【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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' E5 S& X. g( L8 {8 q歌词我附在后面。
) K& E- t/ @$ D2 g5 gThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 V$ i9 ?5 Y. A* J; Y! \The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
; M5 \  G/ a, S/ ?) @2 w9 JWith the moon kissing it every night
4 N8 J' r! ]: P5 V6 P. XSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
0 A2 }7 M7 K$ H  {8 q- V: dI love you I love you with all my heart
) V. t, R7 _+ \% w. {Nothing can compare to my love
, [3 G: }$ T7 z$ a* j) J& s# fCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
! A. P* w9 Z0 f2 f. pI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
! I: V# s! V  D+ ]# II’m still filled with fear
2 j; M" e' s  EYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
# p' W) B/ S1 S" k# i) m# @I regret not dying
' G( ^3 V# r# r" PI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
" @) ]# _3 k: ~+ NYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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, a! Q2 ~, u& }<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
( j3 _& b5 f# t8 X& p/ ~<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
4 B, |; |) j5 S& Z) Z<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
+ I; y# I+ l5 W" N) Z<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  e. a& j+ q7 s) z# Y, K2 L* |<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
% d3 U- }* V$ i<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
) p: L) h% _7 C% C; I& N& D<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
" v9 i! F8 Y( Q/ Y) m. c8 I- P<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
/ W* u. X* l( H/ X) f5 N<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
  R5 j/ e; o& i<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
9 G5 a8 P- o! l<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
5 P# ]; I- |4 W$ H+ ^<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
0 n6 k2 D. G/ g  C) P* \2 b& @3 p<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
- \  N) H- D7 R. l. Z# w" e<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
) M, A3 f. T( D- Z- V<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
6 s8 `- Z+ o# |8 d0 b<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
, A4 ]8 E! O$ i6 B  f- q  t<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
, w, J' K" v2 Z# V3 \) ?<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
/ }" L8 U2 b& U! {! c<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
' p2 d4 z  K) i<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
. B" H; P; g! k( }4 a+ K<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 O* w* L! ^" d. o1 x<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
. @6 z( c6 n" P) j% W<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
; S! J) f9 f7 {/ P<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
3 I$ D2 z2 v1 l5 f7 r" C5 v* {<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
0 \* b& x  \$ j. i7 e7 i+ I<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
% e) c5 h0 [, m4 r<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
) s7 @# M8 e' j4 H/ n6 {: i<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
* h1 x* v4 f; Z* P7 Q<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
4 C' Z" ]! |8 u' k& T4 X<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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3 T# |5 l# Q2 J8 f% W( ~/ E2 E 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, R. J! P3 N" R<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>