【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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. _  I. _: o' y2 E) p歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
# n3 d. t3 j+ _' q# D2 ]1 dMaking the sky glitter like gold,
! [/ \: M! a+ h1 C& L1 S) \When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, m5 C9 z5 q/ {1 k0 x: YThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ ~: T2 O: W+ Y9 q& i1 B" NThe sky is happy down to its soul
' e0 S+ k* [2 `% xWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
/ A, z9 c* t5 S+ OI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
1 |' f5 Y5 Y- O' R) D* gCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
% _% U: E) R- uI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
/ j2 W+ A! S- t1 @# t. OI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

. ]! l2 b/ ~  T  X. U( H<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
1 \- p4 l( r1 J; i- d; m; G<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
3 z% {; I( o( u# i) v8 U3 h3 H<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
% x& ]0 b7 o5 t7 R8 A0 g- d- |. F<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
7 C" U/ K2 o1 `1 r1 ]: b& m/ Q<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
- h* D3 j: g" Z: g( g' {<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
# [  g& \+ {& ~' ]1 X; w<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
( x6 t7 W1 O( N6 @5 W3 h<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* q# T9 [) V2 b" Q/ m<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
4 P! t( o) C, ~, R: [4 N0 D<P>你无需担心</P>
. \, w  [* N: `5 q0 M0 Z( G+ a; G<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
- h/ p, I8 n6 t: x" s$ T# {8 Q, H; p<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
5 ]# \" }* t' T- X; e<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
) j0 X: u% v: \! _. q6 w<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
3 a8 q" Q  j* }+ i0 J! R0 A; r3 h0 m<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
3 e: F5 G, x+ f: B5 s8 ~<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
8 V# P$ S/ j. G1 z! }6 s<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
+ Z6 I# r) z5 Q0 |# ]4 N! ]<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
. D8 L- J; C7 q+ C/ ]6 o& R# q<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
1 j; H. G; }) L  x; o2 t<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
* Z' ]- U7 v- ~" Z; C, x5 [<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
5 q2 @9 V( J1 @) }! [7 l, q7 _<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
/ O/ m& ^' I8 f<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
' y3 W0 S# O/ n<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 Y7 }6 b% I8 g4 ?<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
. P( P- C$ n" D1 e; t<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
% R$ P% S" o2 m1 ]' j<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
9 J6 A! I0 u! \* m9 V( `<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
/ ?. g' G- n4 x$ J<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
1 _9 p4 R0 F; x<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 \! U% }5 }& l* A. J8 ~+ U( V4 b<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>