【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
. ]+ ^/ M: _  h4 Y0 |& v6 kThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
% q+ c& C6 b" S0 G3 ^1 dFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
/ M$ M' [  @) E/ l9 C0 ~, oBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
3 N" @$ o  [* K( M7 Y# VLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
- y; G& o- m& Q; j. SI want to confess that I love you,
( Z! n( }" }) `2 `# v1 w. q& l6 FBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
  k, B; {5 {  r& ?# t+ QLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
% h" e: p/ c6 s9 @$ U; O8 iBut I never did
& Y+ ~' }- \. d" v0 {, e: }4 {One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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/ b& B1 `! x: LEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
8 ?# x$ {( d# J1 n  j: g<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
4 |* Y) Q- d- n. r- {9 b<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
, }  d' Q4 J; Q# R9 F* @4 |6 P<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
- o$ s. D1 s  r; Y! Q1 f<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
) g' ]2 u1 Q- ?4 N' x5 H<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
6 R5 I3 O" M0 |<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
' j: }2 {, b- u<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
/ z, s( ]' {4 W& D- S# J<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
0 N: Y3 O$ h3 L<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
$ a( @$ l3 i: q; Q<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
0 X7 q# ]6 J4 @- P. b: i; \<P>但我不会</P>
7 Y/ r0 B- |. x# A9 v; \<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
$ @' H2 K* G  T; V, h) K: k<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
* V3 l* L/ ^  b) g) L# E  R<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
& y4 _+ }$ d" U$ C3 z2 Y! O<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
) J2 `  h7 S- P5 e6 N  t+ P<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
! z# }& W% Q# Z/ q<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
. w2 @( F0 m+ M% E) G1 V& C; N; Q$ t- T<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
  w! R9 z% Z9 x& S<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
6 P5 h9 d- b/ z- g<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
; s% N  L* x  V: w<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
) _4 a! G/ b  Q9 ^4 F<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
$ w) B: F7 D$ l4 J+ o<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
3 O3 o) ]% z& ~3 ]4 w<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  [) p. E/ U+ e+ [1 |<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; U+ z3 a3 h4 ~<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>