【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
7 `$ Q7 U" a4 pThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
# G: ?) k9 p% W; \8 b. K; H8 @But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
. X- r( G8 O+ z3 a5 m# G* @If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
! W/ t" D) ]$ e( K' J4 \I want to confess that I love you,
' V/ g7 q8 V  I+ I  eBut I never did
, @. N! B+ D8 j) ZOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
2 _. j% D! V# C. JI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
& d( p- B3 @; }5 W2 l9 T( j5 JEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
! d/ y# S4 M, K9 n' R3 _But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
9 t. ^. ^& k$ n# G. c! H5 tIf today isn’t too late,
5 x) j# O, p6 `I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
3 U, |7 `8 g& J- q7 A3 M" sCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
8 l* a3 N; p  f# k2 I" Q# bEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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1 i- t2 q" u, T! t3 c% i8 P<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
2 x8 A, {3 V) s+ @  \<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
  d9 K$ w& f4 V" H) s( e<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
- I: [1 E; F4 j# Y<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
" c; t& u* D" P* p<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
! @$ \4 t. z1 l" E0 l  b9 Z/ b2 ?% b<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
0 U4 ^& B/ u' ?2 A$ e) h3 f- g" j<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
' t5 ?1 I; o6 [7 o<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
/ O  @6 m* h, H# R<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
" l+ t1 C1 e: Z<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
( H+ _8 A+ D* |. x- {7 O' K1 y' J<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
4 }# J! Q  y  {<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
, _$ x) y0 M  F0 |4 B7 s<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
5 b# l- r* F2 a6 E<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
3 B  p  n1 N: [: @  y<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
. Y2 Q4 I* s. ^: F; o7 g<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
" Z, C2 P/ L7 U1 g<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
! J" g% ?8 ?6 e  Y. f" T<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
5 P1 m6 j6 m3 L3 K5 B* n<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
: H0 j( h4 j3 l3 N3 `<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
: v$ z1 g  J- z<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
5 G; ]3 \& ~& N<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
( T) T( U; ~' n0 P8 g<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
8 i" B. h& h4 B8 V<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
" G8 J, w+ X9 |- u) N<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
2 k8 F/ j* q5 D8 K* y" N# |<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
$ `; v# x' n, @$ m<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
+ B- N! I) r7 x$ X/ B3 c, W<P>But I never did </P>
4 B2 z: e) X# R<P>但我不会 </P>
# _  ?5 d! |, F" X6 G9 g* W<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
0 Q  |! K4 C$ F1 H3 q: Y<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
$ j& `6 G$ d, N( I( g9 P$ F/ u<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
# J. r9 {8 T: C7 W6 c: A: b) A<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
; a5 [  y1 x0 b* b) ~<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
+ U: H6 V2 q8 M. Q1 _1 y/ @<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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( u  w9 v- y& I" q# x这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 D* A7 G* |9 p$ e  _<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% Q; L4 h% B6 \- ~<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>