【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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7 n2 k+ p5 [9 ~& S我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
9 h  z; s6 [5 v! o7 {0 JFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
' x; Y) u; y1 |9 l- x8 M- L4 MBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
: n: S- s- D+ ]2 ~- p" DIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
  i" p0 i, q8 d- z. H9 A+ HI would probably know how you feel
) W# u* h# t% z( w  o1 }  ULove… just the word love
2 K( n  s' E+ B; |Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
7 t  r5 _/ l! }: V5 K2 g7 P5 \One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
% J' ?% _- F3 r& v5 }1 D5 zI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
1 U% S6 [8 x/ FI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
, t% v* [1 i/ R2 _% |5 `! l9 JCan I entrust it to you?
9 i! a8 d) U/ i9 i5 jEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
% q6 t6 u  @7 \0 p, k# v0 g8 iWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
! c7 E$ G8 r& i, S' KOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
: g# V# Q  |  R* z2 R- y. }I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
' I4 ~% F6 n' x' M/ [! k* U$ kCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
/ E( M6 k1 l" Z5 ~Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
$ l, }9 y; M  t5 C5 ]1 x3 K4 \<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
5 s4 j5 Y. ~+ P<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
' z8 H" M' u! _- M, Z<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
, f, T/ }9 o8 f1 Z/ r<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
" E! F6 i0 ?- W3 {7 }; T<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
: V1 t& h$ w4 {5 K3 T" h: q8 x3 ]<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
  o1 h, m9 G6 ^) z+ J3 m<P>我想说我爱你</P>
  R' i+ T$ R- ~* I<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
8 ]5 O0 T" ~( b+ `/ J' D/ }<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
+ Z, j4 {3 S9 E. F! F9 c, @9 C<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
0 V5 W2 j8 W0 m0 b% x6 A<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
, H' ]8 S0 m$ @3 I1 H+ [<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
6 l% e: x. u& v<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
) @* R: u- G4 i! j<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
0 B# D+ u( f/ L# t( `4 z<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
3 _/ p; [- V8 P2 L: z5 L* {<P>Love… just the word love </P>
; j$ J9 A2 U% U5 `! E<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
& d9 L' Q; K6 Y% s- m+ i, Y" ^( G<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
% H# W8 j0 |& x# K9 q5 m<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
+ J* R3 j5 @! g<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
$ B) L/ q, Y8 A. u' {9 [4 P  J<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
- K6 P  g7 _+ _( B: g6 \4 n6 O<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
* C9 M# A' q- \<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
; Z; t# Q2 ?9 x1 r<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
0 e* N! `& y9 ]<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
& t' @; {" I8 C. S# W7 F  E<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
- Z' ~" P) a' x/ y/ s$ i; H  H<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
1 o* `( _! W5 }* O: q( ]<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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6 c7 i- t' b# n# u: K% D  ]这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. K5 _# A$ m, `* r1 C<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>