【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
2 {6 z' k0 L' g/ J) d9 h, S; NThe moonlight is shining brightly,
" y# N! p( o( m4 z' WMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# t% K1 g2 l/ p" S8 }2 z( jThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 y3 Z2 g% X5 t# W* B1 T0 c- zYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
4 }7 v. O; L* s9 q; S* ?0 G+ ^I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
  _6 I: P; ]" B/ i# K, cNothing can compare to my love
; Y; m, A6 F' G* H( c0 lCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
" K5 p6 e* y3 v+ i, uI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
$ w0 \7 w, n: l  L$ }8 [I regret not dying
% s8 m" S* z" R" l! ~$ _I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
; Y$ \0 }0 ~) G  h0 K) j6 g( u% FWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
+ s3 A/ f0 R- A3 l# A( FIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
. I6 u* P/ H$ ^2 R2 g9 Z<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! `# z: A. g' \, j6 v' V<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
& W2 v5 H7 e. @/ A<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
" o, e6 F: U' I8 d<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
% _% U* i8 `! J: B<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
) W+ |2 j5 U7 ]1 I' z6 s% Y! Z7 k<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
$ Z/ i6 P! w5 ?0 v( h<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- Y5 L5 b1 O- @<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
. D; |$ \+ @4 ]$ e3 ^8 O! Z; l<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
: Z* {9 ?- |; I4 D! G9 E0 E<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
0 X4 T# j3 ?* p& u+ H<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
  I0 }% b# C: ]6 I4 x& g9 D<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
' j: S: J( W/ ?) C<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
1 s! \2 Z: p! _<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 [" a) m4 f! a6 @<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
, O7 S- w& v  l<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
. k! [7 x- C/ z4 o* v7 X; H( D<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& W" [/ |, j/ s9 O) v<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
. k% D2 N) s2 O' Q3 Q+ ]3 x<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 e! e! P$ B  [! h& y! P( i; d0 }: e<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
+ l2 \- {$ [. Z# f& I<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
/ T) d8 q. s4 J# G% Z# ?. ]<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
4 {( ?$ v) q6 s& F<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
5 C) K( d+ [) S: P0 |<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
% E+ y0 o! W: F* P<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
  X! ]$ Y. g4 T2 F: v( k) g9 _<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
: L9 `  C, ]7 k5 ]; S% W<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
# Z2 t2 ]/ S* y( o/ }. X. C6 Z. c<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ A/ z1 |/ P! H) E<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>