【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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1 k, y( `: k8 H, b% [歌词我附在后面。
2 K* R- H0 d! N1 v, j( |The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
; t' ?) }# {. w' ?; W0 L1 ^( hWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
6 `6 x& O7 g: f) lIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
% ~0 d3 `6 {* I5 f3 f# ~9 v, v6 yMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
7 N& p9 F; Z  `. u5 f$ C" HI love you I love you with all my heart
. {1 [" v- s; [" q  t$ n% uNothing can compare to my love
+ V: O% J9 O8 r& m4 I) R1 cCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; S7 P' R! d0 ]The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
! E( m) q& T2 d2 N8 ~I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
/ [6 C6 s4 [$ O2 FYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( ^5 R! Y) V' V2 Y4 \Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

; y6 @6 X0 T8 q' E- g<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
" b6 x: H" \& V. R4 L- \<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- s$ c, }: c, o( O, [. }: o<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
* J. }" [- D7 x3 t<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
: E/ h, F: ?3 t6 {<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  e% M6 `( ?2 ^0 O) u<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
) L# x3 N2 L4 c# K/ b<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
8 q* d. S& ~' k# v<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
4 {: l8 [! L  {' o# Q<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
& Z1 e: J& @4 k4 @$ q<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
0 G0 d7 o; X" Q$ Z2 N<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
8 l& I$ K. t2 C, P" z) t<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
4 H, q( R/ [: q- B2 W* ~1 _$ s<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
5 c5 v6 d+ P7 }4 M$ |<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
' j0 t; Y( O3 k) n2 @<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
+ D6 b, b) h& [4 m1 S<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
: \2 i( H% B4 p4 T<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
: I$ Q  P/ t! I4 K% t  M8 b<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
: R4 R4 @/ K- J3 }3 B, @<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
( K. M9 c3 C$ z% ]' P<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
, @% W  G5 I. X: Y) N* S<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
) A0 b# a! `, V% i7 ^! u<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
9 N. D7 r: h5 m) Q. h4 l: t<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
2 A+ o5 r6 F: |( z  J<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
* B# ?# K/ W/ J- @, N* b<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
+ a% P+ A" f( S. K# z2 u<P>I only have one tongue </P>
7 h- `$ `1 {: R( @<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
, h- h( K2 L3 ]<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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