【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 c9 Y# b( x# s7 s/ N9 U4 H. lThe sky is happy down to its soul
9 r' Z: u1 a+ k& s7 ZWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
* m! c  y2 ], Z! l' ?# zIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
& }; N, D" l% x) P( I" @My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
5 T1 S1 j7 t4 Q8 z2 h& FNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
- s# [. t) x8 P* JThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
0 {$ {: o$ `: g# X  p! J. BI want so much to see inside your heart
3 {! B! k; L2 a0 e% E( A. HI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
) c) t( L: ?7 Q, Q% A: Y% K' tYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
5 r/ t; Z7 v8 I, w2 h7 s8 y, L# V" ~I regret not dying
2 q( i2 ~, F4 ~  ]& L4 D5 H4 E* KI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
2 L. z. n+ E2 p. U2 \9 K# |4 NRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
4 L2 Z/ }0 u" P; K. v) D<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
  g( }5 J' O$ B0 U<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
+ p  ?0 \& f6 T+ H. |/ [<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
2 T1 f# z* F4 z9 T, I0 P$ b; c! T% a<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
5 c! @# ]# i3 S6 ?0 b# ?# u<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
/ d! d  ^# u! s8 @8 u6 g: J<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
: N) k! W/ D6 `& b* [<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# m8 i4 u. i3 g/ ?4 N* Z& q<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
; k/ k2 u8 r3 h<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
; ]* c' H4 R2 x" @6 M- w<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
3 f% P) l/ |8 t$ {# Y+ j8 @5 W<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 l, G& L- j# J: G<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
3 ~$ d6 J& B$ |; E- a) Z8 \<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
  |: X/ x) U% L4 Y9 O3 L1 P<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
9 X  ]1 ?5 B1 u+ _<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
2 \# n, G' N% t! X8 p9 P<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
) z, S4 [; y% V$ z* S# c<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
& b5 T9 {# _, Z9 c<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
# _) }. N" N1 I- J<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" }  w9 w9 C* {! H<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
% a3 O' U/ E( s7 S* `4 X<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

& x$ u2 f; t' j, {9 {6 a我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% o! Q3 ~5 S& I1 E1 o<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>