【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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4 u' ?" v3 j# e! I, l; g歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  ^5 d& x9 r% |- w4 B: o8 |The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ d# o5 |) C, WThe sky is happy down to its soul
9 r1 X9 |6 W- f( N( rWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
: ]" x3 U8 J+ xIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
  U( ?3 C$ |& J- ?You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
& A5 Z3 w0 D+ v. N/ k, ZThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
: q) z2 ^! M8 RI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
% p7 Q+ U# M. MI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
" M% J7 V; k- DYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

2 \' ?. a1 H. Z, L: A) C/ k<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
: h7 [) C/ i/ b" D8 T<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
5 `/ ]. b( r& y$ E5 ~  W7 [. y<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
4 y1 n2 x$ d/ a) }9 k<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
0 s6 h. {7 N& \, B9 M0 i0 q3 X<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
% W+ E* p  K. `( S8 N' c* L<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
- S, R* V; ]  G9 b<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
" v( |6 I. V: k: O<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
) e# \2 L( Z. w5 m# R  \<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
9 ^$ e* K$ [- }. j<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
. ^6 |8 K' ?. T1 @9 w; W" D$ m<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
' {; i$ P% {( T<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
4 L2 y; X# E- ]4 w% c1 H<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
. L5 w0 q+ ]! D" B<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
$ v7 C+ q$ ?4 ^/ Y- d, ~<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
) t6 @8 P) g: M/ x) x( n- e  r  M+ d<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
! t" P2 V! l( j) B9 T) E$ d<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! R1 B" ^# U' @" S( U2 x, B<P>I regret not dying</P>
/ r% R- C) _7 J$ K( Q# N! B<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
+ S  f* h9 v6 n3 W<P>I only have one tongue </P>
* a! o! |3 E  q<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
4 t& M; Y& Z7 U. n<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
, Q1 z4 w9 T8 U<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
$ L/ `9 `% P& _; H5 ]! x1 s' Z<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
: R# l/ a& C$ H4 b4 D5 |$ R6 ?<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

1 N+ s$ y# \9 `6 M# t/ [我请你剖开它

/ v* Q7 X# T( ^+ Y; j7 {. N: ?4 X 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>