【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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' q( V! C  I3 C$ x3 \( KThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
* s7 u8 ~! W$ ]The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 m4 B9 Z3 ?3 dThe sky is happy down to its soul
5 N- @1 y" a2 k" jWith the moon kissing it every night
. U4 u2 o6 Y; _7 a5 w/ GSeeing the sky content with its love
7 G* T+ @5 a' V! ]: J. bIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
/ ]' I9 |$ c& U* PYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
' b2 R0 ^6 [* p( C6 T7 l3 nEvery other word you utter is love
% G9 i1 ~# v1 L) oI really want to know just how much you love me
0 K9 P- z% q3 SI love you I love you with all my heart
/ W& P1 a7 G) I3 t  L. SNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
: f  d$ l+ F4 M4 v: ?I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
! e7 D( E0 q; i, r* fYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
; M; M. S1 _9 B/ p4 n8 g5 i+ t: kYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

, g: F, N  e; G3 V. V<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
1 z$ B6 E% [  w2 X& s! F" D<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
& S" |8 u  p$ a7 |<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
) a4 r9 b% j9 s3 b<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
4 `  ~- c# f3 o$ j<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
0 O) N: ]( l0 {+ I: m; {8 h" h/ b% o<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
% {- _: @7 d% w<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
) ?' [0 v2 |  `( S5 ~5 T<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; b9 I: h) k' L<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
/ i) T% y1 `7 m; C) Y, {<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% U/ f/ L  ^4 x* I<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
" @5 k- Q# O3 T<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
  S. \' L- u' a/ e<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
7 D, o# s- S4 ]+ n; @<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
: ~9 N  ?* e) J9 D) P<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
6 L" C- b3 }8 f# R/ P2 b1 h<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
) I! G) @7 a5 n* ~<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
; d7 X; E) ]7 v4 q5 h<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
9 L9 \2 S7 [' {1 L3 c<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
) Q% j, z1 `( X3 I. D0 e<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
6 z- x! V; [; t  S$ T# K- @, F7 D<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
% b1 z4 K; ?* u1 t$ }+ }. {<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 T+ z, f: N% ^1 |$ b* ^5 z<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
* G* z  L+ Q) h7 J" f<P>I only have one tongue </P>
" n- Q  A9 a$ y3 d* K: i  @<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
3 V, k9 y  n6 s5 M1 B7 y<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
3 c# V9 l, B" U' [<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
3 j+ D- t6 |, s  z& N, g<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
  I2 e" c& [# b0 K* g% r<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

/ `1 \4 S; e+ c3 e  Z: S4 [3 N; l 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>