【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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4 {* i& v' F4 a歌词我附在后面。
4 N" `( h. B# m7 A/ E0 V' y( q$ DThe moonlight is shining brightly,
9 R# b4 b: S2 F, w% `/ D, vMaking the sky glitter like gold,
% _0 g( j- s, c# }9 ]When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
1 X( z7 |, s% b( D+ rWith the moon kissing it every night
/ `) }7 [& ~1 l5 z, W2 A3 ISeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
* r3 A5 o1 O; }  YYou needn’t fear anything
( p% u! d! @% G, E3 P: sMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
6 Q( J' j5 @! @3 U. d/ j! TEvery other word you utter is love
: S& S* }# ?) A( D' y# u) pI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
, {+ d6 h, k% b9 I7 ^. U" u% kNothing can compare to my love
- K0 Y6 H7 P4 ^3 M+ g8 c1 MCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
* H; G" Z2 D% e( H. DYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
# a, `4 `6 L$ P& {7 SI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
6 ^2 l( e$ ^; T( Z+ [. k7 JYour speech can’t even keep up with it
, [1 D, v7 [7 KIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
/ M- r9 {1 I1 qRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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- q% ^3 P& _5 t5 S4 a4 @1 l<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
  }3 y: W1 J3 Y& c; V# V7 e<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! r/ B: M/ D6 ]- L1 J; ^# K' T6 |<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
) J5 V+ @. X( n1 u3 u. W<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
, ~( t/ @% Z+ T: `  {8 [3 E* r<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' `5 Z. `/ W" X/ g5 ^# p2 H3 G. e<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
: F$ \. c) y5 ~8 r+ ?<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
6 }; O6 A/ Y/ x/ s* |. Z' ~* {<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
9 x+ D" q: Z; V  f2 _<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
' s- \0 N5 D; u5 z( A$ ?<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
% c; M  K/ Q9 a" m$ r; r, v" n<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
' d8 M, s+ p$ s) b/ f( g<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
$ F, L  J0 s, X$ M<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
/ G' \1 [! n3 w3 O<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
. H; ?7 `/ S& Q, l+ D: k<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
3 q4 ^( Q1 e; F0 j& y" F<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
! {' E0 E" `5 y9 W2 p* D<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
; |. D! h; z, X5 v  w' ]) q1 G<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
1 z8 r  g+ w2 P1 m7 _7 j- x<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
+ S& o7 B4 A3 p<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
6 s3 v  M; S2 B, S  ]<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
; N6 g1 p# b$ T<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
2 N: D! n& {. q$ i# c* {<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
0 N6 }% W: j; b2 E. g& h<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
" F: F+ b2 t$ Y& C. {2 s7 i1 @<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
( [0 Q+ z" H# a( x<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
6 D: @- }/ m) [<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
. u0 T5 i$ e6 x2 y% c. r1 _' Q6 m) S<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
  z& C4 d; Z5 K4 E5 w8 g# S9 e5 e2 _<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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9 |3 x# R$ T4 {* X" I 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>