【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
! v7 E  ]0 j1 s, v( YThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
# s) b$ P- W9 q; M2 fThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
) h% E) p- o/ T) ]# g* p0 \From the first moment we met,
. T4 b3 X; P# ^I already loved you with all my heart
- F' p7 V' w9 n( d% A  L4 YWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
0 l6 s* |  n  o! h, b5 x) {2 _I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
3 S- B6 A- \$ k$ [) ]Why is it so difficult to express?
4 D# l% h% l2 FI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
- `" K9 _; F: D( VOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
  y. P9 F8 B& o1 O" N( q6 tIf today isn’t too late,
% s: B* M% o3 J5 T% v7 uI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
! c$ u/ |" W6 P1 L' h8 rI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
1 @0 g  f5 U7 s% _  g$ Q; Z. QEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
  h& \  K: M/ b. L- u, \9 ^If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
% C3 ^/ g' ?* f' X6 U6 vI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
) k+ y5 k9 i% b' QCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
% m% W  s6 z7 E0 ~Can I entrust it to you?
# Z* E+ {/ i" E' _Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
$ \) {# [" y% G( F' Y; ?<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
% A6 T: n. W, L3 I) f<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
1 g) _; J9 _2 V1 _# E<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
+ w5 T4 }& z( w# Y/ u8 _  d% \" ?<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
  p( G, [$ c) k9 B<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
0 e4 {) r! [; o1 S. @<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
2 E  h0 a* _0 [5 P0 c7 t( }& t% o, v<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
% ]- z1 x( c3 q3 t<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
4 k# ~0 P8 H6 ^* k4 I# s1 O<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
  B7 [0 u8 I/ Y3 I$ Z& _+ S<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
1 h+ L& q. `* @6 ^<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
& b7 y. |+ i1 `3 C- h. e& N<P>但我不会</P>
! O9 O# R. \* m6 g! H$ Q6 a5 u<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
0 J1 V- t* c8 P+ c* y5 U4 l<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
7 E* |. ?1 U% l3 p<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
' N) S+ D) @* T: q2 u( W* d<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
: R$ R4 R& F" a6 T' P1 q( V# ~5 s<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
* U+ A: k- `% a8 c2 c/ x<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
. z8 I3 q1 z. w' y  m/ y# `/ k<P>Love… just the word love </P>
! `5 s" K0 z" r' x6 S<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
8 T3 r& r+ O  Q( s2 H! e9 Z5 L<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
  B8 R, ?( A: b( z# @3 g<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
) b- r5 A9 I- D$ }3 ^2 I+ m% W<P>But I never did </P>
$ v) L+ ^, d5 I. W' A* p<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
" @. P' S/ c! F1 K3 S: a<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
3 i% u1 I3 O$ z' l" c<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
( W) j. V" _, n: _8 J, \6 l<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
, J9 G# y9 W& h, v9 g<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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0 c, L0 n  @; F6 y3 N这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  U% k$ l6 `/ w8 ?<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>