【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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' `  o# Y# Z+ Y, P我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
# i8 o$ V) N! MThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
) X0 f" L5 v( k3 W1 kFrom the first moment we met,
# s9 U% R; M! a+ n& A; c% c! [, ^I already loved you with all my heart
: E# G/ c+ _; @5 k- ?6 F5 o; BWe meet and talk everyday,
7 P/ f1 i: r; G. i% k3 S" UBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
" r2 Y6 \. S7 g# YIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
7 b, k, u' ], ^( x5 r3 ALove… just the word love
# B  d0 Q/ ^  WWhy is it so difficult to express?
# R6 o$ h* }  E0 f3 fI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
  Y# G: c: h/ X8 sOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
2 x. I8 u/ p" e$ P: SIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
9 t+ D0 O- C! o  l( l! y- s7 @Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
8 g# W* n2 m# Q; t' eWhy is it so difficult to express?
5 p  s) [! v6 |! CI want to confess that I love you,
2 t7 o: O8 m) Y) S" RBut I never did
8 b' |) I4 E" B; \One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
8 J& j( {. D9 _6 ?5 J1 J3 _% UIf today isn’t too late,
  j% i% I+ a  v- \. l0 N' j) cI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
9 l, W/ W6 W8 x" M/ s3 ]I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
7 h0 p( D6 k5 M/ f7 CEntrust my love within your heart
. B0 `# e% u8 C* ACan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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; N+ Z! o$ r; L; m- c) B* w9 D  T& k! o[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
! z2 {- [! U7 H: [<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
9 s; Q% Z6 o/ s) t% J3 z<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
- w/ W2 W4 t$ ?, F<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
! k' R' h! [4 m<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
+ G7 l6 P, D5 M) M+ j) e! o: z<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
' ~% l# l, {; {+ c( x<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
2 B! ~0 q# s+ @5 P# ]+ Q- ]<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
$ |( {, Z4 y# T/ _<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
4 F) A* i' N8 @' x<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
* l+ b5 T/ X( h4 W: u0 o& g7 p<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
, y& @# h2 y* }8 Y( u7 v( [<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& p, r. m) M) M9 y, X5 y<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
% f" u0 f# s* F0 _$ q) }<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
2 I, `1 O9 C6 c5 Z<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
/ U8 r! n/ l) ?, W<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
8 A9 e" r1 j% c- n<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
# ?: e8 J! s4 R: T<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
  n6 {  v+ j( `$ o8 Y9 |' m5 E<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
: B/ s+ B; R" H! i2 c4 T<P>但我不会 </P>
  I% {5 Y! M" G: o5 p<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
1 ~; j3 t: e9 V, \. Y<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
5 Q$ P# Z7 J; l+ p2 E<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
' ?1 P9 ^' {) @0 C2 h, H  z" @<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
1 Y5 w; U! n; J9 E5 x- I<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
- A: f3 m) s1 W- [<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
) h( p: f6 s. c$ j* J<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
- {4 q) m+ J# e% R9 S" R- V) A  @9 e<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
/ u7 [: e5 I6 y' J' C5 S; c, e<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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3 [: Q& _* i" s! r1 W6 {3 C! _4 x这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 q: t' Y, Y& S  q2 Y<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 P8 U. G! G+ _: A- r2 }8 G& l4 W' g+ M; X<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>