【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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8 u' F& r) Q5 u% |6 K+ e歌词我附在后面。
! Y7 p$ I: i. {The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
3 s7 o. c0 ?! A7 _$ i' b( G9 Z/ ]With the moon kissing it every night
3 v% C- b' w7 Q( B9 ^6 O# @Seeing the sky content with its love
$ |: Y' v0 `; q3 `It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& l3 ?( v* R) U, sEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; m: y+ m3 E8 h9 [# U; n% g- LThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
; e: m$ T% ]  \0 B) jI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
6 [" d% c8 X4 f& BYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
5 ^) E; F1 l# J3 }With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
" _# R7 ?$ I1 b1 A+ ?If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
& W# Z6 x& Z* N2 F5 m3 D2 X4 U- vRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
3 M7 a4 ?( P/ T6 r2 V$ A) j<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
) [0 V; a: k/ V# {" h% r<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# `) k" j* `/ {* d9 H* O3 M<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
% F9 K$ n& K% R  d& O$ L<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
/ @7 E1 E( K0 E% m<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
, Z0 Y4 l: D) {% Q6 t2 U9 x<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
1 j2 J( p! s# I( C- n<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
* e* n& i! ]% |5 ^" k! V5 z) D<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
! h' ]. V/ h3 R6 L4 z) x) ^% J# Q0 Q" @<P>你无需担心</P>
, s8 h# W* K% l% G4 X<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
( U' E( c& D, E; U3 L- y<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
/ ^, j2 a. S/ f  D2 p* l<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
' A& b7 i. U! z2 U+ d/ a, f<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
+ H, a2 z2 i7 `8 z. t<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
% m) h; h$ t4 X- L/ n$ S3 I<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
3 K: Q( T* M' y) y8 \<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
" Y, [- W5 F$ T( L<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
6 x7 u& u3 Z9 w, g" M; v' V" r<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
0 z& g; y& [1 s$ X1 Q2 s3 A# }3 l<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
, Y# D+ j; I) s% \* U' E<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
2 w* W& t. ^) a% K  J<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 C$ C; L. g( ?( s+ T<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) T* @2 J* }% P) `: \<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
, A  k3 ~6 M, y$ V) I<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
+ H- T  x! `+ b0 P: w# K' n# p6 ]<P>I only have one tongue </P>
& l9 U9 ^9 N: p8 V6 L<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
9 b7 R3 @+ Z- a7 b; C<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
" D3 z( X7 T! k7 Q<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
% `1 ^8 t  J; t1 b1 P6 M' K7 _<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
! U: g. [7 {9 A; I, F3 E# f5 I<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

8 c7 H& c! S3 y3 {8 r/ C7 W! u我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>