【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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/ C$ a: {0 ]1 j" L- y歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
; Y$ D; L/ h2 Y3 t1 n, jWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 Q; w) i' h! H: A8 h; I) O! lThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
3 l7 B1 p' x. \2 NSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
, ~: f# E9 c7 \* d' X( y) MI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
- N) d- n' A3 H; g3 B5 m4 XCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
5 N# K# H, d/ d9 VI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
/ ]2 Q/ V6 J1 `, ~Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
0 U: M) s: \1 S& q( Y8 V<P>月光闪亮 </P>
) F2 m6 L3 u8 F, W& I: U4 w<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
# f$ z% k# L2 q1 O<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 r) s$ a2 ^8 o" ^" k" h! z<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
/ {; y0 ]' b1 E3 l& g( L<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
8 B+ ^0 e" x/ }7 {% f/ {<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
7 K+ a0 I; z# z% x7 k& L" B3 _  w<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
0 j( J5 T9 `& g5 Z9 i<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
; e  Z' [/ y* n  O7 R2 g<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
1 w: N- q/ M. E, s( Z0 s<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 h. c$ b6 T6 X/ C<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
( {# H5 [9 i& W" e<P>你无需担心</P>
, y; Y: ?% P* P# C6 a<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
- h% r/ @9 p; e* O! z<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
, B% |. R" j" Z/ v; j! ]<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
6 n$ {2 o2 J' B/ P: p0 n<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
  @  l- t3 v- \3 v/ E<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ O! a" y- B, Q3 i2 F$ f+ E" k' ^<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 B5 h7 W& j7 ]1 \. F8 Z+ ~) ^0 d9 x<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
* Q  W3 z! V& Q0 r6 ?<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
% W- r; K0 }: s" m% v<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
1 i7 y" T' F1 D- A# d& C<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
+ l: A4 N& {2 y! B* s/ c1 R<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
# ~5 s8 ^+ G. ?3 [9 \; Q  w& L: p<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
# F( n6 G) A5 t. ]7 z; ^<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

1 k" A  E5 p+ ?4 g: Y- g6 S我请你剖开它

  M- ?- O$ w- R 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 v  f+ v9 [/ R$ J. {5 m<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>