【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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# a: c; E2 l1 j5 ?' F歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
. o) c$ o9 e+ k1 ^% O$ z4 ?; k0 aThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
# q$ m5 i- ?& y, g, {. F2 QSeeing the sky content with its love
$ s1 e5 R$ P7 H3 ^" O9 c* X9 F! ?It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
0 }0 c! @; Y- Y# @You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
  t5 h" b+ O- y! Y: p# X" l/ [; REvery other word you utter is love
: E' s& V' W; y3 y( M2 f) [) }) AI really want to know just how much you love me
! c2 z9 N0 L. a# c' V" c8 j9 D& qI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
' B2 t3 c7 |# T. I+ [1 _6 ^The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
- \1 p7 i, x( n- ?1 PI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
8 L! |' K; g, o' cI regret not dying
& H' D& X, [1 {7 u5 mI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
' G' L6 P5 W8 s8 c  FYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 _6 Q1 V* y+ W: v, o/ `0 ~<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
9 s% i! d' y; D+ ?  y<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
$ _4 ^7 |0 `! u- s4 E<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
" h; m; E; N& c; @7 P6 N( K5 {+ a# _<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
9 E2 C% m1 W. ?; K% ?5 y% k<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
9 q: P* S8 a0 u2 @+ Y<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
  c$ V; U( K' r<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
0 A; M2 Y$ E5 O+ o+ k) m4 @0 q0 k<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
3 W$ Z! m( @, o* N, |$ i9 x<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
7 R8 p) s. q7 G& F; S0 P- e% }<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
1 o( e* b2 k" }& ^0 {<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
+ J2 l. z- V. B3 }2 N3 F- `<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
$ j; Z8 w: O3 \. a$ ^4 r8 {<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
% w+ n+ |  e4 w' b<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
+ R* W( s, g" r! O2 h! p# x" ^<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
- a9 A! N3 J3 Z8 [2 v" V; m<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
) u% l4 u2 w' t2 X) H% P) j6 x7 w<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
4 R; x, s) _" C4 ^& i% X2 M3 Z<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
# x( o- w' l2 W( \<P>I regret not dying</P>
' I$ `: E0 V' y% |3 Y# K<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
# N6 F0 T, U* ^% ^8 v7 _<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
( R; a- x" L5 z( h  ]<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
5 i4 I/ ^3 d# f" Y* N* K9 R<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 F! y# P6 i+ n/ D+ t<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
3 q9 e0 N& _. H" Z: ?& u3 ^$ I<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>