【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
6 k2 x& B5 T  B+ V! c) aThe moonlight is shining brightly,
2 g1 b& x/ @4 S) \. F* J. P# CMaking the sky glitter like gold,
, `1 c! N4 c7 S+ o# p. j  L9 ^When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 `) D5 J9 n7 VThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 _# x2 h5 t% nThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
! V4 c( @. u* N% p+ D  |* h+ @You needn’t fear anything
7 @, t+ W0 b8 wMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
5 j0 V" b6 x+ g6 o1 ~& fEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
) x4 ]) b3 I/ x1 oNothing can compare to my love
6 I- @! k+ B; v$ L0 Z. ?: YCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( W3 ~$ D1 {* R9 P/ D6 T" i+ l7 QI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
8 _5 c0 W. W' k- Z& \6 lI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
( `3 i/ r2 @! M- T3 a' FI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
" O7 f2 v+ r3 \Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 Q  C+ p  v& d( }$ m1 rRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

. ~7 ^, p2 O( ~  X  u<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
7 H) `- y1 }2 y9 U/ k<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
7 B2 ~' N6 p8 h1 |& k" c5 `% ]<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
$ G6 E- Y) T0 s6 v7 Y3 r$ S' P<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
) Q7 K2 ^; J. \( l4 N2 x" g<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
" H" Z% k6 Q6 _1 \+ ^<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
7 n  Q6 }7 j" r- }; Y# ~# |<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
# A5 {( {; ~) K: V) A" _<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 m" {3 O# l" A7 \* ^: p0 K; {<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
  \% L  l  Z. c  Y7 f$ O<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
0 f4 H. m: f6 n: e% h<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
' k2 R1 c! p9 w7 c9 X<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
7 J9 j: k; E6 ^; I$ y<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
1 {8 @& Y, O3 P<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& d* d" S6 y* c# m<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
) {6 E, O, j) j' f/ n, P7 i<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
( q5 m' _- ^* v% w0 a<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
9 N# q9 p! l- Q$ P<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
3 U; u: M9 d, O* B<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
' V" j, a. o' T. Q' B<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
& K9 d- }- S  q( S$ f<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
" I: ?2 t( q' M1 J6 f<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
( L5 ], Z: i% ~2 f+ d$ I<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
/ a' r2 ^7 x: B<P>I regret not dying</P>
- T; L' O; {/ S4 [4 n$ @<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
1 M6 Y5 \* k% z- S/ {- b<P>I only have one tongue </P>
- U- f5 G) G$ d$ _9 T# {- O9 U3 u<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
' n* l' T' }1 S% z' [, B' J. k<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
4 N  p5 k8 F( }% J! j' b1 ?6 t<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
; ?# n' b3 |' e<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
! {, `3 S8 k* X<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
& B: j% ]# Y% @( H- p<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

; W# e& j' O6 z' |* f0 D' p: i" X我请你剖开它

; A$ n1 v( P( h: F5 T, C4 R 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ |8 M; m) C! ?4 M<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>