【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
6 O1 ]+ I8 {  P( e: f% Q7 K+ U+ aMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
5 V1 o! K# Q: P; Y/ xWith the moon kissing it every night
3 b" p* I0 U. @  d5 VSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
/ [, X4 J4 i! I) ~# [1 [9 a4 fYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
  I. k5 ?' j# l5 m) }; zEvery other word you utter is love
# ?) `1 D) m/ g8 b1 i& gI really want to know just how much you love me
4 e" \4 F. y% T6 T: U; fI love you I love you with all my heart
2 ]) p( h$ \0 t1 A: JNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
5 X  F( h, ?; g9 h; PThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
/ W+ Q3 ~/ |/ @+ g% ~  `I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
6 ~4 C  k5 Y  k6 }1 i! G+ yI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
; W5 Q5 e7 \+ N0 _5 K; T4 nWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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: O! ]* @6 n, z2 c! g3 ], F, i$ P<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
9 N! F# o6 X, R( H9 V( g: f: K& T9 c<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; ^0 E: E8 z& \0 ?<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
! Z; K: B& B  |" u<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
& n- R6 y$ U4 z& L* W6 T  \<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
6 ]3 U1 w; r! @; Q+ D<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
# h0 P8 k" W7 p<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
4 v5 D' C3 s& _, B9 E/ G. l5 P<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
) ~$ a0 C0 R' c5 F; e0 C- S, ~<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
1 P$ k! l0 x7 {5 t, H<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( `* w$ h8 ~8 g; e8 {: n7 G<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
1 D+ }' z' D( y' \/ {<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
+ ^5 c5 K; c$ j$ B, ~3 J<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
, Z6 J0 l% x- F" n  y<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
* u+ J: }2 A# Y, W, x0 G<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 i8 |* q1 m/ r. `9 U! r( H, I<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
' ^/ V0 y1 D( E6 ~' B<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
4 y; \# r" M9 {+ V4 r& F7 S<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
4 S: S$ `6 \5 E- ^  _& o<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
  e9 i  v! X( F) v9 T3 ]2 k% Y<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
/ x+ O8 g4 r, d; Z( _6 a( d$ {/ Z<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
( ^- i9 m) ~) o) i) D* ^) T# E<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
% N1 ]2 ^1 @4 k. I<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
7 L% [& r/ m% U" I# _: @0 |<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
/ ?0 \9 ?3 T0 S/ T+ D  ~2 h<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
  E8 {( B1 @+ n7 P; t5 V* ^<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
2 e' G' _4 T% D& y<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
- E8 p1 @) T) F7 A, }<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

4 l7 X) \8 b, }+ M$ R6 B5 u3 o我请你剖开它

+ ?. H" e; e* B+ v1 E2 b 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ E7 T7 [, F* j4 g% C# Q. m2 s8 t/ H4 v<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>