【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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$ @) l1 w- D$ X7 J/ v歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: U4 t1 J$ L: z/ H# V% {5 T# \+ mThe sky is happy down to its soul
) a6 |1 c% p( a) I( XWith the moon kissing it every night
8 e4 c6 T. e  z9 I. aSeeing the sky content with its love
' W) N& v3 j# y, {5 bIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
- j. x* e' ~  ]2 Y' i- Z5 gYou needn’t fear anything
) X6 m$ d$ Z5 cMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
# s2 N4 I5 Y7 i& EI love you I love you with all my heart
9 ]6 I0 ~3 j3 YNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
8 r# n5 f' b$ P3 \3 g1 Q/ aYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
$ z2 s* j" p. o2 u, i# }, \: sIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
- G) f2 H1 W& g3 IRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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- _- m/ Y. \7 G8 b# ]<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
: Q- x% V, G/ @<P>月光闪亮 </P>
: r& O7 g6 m: }- T* `+ m<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
9 t6 F! L8 [7 b; G$ @3 d<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
( }* `. q' X+ u; @# c/ l* p$ f# w<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
5 t  k- W7 m' @/ F8 }! P<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
; Z( h2 h2 N' g2 B" c& k& K  x<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
) _, k. |' u6 q+ h8 M<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
" Q* d! Y3 G' G/ G( A' L- @<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 j! u& ?6 s0 }: {( j+ P<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* v. Q7 S" y: R( a% B7 W' X: L<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
" q+ f" e# X! e, `* ]9 v<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
; }5 n& b! a: @3 H9 o4 p9 A9 h<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
, g3 F' b+ Q6 H; }4 y0 \<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
+ m  a( M  t* [: \4 Y<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
. i) I  Z+ `2 a3 F4 }<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
) V" X( I0 s0 O! h, f<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
3 j$ j& [- G) O" j9 k3 a<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
: ~5 L. u( R* k<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
! h6 p8 G# U- P% \+ k2 s<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
) |- K' e# Q$ ^/ \9 `- S<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
5 H0 o+ m/ p8 V+ ]<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
) ~8 \2 m  j( \8 X; Y7 a5 Z4 Y<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
, g1 w! S+ [3 v$ `: Z  _<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
+ Y6 p6 p( q6 Y3 e# r<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
3 U3 A/ d" I7 K' j. L<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
0 K, ]8 Q7 K/ w) O! `<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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; V( v3 y% c, L( O我请你剖开它

& Z+ B/ L- w' m% s% b0 Q9 c 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>