【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
5 W/ F6 j/ o2 ]* i3 S# j& K  oThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
1 ?; c* b: |" l% P8 oFrom the first moment we met,
( K' Z5 O& `% bI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
- m# q$ I- @- r+ |' cIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
, v! T% t* ^3 \. z0 MI would probably know how you feel
( i2 ]8 ?! ~: M5 \) Q$ |Love… just the word love
: Z" f5 [6 E% D; b- i. }6 |# EWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
/ R( e/ `- r9 X- q/ u3 ^% ~) OBut I never did
# U% _1 M3 m8 U% X( g2 U( {& OOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
# G/ [+ o8 L$ G, t3 j+ |) z3 Z  a( OI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
9 H; q2 w4 E; X3 d% i8 _% RI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
4 |* Y3 G( B6 u4 T: yEntrust my love within your heart
( r! u3 n. G6 t& e' R/ J% qLove… just the word love
3 f: Q5 D1 E: T* o0 g9 DWhy is it so difficult to express?
2 S- d- D3 T$ P1 J, q1 \/ }, wI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
( J0 v* K6 i& f8 z2 WOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
6 ]$ F0 f- u, QIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
/ c; X+ G; t: N  `1 B# l5 |, NCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
, y& ~/ k0 x" B: c( R( O  _Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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6 e/ C% S% W8 c  R1 R7 m<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
( i! X. e) K( c9 {<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
) n$ `' |' {8 f* ^8 r6 ~<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
5 U# c# w& o5 C% O9 k<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
6 x4 E5 g* O* ?* A3 @1 B<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
' [, z1 T3 d0 z/ u* d<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
: e6 `8 ~0 B1 m2 p$ t5 |& x7 V<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
' G, T( i* G, v<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
% b6 z" [& Z  p1 C2 q: q5 ?<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
0 q' A6 F1 \5 \- U& K<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
9 J1 ~3 h5 O  Q7 R# \* K<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
* P# {+ U' P, q! B- l8 c6 ~<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
# Z2 ~3 n7 |$ t<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
2 |; r0 G2 A, q7 N# I" \<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
- O! u+ H' x5 g6 Y$ j! K. x<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
# G  e! _! F: h6 z4 e# K<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
: |( _0 J2 I; M; A" q; i<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
' Y! j6 a+ Z1 j8 \6 C3 T<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
" {5 z% ?" Y8 H+ a  h<P>Love… just the word love </P>
: W7 l' x5 B+ s% t. o& A<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
* c, r) P$ K+ T<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
; e- g2 W" m2 O* x( F<P>But I never did </P>
3 O; [$ G% b* ^<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
' B+ V6 {! l# Z5 z' p* d<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
1 @) {/ b- ?) M<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
. K' R. e: f4 L' R! L- k- N<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
  F+ W: M$ ]) y0 q0 F+ i<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
. j. K, v6 m& v. \<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
; c5 T: n1 D$ s/ y# f% p* q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
8 L( }+ p3 u/ \; U<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
, ]1 T8 H. K  L, n<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

# ?  N2 {, ]- M! w! _! X+ u  h) v, d这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>