【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
" S0 A; S: a# PWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% d$ q! c! K7 D9 GThe sky is happy down to its soul
# _6 i. E# N1 `8 d( s) TWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
+ N) R4 n: Z2 D$ M- w3 L& GIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
) Q/ x5 `- Y' O" u% nI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
0 x' ?- V0 e( C8 o$ @3 E7 N# HCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
( P3 I  A6 `0 aI regret not dying
" Z# j  ?8 n$ e) UI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
* l1 l4 F) ]4 Y8 K" z% s1 J2 g; j, [With such a tongue as yours,
2 j6 R' H8 B- ~" `1 h/ xYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
6 x+ \) U( X( o& F( c3 o2 W! LRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
# e+ a" V, d9 c. L  Q<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
/ @8 z$ B0 z" r0 d: j# R<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
, Y, l8 [& b$ ?8 P" J<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
$ p! h6 {( k* M) e' c  A<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; ~% p4 _' x  D7 }1 h8 D' J<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
1 d+ Q& h5 v) _0 }<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
; a- q$ ?' L0 m<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
5 s' C$ u+ x4 E/ T3 k<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
& X3 E! S+ |! j  |. x4 z<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
+ @$ h- j, u9 s<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
& c3 C- a6 m/ G9 e# o* ?<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
( p9 p1 `  `% T$ g. m<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
, s2 g3 {+ f) h<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% H1 e; ~/ l: d<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
; P8 ?4 j& a8 H' N8 g  E) R4 C1 U! Y<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
. H; b/ i: C5 i<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
& K. d1 `; X9 Q3 `4 F0 |. s<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
3 V) M- Y5 {. T5 }* d( [2 x/ U8 C<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
) k. N& _" C- u<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
( M5 A# ?4 O) G0 \0 Z1 w6 L<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: I) z( }' o6 `# Y6 M- X* m<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
1 ]8 q9 Y$ d) S; k6 S: h- ]5 w<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
8 j; }( Z' u9 [% n- |% K<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>