【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ F, F  k  d9 |7 c4 T: uThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( a: {; L- @6 [2 [The sky is happy down to its soul
0 Z: V6 ^$ ~2 n" j& c* K! FWith the moon kissing it every night
) z, H7 u9 _0 k( ]2 jSeeing the sky content with its love
( S) V5 s# z" H# y. sIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
/ ^3 \  [4 f7 |1 r7 @+ P1 H) b% Z: PI really want to know just how much you love me
+ t- Y/ b, R" X' n; qI love you I love you with all my heart
+ j& M1 o/ `" }, u( X3 b3 P0 o, tNothing can compare to my love
# d# I6 T9 L8 [Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
, }- z( Y5 t& G( M5 ]; OThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( K* _! |$ {+ d9 MI want so much to see inside your heart
6 c/ J& p& t, o) d' a) W6 tI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
8 k$ t2 G/ q) j  H7 N5 F, PI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
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I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
; G3 @# G0 T& b  U9 n. sWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
8 U8 V+ s9 q1 G: [- X* OIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  g, x: N) T5 E' l/ g6 F' XRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

9 E5 U6 |" }3 ~2 q1 N4 m<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
# W) p; `9 B# ]( m1 J<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
, _9 L# e, f3 a* P<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 \; V8 Y4 d: t( t, U' a<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& {( X# `! [) Z; u<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 {' h, v  f, d/ s- [- r& e<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
( \$ P& U  O9 }<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
% M  x2 \  h6 t; w) `<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
# L5 d3 Z, [7 g2 h4 z& d<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
; b: m( c+ ^; A7 x<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
7 i7 D; A% ~7 C6 v: N; {<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
7 w) Q. V/ `4 W1 p7 c7 H# V- m<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
( U" d6 ?$ C9 E0 P<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
3 C; B3 r% a0 M3 {! Q" [1 ^6 |; B<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
# S4 j, F9 L3 r' T<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
: ~/ l5 e1 ^* P9 `# g<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
4 q& a) u1 H6 G+ s<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
0 P' z) }; N- o- _" W<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) c9 ^* k. a7 ~; k& s5 M1 \1 Z: t<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
4 d$ A7 g1 @1 \' Y* [2 k9 {* @; X<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
6 X2 G6 M, Z0 w( j. D% C8 H<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
) Q  c* L. [7 l/ L! R; H<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
) s% K- a" L" Q- l<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
# z' }& v0 _/ b, g4 [3 Y: o4 ~<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
* W$ r6 [% l" {8 ?6 O. q<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
' g# m- F3 ]- N& D) Q<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
7 |0 t* B7 U  K6 {: E<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
" z1 T7 ?! o. r) U. a<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( |$ \  R- a8 W& a3 V1 ~& K<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>