【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
( @8 c. E% }( l1 ^1 x; ]) k9 HI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
2 Z/ U+ i) }. ^- x- a! e' R( UBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
/ p& i1 v. v, L: k3 c+ ~0 I+ E/ g# GWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
% \8 k+ _9 O; z3 k+ ~1 JOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
2 D! F( s4 h6 pIf today isn’t too late,
0 `4 ^6 z& ^" A' R' d+ p- ZI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
1 n$ h5 e/ m9 U2 d4 mLove… just the word love
" e: g0 N0 {+ C. |0 X1 @Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
6 J, k4 z1 ]' H5 COne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
4 }# j. Y* u9 q5 D, hIf today isn’t too late,
+ C2 T1 y! B& H$ k' A  }3 j9 }I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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7 z5 c0 l: O3 L7 `7 L# t[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
* s$ v+ {6 x9 q8 F  P<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
& ^7 O4 i) x6 H9 Y1 @<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
9 S, v/ F8 J5 I; A  ?1 |# C0 a6 Z- d<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
5 {' c& z# @/ e' D% _<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
; H1 H3 {2 d( D1 `$ d" @* B1 L<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
5 {) ?. a- H1 A$ r5 l<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
. e& n, _: w' ?$ Y6 X$ C/ z<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
+ B, ]3 W  K# h- ^# |6 a+ V) m<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
" I1 {9 e" B6 Z) u4 X! r<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
  a1 s) {' S7 W2 `7 I<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
  ~0 F+ `$ ~0 c2 E7 b2 s0 D<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
& D) ~# a, j) F* F2 p7 Q<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
- c, a5 w! C2 V, B! b/ _; B<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
3 {( F5 w8 K( |( R' t<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
9 x" N0 b( w7 V+ O9 V<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
3 L: C3 s& A2 j# B<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
0 [- e% b# y4 _6 W, P, z5 G<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
& {5 d6 k1 y: R3 s* j<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
7 B7 U8 m8 F2 `# [1 J! v9 _<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
; E! e' h- `1 k- J1 ]<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
5 H: ~  N6 O3 u% h% j  d<P>But I never did </P>
) b1 j8 i- e( O# ^; g<P>但我不会 </P>
* S1 o. `) b0 W1 Z<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
9 G% O( E4 p+ u. p0 D' p<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
7 u; h( ^! k$ M<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
$ O$ ^3 [; X2 U' n5 Y3 d* X<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
" `' i6 j5 v  y/ Y2 A$ R2 [" T. n<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
- f& x( ^* T. L1 ~% v4 H<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! l3 W8 Y) v* O3 t- I4 V<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
" a- u! h' U# t& X+ _3 J' n3 x<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
! _/ c2 o$ `0 B9 `# e<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
) G4 L* x# n' F% n7 z+ D- a<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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! U& a. v9 v& ]这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 G' r* [  `* X% s<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>