【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
6 V+ f2 C6 \4 h- SMaking the sky glitter like gold,
1 t& K  Y2 O5 K- gWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! u6 f! Z3 H4 L) MThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% E3 _3 l$ S" f( P1 pThe sky is happy down to its soul
$ |' Y) e$ s9 N5 G( EWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
( z) a7 E* S* ^& H$ pI really want to know just how much you love me
$ }3 G+ s, O6 K, r2 [- _  iI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
: H! ^/ s  c& x( e& @. `# rThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. R. ^0 A* l- j/ H6 NI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
# t9 U% ?: K/ YI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  M( K! l# o+ ]1 A& m  cRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
" g# n. a* C9 s<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
( c2 C( z3 q0 h1 @( P' F<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
/ [7 F/ \' k6 A& X" y<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
/ w6 b  \' L2 F. o/ `5 s! b<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
; A& h8 A6 K0 U0 b) ?) e0 F8 S9 e<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
0 l/ ~: B4 s3 x% b<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
5 _* G( D% X+ y2 J' ^: w<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
# `# K7 i  {$ V3 k<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 b4 Q3 O. S8 s: {6 ?! z/ n<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
% `6 Y1 g' S" ?9 u, \<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
9 x3 b5 p/ ]- H<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
4 C7 G) N6 k  W. W8 P<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
- [) T8 u! `- W# j' n" y2 g. r# M" A<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
, C0 y% C  y6 ~; [9 I9 B7 z<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
/ }6 G, p9 o- r$ G$ o# c) H<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
, H. V6 F6 |, @- O) @8 Z<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
/ U. R* g$ }& B<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
- |5 M; s7 `9 k5 ]<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
3 k" v5 o$ J7 R( s' ?/ v4 W<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
+ y% i8 [6 X0 z4 M- t. b1 R8 M, O9 }<P>I regret not dying</P>
: N3 S: B  S/ g2 t  Y# d! _# a<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
+ Q4 l& K2 {' ^/ ?" N5 ?/ x<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
0 d$ Q! A+ V& M6 O! R' v8 ~<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
; {  H& @( Z& ]$ I* P<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
- H- W" b( ?+ c% \4 g4 }2 ]<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- E) L+ ^3 j0 L$ D" B$ Z, A. F0 c) D' y<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
" d6 o  W# w, F' e* h5 n<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
1 R% r2 w# n7 l8 ]& R' r<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

$ V! A$ h( |4 S- d; n, R8 o 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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