【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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! o- \" C- X. H% \5 q. V! b歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
* e7 v6 W! b+ S8 a( cMaking the sky glitter like gold,
9 D! m  m. P. @. t6 FWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ L* s6 @; n7 ~' mThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
2 P) F2 h4 S; \$ t0 uIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
7 O. w! A) R3 u* k4 a6 mYou needn’t fear anything
: Y9 w; I; F/ f: h& D8 R. S! A! ^My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
0 o+ ~% }0 _( L9 mI love you I love you with all my heart
5 y' o  R) f1 L, S/ rNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
8 b2 m' d8 \. e: I; e, UThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
1 V2 b9 D" f% t5 a& }% C$ q2 QI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
1 `" X( F& d& c) {" II’m still filled with fear
4 J6 Q/ }: D3 @Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
9 x0 ^% d! z. D- XIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
2 x+ x  H& K" T1 ^2 `) mRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
6 S; q9 p5 q& @# R* w5 Q+ p<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; h! L7 m2 [; h% X<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
4 f% v- L/ _& Z7 r( M% \# k8 A5 X<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
. y5 r6 V- m( h" P<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
& u1 U, {% q% T  r; v" k/ y' p<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
) r6 [2 `6 c5 ~1 ?3 P. q<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
+ ~6 Y" |2 k. ~% I<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
4 j0 X2 A6 ~2 `% Z; E; Q# B<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
- L, L3 s: F4 t- o7 L; I8 }<P>你无需担心</P>
1 n6 d+ r8 P+ r3 s5 w8 D<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
4 r5 Q0 J% O+ s! P% {/ r6 \' u0 c<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
& c2 W$ @, M9 w% I! G& D<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
% {# l; H. E- m+ F: U) b<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
6 e- K  o! R  r: ~& s<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
( U( ?2 C* L$ E2 s: R* M1 J<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
9 H0 B2 k3 W$ [<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
/ g+ w1 [5 F6 `2 ]$ k5 h<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
" Q) r! j: F3 s  O/ b1 V<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
$ A* B! i. ?3 g+ W+ W. q<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
- r# e% n) ?: i9 s7 i<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
+ _# j& I0 O, e) `* n+ o: y/ b<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) `% m% `' L. L+ j, [1 Y<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
7 A/ I* R# d( m7 V) J' E( l<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
0 j  R5 N4 C0 Z) K; V# A0 e$ c' p<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
7 d) L- Q7 O. }<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
9 N$ x. m* I* }' R1 |, ^<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
. k+ i/ ]1 ]1 M( D# R<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
! i  i+ [* I6 w, K. h<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
7 k3 `7 I! v% O) e<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 n7 D% e  i! ^6 g! j/ i+ [3 U<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
5 [9 G, O& ]$ b+ v+ C" J  h& q<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

1 G1 B: z9 h3 _0 Y, [' \我请你剖开它
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, t+ k/ G! c# g3 F" r0 D 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>