【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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# r, Q  C: j' I+ |: }歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 P6 m- S* A" s2 w" a2 P4 hThe sky is happy down to its soul
; ^5 X- g: X: \' w. J& @With the moon kissing it every night
, K0 b& Z' W2 Y& R: USeeing the sky content with its love
6 v7 L+ y7 D& i" W- V) E8 g9 eIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
2 H! v: ]' T0 XMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
) x. |! o  L0 F: u1 J! L" b  R+ z- n4 `Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
! A; V7 H  ?9 g1 |& FCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
5 b+ L3 K# C5 f; s! P, F6 fThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
% h; }! L! r0 g3 Z8 OI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
% y# W7 j# r8 M- M" z8 q2 XI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
) S4 z7 v! j! Z3 i; rI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
. i  q! q' y" H/ J; a  f( W: DYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
) m4 t5 ^5 E) K( y6 n0 LRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

2 X; a, X; M% a; P. ?) E8 G<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
+ o& \5 A( y- w, j<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
8 f: c1 ^; {( Z2 D# E1 q<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
: q8 G$ t  J, t" {3 d<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 p/ t3 W1 ?# E6 R0 a8 U9 m<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
, [% |! }) j5 c1 v2 U<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
  D- c) C$ \- K2 W! q5 q6 y8 |/ \, n<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
8 {1 f" j7 b. \<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
- V4 u- R9 ?6 N/ l( Q2 P3 c* `, H<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
2 p* I  j7 B+ X$ p<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
; |$ C- R8 d- w6 L, H<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 b4 y0 L7 j/ p- `# r  J7 r  E<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
& {) C( F( W4 _: {6 W8 g<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
; f& F1 \/ n3 S<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
  k( A' ]* S$ }# V1 E0 |* }6 i8 n* ~<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
  Q* u3 k% c! [/ V5 ?; w' u8 D7 C<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
! o! u3 u& F# C, R+ {) J$ L<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
2 q8 L9 b' ^; \: M3 S<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
. F2 B) k+ ^6 w2 M$ [9 h, }<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
/ k5 @3 i% t+ {* Y<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
; C4 s8 S# [9 a; z: U) J1 A' L<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
& K4 i3 i( \2 U; V- q! ]<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
3 ]( D6 ~% Y  b: v/ L<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ c) k) k$ e3 l. d% Y, W+ L<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
/ A" @9 X/ w8 j5 K<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
* A1 Q  Y+ `) Y# p3 @<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
9 B  [) i. ^) Q<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- P' r2 N% F6 X1 B; e$ C. L0 I! `<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
* T* m) _6 j$ A<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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" {; H% s* \* _5 N4 b! P我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ H5 }! M; Z+ }: _* N# v<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>