【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
/ [5 h% y1 \2 H  G& e& ^% j7 _( @When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ U9 e$ q) p% S7 c) m( yThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
' J1 l$ s  c4 KSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
' Q# p) h! Q5 Y2 k& s; pEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
1 W; g$ G% Z6 y* B2 ?% E! `I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
% D( T+ f& o' R6 w0 WThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
: q, [- e- P; q7 t8 @) }9 nI want so much to see inside your heart
1 _" N( \1 A3 _, K: EI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
. q8 z$ `" a, V' ~Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
7 v9 D, r" ]  {6 vI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
9 y+ P( M/ }. Q7 j2 q% [Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

5 o. o1 j# e2 X<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
8 g3 Z7 L- z) h) I" |! _' w# M0 F- D<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
) O5 p% r9 j) {" I<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
. J' U- T+ B' J4 @( y% o& F: I- c<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
/ e0 L7 x2 P1 Q<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
1 t( x  {% B1 v% g$ u<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
4 r0 k; u/ _- |: y7 N+ q; B) O<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  P3 d0 _, b; |3 s<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
8 E3 v  M; l: e2 Y  u<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& B5 w3 }2 x; ?$ A+ Y<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
. F6 d7 B7 M5 O) m<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
+ z; o2 @  n4 L( j5 ]<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
0 a* ^/ ^  D1 T8 w: G* w2 V<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
0 K, o; K! z+ b% x; `* H$ k, Z9 V0 b<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
. q( A- Q) G# J* ?<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
* t+ Z, n0 \. P) o# r4 _<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
8 Q; H; U. v" |& r0 D( M. l<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
$ Y, i; f% g4 n% z  D! m<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
5 G" I" g9 [7 b8 m<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
% P3 w# _% q5 d2 u1 |! p<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
) g- l: u0 L! r& R2 [<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
8 M- z- [' ~2 o. T6 u<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
! ]% o% z4 w" ]0 U1 {: \<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
! G4 ^' {9 {3 y9 {7 U' D: f<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
% ]7 Q0 k8 j( K  o. Y% i, r9 \<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

* k8 `/ P' b  P0 O 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! m3 _$ I" [, _4 f/ b<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>