【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
/ Z% h9 v6 F. Z6 Q0 F4 hThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ i7 K2 m- c2 _1 M0 g; I0 gThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
# i, u" o$ V3 T7 B7 t1 S3 n$ f: YSeeing the sky content with its love
6 W- {  i9 I6 [# U& w) L, A2 hIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
# |* _" p$ D4 E8 u0 ?You needn’t fear anything
5 L0 F% g3 F/ L0 a* p% F0 R- uMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
% O& v( A) e* z1 v1 L$ d; sI love you I love you with all my heart
8 x# P4 H) y& _$ ?Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 ]  V' w& W  \$ k7 RI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
7 Y2 y1 L/ j  v+ `# w' h% Q% TYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
+ k- y; V$ A+ f& z5 d: VRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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# q* ?8 J0 C' {9 X5 y9 D) Y<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
, g3 w# e7 _) M3 P: S& q<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- M  U8 l  z9 ]<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
) x( d: N! I9 D8 T# P<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
0 C; j8 u3 S% C<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
( z5 L7 f$ ?: Y+ u; q<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
( b* F! Z" `7 n<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
) S2 V: G9 T: _( v<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
) K: c* p) t' W3 U4 e<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
: m' k; x9 X' e2 s! O' E<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
  M- f! Q' f( z; D( x3 V* I<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' Q! G1 F8 S" o  ]* b, h3 v<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 J% n: H) ^3 B7 R, W<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
% V) d: `/ s( g<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ m- ?+ C5 ]! M2 n4 Q* d; ]<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
# M" B. r& V+ S6 M  ]7 b<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
: n4 Z* ?; B( p0 ]6 N& S<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
( x  |* b6 M) \( A: z<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
3 h, l( p" T( g4 o3 m# z<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
" I/ b. ~( Z6 _6 j4 s$ f# L  R<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
. r# c1 o; ^) c% M4 b<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
' N8 s: U/ x& S  z<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
/ J2 w$ y: D" q" J+ E. L<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
% ~# ^' x8 w; U9 R" ]; I+ p$ w<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 t& k# a7 r, S. s% W' x% K<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

" v) M4 ]0 o+ R6 @* U2 m% j我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>