【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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* p8 L, ?% Q$ H7 S6 V2 r7 N歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
5 w+ _* h, {4 S2 ~+ B0 a" v, F8 e. gWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
# k& \5 Q/ a: z9 h6 U/ G' J. M) t" DThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
$ Y5 \1 \" f. W  L' p; xWith the moon kissing it every night
/ U- M( {; C' j4 I" [Seeing the sky content with its love
9 K2 B) u, H4 A. XIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
# o. C8 B" T* D6 x2 [8 V) A) aYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
7 N" x5 i4 E7 @* `9 G" i3 M" yEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
. }! O# z. z/ M% a  b* K- |% V7 `Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
6 M3 K/ j3 M3 A: X7 h/ y) {1 \I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
; N: R( c1 K, d4 [I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
! m# [) o, w/ `( P. w# qI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
4 w0 P( D2 D+ P" P* i1 w; PIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
8 A0 t2 f* e: L# a4 \Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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4 k" l# K2 P% g<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
& I7 }( M+ z+ V, g9 R/ u<P>月光闪亮 </P>
; ~- C' Z/ }4 T2 n6 q( k<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* g+ P& @7 J! j' a8 d& D2 r<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 @' n! H. J5 a% j<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
  @* V: Q  ?) n0 |) W/ P<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
, F4 [9 z, ^; I1 g" [4 l4 ^$ M<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
; _  ~) ?7 h2 i! i<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
9 |  ]- Z3 g5 ~8 r$ v7 c6 `% V0 T<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
7 _$ N  G0 g6 l# n! ~1 ]) ]6 Z0 \<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
+ F: g  ?3 `6 c<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
; x- w0 J0 D* z7 |" l7 ?' p# y<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
$ j8 ~3 m5 f, z/ r) d8 C$ A) |<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
5 V# C( N5 G+ V0 m  D- o<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! [" X- z* X! Q  Y<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
$ X- h- b! e/ U/ V9 y$ w<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- o: v0 v& O' i+ \9 u) d<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
" j* y- |' P. B; Z9 S<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
1 B/ l& m$ M$ w<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
$ v3 s. [; y, N4 R3 L. o) V<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
9 M$ [; b+ H% Z, P, y+ O0 R<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 Y4 O" A8 @1 b0 z' ]" t2 ?<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
# q) S8 q: o) I6 w9 S0 |) o# \<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
$ }7 t- _7 X' h* m- M1 ?" J<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
- S5 A3 k* h! G, P# T1 b% D  v* H<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
/ v: z5 o1 Y, m5 ]) A2 R7 P. l6 B+ Z<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
. Y8 w# R# G* ~4 K<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
) C9 Z5 a/ Y- f  F- M4 @( R<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
7 I7 m0 E- Q9 q<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
( j& U- s1 Q- L1 Z<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
1 d( G' u: U8 e! W' E<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
5 g6 M% s9 n% d<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
8 v4 `! s7 }3 S$ M' A: C<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>