【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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) x! {  W) L) F- l我另将歌词附在此。
, P3 n' S9 G# h0 MThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
7 I. U; |8 h8 ~% ]6 E& uFrom the first moment we met,
( l( u& f6 e/ u- O8 E4 FI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
( u- O" j3 `% P  {3 k" Z* `If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
5 z9 w- J2 X7 iI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
1 @! ]( [( i% k0 x9 _6 \But I never did
3 I! f$ g4 g7 ~One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
: G% Z3 ^) M3 _0 G' W6 g8 RIf today isn’t too late,
4 S: x" Y) e) L) ^7 j& `I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
# }) [, }8 I* m8 zI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
# ]5 D7 O/ W& }( O% K$ o- VCan I entrust it to you?
+ ~$ ^) K; ]- D0 ?  |1 ^8 H4 zEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
7 N+ Y2 Q( r9 dWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
$ ^" y8 e) ^- G' k$ o. {But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
2 U- m. h  g2 Y" E; R1 tI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
, f) d1 a% o  M& O* WI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
7 z. y. [" H# h9 W  A2 t9 sEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
: C4 T7 I1 |4 q+ o: X7 i- V% Z<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
- Z/ D% p- ?# k& I- n2 S$ Y/ L4 s. \<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
7 C* b* j, A( W6 j- c; ~" t, T, T<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
1 T6 v8 J! l$ j8 G) w3 a7 |) E<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
$ V! r" b4 Y0 n<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
8 o7 U  @6 g& `5 R1 U<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
( d( ^& T; p' z1 {. Y. V2 m<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
& H% i: |  w2 M$ O2 I3 X; _<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
: k+ x1 i6 C* N9 z6 d<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
' e% K- \% ?/ |( {<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
! R9 \4 B9 `% w* f  ]* B+ H# Z3 [<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
% r8 c2 r$ O7 A0 s<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
( j" z$ H1 i- m<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
2 m* a5 H( d5 `& d2 b<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
/ j. G' _! ~& a2 y, L<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
% J4 p- [% F2 F, O3 ]  G2 e0 t<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
* ]% Y) v) H6 S" A<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
% W9 b7 W- Z; P. m# x; z' q% y% m<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
+ h* B" `: S4 v<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
# D; \; O& ~/ F0 B; D  Z/ i<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
) j1 g" h9 G" X<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
7 g/ @. ?$ b5 n* b' ^3 {<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
4 k5 \$ @8 f5 V" x, G8 Q" ^5 p<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
/ J' X/ @- z. {6 L; C( _8 X<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
9 \( ]) T+ F+ Z* y5 P<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
1 m; s5 @" |7 q( E<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

9 J1 O$ `% V( a! Y0 a9 ] 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

4 h8 a( |2 ?: y" G9 s- V5 a这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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- g7 `) s; {3 E  g6 b这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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5 }3 O. A* k5 R; k/ b, r5 B: w<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>