【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
( G5 o' _2 m" pI already loved you with all my heart
8 l4 T1 }  w/ |! d# P$ b4 f6 E" a0 gWe meet and talk everyday,
. N( R" d" P2 e$ |$ R1 s+ a+ HBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
3 j3 y/ `* W. oLove… just the word love
/ A# y4 H3 d6 `7 @4 a& C. ]2 fWhy is it so difficult to express?
  N) r+ b3 n: V4 [  DI want to confess that I love you,
( {+ @! \7 s0 D; F! I3 s  TBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
. ?* H+ r0 L9 x$ R& REntrust my love within your heart
& n2 o! ?$ q! t5 b1 r; OLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
* M6 i4 j- R/ f; o9 z: M, DI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
3 X, O! k' J2 p7 ?% `9 V$ y& ACan I entrust it to you?
9 b/ a! y8 l8 A* [6 n: _1 PEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
" B: R- H; z4 ~0 |, S" O3 x<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
* f4 ]* A7 c) `2 R9 a<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
, l4 Y$ _7 [" h2 V8 e; `<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
- ^6 d/ E# O& |2 N6 s- A<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
6 u" s; g+ _4 A, N* X<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
" r& Y& f8 B+ j0 j. r( b<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
6 F& H, R" x. b9 Q; @<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
! p  l' N- P+ i5 C9 u( i<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
, g. Y3 b* p4 T6 Y<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
5 z  h2 _& H8 u, f% z& U9 A% H<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
- R' s, J6 m# K% ]5 V3 g<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
' u9 m( Y1 \0 F; g# X<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
- V: l+ d$ A( V5 ~<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
, @9 ?. Z0 B. D/ V2 n<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
$ i2 s" F/ y" n" M0 C1 `/ ^3 _<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
9 J/ P5 N" @6 P) N9 F% \<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
. ~3 D  G( o% j' @<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
- |! O  f+ a' f( S7 f0 _4 G<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
( A- D0 m4 k' y1 \<P>Love… just the word love </P>
9 a& I8 _& D3 v" b5 }, q% h: W<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
4 V9 b, E  U/ f" B6 y$ _<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
  a, F" C! t7 `$ V# r<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
8 _: M8 |: J4 I<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
! ?  i/ M. P7 L' s$ Y/ p( r<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
2 q7 {+ I3 Z7 i0 u<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
) x/ `' z5 W  ], }$ w<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
2 V' m+ z2 o  s( I4 w' c$ d<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
' p! y" I4 ]: K3 y/ c  A<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
- ?0 t% b& g; |0 @$ U; S<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: n7 \4 |/ R4 s3 X7 G+ q5 J; ?! D<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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& H" G6 ^" u5 V+ Z- ^<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>