【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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* F1 x' P: Q# m我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
- V- w: L9 c  R/ v& U0 M+ m: NThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
1 @* K, T, h, I' b# tFrom the first moment we met,
% R* x  s, {5 z9 oI already loved you with all my heart
- N1 j6 N, Q$ C+ k) c. x  h% mWe meet and talk everyday,
2 @# j/ m! J% B5 cBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
% W- y$ y5 k) f$ JWhy is it so difficult to express?
" ^! i$ z% A  M+ C6 i# ]' L/ [* gI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
4 p) ^# _9 V0 a$ d9 d3 W8 X0 G) hOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
0 p; _( o0 `# QI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
2 R. F8 F/ M5 z- K2 M$ V! ZI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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- i% w) ?. |/ i% C/ k' R) O  X# ^[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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( ]7 ^( n, H) I2 x9 J<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
, ?& m# [) W" s, s. _, e- ^<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
/ n1 P' L$ U: f% Q<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
+ R$ k7 t) Z$ U<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
# o# S5 O+ M& b5 q8 L8 N5 [<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
4 l/ \  g8 F7 r<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
+ n, A; I8 E1 j: k0 U<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
* O. x9 E; f8 v8 t5 P6 n% `<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
4 ^) U: P( S  Y- q<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
5 D6 {4 x, i3 p) v' S5 v<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
. U# u; a  f7 T. l2 k, t2 j  @# m<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
8 G4 u1 g; A: u; I7 [* t9 P<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
! h. K! x+ H3 W2 e; B<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
$ s) I. ~0 Z" m& L9 g<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
+ M% H) `. [$ ~2 L) G0 h<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
# \& j- h' H" W. h$ `# v% ?# m* n! h<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
* O- p. ?/ E$ W, g$ c- u' \+ y<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
8 B% S, N9 Y- v7 C' _<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
( g. x/ V2 D" D6 F, V! g8 ^0 t1 R<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
, y( `( y; Q2 I7 T# h/ q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
# u) k! I* ~* J/ {6 I- t<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
9 K3 O$ S5 v  ^5 W0 n+ j<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
  k- B, Y7 ~2 i6 ^7 M<P>Love… just the word love </P>
, f  H  l+ g3 i  m<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
& w( v- ~' |9 v4 G9 B" m0 _% _<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
1 U4 q( O: E! J' U* @/ @" s<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
* o( w+ ^) l4 a+ N) m! U<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
( R( K& y: U, v6 V) y7 Z1 Q<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
5 R' V9 |6 M" z/ L/ P( l1 C+ t<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
. P- u$ ]! K7 o: P; R<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
) A" \* t' W* U1 n/ c0 l<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& ]% }9 }- H. N" F; i<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
$ f, a5 Z/ Z" b0 y2 S<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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2 s7 G' H4 j5 i" w9 O这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

+ f) w5 ~4 H* n6 @3 n9 X7 p这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ P; J& w7 z0 Y" j) a2 H/ a<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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6 w6 d( v4 c/ j' a4 A<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>