【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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/ }' L* F  q+ L* J我另将歌词附在此。
5 \9 r4 m0 u+ T: ?- C& h/ BThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
5 V; K4 \& H# L4 t) \; B9 v0 e. d: M) {From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
& S: A1 X; S$ E& ~1 KIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
; o6 m( a: {9 h; d5 c% hWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
2 b0 g# L' f7 UBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
( e  `: k6 y+ u% C0 t* H& p( oCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
5 C' F, D$ P; ?8 A3 o) jLove… just the word love
( m( Z# ?4 l9 u$ UWhy is it so difficult to express?
8 U) o$ l: ~* J9 [I want to confess that I love you,
- I. W. N6 c- `But I never did
% X2 G- n3 n0 o- V5 C3 tOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
6 z, a& f  q& ~4 d% T1 VI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
# e- o3 T2 O% V5 s$ V4 P- |$ WEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
) O: n; S8 e; H* u. `<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
' g8 o  u. a1 l1 P+ y3 {<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
- F9 l( d0 ]2 f" f, \  H& f<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
/ l! W* ~  Z% W<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
6 E, S; }. z$ {; _6 X<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
3 `) w2 ^5 q8 H6 q<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
  I% r  t* O+ n( w5 {<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
6 t9 \) v+ J. U<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
  B4 Q. C! R6 x* B5 M<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
* ~' U1 s( K- H& Z6 q<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
3 P; A5 ]1 y& Z2 e7 U8 z<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
  h' r9 `5 s- C/ f$ J9 S% ~<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
5 u( E0 K9 L1 Y: K) ^<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
0 h9 j4 U+ W0 `<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
  j6 \" }! C: y; m# M6 R% m2 B, I<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
$ q, b- I3 q1 V9 S1 L, ]! `9 u: [<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
0 b! n: T. x' U) m6 h- X- y<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
: X! O% b& g" T<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
* `" j0 S) U7 \<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
9 }  K$ N- I) J7 b! b" n' f<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
6 ?; x5 L8 Z0 W2 j( s<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
! P$ V4 g" r: V6 i" _; Q" h<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
) [1 W4 ]1 ^: X) F! [  @4 M7 h; G' q6 T<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
8 O/ t8 L% ]& l- b  m' m2 [<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
! @1 G% j2 k1 F  X<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
, W5 I" ^" O" p6 F# F/ s<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& R+ b, ~* V+ ?- y( C, ]+ p9 d/ M<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
: X$ u% T4 m9 P, T: b/ p<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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1 P! S4 B2 @1 I* H2 {7 X' \这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, K1 l$ L6 r3 [8 M; C3 Q+ |<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>