【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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# \: [+ G0 q5 w  y- C' N/ d歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
. N% {1 P) e" Q2 T1 rMaking the sky glitter like gold,
4 e0 c  H2 D9 s+ O1 C  uWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, ]+ D( K5 |4 O5 n" w4 |0 ~3 ^7 |+ JThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
& |" Q6 n( F9 p. U7 r+ xIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
5 `. X( c2 Z- z; e# ^Every other word you utter is love
  p: P/ B0 s( x$ q% R' v5 YI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
% |7 o% D4 P  E- O2 cNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
. W- u* g; d' T- S) MThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
) ~- r3 n5 ]/ j% L. h. SI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
: C4 \1 {& D9 [* T* W0 `I regret not dying
0 K$ v4 ?' Z! ?2 GI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
) w! S$ {0 a( `3 x) @Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
  h3 O/ N# C. ^9 e! o% l" z<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* \, j6 n& s2 d, |! |* S<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
7 g8 Q# A* K, j! {! E  x<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
* }2 m$ `5 w$ Y9 m<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
) l8 D8 L1 J7 x! r* X# E' w<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
2 P7 p& W1 U+ R- w<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
0 [* E+ p+ s7 {; f8 T0 d<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
' R% U! O3 o5 M* O( O5 q<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) L  `0 P& @2 n+ n<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
& S* p1 _; S$ x" h; o4 @& g& f" b4 r<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
) q: v- g& I  _& I  S) e<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
  j8 |& n# \; w4 j4 i2 T<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
2 Y% n- d, `" q: p<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
7 t, V9 O' g! S% v" d, S<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
. E" y3 w8 z  k) Q, R<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 T6 J+ ^# D  ^0 u8 e. _<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
6 p, X3 e4 l+ \0 W: c1 y: u<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
: U9 N) {3 R0 w) Z( P( H2 C3 ?<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
  I4 ~$ ]1 U: F0 D8 d- Q<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
0 q2 q( @4 N% g6 M, I% k! L; {<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
4 j, W, H+ F' ?2 n' g* j0 U<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
/ G+ `! |: S/ w5 S, v2 R$ E<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
7 I6 y8 _/ ]3 F4 J<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
7 S  I/ @8 y+ k<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
( A, {/ n% X: ~<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
+ G' y( y5 M$ Y  {' m* w$ P<P>I regret not dying</P>
* Q* h5 Y6 g- e1 u! i9 @<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
( Y: O; K; ?8 M6 p( I4 d0 _8 C<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 y& Z# U4 I3 P5 a% q1 v<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
. h. L! x( J$ r: I1 o<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
1 n  Z( b; V3 |0 D" G: m/ }<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

3 Y' W0 D% A  w: C; I; R* H 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>