【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
" C+ B: H3 H. s2 TMaking the sky glitter like gold,
  v3 w% X& l+ i, j" _When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 h3 b( g- v/ sThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! K1 a6 A% g* O" n( w# k4 B8 ]The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
  i" ^( w. ^3 ^) o, xIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
* B5 _' b9 ]9 A1 ?9 l$ J9 PYou needn’t fear anything
! c4 [; G$ H7 u& R1 U' I$ xMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
8 Z0 X* v: K# d9 I1 dEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
, T* l# l$ B" S5 g8 D4 k/ xIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
3 C' m8 Y% g* Q8 [) l; IRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

% F  K  R7 j7 y<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
5 H/ o8 @' ?) z9 V# K- c<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
: w6 [' |9 y4 W! ?! ~1 o<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
5 ~& Y0 j  E3 R+ V<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& m3 [, [) K, Q7 R<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
3 R# B; P  u- j% q. o, E<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- O8 B' E7 l8 u# b' Z5 O9 H; x<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
$ g2 Y3 U& ~, K( s3 d# o0 G<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
$ j5 Z/ r6 T- k8 z# k* B<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
* B5 u9 ~4 `6 Z  w; w/ \- w% Q<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
; q: m8 _- b% f  z; Y! f# T2 _" k<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
$ f! _3 s9 l9 }0 z<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
+ T8 u$ N$ t! P4 l% K<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
/ a. ^  g/ f2 K' R<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
" k+ k+ o' Z. i: F8 i3 P- r5 A/ \<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
2 x. f; z; C  g<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
/ [: U7 p3 e. `0 Z# n$ \  E5 J! l<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- }. ]2 P# ?$ R3 _" x3 v<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
8 E  s: \5 V5 `<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
  j/ D2 b  u3 v1 r2 g<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
! N2 X8 I, x' i: D! s- Q<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
; v; y1 y9 f- P# _2 Y% o<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
- ^2 B- O4 g0 P) k( B3 n& K<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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- I8 i! {- F. C( |* X; V# n<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>