【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
& g( C( G* U) O3 Y, C; KThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
( K5 E8 Q. e. c& V5 K4 `The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
5 p3 G: }# Q9 m6 [  oThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
  ^, F* G9 \7 ~: R* O0 gSeeing the sky content with its love
; L0 H! x, e# T4 I+ {% ?- k, ]$ ^It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
2 x3 q  y( x% Z# KI really want to know just how much you love me
0 c" y5 z5 g6 w$ e- d  \. SI love you I love you with all my heart
$ d6 V4 I: r  O3 b0 t- BNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; A, ]$ O  I6 q6 N8 Q) I. rThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' O. N, o' C  k5 DI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
1 r0 e, m6 Z, ]: H7 p/ AYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
, G% n- k- D- I9 u  V: H- tI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
3 L$ w3 H# T, E- u  c5 DIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
2 y7 c9 Q" N8 [8 c  CRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

5 Z: |! f: E' l  j% X7 X! m<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
0 _, S- e5 K- Z$ Q+ P& c$ E<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
8 @' {1 L" ]/ ^  N$ D; E<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! [2 f- ]8 |" }3 s8 w( m" c) \<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
9 k' u. G) m: J1 R' H6 _: S$ F" U<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
7 Y$ E$ f: V; ]5 {<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
1 y* e4 O; _6 E$ N" t9 y7 m<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
) y/ z) Z2 d% U2 }<P>你无需担心</P>
8 i8 h5 M1 c# {1 W$ |8 @<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% }% k4 n" C. S7 A& u<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
; K% f7 [+ u8 L- d<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
1 o1 E' d# O5 o) Z0 M4 k* t<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
) c- V$ D5 [1 t( E( N<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
% f5 q, g( F2 P" `<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
* h) U( Z, e! j- y; K<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
- Q9 g/ ^6 J& m8 l1 O, o, T<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
9 k5 O6 w; n$ o; m0 W- J<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
+ ]7 k  j& w' o+ |' u. O& ~<P>I only have one tongue </P>
0 p3 r$ c+ b& \( M6 j# [0 O<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
1 L2 N! P/ Z% g<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
6 ?  d% u3 ?2 v, @<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- p! V# ~- v' l6 Q7 _<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
7 n" T* p- f- j  q' N<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
6 [1 P) Q6 q8 P: G: Y<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

3 `- r9 l9 V; m2 b' }. y 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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- P8 t: o, o2 L, L- J# v4 d<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>