【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

杏花疏影

老大：感觉“like 100 silver tongues ”差不多就象俚语。怎么没见老大的译作？期待！......
/ m" X0 f; H* y( J6 wxxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 10:04

* A/ K2 W; N0 ]& S0 {* E一个月前我译了一半，旅游回来再看，自己都看不过去，索性丢在一边。还是欣赏你们的吧。

杏花疏影

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒
1 e" N0 j+ a4 n6 M$ }6 y/ qvichida 发表于 2009-1-1 09:20

再贴到这里来呀。

vichida

比赛歌曲2：男女对唱
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% O" ~5 ~# Y! `# I% jThe moonlight is shining brightly,
$ f, f2 w( e- `" X皎洁明月当空 光华闪耀
6 Z* f2 D/ k) |- iMaking the sky glitter like gold,
夜空仿若镀金 炫目灿烂
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5 ^6 L4 a! T( k" x+ [. N7 ZWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
凝视明月 我心欢畅
/ @' C, I6 v6 \The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: i! d: b' F: s' y" T$ _7 S. B月光闪烁 在我眼中
% `8 k8 n$ j, _The sky is happy down to its soul
4 u4 X: w8 ~6 F1 D一片丹心 照耀夜空
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With the moon kissing it every night
看那月亮  夜夜亲吻天空
, o- u9 u! r2 W+ }3 x3 ]/ eSeeing the sky content with its love
9 ]$ ]" A) B) r3 m' u# N夜空安详  沉浸柔情之中
It fills my heart with worry      I fear our love will turn sour
我的心却忧虑惶恐 爱到浓时 可会发酵变味
8 E7 ?2 U9 z& }5 L: {2 O4 IYou needn’t fear anything
怕这怕那 又是何苦
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
我的爱坚定不移 定让人幸福满溢
3 M( A$ E: A( Y" h% jEvery other word you utter is love
口口声声 说你爱我
I really want to know just how much you love me
真想知道爱的分量 几两几斤
I love you I love you with all my heart
爱你爱你 全心全意
Nothing can compare to my love
世间万物  皆不能比

2 x2 y2 x' n# vCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
- P/ T$ {( n3 |1 T2 u7 O- W能装满半个天空吗,我的情哥哥？
1 X8 F, K' s8 fThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
整个天空 也盛不住我半份浓情
I want so much to see inside your heart
/ j; L( @% Q: v7 D9 @: B我真想看透你的心
I invite you to rip it out
你尽管把它掏去
; P* U1 G5 z& r3 Z  }; Y6 B+ HTo prove my love, I’m willing to die
9 P) t$ m* [3 Q& f0 x: S- F若能证明我爱你 没了性命也不可惜
I’m still filled with fear
0 U7 Y  b1 g$ S7 \% K) k: c$ _  O可我依然满心忧虑
' Q+ u) V, {  C' N; v. BYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
你随口花言巧语 若有银舌百张
3 C0 J; w7 m* j0 Q; {: N: |I regret not dying
真恨不能 以死明志
4 Z2 _& F8 _! p* b, ]I only have one tongue
: D7 }3 e; E) z) v, |7 U1 O0 i3 P我笨嘴拙舌 只得一张
It’s nothing close to 100,000
5 Y3 u2 w7 R  G" G* N. W: l3 _也恨不得  多如千万
2 ~0 O+ r/ F; ]8 g4 |7 L6 l9 eWith such a tongue as yours,
你这张嘴 真真厉害
8 @$ a! y. G. a( l) PYour speech can’t even keep up with it
5 L- S/ c6 M7 J$ W' E+ r+ p  Y能说会道 无以伦比
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
8 b9 z! ^" o, i& ^/ J若我真有巧舌百张 定要滔滔不绝
/ i" d3 f4 l1 C8 G4 W5 ZRambling on about a thousand words of love
向你倾诉千言万语 道尽绵绵情话

vichida

比赛歌曲一：主题曲
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. G3 O1 B9 W; Y& G0 s& l+ w% ]The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
( g% t1 U5 x+ ]5 z6 ^- ~$ |0 P从未向你吐露衷情
5 j6 i# e7 ^, B" f& r2 FThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
  ^* o2 p6 {  V$ M- a) }; X' o0 v爱你是我唯一深藏的秘密
From the first moment we met,
2 X- e. ~7 t; u" I* ^# F8 X对你一见倾心
) Z4 r, i, v+ A3 Z' m& z' ]I already loved you with all my heart
从此别无他意
7 r; Q9 G& q* T" p0 i8 j- @We meet and talk everyday,
你我每天见面寒暄
9 S% q" H' S! I& L! [But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
" N. q) b2 g6 [8 T奈何从未谈及内心
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
若能凝视你双眼 探入你灵魂
I would probably know how you feel
或能知你心意
; i- a: S' T, G% Z( G8 ]6 f' SLove… just the word love
) o  _+ j  ?8 m; w# }. ?爱呀，爱就一个字
Why is it so difficult to express?
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. _$ Z# w) _0 \3 N  vI want to confess that I love you,
- s) i7 j& |+ [& ?% V5 F我多想向你表白
" |  ~5 L: Y5 FBut I never did
3 W# A! k# M9 r% |5 D却始终未曾出口
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
  ^1 \3 Q3 w$ b只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
If today isn’t too late,
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I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
不愿这份爱 逝如流水
Can I entrust it to you?
: T7 |# j4 L7 B8 o5 P可否将它 托付于你?
Entrust my love within your heart
! ^) Q2 T$ T( C5 i- v/ I2 l" R从此安放在你心里 哪儿也不去
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Love… just the word love
" p0 C8 `5 i9 A' G1 F( |爱呀，爱就一个字
Why is it so difficult to express?
为何如何难言？
I want to confess that I love you,
我多想向你表白
4 ?: E! M9 E5 G# P/ s9 RBut I never did
' _+ U2 K9 Q* ]5 i' `却始终未曾出口
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
% H6 P" t+ u+ G8 S5 {只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
If today isn’t too late,
8 q+ q' J0 M( I2 @假如还不太迟
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
4 B# M) W; G' e8 B今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
% T( \0 x8 I& u( NI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
3 `3 H) L& ^$ k& j! U* V$ G, D不愿这份爱 逝如流水
Can I entrust it to you?
# w' |) ~- |, `+ ?可否将它 托付于你？
/ ~9 D' `0 S( \$ u: R2 i4 [  D8 FEntrust my love within your heart
6 [  q7 q" r& O% }( c& C& t从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去
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Can I entrust it to you?
可否将它托付于你？
Entrust my love within your heart
) I- M, x) ]3 J/ A从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

vichida

41# 杏花疏影
) G" D" d7 c) e) W4 G$ K' d+ \2 p' p老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～

杏花疏影

“这个易吟唱其实要比主题曲还难把握，感觉韵似乎必须押，译词的长短也得基本合”，偶也有同感。我想大家翻译的第一首歌应该相差不大，但是到了第二首，就很有看头了。

杏花疏影

41# 杏花疏影  
% _' S1 f4 ]1 D/ @" B0 t$ g老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～
: b, N, F& {. y8 _' q8 w: w/ Jvichida 发表于 2009-1-1 10:38

1 x. k7 x5 Y1 _0 ?1 U不碍事，偶们表慢...

lily_zl

太好了，我旅游回来看到大家的译作，满心欢喜。谢谢你们的支持。后续的会跟上的。