【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
. s3 p1 C: y& E, tThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
3 E) u' g6 B, a1 r1 j* JWe meet and talk everyday,
: M. Q# [8 w- l& VBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
6 v- u3 n' H6 [5 L6 C% m8 zIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
3 B) n, i; Y. s# XLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
6 `: N0 B( j! l8 {+ a5 z$ E  i/ H, n2 ~3 NBut I never did
& G3 D, L! y' F0 \" D  [One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
! w: ]) U1 @9 Y# P4 r& F; SI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
0 I  l: W. n  O2 B7 C, UI want to confess that I love you,
% S4 ^2 m  {7 L7 ~: [0 m6 b: i5 I% LBut I never did
% n, G2 Y0 {, ^One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
0 w+ m/ i" M- `7 u9 v2 j, Z& X, x4 CI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
( ~7 w* [6 A" i3 v' _# HCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
* a* c9 J* f2 O2 C* n( K6 l<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
. S8 O- n3 d  w  ?" P! _5 h/ Y# R<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
5 P( d* _& [5 F<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
& `3 P1 N$ a: T- [<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
- h3 `2 n; A7 ~# ?<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
  b* v& M9 A3 j+ V<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
6 {, A, ~' }) z& q  q<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
9 Z& d9 w  H% y4 ^# y<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
2 S- K! j+ I) N- L/ s& b<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
: E! N) B! S; U" W, n- w* F7 l" U$ h2 ^<P>我想说我爱你</P>
' ?! K, J0 M% N$ X<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
6 K( L- ?( f. o! G" S! Q8 N9 m<P>但我不会</P>
0 a1 ]/ y+ J, n& |<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
7 ^3 `6 j2 ~- p& e( n( v<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
7 R* R- k. }1 Y$ G! a<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
  X* a; [0 {+ J7 l: d1 A( |* S) e<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
; i( M; M5 }- w: P* E<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
4 h% P. N' P4 B/ [<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
. A9 J) k: f0 |2 \<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
: v8 H7 W$ j: a$ E% ?( k! L<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
  q6 i. u7 F7 Y& ?( o7 ~' o<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
3 i- a# s- V1 o- M<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
- g1 C- u, w7 t2 P) j( D<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& A& ]- F6 `" p) {) a/ H<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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2 y: O0 Q! ?3 V5 ?% w' f; r这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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7 G2 H& |+ a, ]2 M! n+ g<P>

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>