【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
8 B% O% i" \* H$ rThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
) \$ Z8 K+ L% c' y0 QWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
9 B+ j) T+ X& BWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
9 @! N" g6 L5 {* R# {2 uIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
$ J2 K/ x! c( u9 Z; J- P& BMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
  B3 F' f' w! m& }5 \& TEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
0 }, m+ M9 b, G6 T5 _, NNothing can compare to my love
, t, z6 c8 x+ P# \* QCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; ^5 }; r! P. H& z' dThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
% H3 h* b1 F7 R1 CI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 B& w: D5 T% D( e- CI’m still filled with fear
& i, q) I$ [$ ~& e9 c" Q3 |/ NYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
' w9 V, T1 l. l; G- II regret not dying
; A5 J; W. U! i/ }; ~+ h+ CI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
- f: J0 ~) L; M8 fWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
5 N. s: _  D9 {' _Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
0 K1 S7 w9 |7 R5 l* K9 A<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
6 p9 p7 B0 J- `) e# R& g0 Q<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
4 V8 ]- u, X, B' d. |7 }<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
! }: G/ N# t* @, _! |0 l  m<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
5 r  V1 J. Z7 ]3 w+ A<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
' s. P( p/ N0 k" E5 l& Z/ ^/ V<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
  A2 q$ U, x- i/ ^. Z% \<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
, r8 J4 \8 y2 y+ ^, L<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
4 H# p' |+ p, j* i/ Y<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
2 F2 t; N  F4 ^  i1 W$ j- }<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, T2 Z& D% I' N9 o6 ~/ y<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
9 J5 }" H) s- [& r/ v2 I$ f; ~6 E<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
" a9 G8 @5 z5 m$ R: R+ @<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
4 b5 z& r7 F9 v. Z* b$ Q<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
' q8 l7 B- k' x6 ]$ |<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
( m* w* o& n- f<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
' G4 d$ k  h7 u( Z<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
% C8 N. S4 o6 S<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
8 D. ]( U" I# y" `, n, ]" Y<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
* k, R1 I( X" C7 j. i+ q( U4 @<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
8 B" }1 i4 o+ X: Y/ q<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
' C; E! c0 I" b: f<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
: J$ v6 f% l- C3 U; Y& ]<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
3 V0 `- u" N1 F* K<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
+ s+ w2 x/ \2 J7 ]) t; G1 D<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
0 a6 q$ w6 T+ j3 m4 H2 }<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
0 ?7 N2 Z& t3 s0 c<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
3 u3 |, q" n. s( U* g<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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