【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
8 V! v2 f0 X  i9 k  xThe moonlight is shining brightly,
; X- @8 u4 e' h3 v- T8 T0 zMaking the sky glitter like gold,
: F8 n9 @  B( j- YWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% W, `# e! n( r; X. O5 vThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
9 @* W- t% K/ U* z& Q* |Seeing the sky content with its love
1 n" c! J3 P& r% ?! H  @It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
2 _* d# [. G: K% g2 `$ F) SYou needn’t fear anything
" N" g& Y& c; B, X2 X9 dMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
( J( W% i# {+ c8 L4 Z( ZI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
# q9 e% O2 K/ I5 oThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
" J$ ^* I4 N- T3 J6 F4 M. Q7 [I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
9 E1 }* b4 l6 E. _( CI regret not dying
( x* o. c  k3 T$ \, j: nI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
8 L( r" j. A' y: t# r" ^  LWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
6 {0 `" m# h8 n2 R$ t+ B* [1 xRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 A, i1 G) S& _7 _" y, Z<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
0 |7 `7 J  Q$ M' P3 J<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
  Z4 J1 V% B# ?7 g; \<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
/ Z) z9 ~- K& j* p% N0 d! T<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
6 x' H: E1 q1 f: m<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
* Z, y; P9 b4 X<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
( L1 @0 [/ i  Q7 s' [( |; z0 G( C<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
+ J7 r( L& P: y' }( m; |$ E<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
2 D, ~- s' T0 s0 _4 U9 v) [3 A8 V<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
% f# B, I6 @6 |% R& Y& J5 Q1 n<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
0 Y8 u0 T5 J) n, u6 v3 x+ j( @; z<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
. m/ S2 M! V6 F& J1 T0 _* J5 H& t<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
6 K! z' t% m# W8 Y<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
/ _( `; {/ @7 \2 ^<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
' Q) d9 N# z  P5 M% g; G4 S<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
6 N) a, R3 u; o<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
- w' U1 z! J* r  X/ U4 S8 v; E8 i<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
- f& s7 ~# @. ]( ~<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

, n" a* [% c' E& @) d我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% n% C0 R+ u& \/ A4 Z' {" T) |/ }<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>