【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
+ f7 S7 f0 C" g6 @) WWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 [, ]9 C2 a/ [7 Z% l2 l9 \' }The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
! ]1 [: U/ X: w0 }It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
, ], Q4 a3 m/ d* k3 g# iYou needn’t fear anything
: W% ?: G% j) u8 g9 u! _9 XMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
4 m. q7 ]# J3 y. a5 m6 ~I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
8 O( H! T; ~5 ^/ E1 ZThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
% e( C- b  |: o  g) jI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
; [5 l) ?. z8 O0 cI’m still filled with fear
  X" r, K7 t  m/ f' q: U! UYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
# L+ J+ Y, N% [! TWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
+ Q$ u; c6 |6 ~8 P- R6 eIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 P. ?) M, l. j3 J) e<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
1 a3 A0 [) B+ F0 @<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
+ E2 _* U; X7 k1 T. U2 ?4 n8 N<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
* q- Z  r: t/ a5 t; {+ S$ n<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
* K: d4 [5 `  B4 n# Y" p8 l9 I<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
# X  D5 o1 o$ @# W# _<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
9 A, `* ^' R( z( E0 s& ?8 b4 D- }<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
; i3 f/ h$ ~3 a4 p6 m" s4 z<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
( t  \' {8 L7 p<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 U0 T3 Z% z$ |# @) C& n$ E0 i7 o$ g<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
1 m2 Z6 n! x0 ^<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! R6 R7 _; K: o5 t' O<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
: k8 Q2 F: g7 @$ ?0 @, a<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
: ~0 e* I1 ]  ~' j  d, ?<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
  C, p0 ?' p1 E+ m  o<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
  l* Y# {8 n, s2 T<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
- r2 V! u" O- t8 Q, t% K<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
* o! u  F% `7 g3 j0 v<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
# @& z6 |$ _( T6 S<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
3 K" @, p! N( Y9 r- p  B' \<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 A% I9 V9 [3 W9 f' J* e. R<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ {' c7 V; X( x) o# ?4 B8 O* Y/ e) h* ]<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
& V$ M; s, R, V3 O4 H1 ~; X* c& z0 i3 T<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 \6 a# r: _# L<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>