【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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  Z( w% v) s& C! S5 O4 t歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
) f% l( ?% R1 L: L" B/ @9 @6 vWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
2 W' f% `' p) ?$ @9 v% T3 l) zThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
7 E6 @! E+ V( sWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
; l# _' y( r3 C4 W, Z* [- AIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
3 A$ z. A6 z, U2 s: EMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
9 d  C+ d; d4 }. N3 OI love you I love you with all my heart
6 b$ p& \1 d/ [% a( z* {4 @- k6 cNothing can compare to my love
6 G5 n+ e& X; P: n" H# H0 MCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
0 C, p( Z* x1 k' ~4 I3 lThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
- Y7 _  P# |7 ~; I/ i8 n5 H  X- [I want so much to see inside your heart
  d, A( n: p7 x' UI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
9 ^6 g8 r- Q0 AI’m still filled with fear
. a& ^) R/ H1 E* zYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
( Q! D, \( p; S* t9 I4 I/ ZI regret not dying
& K- W3 D9 j8 H4 `  t9 `+ RI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
: t! z3 n) Y) H2 v2 T! }If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
) ~$ a/ b% ?* \6 C5 _& h: L+ E. WRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

) g' ?. p. |# ?2 m) s. }<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ y( P6 H: V$ X3 g<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
( ]2 Y1 @  {: Q, A<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
, n9 K. }4 ^$ b- C  y: m<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
( |/ d; e! X" i* Y5 s/ X' g5 Y; n<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 P& v& O  }; K% \2 S<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
# y" ]8 W" s$ }& X9 j<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
  @/ _0 o9 H# o+ C0 R6 [# l<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( v: e" C/ \  X. }<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
9 N$ k6 |& d2 S$ L- S. L: p<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
8 A8 R4 y( j( u. ^# b; e+ v<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
9 q1 U+ p% u9 |3 R# U<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
; i/ v; o% f8 ?1 M<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
; g4 I/ |- b0 N: B2 S<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
# X& \( a+ {) n4 n' b<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
+ d. S) m- i) S/ T# y) ?<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
" {! I+ R- w& R2 ]. }<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
$ w$ L' `4 ^7 V( C8 C, Q2 K7 u: i* o<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
7 e  l7 [1 p$ k* h5 H' S2 S; e<P>I regret not dying</P>
1 @8 O/ z+ n; ]1 k/ T1 j3 t<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
7 j/ `$ O" N% Q; d<P>I only have one tongue </P>
' w( j& @- ~  Y% T) o& [: C<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
$ [+ S' }3 v6 [* d  I/ M: G<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
9 {; D: v8 O2 k. v, N<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>