【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
$ \6 r, u6 b/ X! b' `5 {1 c/ z/ TThe moonlight is shining brightly,
7 u. ~8 p% C8 XMaking the sky glitter like gold,
% _9 u1 Y, J8 H" J! f+ w  MWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% M$ \' N# g! ?7 I7 BThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
5 [% l8 L) \1 z  J* t) F: R% t; i! RThe sky is happy down to its soul
$ {+ _" T8 R% g  D& G% ?  pWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
: [- H% p, E' G' {4 n" ~# KIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
  j# h) }$ M! ~& m* O' QMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
9 @- P# Z5 x8 N8 o% {; ZEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
& `) t- a; U2 s1 f+ YI love you I love you with all my heart
* S' ~+ m3 x, J) M! C6 H' kNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
6 p/ G& |8 ~4 t: t# d) {The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
8 N5 Y5 ~6 A9 g, ?* \5 q4 MI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 d* n7 ?0 y5 yI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
* A  S, i8 r7 N/ \- A  uYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
5 [0 o4 F, S5 C) p. ERambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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% P" ?) J7 m: O' I9 Z9 [' ?% G* B6 ]<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
5 N% ^, D- _* e* C, f<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
6 z8 A+ z. q4 U1 \<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
+ X3 Q+ G9 v* o( c<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
9 [! W) B7 y' x/ M  {7 G<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
/ `3 s, t% r( {- \5 r9 i4 S<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
- B0 `& \) n9 i- c1 b# k<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
/ w. K  Z3 j% T- @6 `- B<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
  j$ T7 [; J2 `, t8 e2 _: M<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
: t$ v1 k( ]: ?" B4 e) a<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
% I2 K" F5 G' J2 h5 N& Q<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
2 f; A1 M* \  t: i# Y: Q<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
. v" n$ A' ^# J# t( a0 _; Q<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
7 J# M, x) x- w<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
: |  A& m7 M) y& A* Z% [<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
* c( {. D' `. T% m" A- V<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
' `2 q1 g  N* H2 O$ |, L' f<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
7 v! ^+ W$ M9 Z1 I4 Y7 m3 A<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
' B' t. R. m; s0 s<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
6 F4 R3 E# R, ~4 R<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
% [3 {: _" i7 V2 k* n<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
  G" p% z; }4 y1 k! t<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
. M7 f8 f3 n+ U' [) C3 Z<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
+ D3 z+ x7 P4 n* f<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
% i/ e+ W% J' Y8 [2 d+ J. Q<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
. X: }. {. b& l<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
; O1 _5 T, b* Z9 ?<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
$ x0 U' B$ l3 S<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
' c& \; e# f5 m2 H3 W5 n3 o4 s0 t<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
- N3 A0 ~/ a$ P0 K) u3 P; |<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
7 y2 R% E' S0 S( I" K7 G<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
3 t0 A+ @4 h$ ~5 ~: f" ^, E<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
  g8 e/ t( j  v7 N  V. F% r$ D0 A+ k<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>