【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
/ j' z, E" p" a( ]/ V8 ]8 Z1 c+ WThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
2 y7 l8 o0 |/ U3 m9 \3 B  KThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  U1 `( [  h- C5 W& n% H! jThe sky is happy down to its soul
% z/ Y* [1 a- z5 [2 Y6 H- G+ YWith the moon kissing it every night
  ]1 G2 Q  Y1 R( kSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
  D* @% d4 M4 o" `9 y; B. ^Every other word you utter is love
& A1 W# Z) _% n4 @I really want to know just how much you love me
( u8 F+ l" ?' w3 W5 U6 NI love you I love you with all my heart
, K( g0 x9 Q- @' ZNothing can compare to my love
) O4 w: g4 G5 n+ ]Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
7 q1 ?4 [8 Q( V# w2 tThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
5 U. A8 n4 r) C  V0 b, hI want so much to see inside your heart
& p# Z0 ]- x6 J7 h& n8 PI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 s1 V' C8 Q) n' ^& A' S6 z" S- GI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
& N) _. H4 c# d% T7 I( C- O2 D8 ^3 g. XI regret not dying
  ?$ K4 s  Y5 G& a0 @I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
$ v3 y7 U" X9 a& M2 [8 |With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
4 l8 [) L8 R7 m+ k0 ?1 K5 X4 ARambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
, r8 T' X5 p0 A# A0 l; B3 J* i* M+ \<P>月光闪亮 </P>
5 l( D' P1 z" t# _<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
8 d8 r, L" c, m$ b<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
% \# q; L7 j& h+ q<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
: H* d$ q# D& h( o; [<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& H& d1 s' E9 r  J/ o  d<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
  H+ K8 X, c" v/ x2 R! q- E( I<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' s) g. G/ W3 a6 _<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
' l( i4 i6 t+ A<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! a4 P% d' i; R( L1 c3 D6 I4 `<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
9 H+ |" P' ]. Z. D  _<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
: K1 g: K3 b6 ^  d<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
* ^- k) F8 k: t* R7 N+ w4 k<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
" h- f0 ~' f( U) F. J, n+ m. W% O<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
+ E  A( V+ D! y<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
' @0 s& d3 V5 i( K<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
  @7 o* P0 r' g4 _, I! ]5 I8 {<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
/ r# f& z+ o8 L% A0 I3 _<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
& t7 B" `- z1 y6 ]' `<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
& i4 A' M% f. b+ a$ c+ o4 Y<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
! f" i; R: |* ]7 j$ `<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
7 H$ g8 _) w, O* X* h; a<P>I regret not dying</P>
% H* y" N! f2 c- K* |6 Z! {$ }$ R<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
, R  X/ ?, q; B<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
, k) E7 U& f3 ^+ E. P<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
: u* ~6 I3 E; M" ^<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
! |; U- X) @# F<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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