【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
4 R1 p7 ]2 \7 }' ~3 k/ C5 \' w- mMaking the sky glitter like gold,
+ j! w; w+ @. M, {When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ z3 f0 x1 r  E7 B: OThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. C7 \- Q& o2 _& i( g8 }; ~' YThe sky is happy down to its soul
! z  S! i7 I5 D: f; Y# E$ KWith the moon kissing it every night
' f/ a. t. X  ?3 b4 wSeeing the sky content with its love
" [4 f7 l! g6 e% f/ t% u1 [$ R# {9 g1 MIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
/ [5 ]+ s& L4 `! q. P# J- AYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
" S5 _. f& U! v* J0 S# S  _Every other word you utter is love
7 ]3 J. c& b# W: N# {I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
2 K/ o2 H5 g! e" Z; ~Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
, \7 t: Q  K9 A# JI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
: l/ I6 l1 p7 T' ?' O* N" mIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
3 R' Q5 Z0 n) }& BRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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  z) X* |  l0 `! ~0 C. I0 p8 i<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
3 [. r9 T% h/ K. j4 T<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
1 N" U- f$ N: S$ o+ x<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
* X% [; V  x! d<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
0 ]3 O: ^! q( C1 s1 q6 f' S' L# Y$ }<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
+ M& Z; c0 w% R1 ]<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
/ k1 B" F2 R( ~<P>你无需担心</P>
" e* B: w) g% f<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
! p: M/ c* B' ?; T& q<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
% ~& e$ L  |- W9 Q4 H! I8 Y<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; p" z" @- f9 P) U. R<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
5 W1 a7 j9 Z, S<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
0 p! q1 {0 m7 `) F2 y% [<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
  ?2 G! d: Z! f$ p<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
* G3 ~; C& w0 {6 R, e/ b1 Q<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
4 r9 I# ^; R. \! D<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
' e- {3 v' g6 e+ G7 h% s4 B$ K; Y<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
* r  n3 W1 C( _0 u<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
- E, {2 ]" m8 I' w7 B<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
3 h9 [1 `1 ^4 E. @3 g9 o* M1 J<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
# v7 b" R! `! L% O<P>I only have one tongue </P>
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<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
+ [8 o" O4 V7 i  H/ y<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
6 C9 a7 l9 w/ F6 ^' `+ S  O<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
1 `- n  _  a5 L+ P  {, V<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
; }: f- `8 \9 {9 v" \5 p) O<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
: v/ b8 Y+ P! T+ b( B9 V; f  m8 z<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

7 o: }: J; m* E+ [我请你剖开它
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( w6 ]. ]! L. ^/ K 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>