【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
" ]+ H0 e3 s* A9 o9 L+ uMaking the sky glitter like gold,
' U  |( C) Q) D8 U! [3 LWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" S: b& \* `  |- ?, i7 v: ]# HThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
5 A7 r5 t, Q- o" ^3 M7 \/ pThe sky is happy down to its soul
7 ?/ g& a! R" ]. G$ c$ GWith the moon kissing it every night
% J/ `0 D& }  L' x8 uSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
4 |9 y, n, q# \' }You needn’t fear anything
( ?5 C/ q, h5 i9 ]3 eMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
2 c/ O# N7 Y6 q4 o, C* z- X# _, G" }I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
% z. ~) K2 X$ @- ?# BI’m still filled with fear
2 g5 D) u4 b. r5 o8 x8 UYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
. v; a- q3 D7 m/ z5 `0 XI regret not dying
* Z+ p- K1 r5 y& sI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
, Q  @6 {( o0 G<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
  ]8 X- V8 x9 W3 W% Q. s8 b<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
/ i! C6 u; h) T) T3 b9 \: M<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
9 S. J3 M1 y" r' U- }5 ~<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
* i+ a8 |/ K9 [- }4 M1 {<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
; l* y2 @: Q* _' K' F# f1 O7 b! V<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
! V. r0 Y% X0 W<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
# T( O% I8 }  v4 C2 {" ^4 z) e" G* W<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
. ^4 \; }8 m: q, K$ I<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
. h: B5 s& Z5 @# h0 R! `<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 h6 R- P. V4 T. I9 `, G<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
* y0 u0 \) J' ]5 m% i<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
& F: ^0 K. R/ K7 c* l) v<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! q( R/ p) f+ I' E. ~: ?<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
; {9 x: @7 }0 M+ c0 M) [<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
, |4 K: I' C0 J<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
0 x& P, C, C8 V& U1 j<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
: b& |: v& @9 n2 T6 f# b3 w4 p! y<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
3 R0 x! n8 M/ o9 n# h<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
, T7 `. I) a. a4 l, G) Q+ \<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
' D! k) s8 J, G* G1 `# @- A: z<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
2 I; [9 b2 `0 V+ H- e) C" H8 L' e<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
2 H  a8 t& @5 `& z; Q) k5 ?% @: g9 c<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
( q! Z1 W: F! g' @( T<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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7 S: W9 S: F5 l( R/ l+ ]; S 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>