【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
7 e9 G* w. k1 v9 I5 \The moonlight is shining brightly,
# w0 }! d% b) l7 u( \6 t+ R. iMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
1 O2 a2 P; m- pWith the moon kissing it every night
: d3 |$ w# l5 B+ ?' j; C/ A  FSeeing the sky content with its love
2 k  T. N; \9 MIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
3 o$ J6 O+ y5 b) \6 h3 K2 s8 ]You needn’t fear anything
# p6 k9 F9 G) V" u3 WMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
$ q  `! ^" u2 s* g" bEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
' n) a( m& }2 n* }I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
7 |9 I* \& n! {2 w  U0 CCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
% o# I! e  {& A+ r) E" j- z) HThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
5 E9 j1 L# _+ B& q& Y3 f+ dI want so much to see inside your heart
, r% U" I( Y! R* \I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
5 n9 |6 q  I3 c& kI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
: t5 H* @! y6 b7 K4 F; p" r" @With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
+ ?0 O' m; ^0 z<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
+ @9 k; i7 B% @3 @% c<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
8 [$ `& @7 G7 f<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 L' U: ^1 n0 Y9 N3 ~2 u1 d<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
/ p; j5 o4 x4 [/ H2 j<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 t$ J  ^! Z: t9 e- u. N<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
' @: e9 {# h1 f: u7 g2 Q<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 B! r' ?9 |, c<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
  s! J9 w- a! o3 A( n/ W<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
1 G$ i$ G4 W; n+ t& w<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
/ ]8 L) r, t+ |; C% ~2 Z0 X# Q) U1 t<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
" W$ M8 f; L' E3 b9 R$ N<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
$ p0 R; r4 d5 ^. ?3 k<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
1 d" T6 Q" _, c) j. R<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
! e7 S0 G7 J$ X1 t* V<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
+ L; r+ y' S3 ^' L! e<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
. H3 p3 G+ u- h7 u<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
  C& z3 t( q' |<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
5 ?# V1 i' y. q1 ~<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
% H$ y7 t' a. j/ }1 C5 B<P>I regret not dying</P>
$ w- c1 O% B7 A( u6 |4 @<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
& I0 W; Y& Z9 _1 c<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
  }$ `  |" y( `  y& X  n<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
: @$ O' O/ G, m3 }& c$ C6 I* e<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
" h1 t% ^- P  V" \" F<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
7 i: ?0 E+ G7 v2 Q" V' j  C' C<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
9 L( h3 G# h0 S7 [<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
  C% r- h8 u4 b2 w( G5 v<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
& p9 f. e& K5 x1 X: w# P( L" m0 @( U<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>