【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
+ U2 H( `9 y! V/ g! h' CThe moonlight is shining brightly,
; c5 J* Z+ N  L7 EMaking the sky glitter like gold,
+ r; g2 j0 H9 `* Q6 D) YWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
6 s' y( L& Y; l9 k* B8 X4 b6 xThe sky is happy down to its soul
3 n* n, k( m7 s* h* A$ g. v, W' [3 PWith the moon kissing it every night
' q/ J0 J. l4 H. B! ^Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
' E) K8 `; m4 s2 d2 s7 mYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
! q2 f, z, P0 I# i4 OI really want to know just how much you love me
: W7 R6 R% r4 J4 T( h4 oI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
5 m5 @8 a. G2 O3 @I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
) ^5 Z, u! `" w- oI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
0 H/ R0 j2 c/ L$ S8 B  X, s: {( zWith such a tongue as yours,
0 c4 F" f5 a& l3 |: N& iYour speech can’t even keep up with it
  V* {6 ~% M- L6 R! O% A3 o( VIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
+ r9 G9 `  h  I6 DRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
1 q, ~8 A+ K. Y<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
6 `3 e  l4 |3 F; x* O9 c<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
/ M5 f8 b9 t8 Z' }<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
5 F+ e5 P. l* F<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 J' }& U& B3 T0 R! @8 n# F: O5 D<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
) C9 ~& ]+ P- |<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
. ^. z( M3 g, S3 j+ h. W<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
: i3 F) a, m7 Q) d<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 T% V0 V; x2 r; Y<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
: I8 c2 |6 l2 S% K0 |<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
. g. x' e, E. l7 _<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 s0 p) b  R& \+ s# X2 |<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# x  c- M6 }/ R<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' P/ G+ a+ Y8 l0 n# d  d: F; c+ I; M<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
( `2 @+ Y( @4 K4 M) V1 N<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
& Z& e/ x+ O/ k- r7 R2 h8 y<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
0 n3 F; P3 u! g<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
: @* `% _! l0 D2 z7 U: e<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
4 H/ \/ B0 M. S<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
( _& c8 _: h9 X/ E2 @1 q) P) t<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
% u% E# O5 K$ H<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
" \* A$ \4 c/ E<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
: n4 }. Q2 H- y! k<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
. Z$ l4 w' v6 T; ^<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
/ ~* [/ E+ n5 U<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
  J" K; \: M: c1 ?  Z. N<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
# u: L) M2 I, j# B1 x% Y<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
1 }$ {' a& F5 Z<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

; k1 R$ ]) t$ |! L1 @, O6 I我请你剖开它
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7 t* D7 y! a- [: H$ B: f 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 _8 h7 Z, x. Q<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>