【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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7 v$ x5 g2 r" [4 p% N歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
2 k! s. r* I0 X0 R  b6 ?8 f4 fWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
! o+ ]2 i  I. h- h$ z) g% b1 HWith the moon kissing it every night
& d* b+ a; n, f' xSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
  C' K9 t+ M2 T9 SEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
) R% K6 G! y# f. ZCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
" ?6 f3 q2 O# A8 l5 GThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
6 h( r  G% _; J2 c* E  ?3 OI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
; P$ ]) I2 h! ZI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
4 @! p( `: I2 D$ C9 [- D/ D8 oYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 F: D& @9 E/ d% v5 {  u3 u* {Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
$ T  S& B: |: ^- o6 C6 C<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
5 L" B! H) j. n/ J<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
: `; \' }% l4 K9 w<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
* t5 o; [/ g7 J<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
5 K( S. F8 ?( y$ Z; z4 M# t<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
0 C1 }* M  X& U' }<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
/ U  Z7 m( m! V# ^( |2 k<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
5 w0 \4 z& {. D- k5 _# i+ q<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) g1 J7 w7 I/ ^# e. L) Z<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
, Q) b+ ~6 j" g( q+ x) b<P>你无需担心</P>
# T* K4 u9 \) ^( G: x# }<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! O# `0 D: J' J9 f5 c' p<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
( b( p! h& x2 T9 k" Y<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 W. N; s& m/ z) z<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
; i8 ^  ^0 f0 G* }<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
8 G1 {/ F; y+ D2 t  J2 h<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
1 ~6 L. K2 x" Q, X<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
/ W! A0 D% ~& R* I<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 X2 \( S4 T* M+ E7 @<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
0 S  U! E. j+ Q7 p; C' l2 P- U$ T# @! ~<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
% h: ]" J. l1 \<P>I regret not dying</P>
; f8 d# ~3 i1 B* T9 \! V<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
" f+ V1 D$ `( U. r& `<P>I only have one tongue </P>
7 N& [/ c) s' t( R: @: H: c<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
" f$ T; |3 i& `) [4 Q<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
- y8 U( o. o# r<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
+ T. q7 e1 z' G, T( s<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
# ], |  q. [# y! A. c9 p4 X7 \<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
6 I. Z) @. H" W: t0 ^/ Z. }<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
* E  Y. x" p. H( Q<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

) K; A/ D2 p! T3 n) X/ ~: I 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>