【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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) Y3 C# h) i6 R4 |/ h3 s歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
& k  d& v# r: t3 C+ BMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 r2 G& T9 b: p# B2 O) n# JThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 n; T9 Y" K* W* U8 W3 P& K& d8 EThe sky is happy down to its soul
9 f( h2 g7 U' ~6 W. WWith the moon kissing it every night
) m6 l* l9 _$ s* E; z( Q& u+ {Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
1 }1 \3 }, }$ R( L4 |My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
8 K0 H3 B- s7 VEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
1 S1 T& m, z6 }5 f; `. X( RI love you I love you with all my heart
1 F3 c4 M/ d  H: Z$ Q) [Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
! A, f7 b  l9 F+ m' h5 ~! E4 QYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
3 h4 {2 j( e. z6 ^0 \& ^I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
) K& f# N( i& M9 r5 V0 Q1 RIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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" A: L+ i! H/ W0 @/ F' g<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
- |3 N2 e1 O5 E0 R0 m% H1 H+ e. H<P>月光闪亮 </P>
1 h6 A3 }5 H1 J. p<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
; V+ O% M5 l, j, ?9 R3 h; d<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
# c  q# z4 t2 v, q; k% S<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
2 {2 B! Q  H6 D8 t% \- N  C* @' i<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
+ k9 _: g& p# ~<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! R  g' H5 S% s9 ^<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 u: [  A% w$ s<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
5 K4 S: q( B" @1 ^<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
  ?: j5 y7 X4 @) }<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
0 J8 y0 l4 a- h( @9 i$ d" ]<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
$ ?6 u: ]- o' Q<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
5 H! b" m5 n, C<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
6 }) i/ f  r! o: O  N! E6 C' t' e# |0 |<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 \8 K' m; T9 ?- p& x0 w0 a: G<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
8 m, |5 U, b" K: u<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
& V4 o2 I( u- T6 t" }<P>I regret not dying</P>
% Q% {3 v5 q0 w* X$ s<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
$ {8 Q; f8 P. y/ X8 o<P>I only have one tongue </P>
" d; t. x" E+ L. P* {<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
" P$ f, [) N3 o  @5 X<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
9 W  C! y  P& M& C<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
' M$ B' U/ a: m% j9 j<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
3 a0 v* L9 S4 u& E% b7 _* {<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
& |' @6 _# _0 o) }1 M: w<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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) v; S' J, F* G; u) ~ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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