【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
# ^9 E& p! ]& }+ c) ^" ~' _0 zThe moonlight is shining brightly,
2 H5 F$ h$ ~+ x. p0 i! ^Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; c7 ^6 ]6 r$ V& Y0 T- w# P- v8 ]+ HThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
' K$ s2 i" M: c" JThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
" k$ D- L# v3 z; xYou needn’t fear anything
6 i7 \* Y% y& p6 R& v+ DMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
* Q* {% M: h" uEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
) K. S$ l6 X7 v  U- R0 V- SNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
& n8 n9 w( z+ b% l! pThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
& P& r" e. q5 iI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
0 ~' s7 }% O* m; s' ^$ DI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
! q9 K. `# r& p  ~I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
0 S* V  D1 ]+ ]  F$ V/ a' eWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
! l, o+ I+ q/ d& ^3 f# oRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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1 U& B0 @1 W! P* R<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
% h/ U$ P- E6 w( h$ u+ V<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
. |0 ?2 ~0 I& \2 y- t1 V+ F<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
9 z0 j. l  @3 g<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
, L& r0 B3 ]7 U" f0 e9 }/ L4 H<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. Q6 M: N  {2 {3 j5 M/ Q) S<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ i, k" ^5 J1 A8 v# e; z, M5 l<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
7 R3 m( H( U1 z% p0 {<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
0 ^+ M# ~& D8 G# t8 O<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
" F% l0 `% p& y3 x<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
% ~/ ^& o# q. V8 K, N<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
! w8 Q7 O+ X5 M/ M0 r<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
8 f1 U& h4 t3 {2 {) I<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! h% n( D2 T% T% O' q<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
0 ]( B1 r: Y$ j' |5 M<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 y, }3 K/ H0 O<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
- O4 N/ m) k0 V<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
! m5 Z! H2 ?9 A5 m<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
9 B: e; b8 y% A# j( j& u2 U/ _% c7 Y<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
1 F0 }1 o3 r7 s! J<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
8 |& z; b0 B; q. z0 w<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
- k* Z9 O* t6 a" a4 q+ A  L<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) _% V7 e5 \; D/ k<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
& A1 w" V; {$ X6 h7 Z: {" s9 ?<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ M  Y8 C0 Y6 q" ?. d  m( N( z<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>