【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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* y  f6 |' f. K歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
, c" `: m  M; d; t* ~6 @, l) ]Making the sky glitter like gold,
  J- D2 F: D7 @. d  V) yWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
- @, J% {5 {: N9 d. t+ SThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
' `8 ]# e: `& S& S7 k7 \9 j* D# pSeeing the sky content with its love
4 T. i' A4 {* J/ z! H6 n# GIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
, Z4 s) r+ I8 K/ J+ r" lMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
7 ]( [2 p1 [% ]4 O% t% EEvery other word you utter is love
' e8 C+ b# s$ E2 wI really want to know just how much you love me
$ K, @5 o6 }& k! x  |, ]$ xI love you I love you with all my heart
- f) N( Q& v& TNothing can compare to my love
0 `. n4 h6 V. E, l6 b  zCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
2 F: S5 o* d7 H$ w/ bI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
" X( b$ U0 h. S: n7 ~: OWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
; I7 I! u: x/ @% O9 r9 A: mIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

' N6 E; z) j" H5 }, K5 y<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
2 M& o1 ?/ L' q: i& ?1 F2 p; r<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
6 V! z& _! y) [<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 S3 P) L. P' p" e% A<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
" e# t: A3 h: H<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
+ s* ]8 q- y1 X<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
0 I7 R+ I# C: w8 J% h. F<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
3 Q) ~; K+ n, v  v3 N" e. s<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
( i7 ]5 U0 D4 V1 T7 ^<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
3 O8 K" a9 l8 M% o7 J: I% f<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
, i* v. t3 s6 h7 j* P<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
& N% `+ H  r5 z, g' W<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
" w+ P% {" d& z, l0 a; q<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
' E8 p4 c1 t' a& R. `" z* k: h/ N<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
7 S$ Z2 ]9 b5 c2 `4 l) _<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
2 [# \/ D! X1 {' s6 ^9 @' y<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
: q* z! O9 d! G0 B% o- |<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
8 N! |% Y  k+ i/ B3 J<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
$ K1 z6 M8 S$ U% k<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
, n: r+ _) i3 U4 M7 |2 K/ k3 `<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
- t8 N, u3 f7 y  }, f<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
0 ]# ~& ?0 o- R+ t4 L" Y6 w, k; E& g<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
; Q8 k3 Y  A9 t# _8 ~# @" v<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
/ L2 o/ V5 k% H- I3 U3 ~<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
5 |1 G1 U& l9 q( k% S2 l1 Q! v<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
# z7 f2 _# i  }% J, s1 `1 V# ~<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
* R  P' D3 a2 B<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
& C* z+ |: Z; k4 |: `1 @$ ?8 z1 G<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
, ]' y8 u$ H' m4 `- x& F: S<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
& v0 V) ^4 z) r+ |+ N<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
4 [  d- z$ _1 c( z$ U<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
: ?9 w# B. K2 L3 R6 r<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

' @5 Z4 D5 Y& @& C我请你剖开它

- Q' ]  V- {. e% ~5 s4 ^$ b& V/ r 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>