【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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8 u; Z2 T/ k8 x. C, N) c. S6 gThe moonlight is shining brightly,
7 A8 p% O% ^) KMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 y% ?8 g! k& ?/ hThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
0 v7 O$ [5 ^0 t* K) q5 ?& x7 bYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
& F- x. H; F# V/ F( e( ~3 p7 ^9 nI really want to know just how much you love me
. q: w. s& M. B$ y. CI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) F6 a, h) J: R5 W8 XThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* r$ E! [! y# Y3 U) ]# WI’m still filled with fear
- F: d  l, ^" h0 P2 Y2 x. @* KYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
: j( N' f) z* l* NI regret not dying
' T4 v  \9 n6 }I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
- P7 K: O' z  e- \With such a tongue as yours,
* a4 N! G0 Y1 m) XYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
1 A* ^  g3 J/ Q) `Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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+ z2 I% C3 t" O: z; f; q( H<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
& q: r/ y- ~5 D<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
3 {0 v3 R7 W) e0 d<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
, p1 L2 ~# R, |# j5 v& e6 b9 w<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
& i: A) `# G" h" k<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
4 z: R$ Y+ i! e$ }. ~<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
- \3 I6 M  Z, K: o/ ]<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
3 C* q* r/ k2 A<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
* z) C4 C% p! w4 Z% E3 ~' @( o<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
% S2 V& h4 Q* x+ I8 ~- M) u<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
+ M! e4 N! j8 H- U  {9 i* D<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
& B' r. K( y0 t$ i6 a<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
: [3 t8 G2 M" r; a) \! r  j! k<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
: {2 a* ~7 X2 U3 O<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
( p; M' |  n% I/ _<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
+ V. {* }6 s" v6 e7 f+ q3 e- h  p<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
; ?  q  b& T) w<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
" M) V* Y" s8 W  X, b1 X3 p<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
! z8 D7 [; ~% Z) t: O<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
2 \* f3 {; M3 ~* A<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
0 N. I$ m' ?# R8 u8 R' b<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
/ D' a  |7 m$ o9 Q) D: i) M( W<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
/ G4 }5 j- b/ s8 Z<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
& h! e* `- N8 _7 b<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
( \; J2 e& @0 n( w& A<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
& S5 T, b; q5 L& q9 l; F<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 H: M: F- t0 Q% X$ V" K0 {7 Z/ J<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
3 l! v9 e0 J# F<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
  Z1 Y) Y  ?, U<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; u2 V: z3 }3 n, u' L6 f<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
, p) d/ k9 n2 o4 ~% R; j4 w<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
1 {0 ]# ^1 A3 D' i$ ]0 {<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
  K3 ]8 G- c3 u<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
& J: u# _9 d7 K, R6 d8 k5 \5 |. [<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
, W; ?5 P. j  p7 Y<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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4 t4 y8 o9 \2 `& {2 |; i我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>