【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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+ _$ ^9 `/ f0 A2 f歌词我附在后面。
6 p5 y& r4 B& K3 uThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
; r( k' k8 ~* p$ m- CWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
' \# w' J: U. Z5 i. jThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
4 }* H  M% e9 |It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
! m  u3 D6 ?' ]' m/ a( l2 {You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
0 V3 w5 r+ L8 k% o9 oEvery other word you utter is love
! G% X  \$ n( AI really want to know just how much you love me
& \$ |, k' h# ~- Z0 a9 N9 lI love you I love you with all my heart
( o3 F- K, m5 QNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
5 r: U/ H3 j5 t- e% g$ a7 JI want so much to see inside your heart
  q8 G" {% ?: M9 Q1 W# v2 E8 L8 AI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
/ f; z1 O% m6 a$ oI’m still filled with fear
) I5 c0 Z" ~8 j! T! _/ L+ x$ TYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 C* u+ B+ J- N: h9 Z2 kI regret not dying
* v. |! Q7 b4 R; j& O: J$ II only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
4 K( L" h4 X$ W' h, `' _* }Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
! b8 ^! ~8 H. A. q- n8 P% o& QRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
7 o* B' Z+ P. E" W7 S# H- X6 F" I! F<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
+ ]; K5 |" N% S5 V<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
+ D" S4 ?/ D4 D& o* A& ~' m/ Z<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 c8 `. j9 h- Q8 w<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
: A& r) W$ ]! |0 Q0 w) |3 N, o<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; c& Z) |4 j: K% m0 y<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
3 t4 m5 N8 ^9 |  ]! D, v% z<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
$ H, q" G# Y7 Z4 s, z' y<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
+ T  b% N% {. m5 z! c- W" C' O! |<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
1 G- Y4 C5 _4 F  k  Y. a6 r' v<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
( P0 o: c5 k4 W, `4 W6 z6 f2 i7 a  U0 L& o<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
! l% I9 H2 Y* G* C" N" p0 ~<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% v- ]& Q2 `# A) s<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
# M+ C4 H( b' t* _) U1 Y4 p' e<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
; @' X2 }! {0 U. i<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
8 j: z; O" ?5 C* @2 S4 A, Y<P>I regret not dying</P>
& ?, k6 A5 F; n: f1 `1 Y<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
& Q3 `9 e1 F0 }+ s! @# [<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" n. i8 R7 M$ z1 |/ a' ]<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
, o% B& E% s" u% D<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
3 k' V4 P' [2 c3 u/ L4 o<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' L% Y+ x; Y3 j/ q# I<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>