【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
2 J" t$ a6 \! M0 z/ ?The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
) ?. Q; k  S6 R% {% aWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& E9 v& ~5 C) g+ h* t' Q& JThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
$ @# L2 \9 o2 F- TIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
' V+ P3 f0 J/ r3 ]% @You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
8 @& f0 E3 T- q! @9 b6 u$ lEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
0 J  f: p2 A1 `0 F1 Y5 S; F+ q/ _Nothing can compare to my love
0 f+ G+ z: a+ g- x7 oCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
2 Q* M5 J, s8 `! yThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
; h; d8 g7 S- ]' WI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
9 u; F. M8 @0 Y* u- MI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 p. P6 X2 |5 j+ u: @1 r, Y3 }, L8 j: xI regret not dying
+ N- l/ y1 n+ L) Q9 @# \8 BI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
7 D# c; v. F9 Q, d( Q/ cYour speech can’t even keep up with it
1 a! ^& R$ b' D0 d& fIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
8 Q8 X3 w" w# g) V6 iRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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9 T, F- }0 v0 @5 D0 a<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
7 J- f. L  @2 j, o: W, ^<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
+ b1 ]/ j* w( W% R<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
& i; c- M0 c9 w  L& z<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
9 z4 H3 J1 u. {1 j" r6 M# k<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
2 X/ ?- q9 C9 V" A3 q# Y; i4 W# U$ c) ^7 @<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
) a# ?8 w  y3 y( A; w& ~3 f<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
( F7 U* I7 U9 Q3 M% @: Q<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
/ i2 R+ t" c1 f. M<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* K, r# @8 k* u2 N  |<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ L4 [- C3 a0 H6 a1 H<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
, g+ [# `! C) y+ \; {<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
0 A; Y4 ]: A; T1 V6 q* k8 f<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
0 _( q1 ]0 ^' m! d8 C3 @+ Z( C1 Q<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
7 U8 t  c8 n" B! L& L<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 U& x/ S8 p* D0 z<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
8 j+ G8 R, n2 k, }! j. d<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
, E" r) X! V# F7 w; ?$ s( j3 g<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ c: g$ {* I7 R6 {+ f; H<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
5 S7 W+ I4 o8 Y<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
& w$ O* |! x" ~9 p, }<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
" V0 a, ~% W/ \<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
$ D$ B. |9 M0 H<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
! f7 \5 P+ W! T/ y0 t4 U/ b<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
( S# b- L, g, Z, N2 J8 G<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
4 K; [  V% d1 v<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
( O/ F6 g) c, [% @+ k& L; P<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
1 z: j3 e/ g5 y! V, t# q<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
0 y1 [+ ?+ F; X8 p; q<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
! M5 Y) l7 q* C<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
" g8 M) V1 T7 G<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 W! ~2 E2 X! E  |4 j# v* q+ }<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>