【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 E% o% h4 i9 i4 d% F0 DThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
+ \' ?) r7 E+ ~) V% ~/ KWith the moon kissing it every night
& K( H. ]/ F, o, _Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
9 [! W7 G) J' i- H% p/ TYou needn’t fear anything
/ V! h2 p# p0 A, zMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
+ Q$ T$ |* t3 O" AEvery other word you utter is love
* t9 w: m( ]  ]1 K8 d. AI really want to know just how much you love me
) J" }; L. I" b* B5 DI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
! K* x$ H& U: W# G( kCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
% H6 G( o2 {: E- ~9 J) qI want so much to see inside your heart
; ^& S9 q7 O5 Z7 F; t# x. ?I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) Z% }& e: s5 T" O5 z2 qI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
1 ~/ j, A8 s0 K+ |5 m2 Z& TRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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/ k# T- e3 ~0 p3 Z9 g<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
! q/ P" @/ v/ f( {  x<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
* @& E: a; C" |3 r' M' Z% e3 ]<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
+ R9 t  i9 e0 d+ |: e<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
/ _/ y1 ?; Q! d. X. S2 a3 P. j<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
5 d$ q/ K* Y/ f' b7 J0 B0 o<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
, i) f3 \9 A$ _1 b3 i% k<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
( q. d4 p" M0 m8 n. I<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
; O+ U2 |$ B/ o& C, s5 @<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
0 Q/ g% v( {9 Y6 d6 F9 Q<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ M) r1 W$ ?: Z, |+ g<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 x6 ^9 a" j& s0 J* Q) r<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
5 Q( t5 X7 {+ [4 c# y, [0 p. Q+ M<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
+ Y. m) T: @% y<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
2 j! c' R, q2 U6 K% z<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
1 @7 M+ e9 \/ |1 k<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
) [! o* U( X' u- |<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
+ p1 D9 k, S7 r. V+ l" m<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
- h# O% `5 ]+ ^6 H, e7 |. s2 P<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
8 S; W& f) A# n8 ^( Z<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
, Z6 n" `  R7 Z- S( ~  J. J  R<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
1 R' G% N: i5 ~# |8 \' c1 M<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
' l! `4 e$ b* n+ W7 R4 r$ D* D) P<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
0 b% a/ ^) K. P# ]3 Z/ ?$ L<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- P6 P8 Q6 C  V! Z. [1 G9 h<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 a5 _4 R6 K9 |$ S/ u4 ]<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ b$ X6 N* ]/ r1 r6 C- s  Y<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
# b" |4 ~, t$ [<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
+ O9 v, C: n; x) A) M- R<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
" d' V7 ^# G& ]$ G3 t<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) G# V0 ^" j2 f' s' U, N# x<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
7 N! p- `( g  ~$ P  E<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
( ]5 A* n: q! |" G( g/ S! r<P>I regret not dying</P>
/ u( k" o3 X5 V) f7 u  t8 P<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
# _# T$ l+ H6 K% q) f. F3 Z<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 I% E- w2 B/ D<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
  J0 m) l* N" t3 S" k! S<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
! T. e1 v) v3 n2 ^/ V; {3 A+ l2 _<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>