【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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( N1 ?- \: h; Z4 J* {歌词我附在后面。
1 x; \# ^# H4 t1 s9 ~) x; BThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 n+ n( K' ?" F5 }5 x, JThe sky is happy down to its soul
9 X$ [1 W5 A& @With the moon kissing it every night
  S3 }5 \" _7 ]( R9 uSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
. b1 P/ P' i; N7 F* MMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
; j3 V" h# t+ P# e% BI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# @0 f) z4 @9 T; n3 f( |I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
9 v/ N: R+ o$ e7 d3 M- X6 q: Z0 M$ |Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
" l5 P0 h; ]6 s6 nWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
& E! N8 _# ^1 ]5 m6 k( BIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
1 M0 K/ P' d2 l3 C8 U: |Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
! x: x6 r; @: v# l/ }: J<P>月光闪亮 </P>
1 ?2 ~* V: \! @3 N8 N4 M<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
6 U1 q2 y. K2 R<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
9 Q8 J  X: a6 E! M3 p! d2 k<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
4 t# h  @8 ~2 \! e+ Y% s& r<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
" q2 O1 E; X# |' q+ h% h# p<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
; Y- x5 V5 [" `! ^% I7 C<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
1 G" k9 v2 R  B8 g- j7 d0 M<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
! P! `! s7 t* `2 @& p( U: Q: \<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
% V, n& Z- N4 h1 J% ?<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
3 }* V8 b3 T; O" k5 A; y<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
) l; X( l+ q( u" z/ Y<P>你无需担心</P>
' q! R5 p; q, i9 s, ~3 f' I<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
: o' S$ L4 [' S$ d/ J3 K<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
/ B- d: ^$ o' E<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
- j3 q6 w  z1 i; W+ `( I: F+ j0 Y<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
7 k/ i! V$ _; J' T<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
6 [( |2 t4 J9 X5 R<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
! t, J6 y2 i# A3 _$ P5 q- w<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
9 M# v  }* c+ Y<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
$ X8 `( {. |+ R% Y2 C<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
, i- g0 D0 F1 b$ T  O" l* {1 I/ _/ z<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
: h# C, T) d* h! Z<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
6 ~$ t3 K5 Y- a! N) @' Y9 j<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
. V" |5 c; T( O+ y# }: h& q. Q<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 L. G3 E7 m* {8 e% J<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
# v- }4 d, N! l& p/ j<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
0 e4 |* e2 t- L- g. @% d<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
. C3 C+ Y- x8 T8 j, C" {<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
" k) W( M9 y3 f. r<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
2 g/ H  }5 S" x. H/ n& J<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
: J$ f- E" p/ ]- e3 b  W) I<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
' k$ X# v0 ^. K) A<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>