【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
9 g+ r. @% d8 JThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  x2 @: j! H! J/ `( SThe sky is happy down to its soul
  ~6 x) g6 Q9 ]7 S: B1 t, d" n/ zWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& V+ B8 B8 M+ {1 L7 y2 c9 QEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
9 ^' T" p, g) \2 ZI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
! e( ]4 s6 q' XThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
) J; j' k  [# E5 `- S2 yI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
% T: Z. V) o( tYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
$ W2 }; p* X' }. J3 ~I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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2 k8 L  f: S& ~; X3 u<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
  g8 g4 Q* b" c' D5 y8 g* Q& V<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
  x$ Q) [5 M2 ]) s$ |<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
. l3 _/ k8 H2 a1 p0 w, K- |0 U3 n<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
8 F9 }( p3 H' }( F1 w# _<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
- B" Z5 ^6 o6 E( {2 n& L<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
9 N! @, C1 n0 P9 {<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
; Q: }: D( C% S4 U9 F<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
; A2 {) o+ t7 h2 S3 b<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
, P7 b" A$ Z/ e6 D3 w! W<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
4 ]& k1 Q1 q1 h. B5 g; R<P>你无需担心</P>
% K' V: m5 E2 P4 |% V<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
' P& m0 D8 x3 i; w<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
/ z/ c$ C" Q' b" t<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
6 n- V# p  {' \7 f7 c6 k<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
5 K, ?9 \, |; P5 Q9 U8 @& c1 b7 C<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
& B6 ^0 Y  S+ J9 h<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
; ?# X0 W8 O8 o- \( z<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
2 _0 B2 B6 J' G2 j<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 B: r- D0 i! x7 N' Q1 h6 ~<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
2 q7 \- q5 t% K3 w6 ]<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
  j$ ^4 V2 ?+ G+ L; _' k: I<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
. V! c0 n  \4 Y1 Z5 X+ x% F# s<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
9 @0 A- h; r6 e<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
3 c# ~  A: X2 C<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
6 G* Z; [6 Y, L  `7 E<P>I only have one tongue </P>
8 v, W% ]( u% K. e4 |<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
, Q* U8 E; R, a+ V<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
6 b: V* e# M/ W, r- q) W<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>