【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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8 t1 A2 T$ y9 K% L! x. ^( \我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
, D- h" x7 L* ~( L% b& L; y# d2 qThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
/ |5 ]5 d4 y: d  QFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
/ T( C9 P7 Q6 |0 Q2 h; L/ D# kWe meet and talk everyday,
/ @" l- M! q( FBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
* _' `$ [/ {6 B/ W* y9 H2 sBut I never did
) K" `4 C( \, @+ d& uOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
; v% f! o: s/ S, o6 S7 W1 F% fIf today isn’t too late,
" F2 e# @7 M( iI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
2 l; ]% Q5 J4 `. |I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
- ?( O% C0 N* ~. c8 ?Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
. W/ x# V4 Y( a( e3 c3 U# B: SWhy is it so difficult to express?
  c1 T& B6 h: `5 j' CI want to confess that I love you,
1 C0 J4 N( B+ j7 bBut I never did
# ^' I4 e; F' M  p8 P4 W3 SOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
; G; B: K4 Z' P; |3 t4 c& e9 jI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
3 R( P* m) ]+ @7 f, J: ZEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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  \  \9 a+ k1 s3 x[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
1 B7 x$ A' [8 b6 p<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
* o* Q, f6 }' w6 _/ d1 _5 M<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
0 _3 t' @' R9 k6 b<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
  H6 r$ h$ X3 v# e4 R<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
* l( C4 _; K5 s% v# |3 f<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
, w' S! u; l4 t6 S6 a  U<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
  }& `- S# j$ P( ^, G5 d<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
( l% a  A2 l' l6 O* j& U<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
8 T, n/ P1 R1 s<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
8 d9 G7 |5 o; r; ^<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
+ C% U6 T, L0 ?( }<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
7 m' |' {: h: G, g. g) a<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
% J: g( T1 z2 ?6 s<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
4 D; W+ l8 A  c2 q5 b9 }' t<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
+ L& i0 g2 @) D+ z) M5 r- V  S# ]5 M<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
0 r" P) }; Q$ o6 t4 X1 U5 P<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
  v3 b& f) m5 A3 G  D  X% A; q<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
# o2 i+ c6 r1 e8 K3 r6 O<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
8 i" ?& M6 F! s- g0 F. P<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
' C# h2 ?$ g1 w& P3 l% h<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
+ e8 k$ c5 Y# b9 D2 ?: L  ^<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
/ e5 f2 h! T! f3 U8 E* o  A) L  ~<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
# T8 x* ?  Q3 ?, T1 K2 \% D<P>But I never did </P>
! a1 c# p" j! U% p5 [0 \<P>但我不会 </P>
* R$ e4 w; ?8 s<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
7 x, }+ J. a8 n2 E8 h$ f( f9 h<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
  k+ w( p+ H+ J3 X: i. J<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
" J3 H) A9 Z. Z5 x7 x' r0 }! V<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
7 i- S8 X! |" }0 N9 R( h  q<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
4 p7 e+ w! s" O: c: m  E- m<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
2 `0 t  W! K# [2 X% a( S* B) ?<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
; {9 u1 l4 R5 l0 ]! |( L' g1 V<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
$ B, I2 h7 Z/ g<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

6 T* m; ?. B9 ]0 r: f9 D7 `这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>