【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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2 M) |7 x8 T, W9 B2 ~我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
" V) C9 c& k/ V8 c/ yWe meet and talk everyday,
) p- ~5 }1 D8 R9 X& RBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
/ R3 B$ u! v' A" U0 _3 C1 VLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
# O) r0 j4 [7 {; y! @But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
. ?# N/ D! J. y. u1 e9 @Can I entrust it to you?
- u& s, t( K1 d0 EEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
! T/ X" s! O. B' i( A/ |+ J. ?Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
5 \# y) l( ]3 H  f* _8 p% NBut I never did
6 C6 m4 r: V* b) S$ o% P' COne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
/ h% O' {4 _6 X1 v9 VIf today isn’t too late,
  a* R# W  w* F% N3 r; u' }/ v2 II want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
3 E1 e* q! z, MI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
7 ~, u6 w- n# C' R" R! ~' C; qEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
  S1 @# r5 _8 M4 P+ g$ y# G9 m<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
+ }+ z! Y3 {: `5 a: g& D% v8 W<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
1 A  x4 y. A; F& `+ Y/ F  O<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
  B% m( g) q, M5 E. A: `, s) j$ J<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
- T; W2 D1 I3 ^$ q  B/ Q! C& n<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
. }+ q% Y# o! r  P: {9 r/ M3 b<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
( ]( w+ ^# t. O$ D1 R% p<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
- r$ h8 T- C3 Z7 {' M8 l<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
4 b- g0 p! v1 e3 e8 m' e2 G1 T<P>但我不会</P>
$ S3 B" \! @3 G+ \! p+ c: e9 V<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
1 t7 z# G) L& Q) d/ X+ a/ U<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
8 Q3 O4 ^8 O+ L1 e& l$ ?<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
' P1 N5 y9 Z! p<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
, K/ H% j3 ?( r0 Y+ S( U<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
6 ~+ _  y; B9 `. M+ C" S. K* z4 J<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
" w! R$ n% `! `7 S<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
. T2 `9 Y1 N: v; c<P>Love… just the word love </P>
! m: f/ I# o, w. C<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
9 Z, f  ]4 y4 p<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
9 U# W* f8 p4 D6 r+ S<P>But I never did </P>
6 |- n9 I9 n# }- n+ O: o: @6 f+ p<P>但我不会 </P>
5 @0 y& p+ ]; `. E# ?* W<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
  p( Y6 M' ^+ n' D! m  Z<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
* L% X! N* g7 d  w<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
+ {" A: n9 x) k- M, g<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! |7 z/ g8 {" p7 }+ t' B. T<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
( y- L( Q$ V/ P5 |<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
8 w. ^% P8 W0 r; G. o<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
( z6 b) n6 v: I: u3 F<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
$ [3 I% ~- L1 A<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

3 P+ C- O( ]6 e# c1 K3 z, P这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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1 J; k: x! H; }" U9 R+ {这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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  Q9 T2 ?% Q8 \5 Q' C<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>