【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
5 i9 w3 k1 Y7 A* W, e. SMaking the sky glitter like gold,
7 h. X& q2 U! M' ~& x; mWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( p$ ^( H; u- L! |4 H8 pThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
: S2 a; B, s; m$ w0 t8 O5 ~It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
3 B8 p! E8 |) v+ p9 ^# t2 I& x5 hEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
, @% r$ f3 _0 H6 _; V6 S& @I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
  J# i# l' V( l1 RI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 O4 U* \1 w( N& tI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
. L; C5 r6 [, c; q* X9 }# eWith such a tongue as yours,
; `* X; |0 x& T2 G7 v; @' I: \Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
. u" \5 m5 O! x0 B<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
# C1 N! T, ^7 V$ W. l$ b$ T+ N<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
) [+ c) L0 |1 |2 b% y1 d4 k<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
9 l& f- ?! E* N* a  K$ V<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
: B6 E! g' |/ d<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
, G/ N& h# [. L7 q- S<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; J+ @6 C) {1 {' \" ], o# \<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
6 p0 a  U( u7 o0 J<P>你无需担心</P>
8 r+ m1 y; B+ p( ~  x6 V<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
  n( h' J4 q& ^: V( W! t: L, {<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
6 H0 R" D/ \& w8 j% ?6 \<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
) J8 |0 ?+ i0 }( ^% f<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
; p! _/ Z" q  g<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
9 Y) P) u+ w, M; X7 v2 j<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
: P. a* r4 u) r6 A<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
+ O6 s; {1 `8 A* ^! `8 G<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
5 R8 i, D; r3 X0 M! x<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
3 M' ^2 x( T  Q<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
* H5 r, H$ ^+ t5 n  H<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
- O  \) k% \2 [# K0 X<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
9 i9 R; C! B  @; j9 j<P>I regret not dying</P>
" _5 q9 X! g( r0 c3 H! V; c0 m<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
  B: ~2 Y8 c6 H! z6 B( S<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; C. b5 ^1 b% N* O# r<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
. p* u: E  h- |9 }) K<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
7 K* k$ j$ A; g% g# G1 n( ]<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
5 z, B" T8 H' g' N<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

  E) m. }! p% i( ?0 l- U3 v 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>