【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

杏花疏影

老大：感觉“like 100 silver tongues ”差不多就象俚语。怎么没见老大的译作？期待！......
xxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 10:04

' a# m# m! Y2 H  i0 ?一个月前我译了一半，旅游回来再看，自己都看不过去，索性丢在一边。还是欣赏你们的吧。

杏花疏影

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒
% `. B$ ~/ [. A( U5 bvichida 发表于 2009-1-1 09:20

再贴到这里来呀。

vichida

比赛歌曲2：男女对唱

: F+ g3 c1 l% q: yThe moonlight is shining brightly,
皎洁明月当空 光华闪耀
9 x) A# v, i9 N& [* dMaking the sky glitter like gold,
夜空仿若镀金 炫目灿烂
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7 r3 e: K" l! M/ EWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
凝视明月 我心欢畅
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 ~' A& [) ]$ i" x) B& C月光闪烁 在我眼中
, x$ x4 ~/ D  A& ~9 e- I& p1 D' J' YThe sky is happy down to its soul
+ y/ V' {9 Q" v3 {4 b. z& A一片丹心 照耀夜空
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With the moon kissing it every night
看那月亮  夜夜亲吻天空
: T7 b8 ?! R0 L% \Seeing the sky content with its love
夜空安详  沉浸柔情之中
It fills my heart with worry      I fear our love will turn sour
我的心却忧虑惶恐 爱到浓时 可会发酵变味
You needn’t fear anything
! X& E: U- N0 G怕这怕那 又是何苦
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
7 U7 [7 h) E1 K  j4 w) Q) j; ]我的爱坚定不移 定让人幸福满溢
6 K! y) s9 m$ k1 o, cEvery other word you utter is love
口口声声 说你爱我
I really want to know just how much you love me
3 n; T% A9 w% r真想知道爱的分量 几两几斤
% ]  F( h& E6 T+ cI love you I love you with all my heart
# S% c- V4 k' q1 \爱你爱你 全心全意
6 o* G* T3 {3 N; G6 l' T( O2 u0 R' a  {Nothing can compare to my love
世间万物  皆不能比

3 E; Q* F6 G& y6 g* e* `Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
1 ^  @* X# W( B9 N" S$ b能装满半个天空吗,我的情哥哥？
; U/ i8 k. Q5 [4 C0 VThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
8 Y1 J" i' E/ X) Y2 I+ P' X0 m整个天空 也盛不住我半份浓情
I want so much to see inside your heart
我真想看透你的心
$ A, I# h" g0 o; C% V# LI invite you to rip it out
) w1 R, w, A- _) p你尽管把它掏去
To prove my love, I’m willing to die
  t$ x% _  D- s7 Q  x6 ]若能证明我爱你 没了性命也不可惜
I’m still filled with fear
可我依然满心忧虑
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
你随口花言巧语 若有银舌百张
0 E9 g) f& ?2 ?7 C4 D7 LI regret not dying
4 ?5 e* q1 R# j% |7 f真恨不能 以死明志
I only have one tongue
: Y( }  b3 ~0 T9 M5 U2 i我笨嘴拙舌 只得一张
5 @( X* k, D0 y% |7 Z6 `9 `6 [It’s nothing close to 100,000
也恨不得  多如千万
9 s' }1 z. t# _7 Y4 vWith such a tongue as yours,
3 s$ w- c: B/ C7 [你这张嘴 真真厉害
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
# ], |, B2 j  n1 a  c& P- V& _1 c能说会道 无以伦比
; Z& L! X5 ^) M' w. f: c( I' ~( YIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( `8 e7 S. @  |( n6 h8 O( D若我真有巧舌百张 定要滔滔不绝
6 l7 Y( h3 Q& V. m0 a3 R% A  Q# k( vRambling on about a thousand words of love
向你倾诉千言万语 道尽绵绵情话

vichida

比赛歌曲一：主题曲
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1 U( p2 b( H8 T) IThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
从未向你吐露衷情
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
爱你是我唯一深藏的秘密
' Q) T+ z  C- N" bFrom the first moment we met,
/ G2 F9 ^6 g; ~* v! ~对你一见倾心
I already loved you with all my heart
从此别无他意
, P) ?2 ^: P5 c$ E0 BWe meet and talk everyday,
你我每天见面寒暄
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
# v& M& ^. p* N6 ^6 h奈何从未谈及内心
5 }! K2 c+ L" ]: n5 y( Q; gIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
2 B- y! v2 v, ]7 E# p若能凝视你双眼 探入你灵魂
I would probably know how you feel
或能知你心意
; |- Z1 C- @( t! I/ {Love… just the word love
" I1 e% E  @1 w9 z( I+ |3 W爱呀，爱就一个字
Why is it so difficult to express?
* p$ u9 x9 q) t- Y' g为何如此难言？
I want to confess that I love you,
我多想向你表白
# u# B6 [  I* tBut I never did
- W5 d/ F0 o. R' v* f却始终未曾出口
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
1 o+ V8 z) t; p0 `只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
) d% i6 Z# Y7 KIf today isn’t too late,
假如还不太迟
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
不愿这份爱 逝如流水
$ N& _4 k" |6 {8 }Can I entrust it to you?
可否将它 托付于你?
1 H! E/ |2 F' ^3 @" Q4 u; _& v4 GEntrust my love within your heart
从此安放在你心里 哪儿也不去

Love… just the word love
爱呀，爱就一个字
Why is it so difficult to express?
为何如何难言？
  A  n, i" A/ B+ N) `% cI want to confess that I love you,
我多想向你表白
But I never did
却始终未曾出口
4 Q6 ~4 R) a: oOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
0 L# R! Q! l  e" z% `/ L' t& a2 V3 T7 z只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
If today isn’t too late,
假如还不太迟
/ U6 y( x$ w0 s* @0 x5 NI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
; D( B; K7 Q/ K' N- }今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
3 I: E) l+ o1 {6 _I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
不愿这份爱 逝如流水
Can I entrust it to you?
可否将它 托付于你？
8 A/ H& {6 C$ u2 g$ w& ZEntrust my love within your heart
从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

& o- r3 {' x) N7 P$ V# oCan I entrust it to you?
+ {) r, N6 z2 \) n4 p  u6 y可否将它托付于你？
5 O5 ^! f8 t: {6 J# u/ F. B4 TEntrust my love within your heart
从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

vichida

41# 杏花疏影
老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
  O( E7 j3 E. p5 z7 s. k刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～

杏花疏影

“这个易吟唱其实要比主题曲还难把握，感觉韵似乎必须押，译词的长短也得基本合”，偶也有同感。我想大家翻译的第一首歌应该相差不大，但是到了第二首，就很有看头了。

杏花疏影

41# 杏花疏影  
老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
* F& _9 {7 Z( k刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～
vichida 发表于 2009-1-1 10:38

不碍事，偶们表慢...

lily_zl

太好了，我旅游回来看到大家的译作，满心欢喜。谢谢你们的支持。后续的会跟上的。