【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
6 h% R. f4 e, p# D( ~3 ~" sThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
% e8 Q9 |* }3 C0 hWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ a+ C4 E9 f% s$ h5 JThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# {2 K) c6 [+ a. j- ~! L6 xThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
; m, c# J  p& |8 X) tSeeing the sky content with its love
8 C! U- `2 c! C0 P/ r. A/ w1 wIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
$ n: d; M# q& V5 lMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
2 b4 s0 ^% o  D, KI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
3 S: {7 m" |' L: W. I  D, W3 ^I want so much to see inside your heart
; u  L* G9 @$ l: O7 RI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
! o1 i8 z- |1 M' {: \3 `I’m still filled with fear
( x9 O- \8 `; A7 K. NYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
0 H4 n+ `( L9 h/ J7 YI regret not dying
7 s" l' D# t# Y0 U, y5 oI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
: \. x( q0 B# k1 C+ i$ kWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
- V) T0 [* w: P5 [8 s# ?4 vIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

5 y; K0 I$ x& R8 I" N# V( i<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
$ H* m( R4 h3 y1 z: o<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
4 X; K3 s5 x1 ?& z3 n8 k- d<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 r" y+ _* C/ C$ N( }0 d- J, m<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
+ W( ?. j% z& k0 G/ s+ |( |<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
7 ?  y1 u- a( T6 D<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
' ]9 v' u8 }4 t+ B9 p<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
. s8 N' H4 h! B* u0 s0 {6 h<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 L+ w. `# G" f) e9 H7 S( X, J<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
. [8 ~) v6 z  w<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
, |: G) _$ i  Y<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
0 C7 H6 n: _! e8 K& w2 D<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
$ }5 n3 a; r; {<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
. Y- d: H7 e' @+ ~% u<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
4 d  E% g3 o: d  C5 A* e9 s2 ?<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
% N9 T0 \8 j* s6 Q8 @+ i4 S<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! f. ?$ ^/ r) f' X: B<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
. B2 i' {. R6 T9 N<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. w4 ]8 M% J# Q/ c<P>I only have one tongue </P>
- q/ O+ I5 t' y# |<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
' n/ D! X; J6 E- }: |. d1 r% k<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
! x6 w, d% h* o6 D# ?6 k<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
) `5 x$ o: y  _! u* u# Q0 w, J<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
) x. }/ n4 a4 J5 x% @$ O+ }" r4 h<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
9 x' f1 d. |7 J<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
& P* c2 x0 T6 J! C/ Z: N. q0 y+ L<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

- K4 W# ~& }! F. X: `我请你剖开它
1 L0 W9 h% H* Q
+ u  K% d/ R0 ?, a5 F& k 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>