【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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9 Z8 V3 U. O0 ~5 T% R8 G# PThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
1 R7 |4 J" V3 ~" v2 _I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
+ v2 h9 x3 F  eIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
! B: Y( o: S; f( `; F2 xLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
3 T6 p: z( u# C# V/ u) u4 q( sI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
" B8 f. ]6 Q5 n5 y' P; oOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
+ @* y4 Y3 M2 p' J9 yI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
7 U( @% S% i2 h' pLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
4 E' w2 d! O; E$ u/ i+ z. l- yI want to confess that I love you,
1 ~& X) J+ V4 F) N2 [; qBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
& j0 u8 J2 e- z# c+ T4 @7 f4 nI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
8 g- C4 X' a% OCan I entrust it to you?
2 M, _1 x& U; j+ Q. Q% k4 m' r6 @Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
" l$ R- d8 d4 |. s3 L<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
8 u' d7 h; }$ v) F+ ~<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
, o4 Y! Q: u, m$ u8 m6 a; U4 z<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
  p5 }8 @4 ?+ Q<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
0 H8 D2 W; k9 N' g5 w  n<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
; O0 N. B& l! @( W' c$ o<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
  V6 x) j/ e$ h5 V% O: i4 t* W<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
8 h; r4 N1 z$ W6 t3 K+ c<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
& i  b9 u. @3 Z- Q/ @/ r2 j* B$ e2 m7 q<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
+ Y+ t) V. v1 b8 G9 U/ e" T2 q<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
- A# ~2 ~5 g. p0 d. l+ f<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
, l9 }" T: T% m5 z/ {) C7 H0 c<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
/ a) u' \% R/ O4 M2 a$ t<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
& m* |2 s# A1 {; ]! J<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
9 [& }5 ]) f- O) v<P>但我不会</P>
# A  h5 o: I/ n$ E2 F4 `- S' g<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
+ ?2 X& N! ?! _<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
5 q* P. |: I/ ?9 j<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
3 F6 b# ^. @, M% N6 ]<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
. \' ?. f- u9 N& _<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
! o, g$ Y) _6 z2 x& a. d<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
4 l8 k9 i& y5 G; E9 C<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
: d% ~& W' Q9 J<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
6 ]/ d. F+ I0 W# i2 _7 ]<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
- B1 L. f3 @$ @# O<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
8 o5 x  ]% b5 u% k4 {7 m: J<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. \  @' P* U/ N, s* N<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" @! A8 P( a& L5 d" }7 S9 j" d<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>