【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
  x: u- Y, }; L2 }1 cThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# e5 }* F! {: g- A6 o- _7 l8 |2 ZThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
2 E2 ^0 o4 x: W  {9 R% U5 Q$ NSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
/ D5 S! i8 Y2 ~" |: y7 cMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
/ i1 c  ~. q* x- tEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
: \" q& G2 m7 J) O( x/ T+ R# d3 uCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
/ a' d* h. V. X) bI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
# D1 x! c# f6 j% bI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
" e4 M2 B8 b, G9 y5 hI regret not dying
& d/ @8 Z, T8 H% `8 \I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  m5 o- u. L2 s9 JWith such a tongue as yours,
& e& _: V8 l% l+ rYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
- \% R4 A2 U9 V1 @# V, `Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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2 Z& D1 F! \" H  d3 `6 T<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
# B5 y* J5 |5 T4 M0 {<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
" P/ q( M5 y. N; I" f<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
+ }2 l. S: W* N5 O$ w! S<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
8 \3 W" j  D) o! o$ d& ]<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
: l- l; T' i3 Y<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
( p$ J9 I5 w  q<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
. |' N. L9 r8 x; _9 `<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% \' b7 Z6 ?$ x, Q2 Q2 N# T$ i<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
& Q7 n4 w* s2 `7 B/ P<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
: B. i  X. F0 _2 j<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
5 v: a0 S1 }0 G5 J9 [1 _% M: F<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
3 m, ^. Y3 C6 K0 x/ w<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
& F( ]* |- K; q$ Y9 c; N0 Z% J: N<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
1 _( c1 ^- {0 F( l<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
( N% P0 s6 t) x0 u2 R" A5 S<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
; z& z. \) M. m0 O. E2 ?2 a" ]<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
& p2 x- L: M9 M& [3 x$ y0 B<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
  A: W, l6 \! J4 I8 f<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
# }. r$ r& [( ~5 D. [6 `" s<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
5 Y: u3 c( B9 f5 m<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
; E( R; T1 P1 D  C) k" e4 v& I<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
8 ]+ M% z$ P* t: r+ e2 B<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
( @- ]% j- [  Z3 S<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
5 H' n; O% f8 \; a! s4 T# A<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
5 c% E4 r8 E8 u2 Y) j<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
; A$ b) V8 Y$ A, i: |) p# h$ r/ |<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
& @$ m7 L  o9 Y$ F0 M. s4 H<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
' W: U# W# K, Z. o# t<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>