【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
/ ?7 `2 H% v/ U/ J; R# pThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
+ v  j. E, w" o( {From the first moment we met,
, g- z$ x/ |. p6 i8 qI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
# C+ x$ ^; D- }$ W8 X; e; BIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
+ g5 s# l9 Z# |) E* KI would probably know how you feel
1 [  x; O) A' JLove… just the word love
2 D" ~0 M# T/ `* b& x2 @Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
! O- ~( [: l" v$ jI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
0 I% {1 o% p; p" V( K/ F) O$ }Can I entrust it to you?
$ k% k6 k/ ]* g. c5 |Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
) L1 x. ]% c. Y* v2 [Why is it so difficult to express?
; [( c: M# v: j3 j6 \& PI want to confess that I love you,
, U; `% W  g: h4 r8 A/ rBut I never did
/ I6 b* G/ X, `+ S% I+ d* ~One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
  \# i/ G3 P. O( d9 ]# {* WIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
  E' ~% ~* |4 {9 L! S2 t  HI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
# [, i( Y+ Z+ S4 X; _. v5 _+ cCan I entrust it to you?
2 r- p+ b' Y# j( W9 c) _4 IEntrust my love within your heart
9 r5 c$ q% W( J& }; d. bCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
: k1 b9 d" f! w5 H) P6 M<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
. T) V6 d4 P* E6 a2 g<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
7 [- m& a# [& Y3 E+ w<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
1 N: v) e& F3 r, ?, j9 E<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
0 A, t9 J* P4 o" U  s<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
- z, ~( F: b8 R5 G; X7 r<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
" P* z+ ]% C( W3 v<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
0 `& x, e+ K) G4 u* S<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
7 b% W4 m4 G6 q5 U0 w6 v. J9 A3 W<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
% N+ m1 d: B# b9 K<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
8 X& _3 v, ?- |<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
& X* w+ t6 b/ E. Z/ H. B9 z<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
4 T9 S8 _- t# t0 N+ G3 ]$ }( {<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
+ n0 p$ J0 w/ `$ {% d# u<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
2 u0 Y- n) h' z  M- k<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
1 H. J" ?2 e* ^  Z  c<P>Love… just the word love </P>
' s" o) e3 R% C! L" @<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
( s  R& m& ?5 d! l& ?<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
, q4 G1 T# L  s9 m7 t( [& W) d<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
  n4 j( _8 p( _! f( U( \( K<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
) p$ G/ A* O  L  i' c& O6 J<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
3 x/ |$ \3 F3 B, |3 N8 g2 m* [<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
& D$ E, R" O1 B* Q! J( D<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
6 ^. o* s/ U% W: v- U  K6 k+ p: S" b<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
7 h# s% ]) b" F2 n4 u& ]<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
. c" ^$ v2 j1 c<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
3 Q0 f7 j* j1 n& _" |. D/ I<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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& M$ i* g/ N; S" J: C$ D* s$ _这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% z+ r0 p' k, @, I<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>