【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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# e, Q/ B1 U8 G3 e歌词我附在后面。
6 ]/ l. M1 {/ S8 W" D' qThe moonlight is shining brightly,
& N* c9 N) m" Y6 j: F/ XMaking the sky glitter like gold,
$ \0 l2 z  h6 jWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 |' z% l. J- v5 Z  ?% a) RThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
6 z6 m% p2 n8 R  \! {' a3 ~% pThe sky is happy down to its soul
& {1 c0 g; h' T0 }* aWith the moon kissing it every night
3 N1 p* o4 O2 ]" \* w; lSeeing the sky content with its love
- M# ~" `$ ?/ M. X' ?5 gIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
# ~) t, S4 e/ {6 J8 v2 b6 ?) aYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
  b7 T+ R: Q0 u7 _" V; J# yEvery other word you utter is love
% t' k4 \- V! B+ |& mI really want to know just how much you love me
. d5 Y7 x! F- u2 _* P, JI love you I love you with all my heart
" E9 [- U- N8 f8 D* v: r- uNothing can compare to my love
, v6 @1 j2 R$ L/ f# |  h1 dCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
2 P6 b% k6 h) N, r" QThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
4 {0 h& U3 b! C0 cYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; E, E, B9 d, t( h2 i! NI regret not dying
6 T# ^$ m, M5 U5 k+ X7 v# K" EI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
- o& n2 V. U: x, I4 [Your speech can’t even keep up with it
4 Z  K& w; E9 L3 WIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  o, }9 R. I3 Z5 w* TRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
* m7 Q1 T- A9 V' J+ p& a# s<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
* f& ~/ W4 `* \& g<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
( }: h- ?" y  ?- i! a) V. t<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
9 R$ r  e  }! J# `1 d  C9 h<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
" \' o, k+ m3 Z; N- W  q3 U. D<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
6 A  l$ k+ N+ X& Z: {<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' W$ z0 F/ p5 n<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
; f! {0 z6 W+ Q. _' J' @<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
8 ]: Q. K, n  E) p% u<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
! _/ H- @6 ?1 M, r) N3 ?0 Q<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
" q. X! r2 X) k+ v- Y5 b<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
: ~. l1 S7 t1 E# @<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
# Z4 \6 T6 K4 {<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
) b$ Q$ Q4 b, ?( v' W<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 U  c; P: p  C+ v/ t4 j, J- s  M/ L<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
. e) j) {9 V4 e: n<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. l' A% w: m# O<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
) I( W: J0 i% }<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
7 r: e$ v. {; @' G<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
, @: c6 V8 S# H9 [& X. D$ y# ?' M<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
/ K, y  H$ O: m' ]4 f. ^& [8 {<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
/ `2 j. {! a3 {  f4 c' _<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
5 m  h6 A. l$ _- W) a, U<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
  \$ X- W# _8 o4 X% `  h+ t  I7 T- M<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
& P( j& [- r5 S6 G% @( j0 H<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
1 U) S* w1 V2 }( i/ O<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
  i% D" _& b4 W- R6 X8 x8 [2 V8 X<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
# w$ }- R* m& k: E/ K4 k
我请你剖开它
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2 ~0 v, u; U, F' J1 W( W# e9 h, i: { 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 @  z6 u, y2 `; J( \2 K<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>