【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
; L4 o1 l2 N1 G- N  S4 g; EWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 K$ }# z" Z1 f% x4 S: S7 b3 @0 nThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% n4 B/ V* v, b  N" Z1 fThe sky is happy down to its soul
( Z" a1 {' q* HWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
6 e% @: j) l9 Q* [1 bMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
, k+ x. F8 h* p7 {1 BI love you I love you with all my heart
  A( f8 @) n0 LNothing can compare to my love
. q, J1 }1 L$ {# k; S  ?+ w) ^Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
9 D3 ?, Q, ?( X. F) x- l6 ^, S5 @7 CI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 d' k/ P# X+ K( H& T/ SI’m still filled with fear
5 H7 R% Q, V( ^7 uYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
- v/ \- ^" N" x% ?9 \) HYour speech can’t even keep up with it
2 F/ U  k, \; h, R' R& OIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

. O. \9 P) F" p3 k7 f5 g<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
4 J# A& D$ ?3 U$ m4 ^# `7 `3 S<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
# u( Z1 a, C5 r" a' w<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
" s! i( f5 O7 o8 i<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
+ [# v  r& I. p<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
7 J. M3 ^- e  H( ^: V' v( Z<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
5 O7 p5 p5 Z7 U/ Y1 a<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
! `5 p& ~& q! ~% E: U: ~8 {- @<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
+ a  O, [% l5 i7 s<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
1 a8 [% m. z: }! \<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
9 a% n/ _. q8 m5 W/ f. Q8 d' `<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
1 ^: M2 O: K5 U7 Z) ~8 {8 S2 L7 ^<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
) Y$ l& v: A3 q( D$ G6 O8 [6 b/ \<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
, @5 Q5 f. ~/ Q) g3 x7 x<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
) r3 i# X7 o  Y! a9 a<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
( M4 x( D8 s- [+ E7 @# P! Z<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
0 j, `7 [7 j" k" R* E# {3 `/ d<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
. i  |; \8 a$ E2 m0 {<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
4 u3 n! i, S  s4 H; `<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
5 J1 y9 _# \' p<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
; G; X+ ~! m+ b<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>