【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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  O7 S+ `( M" w# n" _歌词我附在后面。
; y" a- Q! ]+ a: a% C2 ~: SThe moonlight is shining brightly,
9 q" k) [+ a1 ~  g( eMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
" C& [% }4 L$ {' DThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
( a+ `, D- z* B! s: JYou needn’t fear anything
* ]$ t) ~# H. c( F4 o# T2 ]/ LMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
0 v$ z: ^1 Z: s3 e% i2 q7 }Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
* G, v) U; q4 i* U" a3 p' \I love you I love you with all my heart
6 z  n- M) b5 G( v, o. {Nothing can compare to my love
3 {7 [/ l5 P8 S# k$ z! qCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
5 y7 g5 a1 F- B; s7 yThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
: @* q% C- Q: U6 ]I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
4 L6 F% q. k, A5 S/ OYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
0 q2 W7 l/ \3 c# ~I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
' S7 C5 ]/ P5 r% d, a' OIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
, c- I$ E* R& a( p8 P<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
$ g2 P6 c( g. W2 i$ ^7 e<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
) @; w% ~) k. z2 [<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
1 a0 }# z0 I* c! n7 E% y<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
8 v# {8 C' x* z<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
/ F) f9 q5 e$ K$ b6 `- q) a<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
4 z- J" N5 Q. }<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
, F6 J4 V1 y  J7 D: {  p6 O) s9 f<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
- o! c) Y3 }3 [: S, a/ X: C! V& \4 G<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
: T) Q! U. d/ i% Z% o<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
( O+ |# Z1 _4 Z<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
  G4 T  K# z$ x- N9 @; X<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
6 z) v4 Q' {( s8 h<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
/ H3 g% v+ B. S, r; A5 M3 E<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
, j" R8 A" r1 x% z; s<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* K' p  h# e" X  g<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
2 s: m7 H9 x" I8 c9 _4 _<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
1 K3 B6 Y# I# J0 o% g' A* ~<P>I only have one tongue </P>
& r+ b  o4 I7 L  X$ o<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
- u) T6 X2 [4 Q' {6 s5 y% R<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
& i! Z- |* U# ^: L; b<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
/ [3 ]2 t) V- L8 y  |' E<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
  [, Z! ^, Y4 V! R1 l+ {8 c<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
8 Z! c+ v& N6 `5 x  k0 }: w. U: \" S<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

4 `" H; R7 N: b) p& z我请你剖开它
3 N% D* R* m) g$ `6 b$ w
似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 o7 u, ?# h9 q9 f& f+ ~<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>