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
/ Q9 C" y6 G" z0 Z<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
' c9 i0 z, j3 L' @% |8 N! R<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
$ S/ F; V' c1 o<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
& c0 T/ l9 d! `' }  J: `2 {" K<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
8 {, Y/ U! `# e+ L<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
+ A2 `$ g/ o$ l( e0 @# Y( H<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
) l( n; o5 Q; K* K<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
9 A, S$ o, b. G. E<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
  k7 F9 ?4 g# h' o- ^; o<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
& S* G( i* {$ C6 @, G<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

3 X" W. x2 N; D/ [这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% u1 p8 [8 b0 T# h<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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3 x4 O+ Z% O9 b  B: z" ~# U$ `; h<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>