【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 `$ l1 m! R0 K+ t7 @The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
' A( L1 ~5 |; E8 a5 }5 G9 Z+ ?$ a: C% CSeeing the sky content with its love
2 v) G( s  h& E1 e! I* T# XIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
9 v& @; Z/ ^# `% s7 }; D% N9 NMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
1 f1 A, t3 ]1 L( H$ QNothing can compare to my love
' t/ {& L0 O' A3 Q8 iCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
9 e! x- N9 w9 h, n. w; oThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
& F5 z/ j3 H: m/ r! k+ ?! SI’m still filled with fear
" X- ]/ n6 O2 f; ]# P7 ], r+ N* k- HYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) E1 r" Q7 s' H& w# {I regret not dying
% l0 V) h& A9 J0 I/ i' O+ c3 xI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
! R1 q8 T1 I7 X+ Y( ^6 \. wIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
- u3 H, r, t; |7 b1 Y8 e% |Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

4 Q7 B1 X  V, M- o" m/ E& v1 j<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
1 |) l. u+ t" a+ P: Y<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ w8 ?" ~6 W, l! \<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* \0 n- X  u7 J<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 O& }5 ~/ u$ \! H8 L<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
9 {# X# Y0 l" j5 W<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
4 [: [* f5 J* W8 F6 o5 c" L<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
% H" t- @/ e1 j, {. a<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
$ [6 P% `- t' ~9 D: [5 M9 t7 u. W5 Q<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
% E0 S- [- K0 @/ g<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
2 A- ~/ f$ n- k" }( Q- H  K9 X<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
+ m2 F0 v: U# b# e1 c<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
) ]; M- R$ Z. J5 C$ k<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
1 t6 L' @" |" g) D) ^: b<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 X* }9 T  o3 T- I. l<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
: \1 ^4 k3 S4 V( t; C& ?0 `. l<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
% G5 K4 `) @1 l, C( O<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- {; x- Y. \) @  Z; X8 [2 P<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
, k) _+ i6 P1 g9 Q  o) z+ X<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
- p# u6 ?1 d$ J) U1 {- x# c- g<P>I regret not dying</P>
9 ^4 |9 a) @, I! r- h) i<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
5 H" l: _4 N! t8 x0 W8 A<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  N/ ]! F/ L" |! [6 n. y<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
4 ?' B4 P+ o! E<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
5 f: G1 j/ z- @3 a" w<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
+ x7 Y) I1 x# z# Z7 t* i<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

& F# v3 I5 k, P1 w& Z 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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