【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
0 p. E) ~* l( Z  }- c4 T6 Q% q7 UI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
9 s) Q# p; g3 l7 H+ [# aBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
4 }0 n1 G& e/ AIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
0 D, C% x- U) b4 U! r6 BI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
! i3 K4 u% r* T) m- t8 z: dWhy is it so difficult to express?
5 Y1 k0 e8 j0 K2 vI want to confess that I love you,
% _' D% D7 T& d# BBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
( A9 i9 G! I( C4 F7 P% s+ DIf today isn’t too late,
* r; B) _; H% G. UI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
+ j3 s3 q4 W3 B6 H' F1 ZBut I never did
" q7 r( g9 `5 H$ J% }One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
7 p5 C/ x* _3 T3 q8 n% f& XI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
4 `; r3 x4 `; R( @( zCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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8 G: y8 K9 q/ k4 a3 y[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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/ G- }4 }3 T( I! W6 E2 o<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
4 r: o  R0 Q0 K; h<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
/ T# q$ D( g, T0 o<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
  a/ J: |; p  {, N* R<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
( C* f  a) F* }3 U3 ?- {<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
8 x0 H, {8 y  A' f8 z<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
6 N7 {) f5 l. V/ j, `" N: X4 j<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
1 `3 y% U- A+ |+ m<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
% b$ I* g" U9 x+ h8 k4 s<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
2 z& }& a+ l+ T( u1 W4 p" |<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
, S: `. ?2 H2 x<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
1 k6 F8 a4 E6 L1 Y5 E<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
5 Q# Y/ M& g3 M/ v- k5 b& }2 L, \<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
% Q+ W! s* P- T% m5 t) ~5 K<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
- i- f: t- u6 u: q: k<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
9 J* }- V; t6 c1 x/ J# O<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
/ w+ w6 {1 h3 R<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
5 k3 x, Y4 X9 q3 [) S  `# F<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
# m6 f8 R9 l% X0 b. M+ S7 Y<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
  C* l' i% f+ K! r% h7 T5 L5 K<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
. [- T7 c' Q* _+ x3 ?1 m6 G' \+ r<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
: [" p! M9 s. c<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
; e% B5 E4 [3 U( s5 @$ e2 {0 A<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
5 ~0 X# ~, ]* O& c/ {3 c<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
& C7 e8 Q/ g( _2 z, O0 ?- V<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
) ^$ f( [0 p! H0 q, W<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
$ ~5 D! S9 j3 L8 D2 S<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
8 c% o7 c% t. }<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
! a* h+ e# _3 T<P>But I never did </P>
& i8 ~  N, S" d) R/ W3 B6 F<P>但我不会 </P>
+ j" i5 v/ r: k) M<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
7 U2 y+ M1 j) f* W8 Z* `2 B<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
1 {4 _; i3 ?7 ], ^$ Z, O8 h1 A7 S<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
' Z# M! M- W1 X' A<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
# N& }. }6 s. A<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
* R0 e7 ^& H2 }* s! a<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
- Z$ d) {: W- B. {+ u<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
  e, ~& T7 u$ V% B$ w  V% R4 H! ]7 p<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
, D2 w. r& ~8 o4 i4 p5 ]. X<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
9 v! ^0 ]- R9 ]- x8 }1 S0 q  M: a' G<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

; f9 ]) Q  H& j这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

9 [8 b. s& e: C这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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/ y/ A. P- K1 s4 z- _8 x<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>